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Angelish redone

Angelish with more detail! ^^ I reposted chapter one with even more detail and chapter two is up as well! :)

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - one
Submitted: January 19, 2007 • Updated: September 2, 2007
Word count: 3240 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 343

Chapter 2 - Chapter two
Submitted: March 19, 2007 • Updated: March 19, 2007
Word count: 1246 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 258

Chapter 3 - chapter 3
Submitted: April 16, 2007 • Updated: April 16, 2007
Word count: 909 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 235

Chapter 4 - Chapter 4
Submitted: April 16, 2007 • Updated: September 2, 2007
Word count: 2007 • Size: 10k • Comments: 0 • views: 279

Chapter 5 - chapter 5
Submitted: April 17, 2007 • Updated: April 17, 2007
Word count: 643 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 264

Chapter 6 - chapter 6
Submitted: April 17, 2007 • Updated: April 17, 2007
Word count: 903 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 239

Chapter 7 - chapter 7
Submitted: April 17, 2007 • Updated: April 17, 2007
Word count: 1114 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 305

Chapter 8 - chapter 8
Submitted: April 17, 2007 • Updated: April 17, 2007
Word count: 1879 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 304

Chapter 9 - chapter 9
Submitted: April 17, 2007 • Updated: September 3, 2007
Word count: 2370 • Size: 12k • Comments: 1 • views: 304

Chapter 10 - another chapter
Submitted: May 15, 2007 • Updated: May 15, 2007
Word count: 925 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 285

Chapter 11 - chapter 11
Submitted: June 18, 2007 • Updated: June 18, 2007
Word count: 819 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 293

Chapter 12 - Chapter 12
Submitted: August 7, 2007 • Updated: September 3, 2007
Word count: 715 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 239

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_theater_freak_147 on June 18, 2007, 6:32:22 AM

_theater_freak_147 on (Chapter: 11)
_theater_freak_147Really really short!

dancing_thru_life on June 3, 2007, 12:37:17 AM

dancing_thru_life on (Chapter: 10)
dancing_thru_lifeOhmigosh! We learned about the "Corp, Division, Brigade, Regiment, and Company" thing in Social Studies! Woo! Brilliant chapter, though I think I already read the original draft during English last week. (Oops) I also put up another one of my chapters. (If that matters...)

summerstorm on May 27, 2007, 2:28:10 AM

summerstorm on (Chapter: 10)
summerstormWow, I love this new chapter! Great detail. This is such a cool story. :)

orliej16 on May 3, 2007, 8:21:38 PM

orliej16 on (Chapter: 7)
orliej16Mark...he sure sounds cute! ^-^'
Wait...I was gonna draw him right?? Thats what Im gonna do right now!^^
I'll let you know when its finished^^

orliej16 on May 3, 2007, 8:11:26 PM

orliej16 on (Chapter: 6)
orliej16oooh...KEEP WRITING!! ^0^

orliej16 on May 3, 2007, 8:01:53 PM

orliej16 on (Chapter: 5)
orliej16aaaw..I really pity allison :(:(
oooh.. chapter 6, here I come ! ^0^

kiiwii on May 2, 2007, 12:35:53 AM

kiiwii on (Chapter: 1)
kiiwiiooh awesome :D ^^ keep up the good work;)

orliej16 on April 26, 2007, 8:08:23 AM

orliej16 on (Chapter: 3)
orliej160.0
Just keep writing! Thats all I have to say...0.0
Im gonna read the next chapters!! ^0^
you rock!!^^

orliej16 on March 22, 2007, 4:03:00 AM

orliej16 on (Chapter: 2)
orliej16oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh even better than the first chapter of the redone version!!!
This is really great!^0^
Keep writing^0^

orliej16 on January 19, 2007, 8:17:49 AM

orliej16 on (Chapter: 1)
orliej16wow...just... wow...To tell you the truth: I like this version of the story even better!!^^ I really like the changes you made! Even more detail than it already had! This is very good! I think you should delete the old version and post this one instead. Thats what I would do^^
Thnx so much for asking me to tell you what I'd think of it!^^ That really means alot to me!^^