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That's what I was going for with Okuden. I had a whole ton of different versions in mind:

-Yuji and Chiyoko re-united, and Yuji joins her in ANBU
-Yuji deciding to be Hokage, and giving up on everything else
-Yuji having to leave the village for treatment, meeting a girl from the Land of Iron and getting married
-Have Yuji lose his chakra, but give Ryofu one last fight, then die in combat against a really big enemy, buying time for the others to find a way to counter them.

The one thing I haven't done with Yuji is make him a villain, and I wondered what would happen if I did. He's a mix of The Governer from "The Walking Dead" and any number of the Vandenreich from Bleach. 

But you have to wonder- what if he isn't the villain? What if he's right, and Sakura and Tsunade did actually suppress his chakra?
 

After a long wait, Okuden has been updated! I think you'll be surprised...

Sounds like a blast! You really packed a lot into one trip!

Glad to hear your trip went well! What all did you do?

They were both being considerate of Yuji, too. Ryofu didn't want to kill her, and we finally learned he felt a little guilt about the fact that Yuji's life got messed up (though not for the killing act itself. I hope that was OK with you!). I almost went with a route where Ryofu would also have been able to be healed no matter what injury he sustained, but that was too surreal for what I wanted. 

Sounds awesome! Have a great time and a safe trip!

That's why the battle was so hard. I couldn't have the dead girl win, because she didn't live long enough to gain any skills beyond the genin level. To match her fairly with Ryofu, I made her strength taijutsu. If he had been fighting an immortal Kage-level, the battle would have been very different, and that was the direction I started heading before realizing it didn't make any sense to do it that way. As far As Yuji went- he had to hit a breaking point.

Hey, cool! Have a safe trip! Where in Japan are you going, if you don't mind my asking?

Sorry for the wait, but Okuden has finally been updated. This chapter is going to bridge to something interesting, so stay tuned!

As far the Chiyoko/Ryofu fight- I don't want to give too much away, but it isn't over just yet.

Thanks for understanding, man. I really appreciate it. The fight, and the aftermath, should be interesting, if done correctly!

Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I am still working on the next Okuden chapter. Ryofu vs. Chiyoko is taking a little more time than I thought. But it IS coming!

Thanks for the comment!

It occurred to me that some people just can't be trusted. For a guy like Yuji, what would be more damaging than the one person he trusted intimately being the ultimate villain? He's definitely getting to be like Rick (of The Walking Dead fame). Plus, I wanted Yuji to be like his old self, when I first started writing. Memory loss and emotional content have been a constant, and this seemed to be a good way to tie it all together.

Okuden has been updated- enjoy!

Cool! Those are amazing! Thanks for sharing them!

I can't believe that voice acting is amateur work! That's incredible!

I've spent a lot of time brainstorming just how their meeting should go. I've got a couple versions I'm really thinking of, both very cool, hopefully.

True enough. The tricky part was explaining his sudden burst of power. When I re-read it, it almost seemed like the memory returning was an afterthought, or a gap filler, instead of the major event it should have been. But I like the result, so I'm not complaining.

That's a great idea, and you make a good point. If the Sound was established enough to be included in the Chunin exams, it probably didn't collapse outright. I'm looking very forward to reading that.

Not much new on my end. All the fun of being back to job hunting. I don't know why I kept trying to get into the Security business- it wasn't for me. No one takes you serious, you aren't allowed to take yourself or the job seriously, and there's no future in it. So, lesson learned, finally XD I was kind of like a moth bouncing off the same light for a while, though.

I'm looking very forward to telling the story of Ryofu and Chiyoko.

Yuji's power-up was something I wasn't sure about doing- it was almost too powerful for him, I think. But I wound up surprisingly happy with it. I wanted to get him back to his roots; kind of the way he was in my original Naruto fics.

How are things going with you?

I've just updated Okuden with a chapter that explains a lot and leads to a lot more. Enjoy!

Thanks for the praise, as always!

I'm having fun with this "impossible predicament" Yuji is in. Everybody he loves is held hostage and serving his enemy...that is a really fun concept to work with.

I've just updated Okuden. Enjoy!

Yeah, Annako is a creppy little thing, isn't she? I have to say, creating twisted characters like her is fun! I wish I could have gone a little farther with her and Azami. Suffice it to say, it wound up far more tame on paper than it was supposed to, lol.

