Chiyu- God of Cats

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Submitted
September 20, 2006
Updated
September 21, 2006
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 2
Size: 6k
Words: 1,434
Comments: 2
Views: 1,701
Faves...: 0
Rating: 0

Yeah, kinda weird I think. Tell me what you think.

All of the gods in here are totally made up and I do not believe they exist.

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Category: Fantasy » Mythology

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Take me home
Submitted: September 20, 2006 • Updated: September 20, 2006
Word count: 676 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 284

Chapter 2 - Meow?
Submitted: September 21, 2006 • Updated: September 21, 2006
Word count: 758 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 230

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ladychaos on September 21, 2006, 6:14:58 PM

ladychaos on September 21, 2006, 6:14:58 PM (Chapter: 2)

cool chapter.
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i don't think theirs too much talking in it, a good dialogue between characters is important, it alows the reader to establish what the relationship between the characters is. No dialogue atall would be like miming out the entire story which in some cases isn't a great idea, do you know what i meen?

ladychaos on September 21, 2006, 1:59:11 AM

ladychaos on September 21, 2006, 1:59:11 AM (Chapter: 1)

wow. cool story.
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Chiyu sound so adorable.
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keep it up