IT's Coming
Submitted October 16, 2004 Updated October 16, 2004 Status Incomplete | A little Sci Fi story to Explain why Furrys are Half Human and half Animals. A Desease threatens to kill all of Humanity...
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Chapter 1 - IT
Submitted: October 16, 2004 • Updated: October 16, 2004
Word count: 3455 • Size: 18k • Comments: 9 • views: 469
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Thazacon on September 15, 2012, 3:33:56 AM
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This is very entertaining. I enjoyed the entire thing and will be looking for more stories from you... Keep up the good work.
Bouncy_The_Chao on February 2, 2006, 7:29:46 AM
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SERJ on January 29, 2006, 12:54:23 PM
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Sly_and_ally_forever on December 14, 2005, 4:40:28 AM
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RickRaccoon on October 29, 2005, 1:58:24 AM
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sorry Raa it took me awhile to find this. i wonder why art is more popular than storys. i think if the story can place a picture in your mind its better than art. i like this and it does put a pic in my mind. YaY furrys! have a cookie with that donut^.^ (throws cookie and it knocks you out) I should just walk away right now.
Prinncess_of_compe on September 10, 2005, 10:03:05 AM
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Dragon_Buster on June 7, 2005, 2:19:49 AM
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zakuman on October 23, 2004, 9:13:37 AM
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Well, this is my first time commenting, and reading a story on the FAC. So... yeah the lack of comments could be due to the fact that stories aren't as popular as art on here. If I were to make any kind of story on here, I'd want to do it in comic form. Now all that aside, what did I think of your story....
Well it's well thought, with all the facts that draw from reality. And it gives reason to all these furries. At first I was thinking of outbreak... with all the quarenteen business, and spreading. You don't explain exactly how IT kills someone. And you mention the fact that IT kills animals too..... so why the crossed dna counters it is a little fuzzy.
Wasn't too keen on the big bad America picture. We do have very open borders, sometimes someone gets the short end of the stick, but that's life. It also seems, that when they start combating it with and thingsgo back to normal...they tend to get better than they were before... a little furry utopia. They also don't care about politicians. well I lot of people now don't care about politicians, but even as bad as they are, they serve a purpose.
Well all this got me thinking of how I'd make a story about furries. I think I'd just write it up as a new realm in which these furries live. And some dude finds a way to come across realms. Meets a cat girl and gets it on, hehe :) And that's about as far I've come in the last few minutes.
Ok now to wrap this up. It's a decent story. I'd like to here more about the people after the whole shibang. My guess is that this only the begining, and foundation for your story idea, so I understand it helps to set this out, and then the real fun can begin after all that.
Well it's well thought, with all the facts that draw from reality. And it gives reason to all these furries. At first I was thinking of outbreak... with all the quarenteen business, and spreading. You don't explain exactly how IT kills someone. And you mention the fact that IT kills animals too..... so why the crossed dna counters it is a little fuzzy.
Wasn't too keen on the big bad America picture. We do have very open borders, sometimes someone gets the short end of the stick, but that's life. It also seems, that when they start combating it with and thingsgo back to normal...they tend to get better than they were before... a little furry utopia. They also don't care about politicians. well I lot of people now don't care about politicians, but even as bad as they are, they serve a purpose.
Well all this got me thinking of how I'd make a story about furries. I think I'd just write it up as a new realm in which these furries live. And some dude finds a way to come across realms. Meets a cat girl and gets it on, hehe :) And that's about as far I've come in the last few minutes.
Ok now to wrap this up. It's a decent story. I'd like to here more about the people after the whole shibang. My guess is that this only the begining, and foundation for your story idea, so I understand it helps to set this out, and then the real fun can begin after all that.
RaaToons on October 18, 2004, 2:37:32 PM
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