Shadow

Submitted
January 31, 2008
Updated
February 9, 2008
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 3
Size: 17k
Words: 3,686
Comments: 8
Views: 1,557
Faves...: 1
Rating: 1

This is just something I thought I'd work on when I'm not drawing. Even so, I'd still like your opinion and critisism. Also, this story will involve different anime, videogames, and even a few books.

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Category: Fantasy

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Nine Cloaks
Submitted: January 31, 2008 • Updated: January 31, 2008
Word count: 941 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 283

Chapter 2 - Abbot
Submitted: February 9, 2008 • Updated: February 9, 2008
Word count: 1304 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 240

Chapter 3 - Revival of Baroque Works
Submitted: February 9, 2008 • Updated: February 9, 2008
Word count: 1441 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 262

Comments

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luckylace222 on June 10, 2008, 11:09:20 AM

luckylace222 on June 10, 2008, 11:09:20 AM (Chapter: 3)

xD I love One PEace lol! You did a great portrait in words here!

luckylace222 on June 10, 2008, 11:08:37 AM

luckylace222 on June 10, 2008, 11:08:37 AM (Chapter: 2)

O_O OMG!! DEMON!! GET IT AWWWAAAIIII!!!!

luckylace222 on June 10, 2008, 10:41:44 AM

luckylace222 on June 10, 2008, 10:41:44 AM (Chapter: 1)

O_O MY! VERBAL FIGHTING ALREADY! XD LOL! THis is coolio!

SixDigit on February 9, 2008, 4:09:25 PM

SixDigit on February 9, 2008, 4:09:25 PM (Chapter: 3)

Oh, Just to let you guys know, I'm using the japanese name for Ms. Golden Week, (whose english name was Ms. April Fools Day.) Another thing, yes Luffy and crew DID fight Mr. 3 and Ms. Golden Week before, but the american dub just decided for some lack-of-logic reason to skip the arc dealing with these two.

neodusk on February 9, 2008, 11:26:42 AM

neodusk on February 9, 2008, 11:26:42 AM (Chapter: 2)

Pretty good.

I have to say though, this kinda reminds me of that animated show on Disney Channel (you know the one, right?)

Soooo next chapter! :P

CrimsonDot on February 3, 2008, 6:57:23 AM

CrimsonDot on February 3, 2008, 6:57:23 AM (Chapter: 1)

Nicely written. Hope to see more of this soon.

UnderUnion on February 1, 2008, 12:52:16 PM

UnderUnion on February 1, 2008, 12:52:16 PM (Chapter: 1)

Interesting time distortion, this could be an excellent story. Good work. lol, my "The Dire Project" has fell stagnant, remember, if you dont work on it much you seem to lose interest.

neodusk on January 31, 2008, 3:52:38 PM

neodusk on January 31, 2008, 3:52:38 PM (Chapter: 1)

Nice. Definitely potential for an interesting story!

...um...as for criticism...you seem to be having some trouble with grammar and consistency with present v. past tense. You may want to check your word choice too. But good job, otherwise. :P