Hellfire
Submitted October 23, 2008 Updated May 9, 2009 Status Incomplete | Just an idea I had, lemme know what you think. And btw I borrowed the bad guys from actual myths lol Also please make sure to check out the Q&A section (for background info on Hellfire), I'll be updating it periodically.
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Chapters
Chapter 0 - Q&A
Submitted: January 2, 2009 • Updated: January 24, 2009
Word count: 269 • Size: 1k • Comments: 16 • views: 1121
Chapter 0 - The Good Guys
Submitted: October 23, 2008 • Updated: February 21, 2009
Word count: 152 • Size: 1k • Comments: 16 • views: 899
Chapter 0 - The Bad Guys
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
Word count: 117 • Size: 1k • Comments: 16 • views: 834
Chapter 1 - The Arrival
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: October 26, 2008
Word count: 475 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 709
Chapter 2 - Newcomers
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
Word count: 613 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 699
Chapter 3 - Friendship
Submitted: November 4, 2008 • Updated: May 9, 2009
Word count: 1157 • Size: 6k • Comments: 7 • views: 395
Chapter 4 - Marked
Submitted: November 10, 2008 • Updated: November 10, 2008
Word count: 926 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 410
Chapter 5 - Prophecy
Submitted: December 9, 2008 • Updated: December 10, 2008
Word count: 1158 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 386
Chapter 6 - Encounter
Submitted: December 30, 2008 • Updated: December 31, 2008
Word count: 1163 • Size: 6k • Comments: 6 • views: 659
Chapter 7 - Alagor
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: January 24, 2009
Word count: 1040 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 410
Chapter 8 - Astar
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: January 25, 2009
Word count: 944 • Size: 5k • Comments: 5 • views: 603
Chapter 9 - Kaesi
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: January 24, 2009
Word count: 1173 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 393
Chapter 10 - Noah
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: April 8, 2009
Word count: 1357 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 360
Chapter 11 - Betrayal
Submitted: February 17, 2009 • Updated: February 17, 2009
Word count: 969 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 646
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RinTheNeko on July 12, 2009, 6:42:21 AM
DeathNoteSurvivor on July 12, 2009, 6:44:37 AM
YoriXYamiForever on March 7, 2009, 5:32:22 AM
Yay I got my questions answered! ^^Wow! I want that many bookcases! *dreamy at thought*
YoriXYamiForever on March 7, 2009, 5:30:05 AM
AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! ALAGOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TT_TT *sniffles* I hope nothing bad happens to him . . . .AND THE ENDING!!!! Wow!! I didn't expect the "Father" thing. Wow. Ahh! T_T
Awesome chapter. I loved it! I just . . . . T_T
KelekiahGaladrian on February 18, 2009, 7:50:31 AM
Okay, so I didn't get this read and reviewed last night when I wanted to, but I did it today. That's like, a RECORD for me.I have a feeling Wulf-chan/Yori-chan isn't going to be happy about this.
Terance, You should get a kick where it hurts. *pauses* Multiple times. You are not worthy of being liked anymore. If this is part of your secret "master plan" or whatever, I'll kill you. *pauses* Heck, I'll kill you anyway. *makes a face at him*
Other than that, I think the chapter was well written though there were a couple parts that I think I read wrong enough that I confused myself XP
If this is a "master plan" thing on Terance's part, the other demons have reason not to trust him though I think Noah and the others won't trust him either.
Blackheart's powers rising while Astar's temporarily disable. . . . That doesn't sound very good.
I hope Noah embraces you tightly while your powers are at their height, Blackheart, so that he can completely mutilate you 'cause I really don't like you right now.
Congrats on an update. That's AWESOME. ^^ I love it and I'm excited for more.
Blackwolfmoon on February 17, 2009, 7:25:08 AM
i liekd this chapter! i really want to know more about the ending so i can't wait for the next chapter, that should be interesting. what exactly are Exile Scrolls? o.oParanormalPhenomenon on February 3, 2009, 10:24:59 AM
hmm...such a simple but detailed story line. really makes for a extraordinary tale. my friend did not lie when she said you were one of the better online authors, AND you actually know how to spell and your grammer! I enjoyed each character and how their personality were unique. i wont say i can't wait for the next chapter (because obviously i have to) but i shall look forward to then. until then.KelekiahGaladrian on January 26, 2009, 8:15:34 AM
WWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWThat was FULL OF STUFF.
I love the description and character and all that other lovely stuff. It's great to be able to get to know your characters even better. ^^
The fact that Noah knew the prophecy (I knew it was a prophecy, just KNEW it . . . but I'm not bitter) doesn't seem to surprise me as much as I thought it would. It also doesn't surprise me that he wrote that on the wall and in blood no less (the red makes more sense now XP).
Blackheart getting hurt by Noah's blood made me laugh. Hehehehehehe
What was that orb he shot away? What does the mark on Noah have to do with anything?
Impudent little Fleshchild. I REALLY like that insult. Me no know why right now, but, I really do like it. It's very funny. *laughs insanely*
The ending makes me wonder and I find it sad. What the crap has Alagor done to himself to screw up things? If he joined the dark side, I'm going to have a cow and then I shall proceed with my "kill then bring back to life" sequence thingy.
By the way, did you write that prophecy all by yourself or is that an actual prophecy? (I doubt it's a real one, but I dunno. I'm not very knowledgeable when it comes to that stuff)
Me likes. I congratulate you with your ability to be able to update like that. You and Wulf-chan both. Lego-chan is JEALOUS!!! *sigh* Oh well. . . . I likes the updates though, I promise.
Great job!!! ^^ Have fun with your next update (when you get around to doing it that is)!! ^^
KelekiahGaladrian on January 26, 2009, 7:59:32 AM
........ I am a very impatient person. Very impatient. If I woulda just waited ONE MORE CHAPTER. . . . *sigh* Oh well.I loved the description and character in this chapter as well.
I feel bad for Kaesi. I hate pain with a passion and I imagine that must have been a VERY painful ordeal for her.
Wallow is evil. That's all I shall say about her.
Taking the scrolls was not a nice thing. Very mean.
I have decided, I REALLY don't like Wallow. REALLY don't like her.
I wonder what kind of scrolls those are and I'm excited to see what happens around those.
I'm also wondering, why red? Is there a specific reason for that particular color?
. . . . at least I get to see what the message was, but, is that a prophecy? I hate prophecies. They and the people they involve are SO annoying and are such a hassle and I hate dealing with them.
If it is a prophecy, that is okay, I promise. I'm just being weird is all.
Me likes. Very good job. ^^
ONE CHAPTER LEFT!!!! Then I'll be caught up for a little while.
KelekiahGaladrian on January 26, 2009, 7:46:45 AM
........ You're really mean, you know that? Hinting at things but not telling us. So mean. At least it keeps us reading.I loved the description and characterization in this chapter. 'Twas AWESOME.
Imma thinkin' I like Astar more than Alagor at the moment. Astar was smart enough to actually GO to the chapel instead of hinting at joining the bad guys. *smacks Alagor over the head with a math book*
Very nice. Lego-chan likes. Lego-chan likes a lot. Now Lego-chan must go read the other chapters to be all caught up.
Great job by the way. ^^