Chapter 1 - my poems
Submitted February 12, 2006 Updated February 12, 2006 Status Incomplete | just a couple of lil poems i made up hope u all like them
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Chapter 1 - my poems
Chapter 1 - my poems
my poems
the dark clouds not a pretty sight I want to see the sun so bright but no its clouds and gloomy weather why cant the sun come back and give me my tan back I want to be sitting outside with my mini fan so sun please please come back cause the clouds are not amusing me
the sea it's a wonderful place to be by the sparkly blue sea were the dolphins play so peaceful and happily so delightful to see the lovely blue sea
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jesslovesbilly82 on March 3, 2006, 6:38:02 PM
omfg i love your poems . i can write them the would suck.mystic_girl on February 26, 2006, 7:26:10 PM
mystic_girl on
The one about the sea is AWESOME!!youre talented ^-^
dfelon on February 20, 2006, 3:29:34 AM
dfelon on
I liked the sea one, it has a happy feel to it ^^blazingales on February 13, 2006, 5:56:58 PM
blazingales on
this comment is by Vic. Not Eyre(the one that did Soren) Your poems are really good! please write more! plzplzplzplzplzlildevil06 on February 13, 2006, 3:24:51 AM
lildevil06 on
thx every1 ill b doin sum more soon so keep lookin byes oh my first pic will be up soon nothin speical jus a lil thin done on paint michy609 on February 13, 2006, 1:12:10 AM
michy609 on
this is so cool and we can be freind's i like your poem it get's my attention if u want to conntact me it's michy667 ok see yahblazingales on February 12, 2006, 4:16:22 PM
blazingales on
so beautiful... please write more =Dweasleygirl on February 12, 2006, 6:42:53 AM
weasleygirl on
nice job! ^_~lildragonboy on February 12, 2006, 6:37:59 AM
lildragonboy on
aww, me luvs! your a good poet =^.^=yamiserenity on February 11, 2006, 9:30:55 PM
yamiserenity on
WOW THEY ARE SO GOOD PLZ DO MORE LUVS YA XXXX