Conflicts and Aftermath
Submitted May 9, 2007 Updated July 15, 2007 Status Incomplete | I am off school for the summer and I needed a project to keep me busy. I may not be the best writer, but I try. The title of the story may change. I haven't decided yet. Critiszm is welcome, but be nice don't flame me to bad. ^_^
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Chapters
Chapter 0 - Persuasion
Submitted: May 9, 2007 • Updated: May 13, 2007
Word count: 2465 • Size: 13k • Comments: 5 • views: 511
Chapter 1 - Vacation Destination
Submitted: May 16, 2007 • Updated: May 16, 2007
Word count: 3742 • Size: 19k • Comments: 2 • views: 356
Chapter 2 - Sorrow and pain
Submitted: May 28, 2007 • Updated: May 28, 2007
Word count: 1539 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 353
Chapter 3 - Detainment with a Purpose
Submitted: July 3, 2007 • Updated: July 3, 2007
Word count: 3554 • Size: 19k • Comments: 2 • views: 334
Chapter 4 - General's toy and Welcome to Despin
Submitted: July 15, 2007 • Updated: July 15, 2007
Word count: 2221 • Size: 11k • Comments: 3 • views: 333
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Falconlobo on May 22, 2007, 4:10:06 PM
cool chapter nice dialog and character interaction^^nextguardian on May 20, 2007, 12:14:36 PM
I'm going to echo my comments from the last chapter, and add that you're doing a really great job of portraying the characters. Keep it up!
nextguardian on May 20, 2007, 12:07:45 PM
This is some of the best dialogue I have ever seen!And great detail. You hit the perfect amount imo.
Falconlobo on May 9, 2007, 8:07:56 AM
cute and funny i like the dialog between them^^