Mercy Girls: Monster Catchers
Submitted March 10, 2007 Updated October 22, 2007 Status Incomplete | Welcome to Mercedes' Academy for Gifted Girls. Here, majic isn't just a word, it's the curriculum.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Welcome to The School of Your Dreams
Submitted: March 10, 2007 • Updated: March 10, 2007
Word count: 462 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 542
Chapter 2 - pilot
Submitted: March 12, 2007 • Updated: March 12, 2007
Word count: 4205 • Size: 22k • Comments: 9 • views: 619
Chapter 3 - Water, Fire, Metal, Blood and Masks
Submitted: March 13, 2007 • Updated: March 13, 2007
Word count: 2871 • Size: 15k • Comments: 7 • views: 618
Chapter 4 - More charas
Submitted: March 16, 2007 • Updated: March 17, 2007
Word count: 351 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 539
Chapter 5 - More charas 3
Submitted: March 16, 2007 • Updated: March 16, 2007
Word count: 396 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 739
Chapter 6 - Recollection of Ethics
Submitted: March 16, 2007 • Updated: March 16, 2007
Word count: 2972 • Size: 15k • Comments: 6 • views: 543
Chapter 7 - Aishiteru Neesama/ Amo mi Ate/ I love you, Big Sis
Submitted: March 18, 2007 • Updated: March 18, 2007
Word count: 4175 • Size: 22k • Comments: 6 • views: 567
Chapter 8 - Never Again
Submitted: March 21, 2007 • Updated: March 21, 2007
Word count: 3409 • Size: 18k • Comments: 6 • views: 550
Chapter 9 - Fighting Spirit
Submitted: March 25, 2007 • Updated: March 27, 2007
Word count: 4091 • Size: 22k • Comments: 7 • views: 609
Chapter 10 - Butterfly Blue
Submitted: April 14, 2007 • Updated: April 14, 2007
Word count: 3868 • Size: 20k • Comments: 4 • views: 603
Chapter 11 - Runny Babbit
Submitted: April 20, 2007 • Updated: April 20, 2007
Word count: 3815 • Size: 20k • Comments: 4 • views: 831
Chapter 12 - Brother-Sister Love; Alternate Life
Submitted: May 7, 2007 • Updated: May 7, 2007
Word count: 4254 • Size: 23k • Comments: 3 • views: 789
Chapter 13 - this isn't a chapter. LIVE ACTION!!!
Submitted: May 23, 2007 • Updated: May 23, 2007
Word count: 300 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 714
Chapter 14 - Somethings...
Submitted: May 24, 2007 • Updated: May 24, 2007
Word count: 2266 • Size: 12k • Comments: 2 • views: 457
Chapter 15 - Everything
Submitted: May 24, 2007 • Updated: May 24, 2007
Word count: 4105 • Size: 22k • Comments: 4 • views: 721
Chapter 16 - Satifaction
Submitted: June 5, 2007 • Updated: June 5, 2007
Word count: 3667 • Size: 19k • Comments: 2 • views: 485
Chapter 17 - Eyes Like Yours
Submitted: June 8, 2007 • Updated: June 8, 2007
Word count: 4008 • Size: 21k • Comments: 5 • views: 537
Chapter 18 - Belly of the Beast
Submitted: June 18, 2007 • Updated: June 18, 2007
Word count: 4712 • Size: 25k • Comments: 4 • views: 607
Chapter 19 - ZIM ZAM ZOOM! a girl falls from the sky
Submitted: June 27, 2007 • Updated: June 27, 2007
Word count: 2501 • Size: 13k • Comments: 4 • views: 587
Chapter 21 - The Best Day Ever~~Su!
Submitted: July 9, 2007 • Updated: July 9, 2007
Word count: 3185 • Size: 17k • Comments: 4 • views: 600
Chapter 22 - Square One
Submitted: July 20, 2007 • Updated: July 20, 2007
Word count: 1727 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 479
Chapter 23 - Paper Dolls
Submitted: July 20, 2007 • Updated: July 21, 2007
Word count: 3430 • Size: 18k • Comments: 4 • views: 528
Chapter 24 - TigerLily Kiss
Submitted: July 30, 2007 • Updated: July 30, 2007
Word count: 3233 • Size: 17k • Comments: 5 • views: 520
Chapter 25 - Colours of the Heart
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
Word count: 2913 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 491
Chapter 26 - Baby Tears
Submitted: August 18, 2007 • Updated: August 18, 2007
Word count: 3450 • Size: 18k • Comments: 5 • views: 481
Chapter 27 - Moon Light Shadow
Submitted: August 29, 2007 • Updated: August 29, 2007
Word count: 1808 • Size: 9k • Comments: 4 • views: 531
Chapter 28 - Grinnin' like a Manic!
Submitted: September 23, 2007 • Updated: September 23, 2007
Word count: 3876 • Size: 20k • Comments: 5 • views: 520
Chapter 29 - So... This is GoodBye?
Submitted: October 22, 2007 • Updated: October 22, 2007
Word count: 2825 • Size: 15k • Comments: 2 • views: 427
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witch_13888 on November 13, 2008, 7:03:58 AM
DawnyaBURN on November 3, 2007, 5:37:13 AM
ahhhh time to say stuff.this is the last chapter, right? o_o;
WELL, if it is, I have to say I'm mildly disappointed. D:
Like you said in that... one picture, it's very anti-climatic. It seems like there will be another chapter but I don't know because that's the problem, you can't tell.
Also, a lot of smaller stories of smaller characters have been dropped. It seems you've started at one point, continued down that path until the middle, and started to wander as the end came around.
And you know I'm a dog and have to say SOMETHING about the your character and Chase thing...
Lolita is the child of Anu and Chase right? I think so, right? D: I FORGET THESE THING OFTEN. So if it's not that case, forgive me, but here we go.
I hate stories that have OCxCanon shippings and everyone on FAC and beyond knows this but I don't think I've got it clear. I know I used to do that too with Azure, but I've kinda dropped her and skipped gaily off in another direction. It seems you thought it was a creative plot but in reality it wasn't. It seems the same stuff keeps happening on the site and I'm getting fed up with it.
However, with some work and elbow grease, you'd become a really good writer.
My eyes hurt so... I'm gonna go... do something else.
But yess.
I had to say something.
Because God knows no one else on FAC has the guts to...
CartoonQueen262 on October 25, 2007, 12:51:24 PM
Beautiful.This has been a wonderful story Jaz. One of the reasons why I'm still here. I just had to stick around for this magnificent tale. Once more an excellent chapter, and it made a brilliant ending. Your writing skills never cease to amaze me, Jaz. Why if this were I book I would automatically buy it because it's worth it. Fantastic! Marvelous! And any other words that can describe just how glorious this has been. If you consider making a squeal please do tell me, I would love to read it!Demonic_Sora on October 22, 2007, 12:14:12 PM
>w> Amusing, somewhat confusing, but fun to read nevertheless n__nElen on September 27, 2007, 11:22:44 AM
dundaDUN! |DAwesome job on the chapter as usual! n__n
CartoonQueen262 on September 26, 2007, 11:24:50 AM
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No comment, you left me to astound here. No words can describe how amazing that was.
Demonic_Sora on September 24, 2007, 6:33:18 AM
:O!-dramatic music-
Curiousity..
CartoonQueen262 on August 31, 2007, 10:30:49 AM
SLAP THE dog!Â
Wonderful chapter by the way :D
*hugs you*