Kerri??
Submitted April 17, 2009 Updated June 22, 2009 Status Incomplete | After getting kidnapped, girl finds herself in world where the supernatural exist and to find that she's not human, but a sorceress I don't have a title for my story yet Be harsh on the comments y'all cos i'm thinking of getting this published x
Category:
Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Taken
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 18, 2009
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Chapter 2 - Captor
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
Word count: 454 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 354
Chapter 3 - End of Her World
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 4 - Assigned
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 5 - Awaken
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 6 - Frustration and Desperation Can Do This to You
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 7 - Making Friends
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 8 - Temptation
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 9 - Knowing Your Purpose
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 10 - A Plan Backfired
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 11 - First Lesson
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 12 - Exhausted
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 13 - A Plan for Revenge
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 14 - Strong
Submitted: April 17, 2009 • Updated: April 17, 2009
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Chapter 15 - Betrayed
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
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Chapter 16 - The Point
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 17 - Knowledge
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 18 - Agony
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
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Chapter 19 - Discovery
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 20 - Persuasive
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
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Chapter 21 - Invasion
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 22 - Chased
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: April 18, 2009
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Chapter 23 - Barely Saved
Submitted: April 18, 2009 • Updated: June 11, 2009
Word count: 2018 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 456
Chapter 24 - Living with the Guilt
Submitted: April 20, 2009 • Updated: April 20, 2009
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Chapter 25 - Finding a Babysitter
Submitted: April 21, 2009 • Updated: April 29, 2009
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Chapter 26 - Information
Submitted: April 24, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 27 - Painting Fun
Submitted: April 28, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 28 - Playing Hairdresser
Submitted: April 28, 2009 • Updated: April 28, 2009
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Chapter 29 - The Kiss
Submitted: April 29, 2009 • Updated: April 29, 2009
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Chapter 30 - The Truth About The Ex-girlfriend
Submitted: May 1, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 31 - Giving in to Temptation
Submitted: May 4, 2009 • Updated: May 4, 2009
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Chapter 32 - Seriously Cheesy Nicknames
Submitted: May 4, 2009 • Updated: May 4, 2009
Word count: 625 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 394
Chapter 33 - Sorry Carter
Submitted: May 5, 2009 • Updated: June 1, 2009
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Chapter 34 - Powerful
Submitted: May 5, 2009 • Updated: May 5, 2009
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Chapter 35 - Breakup and Makeup
Submitted: May 11, 2009 • Updated: June 1, 2009
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Chapter 36 - Trouble...With a Capital T
Submitted: May 11, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 37 - Oh Crap.
Submitted: May 11, 2009 • Updated: May 11, 2009
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Chapter 38 - Comforting
Submitted: May 17, 2009 • Updated: May 17, 2009
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Chapter 39 - The Kind-Of Plan
Submitted: May 17, 2009 • Updated: May 17, 2009
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Chapter 40 - The Ring With Her Name On
Submitted: May 20, 2009 • Updated: May 20, 2009
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Chapter 41 - The Dinner
Submitted: May 20, 2009 • Updated: May 20, 2009
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Chapter 42 - As The Knife Meets Its Doom...
Submitted: May 31, 2009 • Updated: May 31, 2009
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Chapter 43 - The Boss Knows?!
Submitted: May 31, 2009 • Updated: June 1, 2009
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Chapter 44 - Afterwards
Submitted: June 2, 2009 • Updated: June 2, 2009
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Chapter 45 - Registration
Submitted: June 7, 2009 • Updated: June 7, 2009
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Chapter 46 - Meeting in the Middle
Submitted: June 9, 2009 • Updated: June 11, 2009
Word count: 273 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 376
Chapter 47 - The Calm Before The Storm
Submitted: June 11, 2009 • Updated: June 12, 2009
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Chapter 48 - The Werewolf Cometh...