Thank you, as always!

I've just updated Okuden. Enjoy!

It fit very well into the character as I understand him, and it was definitely executed well. It was 'honestly cruel'; a reality of war. I really like that sort of thing; I think it makes a character even more legitimate. It was cool for me because I saw how he turned out in your fics so far, and how I kind of imagined he'd develop when I borrowed him. This story makes him make that much more sense in the future.

I'm trying to go a different route with Yuji. I'm trying to make him more dark and sinister, but polite. Kind of like Alan Rickman in Die Hard...or as Snape...or as pretty much any role he played, lol. Or maybe like 1000 faces Sydney from Shakugan no Shana. I don't want to make him a villain, or even a 'dark hero'; he's supposed to be a blatant good guy. 

I commented (hope it shows), but the short version is that was AWESOME! I loved the whole concept, and you really worked well with it. Great stuff, my friend!

I'm also looking forward to the PS4, but I'm holding back a bit. My general rule of thumb is by the time the games I want to play come out on it, the hardware issues will be solved and corrected. I do think the graphics are incredible, and I like the fact that the controller looks like something semi-normal. All these gimmicky controllers are driving me nuts.

Thanks very much! This is going to be a fairly intense arc that is going to raise questions. I think you'll get a kick out of it. It came out darker than I thought so far.

So, how are things on your end?

Just updated 'Okuden'. Enjoy!

Yeah, it kind of worked out like that. Yuji was heading down the opposite road from Ryofu in terms of character development. Now Yuji is having the 'identity crisis' and Ryofu is making sense of things. I eventually want Ryofu to be shown as a strong shinobi and a solid (albeit reluctant) leader. Thanks for reading!

Just updated 'Okuden'. Enjoy!

Now THAT is a reason to buy! She is going to be a riot to play as!

Thanks very much! The same goes for me and your work.

Fair point. Playstation is a solid brand. I was always a Sega guy, but obviously that isn't an option anymore. I really wish they hadn't gotten into bed with Nintendo. But Sony is my bet as well. Left 4 Dead 3 is about the only thing that will get me off and running to pick up an XBox.

You've got it harder than I do, then. I just need to fly clear across the US- call it fifteen-sixteen hours or so- to get to any decent conventions. The only good ones are in California, and I'm way on the other side of the map. There's always Chicago or New York City, but man I can't stand either place --' Just too crowded for my taste.

My turn to apologize for the late reply now.

This whole split personality thing is something I've wanted to do with Yuji for a long time. A guy under that much pressure is going to crack eventually. And I have a specific use in mind for Oshima, which we're rapidly approaching. 

I've heard of it, but I haven't picked it up yet. I'm dying to, though. By the way- do you have a pick for the new generation of game consoles? I usually wind up collecting them all after the price drop, but the order in which I pick them up changes. Nintendo is in the lead only because a good friend of mine has a game coming out on the WiiU (I think- he's sworn to secrecy, so I can only guess based on little hints). Sony is probably going to be my go-to machine just because Microsoft hasn't done anything right yet. That, and all those peripherals that are absolute necessities are going to be costly, and Microsoft's customer service is spotty at best.

Same here, minus the anime conventions. None come anywhere near me, and I really don't want to go to Chicago and get shot. I mean, you get some small town stuff, some colleges, but nothing huge and really super fun.
 

Thanks very much. I debated how much I wanted to put into this chapter. Keeping Yuji and Oshima as separate entities made that difficult. Part of me wants him to have this dual life; the other wants to pick one direction or the other. 

Cool! I'm not very well versed in KH, but I can at least pay attention to the topic and maybe do my homework and join eventually. With respect to the writing- that was indeed my next question. Awesome development on your end, man! Congrats!

I'm doing alright. Still job hunting, but that's really my only complaint. You?
 

I've just updated Okuden. Enjoy!

Thanks very much! It's going to get very interesting from here on out. A lot of secrets are going to start being revealed. I appreciate you reading. As for Resident Evil, I really like how it came out. I think even casual fans will get a kick out of it. The hardcore fans will wince, though. lol. Even including Ashley Graham probably made a few of them relive the worst of Resident Evil 4.

DW8 is high on my list to play. I'll check out this similarity for sure. Ought to be interesting.

