Kirbyluva11

yay! pic... finally... put... on!!!! its my entry for ure contest. read the description.

and ps, the time thing liked me this time! yee!

ok, FINALLY, here's the full chapter 6 of my story:

Chapter 6 –The Starting of an Evil Plan
Nina sat at the computer, list at hand. She spent hours thinking on who it could be and who it couldn’t be. Finally, she decided to log on and see if her secret admirer was on.

cocohater5: hey. U there?

doommonkeyhater47: yeah, I’m on.

cocohater5: I wanna know who u r.

cocohater5: please tell me

cocohater5: I about popped 5 blood vessels trying to figure it out.

doommonkeyhater47: *sighs* my name is

“N. GIN!!!” Shouted N. Trance. “CORTEX NEEDS YOU FOR SOMETHING!!!”

doommonkeyhater47: ugh. I gotta go. Bye!

N. Gin ran downstairs to Cortex. After he ran down, N. Trance snuck into his room and snooped around his computer. He took a look at some of N. Gin’s emails. “Who the heck is ‘cocohater5?’” N. Trance asked himself. He looked at more of the emails. “‘Hey secret admirer, are you still freaked about showing your identity ‘cause you think my uncle will freak?’” N. Trance read to himself.
N. Trance thought about this for a moment, and then noticed the only person that would type that would be Nina Cortex. “Nina’s ‘cocohater5?’ N. Gin’s… her secret admirer?” He asked himself. An idea popped into his head. An evil idea. He printed some of the emails out and ran to N. Tropy’s room before N. Gin got back.


yeah, its sorta short, but, oh well. next chapter's where Fiona comes in. ok, thats all. bye!

hey! i finished my first pic of N. Gin! u gonna put ure second december pic up? i still need to put my entry up. i might, MIGHT do it today. thats all i have to say. oh my god, IT RHYMES!!! ok, bye!

ok, heres what i typed thats new. and yes, i changed the title of chapter six:

Chapter 6 –The Starting of an Evil Plan
Nina sat at the computer, list at hand. She spent hours thinking on who it could be and who it couldn’t be. Finally, she decided to log on and see if her secret admirer was on.

cocohater5: hey. U there?

doommonkeyhater47: yeah, I’m on.

cocohater5: I wanna know who u r.

cocohater5: please tell me

cocohater5: I about popped 5 blood vessels trying to figure it out.

doommonkeyhater47: *sighs* my name is

“N. GIN!!!” Shouted N. Trance. “CORTEX NEEDS YOU FOR SOMETHING!!!”

doommonkeyhater47: ugh. I gotta go. Bye!

N. Gin ran downstairs to Cortex. After he ran down, N. Trance snuck into his room and snooped around his computer. He took a look at some of N. Gin’s emails. “Who the heck is ‘cocohater5?’” N. Trance asked himself. He looked at more of the emails.


thats all i've done. its not finished yet, but it will be soon. its near the part where Fiona shows her evil side. ok, thats all. i'll work on it more later. bye!

really though. what DID make u think it was N. Gin??

uhhhhh.... the Uka-Uka thing waz really random. i'd give u the new stuff of my story, but i'm downstairs, eating hot dogs.

u had to make me say the answer, didn't u? DIDN'T U?? ure answer was coming in the next chapter!! STILL IS!!!!!!!! the chapter doesn't really include Nina. only in the beginning of the chapter. whatever. call me soon. bye!

ok, i know i read this to this to u, but, just incase u want to read it over again, heres the chapters 4 & 5:

Chapter 4- Second Meet
“You called?” Nina asked her uncle. Cortex held out another missile.
“Come on, one village. That’s all I’m asking. Come on!” Cortex pleaded.
“Not right now, Uncle. I think I popped a blood vessel trying to think of n-… some… stuff…” Nina quickly corrected herself.
“But-“
“Uncle, you’re going crazy again. Have you been hanging around Ripper Roo?” Nina asked.
“No. but still! One!”
“Uncle, I’ve got more important stuff to do. I can’t be dealing with this right now.” Nina went back up to her room.
Cortex sighed. He then intercomed N. Gin. “N. Gin, if you want your missile back you better-”
“Give me back my precious missile!” N. Gin ordered.
Nina went back online. Her secret admirer was still online.

cocohater5: sorry ‘bout that. My uncle wanted me to bomb a village. But I’m back ☺

doommonkeyhater47: its ok. ☺

cocohater5: hey, do u mind if I share this chocolate cake my friend, Avril?

doommonkeyhater47: no, go ahead.

cocohater5: thanx ^^ it’s a really good cake, and its one of the few things she can eat. She has an expander. How sad.

doommonkeyhater47: that IS sad.

