Life of Love and Confusion:A sonic story
Submitted February 10, 2007 Updated May 11, 2008 Status Incomplete | This is a story 4 my babe jordanthehedgehog! I know it is weird............well Enjoy God i love my Boyfriend so much /\_/\ I'm sorry If this is disgusting or something....but..it is a request..
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Life of Love and Confusion(Jordan And Kira Story)
Submitted: February 10, 2007 • Updated: February 10, 2007
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Chapter 2 - Mysterious Assasin
Submitted: February 11, 2007 • Updated: February 11, 2007
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Chapter 3 - Confusion and a Get Together.
Submitted: February 11, 2007 • Updated: February 11, 2007
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Chapter 4 - The Attacked and the Confused
Submitted: February 11, 2007 • Updated: February 11, 2007
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Chapter 5 - The Surprise
Submitted: February 12, 2007 • Updated: February 12, 2007
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Chapter 6 - Surpirse turns into Cold
Submitted: February 12, 2007 • Updated: February 12, 2007
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Chapter 7 - Rest into Worry
Submitted: February 12, 2007 • Updated: February 12, 2007
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Chapter 8 - Lovely Morning?
Submitted: February 13, 2007 • Updated: February 13, 2007
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Chapter 9 - Kiras Reaction
Submitted: February 13, 2007 • Updated: February 13, 2007
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Chapter 10 - Anger In The Morning
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
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Chapter 11 - A Baby Is Born
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
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Chapter 12 - Careing Love
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
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Chapter 13 - Romantic Evening.
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
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Chapter 14 - A Worried Angel
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
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Chapter 15 - Happy Valentines Day
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
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Chapter 16 - Lost Love
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
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Chapter 17 - "UP UP I SAY!"
Submitted: February 15, 2007 • Updated: February 15, 2007
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Chapter 18 - The Sickness part 1
Submitted: February 17, 2007 • Updated: February 17, 2007
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Chapter 19 - Leaving For A Break
Submitted: February 17, 2007 • Updated: February 17, 2007
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Chapter 20 - The Showdown
Submitted: February 18, 2007 • Updated: February 18, 2007
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Chapter 21 - Hope and Tradgities
Submitted: February 19, 2007 • Updated: February 19, 2007
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Chapter 22 - The Return of the Queen
Submitted: February 19, 2007 • Updated: February 19, 2007
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Chapter 23 - Hospitalized and a New Power
Submitted: February 20, 2007 • Updated: February 20, 2007
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Chapter 24 - Kira new Power.
Submitted: February 21, 2007 • Updated: February 21, 2007
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Chapter 25 - A Visit From Virus and Tony
Submitted: February 27, 2007 • Updated: February 27, 2007
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Chapter 26 - A Small Visit
Submitted: March 8, 2007 • Updated: March 8, 2007
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Chapter 27 - Pain and Suffering
Submitted: March 9, 2007 • Updated: March 9, 2007
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Chapter 28 - Koda Returns
Submitted: March 17, 2007 • Updated: March 17, 2007
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Chapter 29 - Friendly Hello
Submitted: March 17, 2007 • Updated: March 17, 2007
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Chapter 30 - A Visit fom Sonic2
Submitted: March 20, 2007 • Updated: March 20, 2007
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Chapter 31 - Pleasure of a mating night (WARNING SEXUAL CONTENT!)
Submitted: June 3, 2007 • Updated: May 9, 2008
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Chapter 32 - Untitled
Submitted: August 24, 2007 • Updated: August 24, 2007
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Chapter 33 - Demonized.