Good luck with the writing! Naruto is at such a good place right now that I just keep getting ideas. Unfortunately, they tend to fizzle out before a fully formed story comes out of it. I hate that --'

Thanks very much! I'm anxious to know what you think of Okuden's latest arc, not to mention Resident Evil. I admit, I'm a bit nervous about that fic. It's meant to be an intro to a 3-part series of fics that contain more canon characters. I'm worried that it wound up coming off as an 'original rip-off', if that makes any sense.  --'

How's your writing coming?

Oh, and I haven't gotten to DW8 yet. How was it?

I DID play Warriors Orochi 3. Very interesting to be able to play as Susano'o and Princess Kaguya, among others.

Got a new fic up. Resident Evil, as promised. Enjoy!
  
http://www.fanart-central.net/stories/user/nextguardian/59961/Resident-Evil-Soldiers/104055/Chapter-1/The-Holdouts

I think your comments are still getting eaten. That, or I didn't tell you I updated "Okuden", lol. One is as likely as the other.

I've just updated 'Okuden'. Enjoy!

Just posted a one-shot fic called 'Swimsuit Hang-up', a romantic comedy between Yuji and Sakura. Enjoy!

Thanks for the comments. I think the next big turn will be an interesting one, so I'm looking forward to sharing that one.

I've heard good things about Game of Thrones. Just haven't gotten around to reading/watching yet. I plan to, though. 

Looking forward to reading what you come up with. If you ever take fic requests, let me know.

I'm almost ready to share a couple of Resident Evil fics. Personal life wise, I'm back to job hunting. Still employed; just really frustrated and ready to move on. Going back to school for Criminal Justice, to focus on State and Federal police work.

Hi! Okuden has been updated again, possible twice (not sure if I told you about the last update. Things have been a bit hectic).

Ryofu and Hisako are going to have a HUGE part once we get past this arc, so stay tuned!

On a separate note, how are things going?

Just updated Okuden. Enjoy!

Thanks very much! It's an adventure, giving Yuji a stable female presence. Well, as stable as a bounty hunter/dominatrix type gets! lol. Would kill for his life despite the constant injury!

I'd like very much to read this fic of yours when it's ready. I don't think I've read any of your non-fanfic original creations before.

Writings going ok. Been messing with Resident Evil a bit, translating Yuji/Dan Holmes to that universe. He fits in well. Even found himself a girl, though I don't want to elaborate which RE beauty he'll land just yet!

Sweet! I can't wait for that. Seven was good, but it was kind of a let down after how good 6 was.  Eight is looking to be really spectacular!

Howdy. Just letting you know I updated Okuden. Enjoy!

How are you doing?

The chapter came about because I really like the Chiyoko character. I don't usually write the high-energy happy girl types, and Yuji doesn't really get into relationships like that. There's going to be a little more to Chiyoko. She holds the key to some important things about Yuji.

That's really odd. Might be worth getting a site mod to look into.  Mind if I ask what you comments said? I'm curious- especially about the most recent chapter with Chiyoko.

'Okuden' has been updated again. This time, we take a look at where Yuji's love life really started. Thanks for reading, as always!

Fair point. I may yet include the darker stuff. As for Sonic- you're right. It gets really formulaic, and really overly OC oriented. That isn't bad if it's one interesting OC, but too many and everyone is suddenly in love with each other with no conflicts...yeah. Dull. Xmen will be an interesting one. The Death Game sequel(s) are hopefully going to be good. One I want Dan to face off against a Japanese rival in martial arts and Azami's affections. Then maybe a return to the 'Streets of Rage' type the first fic was like. I don't think you ever finished that fic, actually. Looking at the comments, it looks like you only read chapter 1. As for Resident Evil, it doesn't follow any sort of canon (besides main characters), so anyone who doesn't mind a gorefest should be able to get into it somewhat :)

I hear you there. I'm working three jobs so my writing time is limited. That, and I keep wanting to write really dark stuff that doesn't fit Naruto, so I put it aside and keep to things that are better suited to the Naruto universe. I don't know how big a Resident Evil fan you are, but I'm working on a fic for that, along with a final Sonic story (I know you're not a fan there; I just hate to leave all my Sonic stories without an end, so I'm going to wrap them all up in one shot), and an Xmen story (Wolverine and the Xmen, to be precise), and finally a sequel to 'Death Game'. They're all in the early stages, but they've got a basic idea to them at least.

