Random True Poems
Submitted July 4, 2004 Updated July 4, 2004 Status Incomplete | NA NA NA BOO BOO!! Well It's 4th Of July, U Expect Me Not To Go Crazy!?
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Chapter 1 - Random Poems
Submitted: July 4, 2004 • Updated: July 4, 2004
Word count: 136 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 173
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Jailcrow_of_Mandos on July 29, 2004, 5:30:13 PM
Jailcrow_of_Mandos on (Chapter: 1)
Pretty neat. I like the beginning, myself. The short, sort of uncertain sentences leave room for interpretation throughout- always a plus with poetry, but I especially love it in the first part. I've unfortunately never been one for much repitition, with the second bit, lolBart_Simpsons on July 19, 2004, 1:23:46 PM
Bart_Simpsons on (Chapter: 1)
I love this poem. So cute :DBahl_Rohg on July 19, 2004, 9:05:56 AM
Bahl_Rohg on (Chapter: 1)
Interesting. Me like!