Hexed

Wow . . . Pong complains about Ferran A LOT.

Personally, since I don't know him as well as everybody else (obviously), I don't have a right to say anything, but he gets on my nerves. I won't say anything more than that, except that his attitude sucks.

Being late because you complain too much . . . that sounds remotely familiar. . . . *thinking of self*

I don't know why that isn't popular; bandages look awesome on guys *mutters* especially Dar-kun. . . . *blushes lightly*

Hmm . . . so, Ferran used to NOT be a jerk and the Hitachiin twins used to BE jerks. That's relatively funny for some reason.

. . . Pong complains too much, just like I used to. *nod of finality*

I HAVE SOMEONE I WANT TO SMACK OVER THE HEAD TO CHANGE THEIR ATTITUDE!!! *glares at a certain yami of mine*

Hehe, Pong is funny, even though he complains too much (I've mentioned that three times now. . . .).

*points* IT'S HEX!!!!! *backs up as far as possible, still remembering the bad impression I gave him* He's hilarious though. Almost EVERYTHING he says is funny in one way or another. I'd probably better not get any closer to him than fifty feet though. . . .

*blinks* Hex insulted Jair. . . . *bursts out laughing*

*twenty minutes later*

*hiccupping* Okay . . . okay . . . I probably shouldn't have laughed like that, but . . . *giggles* THAT WAS SO FUNNY!!!!!

Ravin: *blinks* I think she's high on that chocolate she had a few minutes ago (it was a truffle and it was GOOD). . . .

*calms down a few minutes later*

Okay, where was I . . . ah right.

*tsks* One year old or not, they're still your elders Hex. . . . *remembers the impression and gets as far away from him as possible after saying that*

*mutters to self* Guys usually do have big heads . . . *blinks* NO OFFENSE INTENDED!!!!!!!!! *hides in the corner*

*giggles, blushing lightly* Fly in with the apple tree. . . . (I'm finding lots of things EXTREMELY funny today. . . .)

RINGO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *grins, thinking of Ryuk and his apple fetish as well as his time of no apples*

Hehe, an unorganized fairy. ^^ That's funny.

NO!!!! NEITHER HEX NOR DARKON CAN CHOKE!!!!! 'TWOULD BE BAD!!!!!!! *pauses and blushes* Shut up Ravin.

Korinne is thinking evil thoughts there, or Hex is assuming she is (and we all know what assuming does to people). I love evil thoughts, especially when they're mine, though most everybody else HATES it when I have evil thoughts. ^^0

Hehe, I LOVE the puppy-dog look. ^^ It's so CUTE! ^^

*sing song voice* Pong is getting COCKY. :P

Team Two, Pong, Hex, Korinne, Jair, and Dar-kun are DA BOMB!!! *mutters to self and blushes* Especially Dar-kun.

Pong vi Capella. *thumbs up* That is an AWESOME name design. ^^ Me LUVS it Wulf-chan! ^^

*giggling lightly* Hex's reaction to his real name was FUNNY!!!! Being allergic to a name is FUNNY!! And awesome at the same time. :P I can relatively understand why he'd go by Hex though. . . . SVEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *glomps the Sweeper* I LUVS SVEN!! AND EVE!!! AND TRAIN!!!!! THEY IS DA BOMB OF BLACK CAT!!!!!!!!!! ^^

It was AWESOME Wulf-chan!! Getting to know the characters just a little bit more was cool. ^^ I hope to be able to do that some more throughout the story. *thumbs up* I loved the Dar-kun-ness of the story too. *blushes*

I'M EXCITED FOR MORE!!!! I'M SO HAPPY FOR YOU!!!! YOU DON'T HAVE WRITER'S BLOCK!!!!!!!!! ENJOY IT WHILE IT LASTS AND WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, hard graduation tests. That SO does not surprise me in the least.

Cobalt talks funny. Reminds me of Hagrid. *giggling to self, hiccupping (that looks like it's spelled wrong XP) every now and then)*

I feel bad for everyone having to lose their solutions *mutters to self* except maybe Ferran's team........... *normal voice* But I suppose it can't be helped. 'Sides, it's a lot more fun when things are difficult.

Ravin: Don't be such a sadist Lego-chan.

I'm not being a sadist. It's the writer's instinct in me.

Ravin: Uh huh, sure it is.

*rolls eyes* Anyway, I don't like Ferran period. Don't like his attitude, don't like his attitude, don't like his attitude... did I mention I don't like his attitude?

Regardless of all that, Dar-kun is really cute and I'm sure he'll do fine. *blushes at my own words, fangirl-ish hugging of self (I see that ALL the time in OHSHC, it's REALLY freaky.....)*

I love it and I'm excited for more. ^^ Great job Wulf-chan!!!! *thumbs up*

THANKS! ^^

Hehe, I love his accent. ^^ (meaning both Cobalt's and Hagrid's, although they are different)

Yes yes, the more difficult it is, the more fun it is. ^^

Um... yeah I can see why you don't like Ferran. Personally I like him, but then again he's not out to kill MY boyfriend *grins at you*

Yes yes, Darkon shall be just fine ^^

YOU'RE WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

Hehe, it makes me laugh. ^^

Heck yes it is!! As long as you know what you're doing that is XP

*flushes maroon*

Ravin: She says she's glad he'll be okay.