Okuden had just been updated. Enjoy!

How's your writing coming?

Okuden has been updated. Enjoy!

Two new updates to Okuden. Enjoy!

I don't have much faith in 2013 personally, but I always say that at the beginning of the year.

I'll have to check that out. Also, your fic, when you post it. Looking forward to more KH

Hi! Happy New Year! I hope 2013 is treating you well thus far. How goes the writing?

I just updated 'Okuden'. Enjoy, as always!

Great. Same to you thanks .)

How are you?

Hello. :)

Hi

'Okuden' has just been updated. Enjoy!

Howdy. Just put up a new one-shot called 'Samurai and Kunoichi'. It's a new take on Yuji and Sakura's romance, as well as Yuji's origin. Enjoy!

hi!!

It's definitely working out nicely. I hope to see more of that fic. The dark tone fit really well.

On a side note, the Azami I use in my fics is different than before. The original Azami was a naturally gifted shinobi who Yuji knew since he was a kid. I like her much better as the mix of Kanu Unchou and Ada Wong she's become.

Just commented on the latest one. Nice stuff! Good sort of 'dark' chapter.

I"m going to take a read through right now. Glad to see you submitting stuff again!

Thanks very much. I really wanted to have the 'bad' Yuji be this ridiculously strong being, like Bleach's Aizen, or Wesker from Resident Evil. I also wanted Yuji to be killed right away, and have this horrendous amount of damage done. That all worked, which duped me into thinking that Yuji vs. Yuji would be an easy thing to write. In my mind, they're wearing different clothes; one had an eye patch, etc. I'm decently happy with it, but I'd imagine I'll try to re-write out of sheer curiosity at some point.

Let's see...I haven't read any Naruto from you in a while, so that would be my preference simply for that reason. (Though your KH fic did give me a new respect for Kairi)

Thanks for the comment on 'Okuden'. It's going to get less confusing from here on out. The 'Clone' arc didn't work like I'd hoped. It might have worked in an anime, but it words saying 'this Yuji' or 'the real Yuji' got annoying imho.

Just updated 'Okuden'. Enjoy!

I'll look forward to reading that, then. I'm trying to throw together something for halloween. Probably throw the Naruto girls into interesting costumes, lol. Ino as a teacher, Tenten in a gym uniform, Sakura as a nurse, etc.

It's a bit...nostalgic. It's taking some getting used to, but I remember back in when I first joined the site was set up more or less like this. I'm not sure if I prefer it to the previous version or not. Still undecided there. 

How goes the writing?

Alright see ya :)

I draw and write but i mostly write on here

Yeah so how are you liking fac

I'm loving it

Alright well my names jake and im 14

Well how old are you and what's your real name

Yeah sure

Sounds cool

what is that

Alright then ask me anything

Greetings so wanna be friends and get to know each other

Hello and nice to meet you

Certainly. Let me see...

The current version of Yuji uses genjutsu as an opener in a fight, usually as a distraction. He uses a combination of earth and fire style ninjutsu, with his signatures being 'Shoukyaku Jutsu' (Destroy by Fire technique), which is essentially a concentrated explosion Yuji creates by sending chakra to one specific spot, then 'detonating' it. He uses earth style in various defensive ways.

His signature Taijutsu attacks are right-handed throat strikes (example: Block an opponent's attack, catch them by their neck and slam them into the ground) and his 'Crescent Moon Dance' tribute to Hayate in which he and two-three clones all hold some kind of weapon and move in an intricate pattern to confuse the enemy while moving in and out of their striking range.

Caught in a critical spot, Yuji will use his chakra to defend his joints and organs.

Hope that helps.

Absolutely, feel free to use him. I'll look forward to seeing what you come up with :)

Just updated 'Okuden'. It should answer at least some of the questions about Yuji. Enjoy!

Awesome! I'll take a read through ASAP

It definitely fit, you're right. There was another clip, from Resident Evil 4, that fit. If I can ever find it. Basically, two guys who used to be on the same side are fighting, and it goes from knives to empty hand fighting. It's pretty bad @$$.