The two typed for 3 hours. Finally, they had to log off.

cocohater5: we’ve been at this for 3 hours. We should log off.

Doommonkeyhater47: ok, bye.

Cocohater5: bye.

The two logged off for the night. Nina laid in her bed, thinking of who it could be.

Chapter 5- Telling Avril
The next day, Nina spent a little bit of time crossing out names that she knew couldn’t have been her secret admirer, then decided to call Avril about this.
“Hello?” Avril asked, stressfully.
“Hi. Its Nina,” Nina answered. “Why do you sound so stressed?”
“Because I AM stressed. My family… is going… insane!” Avril answered, struggling.
“Why?”
“I don’t know, they just are!” Everyone in her family cramped into her. “EVERYONE, BACK OFF!!!!!” she ordered her family. “How’s that love thing coming?”
“Good, I guess,” Nina said, covering her ear in pain.
“Have you found out who it is?”
“No, but I did find him on a chat room he told me to log into. And I also found out that he’s not a guy in our school.”
“Wow, you’ve been busy.”
“Yeah. Anyways, that’s all I really called for.”
“ok, bye!”
“Bye.” Nina hung up, and just sat there. Just then, Cortex opened the door.
“Hi Nina,” He said as he walked in. Nina quickly hid the list and notes.
“Hi Uncle,” She replied.
“Where’d you get the cake?” Cortex asked, noticing the chocolate cake sitting on the desk.
“Err, um, from, someone,” Nina answered. “Wanna piece?”
“Sure, what harm can it do?” Nina sliced a piece off and gave it to Cortex. “Hey, I know who make these,” Cortex alleged as he took a bite.
“Really? Who?” Nina asked. Cortex opened his mouth to say who, but was cut off by Uka-Uka.
“CORTEX!!! GET DOWN HERE!!!!” He yelled at the top of his lungs.
“Egh, I gotta go. Ta-ta!” He said, scurrying away.
“Darn it!” Nina said to herself.

thats all. i'll probably type more tomorrow. bye!

ok, heres the rest of the story that ive typed:


Chapter 2- Logging On
Nina walked into Cortex Castle. “Hi Nina, how was your day?” Her uncle greeted as Nina walked in.
“Fine,” answered Nina.
“Did you blow anybody up today?” asked Cortex curiously.
“No. Sorry, Uncle. Not today.”
“Ok, then. Here,” Cortex gave his niece a giant missile. “You can bomb our neighbors. They’ve really gotten on my nerves.”
“Uncle, we don’t have neighbors.”
“Then bomb the village.”
“Uncle?”
“What?”
“You’re going a little crazy.”
“What? All I wanted you to do was bomb a village.”
“Yeah… uhh, why don’t you give this to N. Gin. He really likes this boomy stuff,” Nina suggested. “I’m going to my room.”
“But… go boomy!” Cortex heard his niece’s door close. “Oh well. Better go give this back to N. Gin, or else he’s gonna have another one of his huge headaches when he finds out I took it from him.”
Nina found the chocolate cake and another note lying on her bed.

“Yo Nina,

Log on to the Wumpa Island chat room. My user name is ‘doommonkeyhater47.’ That way you can talk to me and I won’t have to waste paper writing notes. I’ll be waiting for you.

Love,
Your Secret Admirer”
Nina looked at her secret admirer’s user name and tried to think of who it could’ve been. ‘Dang. A lot of people hate doom monkeys,’ Nina thought. ‘Even I do.’ Nina took a piece of the chocolate cake. “Mmm. This is good,” she said. “Whoever made this is a really good cook.” She got a long piece of paper and started writing the possibilities it could be.

