My story
Submitted March 2, 2004 Updated March 2, 2004 Status Incomplete | This is a story i wrote like, last year or something. Its a fantasy story.
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Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Uprising of Vengeance
Submitted: March 2, 2004 • Updated: March 2, 2004
Word count: 7148 • Size: 40k • Comments: 21 • views: 558
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KeboFokohj on January 3, 2008, 5:37:44 AM
KeboFokohj on (Chapter: index)
I have a question. What do you mean you EURTM or is that a computer generated mistake.Meredianna on January 2, 2005, 6:58:01 PM
Meredianna on (Chapter: 1)
Thats totally AWESOME *_* i really liked it, its kewlPowtaz on October 5, 2004, 1:30:41 AM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
awww thanks! that means alot....wait, u added me and my story to ur favs!? OMG u pwn! yaaaaaaaah. lol, thanx!Powtaz on August 30, 2004, 11:13:46 PM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
aww, thanx. thats sweet. awwwHaruGlory123 on August 24, 2004, 4:06:37 PM
HaruGlory123 on (Chapter: 1)
O_O HOLY CRUD!!!!!!! AWSOME!!!!!!!!UR AWSOME AT WRITTING! -is coming form a person that sucks herself and wouldnt no good writting if it slapped her in the butt- XD AWSOME!PURE AWSOME!Powtaz on July 18, 2004, 10:30:29 AM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
u know thats what i thought. the detail was to little, i wanted to keep it under 13000 words lol. i planned a sequel, but lacked the time, plus i have no clue how those IBM's got there, lol, and thanx again! GLAD U LOVED IT! and wow, m honored dreamofire! u commented on me, yay!WolfAquarius on July 13, 2004, 8:02:31 AM
WolfAquarius on (Chapter: 1)
Wow. I loved it. The charcters, the gore, ext. BUT I have a few construsctive comments. First, sry, but I didn't understand the IBM's and stuff. It confused me^_^ Second, It needs more detail(makes the story longer! ^_^) and thts all. If you don't want to take my advise then thts alright. again I loved it. Keep it up.DreamOfFire on May 15, 2004, 3:42:33 PM
DreamOfFire on (Chapter: 1)
heyza!^^that's a neatO story!^^ good job!^^ yay for you!^^Powtaz on May 9, 2004, 11:50:28 PM
Powtaz on (Chapter: 1)
aw thanx! i appreciate it!