The mistake

Chapter 1 - a simple mistake
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Chapter 2 - pain that wont leave
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Chapter 3 - 2 visits in one day
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Chapter 4 - Death of a lover
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Fatal_dreamer on September 8, 2006, 9:31:53 AM

Fatal_dreamer on September 8, 2006, 9:31:53 AM (Chapter: 4)

wow....this is amzing and sad.....*favs .,....i like th ewdetailed...descriptions and everything...im gonna draw a picture...myfav part is where he finds hewr and wel l thind whole chapetr,...amazing work