Thanks very much. If I were to pick, I had the most fun with the 'What If?' arc, outlining how Yuji and each girl would work out. But also, the 'Devastated' arc was fun, in that Yuji finally hit rock bottom.
My least favorite would have to be the arc where the Leaf has it's civil war. It was too short and just not well done imho.

That is definitely epic! That's one hell of a dust-up they had going there! Thanks for the link!

Btw, if you don't mind my asking- did you have a favorite arc/part/etc of 'Serving'? I was looking back through, and I did a number of things that I wound up really liking, and some things I didn't. If you have anything you particularly liked or didn't like, please let me know.

'Okuden' has just been updated. Enjoy!

I've got a new something cooking up with Yuji and Ryofu. I'll have enough to share with you in a few days, I think. It's a cool concept that I haven't tried before. I think you'll get a kick out of it.

Well most of them are incomplete and i will try to finish them sometimes in the future.

Good and just looking at all my old drawing that never been submit.

Hi how are you it been awhile?

Thanks very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. If it's amazing that I worked on it for so long, it's more amazing to have a reader follow it from start to finish. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

Next up, I think a few light one-shots ( A Jiraya's Manuscript or two for sure), and I'll definitely be working harder on 'Okuden'.

I think I've linked this vid to you before, but watching it again, I found a spot that makes me think of Yuji and Ryofu. I'm dying to write a fic around this one scene; maybe a more modern-day thing. What do you think?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FIRcZ46NSo4&feature=related

1:28-1:31 is Yuji vs. Ryofu in my mind

Serving has just been updated for the final time. Enjoy the finale!

I'm really hoping I'll like it as much as I think I will. I know just where I would live, too, being the Otaku that I am. Shirakawa, in Gifu prefecture. It's the basis for Hinamizawa in the Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni series.

And it is slightly sad that I know that off the top of my head, lol.

I do plan to go someday, quite possibly to live. Not sure when, but I'm hoping soon. I want to be a little more fluent in the language first.

That's correct. I'm good enough to hold basic conversations, ask a girl out (have yet to test that), and generally survive in Japan. I'm fairly proficient with the writing systems as well, though I only know maybe 75 kanji off the top of my head.

also: Just updated Okuden. Surprised myself and had a sudden burst of Naruto-related creative energy.

Yup, this time it's for real. I wasn't going to do anything after the Yuji vs Pain arc, but then I decided that the origin of Yuji's TnK abilities were worth adding to a bit.

I wind up in the dealers room first thing, last thing, and between shows/booths/etc. lol. Usually that's where you can see the most people, and if you want to take pictures no one is in a hurry.

Very true. I'm not bored, so that much is good news, lol. But me not being bored is probably...boring if you're not me. Wow. say that five times, fast.

Take your time. The next update- the final chapter- will be coming on August 25th. I'm very fond of these last couple updates.

Sounds like a good time! Yeah, conventions can beat the crap out of your wallet. It's hard to control your spending once you hit that atmosphere. All that cool stuff you might never see again...needless to say, I've done a fair bit of damage to my own bank account, lol.

I'm okay, thank you. Nothing very notable going on here.

Serving has just been updated. Enjoy!

How are you doing, by the way?

Serving has just been updated- enjoy!

Hi! I had to link you this pic that Alchemest1 did for me. It comes from a story that I haven't worked into a release yet. Thought you might get a kick.

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-823970.html

After a long wait, 'Okuden' has been updated. Enjoy!

'Serving' has been updated. Enjoy!

Oh, that's a good comparison, actually! I always think of Yuji and Ryofu sort of as Prof. Xavier and Magneto, respectively. Two different people on the same walk of life, accomplishing their goals by different means.

The scene I had in mind for that song is their battle at the chunin exams. I was listening to it while re-reading the scene and it actually fit really well.

I found a song that I thought suited Yuji and Ryofu's clashes in 'Okuden' so far. What do you think?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e3ffxkpN-J8&feature=related

I've just updated 'Serving'. Sorry for the long wait!

Serving has been updated. Enjoy! This chapter made me smile, I have to admit. You'll see why pretty quickly.

Just updated 'Serving'. Enjoy!

Serving's 'After' Arc has been updated. Enjoy!