Submitted: September 16, 2007 • Updated: September 16, 2007
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Chapter 34 - Summer
Submitted: May 4, 2008 • Updated: May 4, 2008
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Chapter 35 - lust (warning. sex XD )
Submitted: May 11, 2008 • Updated: May 11, 2008
Word count: 655 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 374
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ShadowAndMaria4Ever on May 1, 2009, 3:27:38 PM
I lost my breath and didnt even know it was gone until he giot revived with the chaos emeraldShadowAndMaria4Ever on May 1, 2009, 3:13:54 PM
HES GONNA KILL AJ! I dont think Jordan and Kira will let him though.ShadowAndMaria4Ever on May 1, 2009, 3:07:14 PM
I'm preparing my Dark Beam! (Midnight the Hedgehog, a drak type) It can go through four houses!Forestdahedgehog on June 16, 2008, 10:16:32 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwww,how romantic,write mor plz XDForestdahedgehog on June 16, 2008, 10:12:57 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww,summers a nice name XDboykingkilla on May 11, 2008, 5:05:11 AM
It is awesome my friend, Long time no chat huh? ^_^sonicbabe5 on May 24, 2008, 1:17:59 AM
8smiles8 yeah, thanks ^^Forestdahedgehog on March 7, 2008, 6:11:24 AM
XD MOR PLZ!Forestdahedgehog on March 7, 2008, 6:07:59 AM
=3 cuteForestdahedgehog on March 7, 2008, 6:06:22 AM
:o!!!wow...that is lik so... a g-g-g-GREAT STORY XD!!but a lot of sexual content XP XDForestdahedgehog on March 7, 2008, 6:02:23 AM
XDForestdahedgehog on March 7, 2008, 5:56:41 AM
Awwwwww......... XDForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:51:36 AM
mor'fun time XP'but YAY!!Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:49:13 AM
MARK!!NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!*sniffle*i didnt eve get 2 say hi 2 him...*sad puppy face*WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!lolz good stry,and wow,mor'playing arund'XP lolForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:42:09 AM
XD i wonders who mark iz?good or not,friend or foe,guess ill find out in next chapters............lolz great story XDForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:38:41 AM
XD AWSOMENESSForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:24:06 AM
XDForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:21:12 AM
XD FIRE BALLSForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:16:32 AM
coolXDForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 9:03:48 AM
oh noesForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 8:46:50 AM
-_-oh great,koda...YAY!!THAT MEANS MOR VIOLENCE XD YAHOO!!!Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 8:05:20 AM
OHForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 8:01:42 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww XDForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:59:31 AM
OMG!!!U HAD ME SCARED 4 A SECOND THERE!!!THAN HEAVEN 4 CHAOS EMERALDS XD DX IF there wasnt 1,then,idk wat 2 say about itXD awsome though^^Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:48:17 AM
romantic XDForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:41:13 AM
XDForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:34:23 AM
awwwwwwXDForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:23:56 AM
OMG!!DE POOR BABY!!!than heaven jordan and kira saved him,BUT POOR JORDANA ND KIRA XP XDForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:19:09 AM
awwwwwXD AJ!!!!grrr KODA U R REALLY CROSSING DA LINE NOW!!!!!!!!GRRRRRR!!!RAWR!!!very nice story XDForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:08:35 AM
GOD!!!OK KODA UR GOING DOWN 2 DA GROUND!!GRRRR LE ME AT HIM LE ME AT HIM >:(Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:03:46 AM
OH YAH KICK KODAS BUTT!!!!!Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:00:56 AM
>:(I SWEAR IM GONNA SHOOT THIS KODA GUY IN THE HEAD AND/OR BEAT HIS @$$!!!!!!!!Forestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 6:54:59 AM
ok,this koda guy is gonna have a broken NECK IF HE DOESNT STEP AWAY FROM KIRA LIK NOW!!!!AND A BUSTED HEAD!!!!xXKirathechihuahuaXx on August 26, 2007, 9:11:48 AM
Awwwwwwwwww Thats sooooo cute! *favs* Make more!!!sonicbabe5 on June 18, 2007, 11:19:37 AM
yeah^^ flame can b in thisRogueTheBat18 on June 3, 2007, 9:23:00 PM
good to see ur backFalconlobo on June 3, 2007, 7:41:57 AM
cute but maybe this should be rated ModerateNudity and Moderate sex^^
virusthehedgehog on April 19, 2007, 11:23:47 PM
what sonic 2 stole my new game lolvirusthehedgehog on April 19, 2007, 11:19:51 PM
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm wowFlameTheFox578 on March 24, 2007, 3:11:36 AM
