Chapter 1 - My Heart
Submitted October 11, 2008 Updated July 25, 2010 Status Incomplete | These are about my life Let me know if you like them
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Chapter 1 - My Heart
Chapter 1 - My Heart
How much more can I take
Scars and cuts
Breaks and bruises
It feels like I've been bitten by a snake
Slithering and crawling
Poison and fangs
You can't imagine the pain
Stings and throbbing
Pounding and poking
As I stand in the rain
Drizziling and dropping
Pouring and dripping
I will wait for you
Standing and waiting
Watching and wondering
But only if you knew
Around and loving
Holding and caring
Scars and cuts
Breaks and bruises
It feels like I've been bitten by a snake
Slithering and crawling
Poison and fangs
You can't imagine the pain
Stings and throbbing
Pounding and poking
As I stand in the rain
Drizziling and dropping
Pouring and dripping
I will wait for you
Standing and waiting
Watching and wondering
But only if you knew
Around and loving
Holding and caring
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TearJerker on October 15, 2008, 7:22:08 AM
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That was just too sweet. :)SomekindofFreak on October 15, 2008, 7:01:48 AM
I really liked the repetition here. very emotional piece, here!BottleOfNandaTanda on October 14, 2008, 12:41:23 PM
Omg It's beautiful-cries a little bit- It's so sad D: But, I love how you write :]. -faves-