FallOutGirlAARHinder

Chappy added =D

well night i'v gota go to bed moms yelling... lol night see ya tomorow... maybe lol

ill add a chappy while u sleep


bu bi and night night

night +D can't wait for the chapter

bye =D

BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!NIGHT NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok ill be a website designer

Sweet!!!

I added ANOTHER chapter lol

and of course im reading it

ITS SO COOL U ADDED 3 CHAPPYS IN A DAY!!!!!!!!!!AND 2MORROW I DONT HAVE SCHOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah I know, I was in a writing mood! lol but tomorow I have school So I might not be on =( lol so I tried to get in as many as i could this weekend lol

well im done reading it and im leaving a comment

well wat does the other one do

my cousin is sharp-fang in reallife

what is my cousin

i wanna be like what ctsdenis is

so whats up??? I added a chappy, it took me forever because I wanted to find a picture lol

right now im reading it...

Hello? you there??? lol read the chapy before I eat you... lol

DONT EAT ME!!!!!!

yeah but i finished what the story should be about here it is


Well the king dies and that leaves u as the last merman. So you become King(of the ocean along with the other bodies of water). So then u have to find a Queen. Yet none of them r your type. So you look to the angels from the Heaven's. Which I'm a angel. Yet we've always have had a forbidden friendship. So while you look for a Queen in the Heaven's, you plan to be wedded to a angel and patch up the Mer-folk and angel relationship.

How the clan's fell apart...War... See there was 3 great Female warriors and there Husbands. One was from the Fairy Clan named Ruby and her husband was Crimson. The other one was from the Mer-folk Clan and was named Neptina and her husband Poseidon. Last was from the Ange Clan named Urana and her husband Zpeh.

What happened was that the Fairy Clan was being attacked by intruders. Luckily the other clans were there. So the Mer-folk clan protected one side of the castle. While the other fought off the other side. Only because it was just the Angel Queen and King. So they were partnered up with the Fairy's.

Well apparently the mage(the commander of the invaders) brings vines from the ground and they rap around Ruby. Squeezing her tighter and tighter. The only way for it to stop is if Uruna gives up the Fairy Clan. Though Ruby tells her not to. Then Crimson jumps in and attacks the mage but is killed before them. Then Neptina and Poseidon come back after giving their Clan orders. So then Zpeh attacks the mage and is killed. Then Ruby gives up her life and destroys the mage...yet he is not destroyed. Yet he is banished into a different galaxy. But Zhep tells Neptina to take care of his Uruna.

Though Neptina says yes, he dies and she slaps Uruna for not saving Ruby. So that’s how the relationship between the Angel's and Mer-folk's is destroyed.

So generations past(our species last over 150) and Poseidon and Neptina have had one child. Who is called(girl not you) Michelle/Chelsea(either one because those names make me think of the ocean and I didn’t want it to be a original like Neptune). Yet she dies from a mysterious illness.

Later (Neptina and Poseidon haven’t had another child) are called into war when they are attacked by the Sand Tome Clan. Which are rock golems of all shapes and sizes. Yet during this time all the mermen have died out from a plague called ‘Lechoises Disease’. Though the disease only kills Mermen not Mermaids.

Unfortunately Poseidon has to go to war. Then he hears about you. So he tells you to find a Queen and take his spot after he dies. Also his wife(after depression).

So you search for a Queen. Yet cant find one so you look to the Fairy Clan for a Bache Rolette. There you cant find one your type. So then you think that if you wed with a Angel that it could patch up their relationship. Then you remember you promise to a Angel you met when you came to the surface on a mission. Yet you decided if she(me) would say no that it would destroy your relationship. So you still look but cant find one.

Then you think that it would be a mermaid since a different clan couldn’t live in the(if you’ve ever seen Star Wars Episode 1 which is the fourth movie to come out) society. Also that ya’ll would ever get to see each other. So you do speed dating and re try to find a Mer-folk wife. Yet you fail again.

Then I come and visit hearing that Neptina and Poseidon are dead. So then the mage from back then that kill Zpeh, Crimson, and Ruby hears and comes back as the Castle Liberian. So when he is alone he practice’s and plot’s his dark magic use. Yet we don’t know.

So one day he attacks and we fight and fight for days in war with him. Though in the end he almost ends up killing me and you. Yet you come back and kill him by staving a(sharp object) into his heart. Then I gather enough energy and use my jeweled sword and stab him in the head and literally rip out his skull. While you rip out his heart.

So then the rest if you want us to be married in the story or not is decided by you. Yet my name on here is…Aphrodite/Styx/Atlanta/Hera/Juno/Pandora/Rhea/Vesta/Lir/Mannannan/Gaea/Aeolus/Zephyrus (Pick one for me please and don’t pick the first one because it’s the first one. Unless you like it. Just I cant decide for myself)

cool I like allot of those names lol

well i was planning on names of some of the queens and kings after gods and godesses(myth ones' the rest r real myth god and goddesses names)

yet i decided to keep it from original


and the names for me though r myth goddesses and i think one or two of them r male names also