....is that all hes gonna do?Sonic2 on March 26, 2007, 10:14:35 AM
well for me i hope not because if he appers once...my charater will apper once! but its ok for me! at least i got to be in a chapter!RogueTheBat18 on March 20, 2007, 8:50:08 PM
they like sleeping and relaxing, its how they end every chp :PFalconlobo on March 20, 2007, 9:11:05 AM
cute and funny^^Sonic2 on March 20, 2007, 8:20:44 AM
also yeah i do get nervious about myyoung age of 10but i would make a exuse...but first i'd play with a box!^^Sonic2 on March 20, 2007, 5:02:26 AM
YAYZ!!! TIS IS FUNNY AND MY FAVORITE CHAPTER!!!!!Sonic2 on March 18, 2007, 9:39:59 AM
if u forgot, when will u put me in (if i can't be in this story, i'll be in a box) and i love being in that box!^^Falconlobo on March 17, 2007, 7:56:36 AM
cute^^Falconlobo on March 17, 2007, 7:55:23 AM
wow no Jordons Power Ups alsmost got the better of himFlameTheFox578 on March 17, 2007, 7:01:02 AM
like...how there both red,and both there names start with a "J" and how both there names have 6 letters o.oFlameTheFox578 on March 17, 2007, 6:59:37 AM
eheh....awesome*faves*y'know,jordan reminds me of jaiden for some reasonFlameTheFox578 on March 17, 2007, 6:09:04 AM
cool :3.virusthehedgehog on March 12, 2007, 7:24:37 PM
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oh well virus didn't know him that well cool chapterFalconlobo on March 12, 2007, 7:23:33 AM
wow something has awakened in her very powerfullFalconlobo on March 12, 2007, 7:21:26 AM
is Mark what he seems or not is he bad or goodxXHerMusicalAngelXx on March 12, 2007, 12:55:32 AM
I never imagined Tydle as a bad guy, great work!^__^ an I tottaly understand it, sis.^^ Anyways, it'sjust a story, plus you know I don't mind things such as these.^__^Keep up an exelent work!^__^Sonic2 on March 10, 2007, 2:42:24 PM
AWESOME! just don't get my chareter mad or hell will raiseRogueTheBat18 on March 10, 2007, 10:02:46 AM
Shes getting really unstable with her powersFlameTheFox578 on March 9, 2007, 2:49:11 PM
freaking sweet! i LOVE yur stories! ^^ Keep up the Excellent work!!!!!^______^virusthehedgehog on March 8, 2007, 10:36:06 PM
hmmmmmmmmm i wonder i wnder did u invent mark or is he someone elses charrieSonic2 on March 8, 2007, 4:41:09 PM
also can i be in your storiesSonic2 on March 8, 2007, 4:29:52 PM
every hedgehog gets this -feels head- oh...f*ckSonic2 on March 8, 2007, 4:17:32 PM
you had to say um... u know... sex. -falls to ground- -dies-Sonic2 on March 8, 2007, 4:01:42 PM
this is kinda like a movie... A RATED "R" MOVIE!!!! :(Sonic2 on March 8, 2007, 3:53:30 PM
cool but kinda' creeped me out (my weakness is romance)Sonic2 on March 8, 2007, 9:51:12 AM
I saw this imeadeatly due to e-mail. IT ROX!Falconlobo on March 6, 2007, 7:29:50 PM
great chapter durnks should not be allowed to hit they then miss every time^^Falconlobo on March 6, 2007, 7:27:32 PM
nice and cuteFalconlobo on March 6, 2007, 7:25:47 PM
cool when did this happen ya left out the fight^^FlameTheFox578 on March 4, 2007, 8:44:18 AM
3rd comment on this.yur just so fraking good at writing stories :DDDDDDDD keep up the Great work!:3 i really cant wait for the next chapter! ^0^virusthehedgehog on February 28, 2007, 5:47:52 PM
aaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrggggggghhhhhhhhhh why did i get landed with that prick tonySonic2 on February 28, 2007, 4:54:14 PM
is this how...?Sonic2 on February 28, 2007, 4:52:17 PM
THIS,IS,F**KIN',AWESOME!!!!!!!!FlameTheFox578 on February 28, 2007, 6:54:21 AM
cool *faves*RogueTheBat18 on February 27, 2007, 7:27:55 PM
okay, wats going to happen?jordanthehedgehog on February 27, 2007, 3:53:07 PM
oi tony hands offFlameTheFox578 on February 27, 2007, 5:33:54 AM
woo...awesome..virusthehedgehog on February 21, 2007, 10:30:44 PM
wheres virus when you need him i'd show gim where to go lolFlameTheFox578 on February 21, 2007, 12:21:20 AM
cool..FlameTheFox578 on February 20, 2007, 3:55:39 AM
awesome!u can seriously write.yur stories are kickass.do more,im really interested.Falconlobo on February 20, 2007, 12:17:08 AM
Nice chapter useing her roayl sttis to help a freind is nice but what did Max do to make him say he's a monster?Falconlobo on February 20, 2007, 12:14:42 AM
Wow intesnsenessRogueTheBat18 on February 19, 2007, 5:56:40 PM
whoa, so much in so little timeRogueTheBat18 on February 19, 2007, 5:54:34 PM
Wats up?FlameTheFox578 on February 19, 2007, 6:31:51 AM
awesomejordanthehedgehog on February 19, 2007, 1:07:47 AM
no wats wrongRogueTheBat18 on February 18, 2007, 6:20:47 PM
Koda's return, cant wait to the next chpFalconlobo on February 18, 2007, 6:02:12 AM
Wow stress endures Them and Koda returnsjordanthehedgehog on February 17, 2007, 10:05:55 PM
