Kirbyluva11

hi, hey. gotta question.

if i were to draw people outside of our group, people like Chris, Jose, Juliana, Kelly, people like that, would that be considered groupies? or other stuff?

just asking.

i'm still tired. grr... well, that's pretty much it. bye!

Hi.

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-754380.html

LOL^^

hi^^

i just watched Up! it was funny, cute, happy and sad!

sad u may ask. how could it be sad? i was thinking that too when my brother said it was sad. but watch the movie if u can, and u'll find out why.

anyways, thats it pretty much. see ya tomorrow! u ARE coming tomorow, right?

aww... i wanna watch Yes Man.... though my mom's getting tired of Jim Carry (is he in it? i forgot), and my dad probably thinks the movie's stupid. like he always does.

and for Wiley's age, u could've just checked on my pic of her. it has her age.

ok then! i'll put more of that in later in the story.

i was thinking more like 19. 'cause i make Wiley 1 year younger than Tennessee. and she gets nominated sheriff at age 17. she should have at least a year experience at her job. and i'll put her in later in the story.

lol on the idea of Ez putting his foot down. he'd probably be scared to death, thinking about what Henriette would do to him, a few minutes after. and i originally would make them come with her, but i need them to be at BBB (Blood Bath Bay) in chapter three.

anyways, i'm happy u like it. and i'll try to type as much as i can later.

oh yeah! i'm sorta in a jam with the romance in this story. ok, i got 2 questions.

1: should i imply a little more romance between Ez and Henriette?

and

2: should i put Wiley in this story?

please help.

yo! i got a new story! well, it not really new. u just never asked me to read it to u. anyways, here's the first two chapters and 999 words!(sucks that its one away from 1000)

How the Kid Cooper Gang Met
By TKC

Chapter 1 – The Argument

“So, I take it you’re not in love with me anymore?”

“How can I be in love with you if you keep me away from my job??”

“I keep you away from your job?? Oh pu-lease! You keep me away from everything!! You keep me away from my reputation; you keep me away from my shipmates. Heck, you even keep me away from my own son!! Now that’s just bad parenting!”

Two married raccoon pirates were on the verge of divorcing each other. One raccoon was the famous thief Henriette ‘One-Eye’ Cooper. The other one was Jack Polaris (don't ask. i was thinking of Jack Sparrow and the north star at the same time), Henriette’s so called ‘great and supportive’ husband. They had a son named Tennessee, who was paying no attention to the arguing couple. He was playing around with Henriette’s pistol, and accidentally fired a shot into the air. The two raccoons stopped their arguing for a second, and cocked their heads towards the infant. Tennessee smiled in amusement.

“Ha. Talk about bad parenting,” Jack exclaimed. “What kind of mother lets a 1-year-old play with a pistol??”

“He happens to be real interested in it,” Henriette snapped back. “What do you know about kids, anyhow??”

“I know that regular parents don’t give any kind of weapon to 0-to-10-year-olds! He’s gonna shoot somebody!”

“Don’t even think about telling me what to do with my kid!!”

“I’m not telling you what to do, I’m stating a fact!” Jack stated. “Just take the pistol away from him for the sake of the people on Blood Bath Bay!”

“You mean for the sake of you!” Henriette yelled, and started pushing Jack towards the edge of her ship.

“What’re you doing??” He asked in shock.

“It’s a little thing called MUTINY!!!” Henriette answered harshly, and kicked Jack off the boat. “Look it up.”

“Your crazy!” Jack shouted as he surfaced. Henriette paid no attention to him, and picked Tennessee up. “You can’t raise him by yourself!”

“Oh yeah? Just watch me.” Henriette headed over to the helm of the ship and put Tennessee down. “Lets go, and tell Uncle Ez and Basher the news,” She said to him. She turned the boat around and headed for Blood Bath Bay, leaving Jack behind.

Chapter 2 – Moving to America

Henriette walked into her Safe house, carrying Tennessee with her. “Hey,” She greeted dully as she slumped into a chair.

“Where’s Jack?” Ez asked, sounding disappointed. He had been all gloomy since the day he heard that Jack had proposed to Henriette. He knew that Jack was a selfish jerk ever since he had met him, he just didn’t have the guts to complain to Henriette about it. Ez got even gloomier on the day he noticed that Henriette was pregnant with Tennessee. He thought his love life had flashed before his eyes.

“That idiot’s out of my life.”

Ez’s heart nearly bulged out of his chest when he heard the news. Basher’s ears perked up from surprise also. “Ya mean ya dumped ‘im?” He questioned. Henriette nodded.

“Now I don’t know what to do with Tennessee,” She sighed. Ez and Basher gave her that ‘what do you mean?’ look. “Well incase you guys haven’t really noticed, he isn’t exactly pirate material. And I’m not really sure how my father so perfectly raised a non-ninja. Better yet, a non-ninja female.”

“Why don’t you call him and ask him?” Ez suggested.

“Sure.” Ez handed Henriette a phone that he had made for the group. He had made a phone for anyone he knew that he was friends with, so that he could keep in touch with him or her without having to travel wherever they lived. Henriette dialed the number to Rioichi’s phone.

“Nihau. Rioichi here,” He greeted.

“Hey Dad.”

“Henriette, what brings you here? Is Jack giving you troubles?” Rioichi guessed.

“Actually, we just divorced like an hour ago,” Henriette corrected him. “It’s Tennessee I’m worried about.”

“What’s the problem?”

“Well, now that me and Jack are divorced, Tennessee only has one parent,” Henriette explained. She puzzled for a moment. “How exactly did you raise me? And what do I do?”

“Well, have you noticed any kind of behavior leading to what nationality he could be?” Rioichi questioned.

Henriette looked down at Tennessee, who was trying to grab her pistol. “He’s really into my pistol,” She answered. Rioichi thought for a moment.

“American.”

Henriette’s worried expression turned into a completely puzzled expression. “American? Are you sure?” Her question brought the attention of Ez and Basher forth. They stopped what they were doing, and turned their attention to Henriette’s conversation.

“Yes, I am sure,” Rioichi concluded. “Now I suggest you move to America, and raise him there. Its what your mother and I did with you.”

“We must have a pretty big glitch in our family to go from ninja to pirate to gunslinger,” Henriette exclaimed.

“Yes, yes we do,” Rioichi agreed. “You should get moving.”

“Ok. Bye Dad.” Henriette hung up and got up from her chair.

“What’re you gonna do?” Ez asked.

“I’m moving to America.” Henriette spent the rest of the day packing for her upcoming trip. The next day, she loaded her stuff onto her ship.

“You sure you want to do this?” Ez questioned.

“Yeah,” Henriette answered. “I don’t know how I could raise Tennessee here.”

“Me and Basher can come with you if you need help,” Ez assured. Henriette shook her head.

“No. I don’t want to get you guys into any trouble,” she explained.

“Well then…” Ez thought for a moment. “We’ll visit whenever we can.” Henriette smiled.

“I think we can work that out.”

Basher came out of the ship, carrying Tennessee with him. “K, all your stuff’s onboard. You’re all ready to go,” he confirmed. Henriette smiled, and hugged them both.

“I’ll miss you guys.” She took Tennessee from Basher, and boarded her ship. She took one last look at her teammates, and sailed away to America.


u like? next chapter's gonna take place in America, when Tennessee's somewhere between 18 and 21. i can't decide what age i should make him in this story. help?

anyways, that's pretty much it. i'm alone and i'm bored. well, bye!

Okay, I can wait.^^