Submitted: June 15, 2009 • Updated: June 15, 2009
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Chapter 49 - What Happened
Submitted: June 16, 2009 • Updated: June 16, 2009
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Chapter 50 - He Is SO Drunk
Submitted: June 16, 2009 • Updated: June 16, 2009
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Chapter 51 - Damn Those Dreams
Submitted: June 17, 2009 • Updated: June 17, 2009
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Chapter 52 - Taken Care Of
Submitted: June 17, 2009 • Updated: June 17, 2009
Word count: 661 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 337
Chapter 53 - So That's The Way It's Going To Be
Submitted: June 18, 2009 • Updated: June 18, 2009
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Chapter 54 - Mick
Submitted: June 19, 2009 • Updated: June 19, 2009
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Chapter 55 - The Great Escape
Submitted: June 20, 2009 • Updated: June 20, 2009
Word count: 1324 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 358
Chapter 56 - Not a Dream This Time
Submitted: June 21, 2009 • Updated: June 21, 2009
Word count: 776 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 372
Chapter 57 - She's Really Back!
Submitted: June 22, 2009 • Updated: June 22, 2009
Word count: 1054 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 363
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Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 6:33:58 AM
xxnataxx on May 18, 2009, 6:07:26 PM
yepp thanks for that (: xxKonohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 8:06:14 AM
just got through chap 39! and i just wanted to say that this story is written VERY professionally, and seems like a book that would be on store shelves....all it needs is a name...hmmmm (i will start to be the 3rd person to help think of one :P lol)KokoroTsuki24 on May 18, 2009, 2:31:56 PM
oh yay! someone else to help criticize, think of titles, and offer encouragement! r u like new here? and isnt the story so freaking AWESOME?! and geez i forgot to mention those little error thing-a-mi-jigs. i see stuff... then forget about them like 5 mins later. but did u see that one title that the friend i mentioned came up with? it wuz like "dont worry itll all come out fine". idk i cant find it. but yeah. i think thats a good one. maybe you could like work off of it...? and did u realize i typed A LOT? believe it or not... i have the same exact problem with talking... >.< guess i haven't learned the concept of small messages yet. XDKonohasdarkshadow on May 19, 2009, 8:50:30 AM
O_O HOLY LONG COMMENTS BATMAN! sry lol, inside joke if u didnt get it :P, and yeah i will try to work off of that title ^^. im not new tho lol, i just havent logged on in a couple of months...and I KNOW, this story is so freaking awesome!!!!!!!i love it!!!xxnataxx on May 19, 2009, 7:35:13 PM
lol i love you guyskeep the comments coming? (lol even though i dont think i've added any new chapters...but feel free to comment on my other stories)
xxx
KokoroTsuki24 on May 22, 2009, 2:20:52 PM
oh yeah! i keep forgetting! i got so hooked with this one i forgot you had others! and twins get lost in the woods?! poor things! is there gonna be a crazy dude that does experiments on them like in the Holocaust?! well i guess i should read them but... it could be a good idea right? hold up! i dont even know if you finished the story! like i said i should read it... lolzKonohasdarkshadow on May 20, 2009, 8:37:11 AM
i didnt get to commment on it yet. but i love the story about the twins that get lost in the woods so far ^^!Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 7:10:41 AM
XD dominatrix much? XDDDKonohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 7:01:44 AM
lol!!! i love the ending! (wow this comment started just like tsukis XD)Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 6:40:31 AM
lol i love it how they acted like it wasnt a big deal after they kissed XD this story is great so far!Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 4:26:45 AM
Guys like him never know what they have until they have until the girlfriend leaves him.” lol u repeated "they have until" twice ^^xxnataxx on May 18, 2009, 5:02:35 AM
thxx (see if it werent for you my readers would think i was crazy lol)Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 6:09:57 AM
lol no problem, im on chap 35! almost there!!!Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 6:14:49 AM
25 i meant lolKonohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 4:11:37 AM
“It’s like…peeing through my fingers. It’s so gross.” lmfao i love the way you writexxnataxx on May 18, 2009, 4:50:41 AM
lol thx (:Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 4:15:36 AM
you wrote "when's Arik when i need him" instead of where's....just a little grammar mistake ^^Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 3:57:30 AM
roflmfao ahahahhahaha i loved this chapter!!!Konohasdarkshadow on May 18, 2009, 2:25:36 AM
omg this is epic O_O., i agree with tsuki, its like she knew who they were. maybe u should have one of them bump into her, or have police car lights or somethings that would scare her into wanting to run away? these r just suggestions though (trying to be harsh....not really working, i know ^^;)xxnataxx on May 18, 2009, 3:03:13 AM
woww a comment from someone other than tsuki and me (lol i'm getting all excited now)lol dont worry, all comments are welcome (harsh or not lol) thanks loadssxx
did you mean "her"? :)