OMG i cant wait for the next chapterFlameTheFox578 on February 17, 2007, 3:51:43 AM
heh....u really know how to write......Falconlobo on February 17, 2007, 1:36:59 AM
Funny Someone stop the love ya can't stop it^^
Falconlobo on February 17, 2007, 1:34:55 AM
nice funny and cute chapterjordanthehedgehog on February 17, 2007, 12:29:03 AM
what did i dojordanthehedgehog on February 16, 2007, 11:07:53 PM
OMG WHATS HAPPENING AND HOW DARE YOU WASH UR NOT MY MOTHER BESIDE I CAN WASH MY SELF still very good i will wait for the next oneFalconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:22:02 PM
nice story but far from over for future chapters thoughi think spacing might be neeed if the chapters are logner^^
and ratings please^^
Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:20:31 PM
guees when there are no dragonballs handy a chaos emerald will doFalconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:19:09 PM
shouldn't they get married^^Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:18:02 PM
seriously Koda needs to let it beand give it up
Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:15:08 PM
super powers coolFalconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:13:45 PM
Hmm must be super healing or something like wolverineFalconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:12:14 PM
Oh Koda You crossing the line nowFalconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:11:20 PM
Koda si begging to be more of an evil jerk all the timeFalconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:09:21 PM
Koda sounds like a real jerkFalconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:07:28 PM
A hedgedog coolFalconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:06:03 PM
ooh mood swings^^Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:05:12 PM
cute a baby^^ niceFalconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:03:02 PM
also i would rate this mdoerate laungugeto be safe^^ but goood story but what happened inbweteen this and the last chapter?^^
Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:00:05 PM
also i would rate it moderate spoilers and sex and perhaps moderate nudity depdming on how the story goesand moderate violence just to be safe
Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 9:58:54 PM
this is good but needs the spacing^^Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 9:57:28 PM
really good but spacing is neededFalconlobo on February 16, 2007, 9:55:24 PM
nice start but needs spaceing^^xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 15, 2007, 2:05:56 PM
Yay!Relaxation!Woohoo!!It's nice and all, but KODA?!XD now I miss himXD
It's comin allong very well! Keep up th brilliant work!
BTW: I added a story on myself!=D I doubt you'll read i, but hey, I wanna tell you anyways..^^
AlleyCat17 on February 15, 2007, 2:19:19 AM
wow sad but nice.RogueTheBat18 on February 14, 2007, 3:29:33 PM
whoa, pretty goodRogueTheBat18 on February 14, 2007, 3:10:03 PM
Bloody hell, these two take all sorts of hits, but they never die:PxXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 11:14:01 AM
Jordan's brave, that's good in a man, he should be able to do anything for his loved ones, and by far he's doing a perfect job at it.^__^I'm luvin it, sis!Bring up the next chapter....if there is one..O.oxXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 11:10:32 AM
So touching!The love in this one is so very strong!I oved the turn out on it!This is awsome, keep up the vey nice job!*sobs* so nice.....
xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 11:05:04 AM
Tisk tisk, Jordan shouldve waited for the challange to come to him, thats the fighter's noble way to fight, thus youll have the element of surprise and the calmness of of winning.^^I'm cunning that way, I know what I'm saying^^Nice chapter, I liked this one too, but Koda's gotta back off, seriously he should get a blow up doll!XDD
xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 11:00:21 AM
Awwwwwwww!Up! what a nice way for a first word to come out! That was awsome! and finaly you two have some alone time!*claps* Nice and very touching chpter, I like this one most of al so far! Keep up the great job!
xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 10:29:21 AM
T-T Ok that's reminding me way too much of Angie. I was shot in the arm too, thank you very much, plus the babie was in danger of bein squashed!T-TNice and killer story, I'm luvin it!
xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 10:24:02 AM
Koda'd better not do what I think he's doing! T-T your stpry reminds me so much about angie! My opposite wanted to kill his own son!T-T Thankully I didnt let him*phew*Killer job killer scenery, and killer name for your son!
xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 10:17:21 AM
Koda dosent seem to give up does he? PAIN IN THE @$$ BASTERD! DIE LIKE THE ROACH YOU ARE!>.<Still I comment the story as a thriller!(for once jordan ans kira didnt go at it in the bed!XD)
xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 10:12:01 AM
= / Koda needs to know that if he wants Kira sooooo much that he should learnt o respect her, unlike some people I know, anyways, Koda wont get Kira!XPAwshumness job on the storyline here!It's kicking so much @$$ as a narrative!
xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 10:04:45 AM
*taps foot* That Koda knows how oget on my nerves and you know what? I'm preparing to go all Tydle on his @$$!Agin nice job, and I love the way the other couple are!X3
xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 9:59:21 AM
The hell will Koda wrek ya'lls happy birth! Lemme at him!Very great job! Dogs are known todo thar, an kira bein part dog, she's kool like that!*thumb up*Very extravagant job!
xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 9:51:16 AM
Hmm hmm, Kira's got a small aggression, can't wait to read the next one!So far so god!I'm rootin for ya sis!xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 9:46:56 AM
A baby? Awwwww!You two really seem to get magical allot dont ya?XD
Nice job, keep it up!
xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 9:39:48 AM
Crap!>.< I fight off rappers every mudda fukcing day! Bring dem on!jordanthehedgehog on February 14, 2007, 6:24:30 AM
aww cutejordanthehedgehog on February 14, 2007, 3:14:24 AM
aww sweet and OMG only 13 and already marriedjordanthehedgehog on February 14, 2007, 2:05:07 AM
aww so cute his first word i cant wait for the next chapterRogueTheBat18 on February 13, 2007, 6:40:07 PM
haha, well done.I am very impressed with your story, cant wait until the next chps come.
RogueTheBat18 on February 13, 2007, 6:37:48 PM
cool, off to read the last chpRogueTheBat18 on February 13, 2007, 6:35:39 PM
hmm...not bad, i mean, Kira is part dog, they get rather aggressive when they r about to hav pups.Well done
RogueTheBat18 on February 13, 2007, 6:31:54 PM
Whoa, a wee bit violent :P but still good.Amazment88 on February 13, 2007, 8:02:04 AM
Luv tha chapter!YAY U!
Awesomestory soo far!
I want 2 see wut happens!
Amazment88 on February 13, 2007, 8:01:32 AM
Awesome!sonicbabe5 on February 12, 2007, 4:29:14 AM
Thanks everyone!jordanthehedgehog on February 12, 2007, 4:29:07 AM
i loved do the next i cant waitRogueTheBat18 on February 11, 2007, 5:46:23 PM
Whoa, keep going, i want to see the endingRogueTheBat18 on February 11, 2007, 5:44:03 PM
Cool, keep writingRogueTheBat18 on February 11, 2007, 5:42:11 PM
Bloody good mate.RogueTheBat18 on February 11, 2007, 5:39:13 PM
Bloody hell, good one mate, keep goingOff to read next chp
Faves
And i hav notice some lines from my stories, i dont mind, good story idea.
jordanthehedgehog on February 11, 2007, 4:28:33 PM
cool cant wait for the next oneFlameTheFox578 on February 11, 2007, 1:01:41 PM
heh...nice one.keep it upxXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 11, 2007, 4:08:48 AM
XP Someone fancies Kira allot huh?XPNice chapter, Kira almost reminds me of shdwo, serious, but a fighter at the same time, keep up the great work, sis!^__^
jordanthehedgehog on February 11, 2007, 3:58:59 AM
next one next one i need it plz babe do the next one*kisses u *Shademaster12345 on February 11, 2007, 1:08:20 AM
Neetosonicspeed619 on February 11, 2007, 12:13:37 AM
Awesome sis ^^*faves*Doomlord1234 on February 11, 2007, 12:05:03 AM
now THIS is a story!!! faving this!!!jordanthehedgehog on February 10, 2007, 11:41:07 PM
cool do the next chapter do it *kisses u*xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 10, 2007, 10:41:54 PM
Woah!Light purple you say!ooh!May I draw!*Holds up pencil happily*^-^ Me color too!With green also right?AWSOME!Kick @$$ story all the way, I'm liking the suspence.
xXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 10, 2007, 10:35:55 PM
OO Wow....Kiack @$$ narrative! Your good at narrating!Plus the story was awsome!(Well the chapter)jordanthehedgehog on February 10, 2007, 6:54:18 PM
awww cute