I HAVE SIGNED IN TO COMMENT ON THIS LOVERLY CHAPTER!!!!

Carmos. Interesting name. I like it. *thumbs up*

Laster, Alos, and Shina are also interesting names. Original. I luvs them. *another thumbs up*

*stops self from glomping Darkon, crying* That sounded SO painful!!! (If I glomp him, I will probably kill his back, so I won't XP) POOR DAR-KUN!!!!!!!!! *blushing while crying*

Ravin: While my hikari is off crying, I guess I'll finish this for her.... She's happy Darkon made it on time and she laughs at Ferran because she can.

Ravin: The term "The Human World" makes her blush *mutters* for obvious reasons....

*from crying position in the corner, blushes maroon*

Ravin: *rolls eyes at me* Overall, she loves the chapter and the new summary. *gives you a half hearted thumbs up*

*from corner* LUVS IT WULF-CHAN!!!!!!!!!

Thanks, I love the names too hehe.

Yes I felt sooo bad for Darkon while I was writing that part! T_T

And I laugh at Ferran too ^^ He just wanted things to be easy for him - but too bad!!!

I would hope you do since, DUH, they're your characters XP

*laughing at Ferran* YOU POOR PATHETIC SOUL!!!!!!!!!

Ravin: *blinks* That sounds WAY too sadistic for her.....

*blushes maroon and starts crying again* POOR DAR-KUN!!!!!!!!! T///T

nice Yori^^ i love all the creative names! and i could have sworn i commented on the last chapter o0 at any rate, i love how its coming, keep it up!^^

lol, thanks!!! ^^ I like the names too, took me a while to think up the right ones XD

*blinks* Hex.... Right.... *remembers I smacked him the face with some random object and turns bright red* Oops.... ^^0 *backs up slowly, turns around, breaks off into a run, smacks into a wall, and knocks self out*

Ravin: While my hikari is currently unavailable, I will attempt to critique for her.

Ravin: She says she loves all the characters and their personalities so far, including the "baddies" as she puts it.

Ravin: She says she also likes how you're leaking information and backgrounds without letting out the full story and plot.

*sits up, still red* The ending is great and, so far, I really like Hex's personality. The bad guy is interesting too, though my affections lie elsewhere.... *turns bright red again as I realized what I just said and turns around, rubbing cheeks fiercly*

Ravin: Overall she loves it, she can't wait for more, and she hopes you don't get writer's block on this one too while being jealous of your lack of writer's block.

*thumbs up above my head* Great job Wulf-chan. Definitely LUVS it. ^^

lol, Thanks ^^ I like Hex too hehe I hope I don't get writer's block either!! >_<

Btw..... *clears throat* Lego and Darkon sitting in a tree.. *gets smacked in the head by Dante* @_@ ouch...

Dante: *grins and gives you a thumbs up*

Yes yes yes yes.

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*blinks* O. M. Gosh.

Ravin: What's wrong with you?

*blinks again and points* It's Darkon.

Ravin: *nods slowly* Yes, that would be Darkon.

*whirls around, blushing, and rubs cheeks like crazy*

Ravin: *blinks at me* Okay.............

*several minutes later*

*turns back around* Okay, putting that aside, I absolutely adore both characters. Their personalities so far are awesome.

Pong sounds funny. I'm excited to see more of him and his personality. ^^

For a first chapter, I think it's really good, though kinda short, but I'm used to Kay-chan's and Cat-chan's REALLY LONG chapters....

The lack of information makes me curious and I wanna read more for sure.

I'm interested to see more on Darkon's background and all that.

Overall, awesome first chapter. ^^ Great job Wulf-chan! I love it!! ^^

*blinks* Yeah, it's Darkon lol.

There will definitely be more on Pong ^_^ Yes, it actually was rather short ^^0 Darkon's background... will come eventually lol.

I'm glad you like it! ^^

*goes bright red again and turns around, rubbing cheeks fiercely*

Ravin: She says she's excited for all that wonderful stuff and you're welcome for whatever reason. *wasn't really paying attention*

*blinks* Why are you rubbing your cheeks?

*mutters, back still turned* No reason....

Oh? I don't believe you.

*glances back at you, still red in the face* Why do you think I'm doing it? Heck, why do you think I'm blushing in the first place?

*slyly* Oh I don't know... maybe you liiiiike Darkon...

*goes bright red again and turns around, rubbing cheeks fiercely*

Ravin: Bullseye.

Ha! *grins*

*rubbing face* Shut up.

^_^

Ravin: Hmm... does Darkon know of your... affections, as you put it, Lego-chan (at least in the comment for chapter two *points to it*)?

*turns bright red again*

As far as I know... no But I could tell him if you want lol

*mutters while blushing* If you want to..............

We'll see ^^

i like how you started this ^^ im not gonna lie, im a little confused lol
but i still cant wait for more