Chapter 3- First Meet
After a long time of righting down names, Nina finally took a break and found the chat room. She logged on, and found her secret admirer’s profile. Nina searched for information about him, but there wasn’t any. ‘This guy’s smart,’ she thought. Her hands twitched. Finally, she started to type something.

cocohater5 (Nina): Hey. R u there?

doommonkeyhater47 (secret admirer): hey, Nina! U finally came on! :D I’ve been waiting for a long time.
cocohater5: sorry, I’ve been thinking about this……… a lot… I even wrote a list including everybody u might be. Can u help me, though?

doommonkeyhater47: I’ll give u a hint: I’m not any of the boys at u’r school. Hope it helps ^^

cocohater5: *crosses out boys at schools* thanx! It helps a lot ^^ I still got a lot though. B,

“NINA!!!” Cortex yelled. “COME DOWN HERE!!! NINA!!!!!!!!!”

cocohater5: oh great. I gotta go. See ya.

doommonkeyhater47: bye ☹

Nina logged off and went to her uncle, wiping the cake off her face.

Chapter 4- Second Meet; Extra good hints


u tell me ^^ like i said in the other comment, it gets better in the upcoming chapters. although its already getting better. oh whatever. thats all. bye!

yo! heres the ls (love story) so far ^^

Secret Love Story
By TKC

Author’s Note: some parts in this story, the characters will be typing on the computer. So, in the parts where the characters are typing, I’m gonna put it in script form, and have their names as pen names.
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Chapter 1- The note
It was Valentine’s Day. The class just finished giving out candy, and went to recess. Nina was REALLY surprised that EPS 101 actually let the students do that. Most evil schools didn’t do that. Avril traded her sticky candy with Nina, for she had an expander on and couldn’t eat certain things.
“It really sucks having this expander on,” exclaimed Avril.
“I can believe that,” alleged Nina.
Recess ended and everyone went back to class. When returning to her seat, Nina found a bundle of red roses and a note. Nina picked up the roses and read the note:

“hey Nina,

Happy Valentines day! I hope you like the roses. I would’ve gotten you black, but, well, you know what that means.

Love,
Your secret admirer

P.S. I heard you don’t like wumpa fruit. So I made you a chocolate cake. Hope you like it ^^”

There was a brief silent moment in Nina’s mind. Someone had actually…… liked her? Out of all the girls this secret admirer could of picked from, he chose… Nina? Nina felt a little light-headed. She never knew she could get a jump-start in a love life. Of course, she never knew she could get a start in a love life.
“Nina, sit down,” Mr. Norway, Nina’s teacher ordered.
“Wha? Oh… right…” Nina slumped into her chair. She couldn’t think of anything but that, and couldn’t pay attention to the teacher’s continuous talking. Lunchtime came, and Nina was still thinking about the situation. She walked slowly to the lunch tables, and Avril sat down next to her.
“Hey, what’s up?” Asked Avril, full of suspicion.
Nina looked around, seeing if anybody was listening to them. “Can you keep a secret?” She asked quietly.
“Have I ever failed you before on keeping secrets?”
“… No. I guess you haven’t,” Nina replied. She started to whisper. “I got a note, some roses, and a chocolate cake from a secret admirer.”
“Really??” Avril gasped out loud. Nina quickly shushed her. “Really?” Avril whispered in a more calm voice. Nina slowly nodded her head. “I wonder who he guy is.”
“I’m wondering that too. This is starting to really freak me out!”
“You gonna tell your uncle?”
Nina thought for a minute. “I think it would be better if my uncle didn’t know. He sometimes gets a little crazy about these things.”
The two finished lunch and went out to recess. They talked continuously about the situation, and their guesses on who it could be. After recess ended, Nina decided to lay low for the rest of the day, and not talk about this to anyone.

Chapter 2- Logging On


u tell me. its gonna get better as it goes on. oh yeah, in a couple of these chapters, Fiona really shows her evil and mean side. but that doesn't come until the middle or so. ITS REALLY MEAN!!!!!! oh well. stay tuned for more!