Angels In Our Life...
Submitted November 1, 2007 Updated December 24, 2007 Status Incomplete | just a few random short stories that i kinda liked and my friends stole from me -curse them- and read to the people in the resturaunt.... they liked them really... and actually asked for copies i was really happy... and yet embarrassed....-.-"
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Forgotten Angel
Submitted: November 1, 2007 • Updated: November 1, 2007
Word count: 195 • Size: 1k • Comments: 10 • views: 181
Chapter 2 - Death Angel
Submitted: December 24, 2007 • Updated: December 24, 2007
Word count: 176 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 126
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FreezingRain on November 2, 2007, 11:35:33 AM
FreezingRain on (Chapter: index)
Its really good, but yeah what Kylie said and the 2nd and 3rd sentences should have a coma between them. Sorry i just like really long sentences, you don't have to do it.sorrowfulsoul on November 3, 2007, 1:28:09 AM
sorrowfulsoul on (Chapter: index)
will do thanx for the advice !!! sorry it's kinda weird....FreezingRain on November 2, 2007, 11:37:37 AM
FreezingRain on (Chapter: index)
Wait... I meant the 3rd and 4th sentences, sorry!