Chonicles of LuCana: Kalimna
Submitted May 6, 2006 Updated May 9, 2006 Status Incomplete | The LuCana, god of dragons, has been locked away, dorment inside his own soul for many thousands of years. The empire of Hexia, advanced race of planet conquring beings, have found out about this adn plan on controling him as a weapon...
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Brothers in the Military, and boys in minishorts
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
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Chapter 2 - A fortunate fall
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
Word count: 4700 • Size: 24k • Comments: 3 • views: 676
Chapter 3 - Deadly kisses
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
Word count: 2912 • Size: 15k • Comments: 3 • views: 430
Chapter 4 - Brothers are such trouble
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 3149 • Size: 16k • Comments: 2 • views: 377
Chapter 5 - A dragon god's wrath
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 5671 • Size: 30k • Comments: 2 • views: 387
Chapter 6 - The Reotai Brothers
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 3738 • Size: 19k • Comments: 2 • views: 718
Chapter 7 - The Demon Fox
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 1384 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 376
Chapter 8 - The bratty princess and the deviant prince
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 1842 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 345
Chapter 9 - The cave of elementals
Submitted: May 8, 2006 • Updated: May 8, 2006
Word count: 1864 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 355
Chapter 10 - The royalty arrives
Submitted: May 9, 2006 • Updated: May 9, 2006
Word count: 706 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 338
Chapter 11 - insert random chapter name here
Submitted: May 6, 2006 • Updated: May 6, 2006
Word count: 1255 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 376
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Trinity_Fire on May 7, 2006, 3:49:17 AM
Trinity_Fire on May 7, 2006, 3:45:57 AM
Yay!!! Nice! I really really like the feel of the story, and the charries here and how they all act. What a cute lil boy Naku is... tehehehehe. :3 Wai~!
And such of a wonderful plotline! I see a bit of star ocean in here, and it makes me happy. hehehehe.
Wai~!
3 chappies too! ::bustles off to read more::
Midnight_Chaos on May 6, 2006, 5:01:50 PM
That was a great chapter!!! Really interesting, especially with your new character Arkin. So he's joined the little pilgrimage now? That's cool!! Kinda creepy how he devours ppls souls, but it's an awesome idea. I hope you continue this!!~Corad~ ^-^ *favs*
Midnight_Chaos on May 6, 2006, 4:37:50 PM
It's getting really interesting now!! Poor Naku though...falling off a steep cliff!! Poor thing. Lol, the scene when he woke up beside Tani reminded me of Fayt and Meena ^-^ Anyhow, onto chapter...3?...I'm wondering what's gonna happen now with Flip and Naku. Hehe, see ya in the next chapter!!Midnight_Chaos on May 6, 2006, 4:09:40 PM
Nice start!! I loved it lol. Shima and Naku have great characterisation and the description you've used is really detailed. The plot so far is awesome too. There are only a couple of typos, but nothing major lol. On to the next chapter!! WHHOOOHHH!!! *runs off screaming like a loony*~Corad~ ^o^
So wonderful, now Tir be in story. hehehe. :3
And poor little Naku! Can't believe they left him! Wha!
::bustles off::
What an interesting story! Keep it up! Ooooh I need more! XD