My story
Submitted March 2, 2004 Updated March 2, 2004 Status Incomplete | This is a story i wrote like, last year or something. Its a fantasy story.
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Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Uprising of Vengeance
Submitted: March 2, 2004 • Updated: March 2, 2004
Word count: 7148 • Size: 40k • Comments: 21 • views: 558
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KeboFokohj on January 3, 2008, 5:37:44 AM
KeboFokohj on (Chapter: index)
I have a question. What do you mean you EURTM or is that a computer generated mistake.Meredianna on January 2, 2005, 6:58:01 PM
Meredianna on (Chapter: 1)
Thats totally AWESOME *_* i really liked it, its kewlPowtaz on October 5, 2004, 1:30:41 AM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
awww thanks! that means alot....wait, u added me and my story to ur favs!? OMG u pwn! yaaaaaaaah. lol, thanx!Powtaz on August 30, 2004, 11:13:46 PM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
aww, thanx. thats sweet. awwwHaruGlory123 on August 24, 2004, 4:06:37 PM
HaruGlory123 on (Chapter: 1)
O_O HOLY CRUD!!!!!!! AWSOME!!!!!!!!UR AWSOME AT WRITTING! -is coming form a person that sucks herself and wouldnt no good writting if it slapped her in the butt- XD AWSOME!PURE AWSOME!Powtaz on July 18, 2004, 10:30:29 AM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
u know thats what i thought. the detail was to little, i wanted to keep it under 13000 words lol. i planned a sequel, but lacked the time, plus i have no clue how those IBM's got there, lol, and thanx again! GLAD U LOVED IT! and wow, m honored dreamofire! u commented on me, yay!WolfAquarius on July 13, 2004, 8:02:31 AM
WolfAquarius on (Chapter: 1)
Wow. I loved it. The charcters, the gore, ext. BUT I have a few construsctive comments. First, sry, but I didn't understand the IBM's and stuff. It confused me^_^ Second, It needs more detail(makes the story longer! ^_^) and thts all. If you don't want to take my advise then thts alright. again I loved it. Keep it up.DreamOfFire on May 15, 2004, 3:42:33 PM
DreamOfFire on (Chapter: 1)
heyza!^^that's a neatO story!^^ good job!^^ yay for you!^^Powtaz on May 9, 2004, 11:50:28 PM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
aw thanx! i appreciate it!Powtaz on May 3, 2004, 3:40:51 AM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
aww thanx rachey, i was stunned too. kotcrachey on May 2, 2004, 5:08:01 AM
rachey on (Chapter: 1)
ha ha ha!! GODZILLA said something nice!!!*laughs*
anywhoozie, I lurbed your story!
Powtaz on April 27, 2004, 2:51:10 AM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
thanx godzilla!!!!!! wow, didnt expect this. Thanx!!!!!Powtaz on April 14, 2004, 1:17:28 AM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
awwwwwww thankie u roxy! glad u liked!yes i might write again, so tempting, lol.
Roxy_the_Wolf_demon on April 8, 2004, 1:23:18 AM
Roxy_the_Wolf_demon on (Chapter: 1)
OMg, this was/is sooo kewl! I love reading great stories. Damn right you better be writing more. :p. Love ya always, Megan/Roxy. Bai!Powtaz on April 5, 2004, 7:06:11 AM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
awww thanx alex. tehehe. yay.and thanx ikey, glad u enjoyed it!
ikey on March 27, 2004, 6:59:32 AM
ikey on (Chapter: 1)
wow thats really good:)BAMFManiac on March 6, 2004, 3:44:54 PM
BAMFManiac on (Chapter: 1)
wow that was really good! very creative and exciting storyline, and i loved the characters! cool fight scenes, too! i hope you do write more...Powtaz on March 3, 2004, 1:33:09 AM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
yay! thanx DG!i actually wanted to be a writer a few years ago, since i like writing, but meh, takes too long, lol. im considering writing more now.
Powtaz on March 3, 2004, 1:18:55 AM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
Thanx Bossman :)this makes my day, glad u enjoyed it.
Boss_Man7089 on March 2, 2004, 7:18:54 AM
Boss_Man7089 on (Chapter: 1)
Hey thats a really cool story Powtaz i like it a lot. I rarely take time to read peoples stories but i thourughly enjoyed that thanks for the experience.