Poems

Chapter 1 - A girl Alone
Submitted: January 10, 2005 • Updated: January 10, 2005
Word count: 85 • Size: <1k • Comments: 22 • views: 498

Chapter 2 - My Black Stallion
Submitted: January 11, 2005 • Updated: January 11, 2005
Word count: 119 • Size: <1k • Comments: 19 • views: 454

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Vampire_King_Gothika on July 22, 2005, 5:49:49 AM

Vampire_King_Gothika on July 22, 2005, 5:49:49 AM (Chapter: 1)

Heh, not bad! I liked it.

Bakura_Lover on July 22, 2005, 3:52:55 AM

Bakura_Lover on July 22, 2005, 3:52:55 AM (Chapter: 2)

Hey good one ^^ not much to say annymore

Bakura_Lover on July 22, 2005, 3:51:49 AM

Bakura_Lover on July 22, 2005, 3:51:49 AM (Chapter: 1)

awww i know the feeling but i also just like drama and sad stuf keep it up girl ^^

Kirara on July 21, 2005, 5:46:10 PM

Kirara on July 21, 2005, 5:46:10 PM (Chapter: 2)

wat a lovely horsey....this is sooo perfect...yea,i agree with you guys,i think the 1st one is a lot better! ^o^

Kirara on July 21, 2005, 5:43:22 PM

Kirara on July 21, 2005, 5:43:22 PM (Chapter: 1)

awwwww...the loneliness...this is great,great job!

Baby_Girl9168 on July 6, 2005, 7:08:13 AM

Baby_Girl9168 on July 6, 2005, 7:08:13 AM (Chapter: 2)

oh my goodness thats so cute!!!:::trys to hold back tears!:::

Baby_Girl9168 on July 6, 2005, 7:06:00 AM

Baby_Girl9168 on July 6, 2005, 7:06:00 AM (Chapter: 1)

i like it a lot do more do more

Midnight_Chaos on April 11, 2005, 10:34:43 PM

Midnight_Chaos on April 11, 2005, 10:34:43 PM (Chapter: 2)

I liked this one too!!! Perfect description of the horse and the order of words. It's a really nice peice of writing. Well done!!! ^-^

Midnight_Chaos on April 11, 2005, 10:31:28 PM

Midnight_Chaos on April 11, 2005, 10:31:28 PM (Chapter: 1)

I love this!!! A lot of talent you've got there. I didn't laugh, so don't worry. I thought it was quite sad to be honest, but it was a nice poem. Being lonely is one of the worst things in this world...

Wild-Card-KKC on April 8, 2005, 9:01:07 AM

Wild-Card-KKC on April 8, 2005, 9:01:07 AM (Chapter: 2)

Oooh I like, this is good very good!!!