Chonicles of LuCana: Kalimna
Submitted May 6, 2006 Updated May 9, 2006 Status Incomplete | The LuCana, god of dragons, has been locked away, dorment inside his own soul for many thousands of years. The empire of Hexia, advanced race of planet conquring beings, have found out about this adn plan on controling him as a weapon...
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Brothers in the Military, and boys in minishorts
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
Word count: 2801 • Size: 15k • Comments: 3 • views: 441
Chapter 2 - A fortunate fall
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
Word count: 4700 • Size: 24k • Comments: 3 • views: 672
Chapter 3 - Deadly kisses
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
Word count: 2912 • Size: 15k • Comments: 3 • views: 425
Chapter 4 - Brothers are such trouble
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 3149 • Size: 16k • Comments: 2 • views: 373
Chapter 5 - A dragon god's wrath
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 5671 • Size: 30k • Comments: 2 • views: 384
Chapter 6 - The Reotai Brothers
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 3738 • Size: 19k • Comments: 2 • views: 715
Chapter 7 - The Demon Fox
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 1384 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 373
Chapter 8 - The bratty princess and the deviant prince
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 1842 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 339
Chapter 9 - The cave of elementals
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 1864 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 353
Chapter 10 - The royalty arrives
Submitted: May 9, 2006 • Updated: May 9, 2006
Word count: 706 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 336
Chapter 11 - insert random chapter name here
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
Word count: 1255 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 374
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Astri on June 22, 2006, 9:06:17 AM
Trinity_Fire on June 5, 2006, 9:05:21 AM
Oooh, so very very interesting! Though, there are now so many characters I might need to start writing them down! XD Ooh, so lovely. Oh, and I never mentioned this before, but I really like the names you use. pretty pretty named, yup, but not too outlandishly fantasy, y'know?
Lovely. Keep it up! ^____^-
Trinity_Fire on May 10, 2006, 3:00:36 AM
Hhm, rather short chapter, but very nice. :3 Wai, such nice dialogue! And so so very very interesting. :) 3 days, 10 chapters! just unbelievable. O_OSugooooooooooooooi!
Trinity_Fire on May 9, 2006, 8:16:56 AM
Ahahaha, beardless sneezing gnomes. X) Wai. I luvs this! so very very interesting, with all of these different and unique ideas playing through it all...
Lovely~!! I love the mass updates you have. :D
::dies:: need more!
Trinity_Fire on May 9, 2006, 8:15:20 AM
Ooooooh, more characters, and more buildup! O_______O So very very interesting~! Wai! Flip, Naku, Arkin, I wuvs them all!!! yes'm! X)
Wai~! continue~! I'll read every chance I get. :)
Trinity_Fire on May 8, 2006, 9:03:37 AM
Wai! O_____________OThe plot thickens further!! So very very interesting!!!! .__. I need more. wai.
Cooooooooontinue~!! Luvs it all! X)
Trinity_Fire on May 8, 2006, 9:01:58 AM
O_________OCian! I'm not sure which version of him I like better, they're both pretty cool. XDDDDD Yaaaaaaaay for pixie magic sticks. O___O I wanna get high on faery. XDDDD
Wai~! poor, poor Flip~! And soft little hints of yaoi! yes'm! so very very nice! XD
The plot's really heating up! so interesting! Wai~! Continue, please. :3 ::bobs head up and down::
Sugoi!!!
Trinity_Fire on May 8, 2006, 8:55:52 AM
Awwwwwwwwwww poor Arkin~!! and he's so sweet tooo!! XD [well, by my standards, anyone can be sweet. X) ]Wai~!! Lovely! You've got some pretty nice action scenes there, I really like how things changed! O__________O
So very very interesting. Continue~!!!! XD
Trinity_Fire on May 8, 2006, 8:52:40 AM
Ahahaha, little teddy bear of a brother! XDDD Shima, too! Wai, I luvs your story~!! The characters, they're all so wonderful, and the plotline... it all seems pretty well thought-out to me. :3
Wai~! So very ver interesting. .__. And I luuuuuvs your updates! keep it up, awesome! XD
Trinity_Fire on May 7, 2006, 3:53:43 AM
Ahahaha, and the characters begin to join up. Mmmn, poor tir being seen as girl again... ...[though somewhere inside, I think he enjoys it XD] and frying pans! yay! XD
::does a dance, then falls down::
Need mroe~! I love how you've got humor and seriousness and plotline and good characters all bundled together, so wonderful~! ^________^-
Lovely story~! wai! this is going in the favs. You keep it up, you. ;)
Not to be redundant, but I agree with Trinity_Fire and Midnight_Chaos. I like this beginning--you get a good feel of the characters here--and although there are a few typos, indeed, nothing major. Your Leena reminds me of Chrono Cross Leena--I can totally see her bashing Naku `round the head with a besom. Fun images ^.^
Well, onto the next chapter!