Just updated Hisako's Origins story. I'll be pleased to hear what you think. It's a short chapter, and I'm going to upload a second one later tonight. Thanks! :)

Just wanted to address your comment on 'Serving' quick. Everything will be made clear pretty quickly. I'm not happy with this first chapter. I wrote myself into a corner, so to speak. If I included all the information I meant to, I would have spoiled a good part of the story. Next chapter will explain more.

There's been a new update to 'Serving'. It's called the 'After' Arc. This is dealing with what has happened to Yuji since the prophecy has been fulfilled. Enjoy!

'Okuden' has been updated. Enjoy!

Thanks for commenting on the final chapter of Serving. Your comment was exactly what I was hoping for. I always hate it when my favorite characters die, but part of me cried 'BS' when they all came back to life. So I wanted to preclude that option. Yuji got a free pass because of his unique circumstance- something that he did not originally get. He only survived because I didn't think of him cornering Nagato and using the Reaper Death Seal until just now, lol. That, and I didn't want him stepping on Naruto's glory. I wanted this to really end up being about Naruto and his team, and show that Yuji was really a stepping stone; albeit a necessary one.

I've got one more fic related to 'Serving' almost ready for posting. It deals with Yuji specifically, and his romance with Kuroko. I hinted a bit at Shiroko and Kuroko having more to them than meets the eye. Hopefully that will be up soon.

Again, thanks for reading my ridiculously long fic! lol. I really appreciate it.

I've just posted the final chapter of 'Serving'. Thank you for sticking with me for 101 chapters. I hope the finale doesn't disappoint!

Thanks very much. I really appreciate hearing that.

Serving has been updated again. Thanks for reading!

Serving has been updated. Enjoy!

Okuden has been updated. Enjoy!

Sounds like a good idea. I get that way, too. The only thing that saves me is that I almost always know the way a fic will end as I start writing it, so I can aim for that- then get distracted along the way with a cool story arc or idea that I screwed up once before, lol! Either way, whatever keeps you writing, man! I look forward to reading 'crap', in that case :)

Serving has been updated. Enjoy!

btw, any progress on your KH fic? No pressure or anything; just curious.

Okuden has been updated. Enjoy!

Serving has been updated. Enjoy!

Thanks very much! He and Hisako seem to work well together. Their personalities are balancing each other nicely, too imho. Thanks for the comments, as always!

"Okuden" has been updated. Enjoy!

Any feedback you have on Ryofu's fighting/actions are welcome, of course!

Naruto: Okuden Chronicles has been updated!

'Serving' has been further updated. Yuji's fight against Sasuke is better digested all at once so I wanted to get it up ASAP. Enjoy!

'Serving' has been updated. Enjoy!

And, Naruto: Okuden Chronicles has been updated again.

Thank you! I was worried about Ryofu being that blood thirsty without a reason, which is where the 'it's part of the chunin exams' came from. Otherwise it would be pointless violence and there would be no well in hell Yuji would ever deal with him.

The fight was a hard one. I had to figure out a way for Yuji to not get immediately obliterated by the Blood Manipulation Jutsu, lol. That proved to be difficult. That, and Ryofu almost became Gaara halfway through. I changed my original fight because it was too similar to Lee vs Gaara.

I appreciate the comments, as always!

Thanks! I'd been having writer's block, and for some reason this storyline is just resonating with me.

Hopefully I'm using Ryofu correctly? I'm glad you enjoyed the last fight. I really tried to think that one out. I wound up happy with it. Would've looked better anime-style, though!

Naruto: Okuden Chronicles has been updated again. Enjoy!

hi there. c:

Naruto: Okuden Chronicles has been updated. Enjoy!

I just got tired of it. Looking for a new one. Maybe Shakugan no Shana this time.

Serving has been updated. Enjoy!

Okuden Chronicles has been updated.

Revised version of my Naruto story is up. www.fanart-central.net/story-59484.html

I've updated Naruto: Okuden Chronicles again. I tried to focus a bit more on Ryofu and Hisako this time. Enjoy!

Hey there! I know I haven't updated in a while, but I've just started a fic exploring Hisako's origins, so feel free to check it out!

http://www.fanart-central.net/story-59483.html

I've also updated my IruHisa fic that I began a while back. It's in the 'Naruto Fanservice' story.

Thanks very much! I had a hard time with that first chapter while I was feeling out what exactly Ryofu, Yuji and Hisako are doing, what their positions are, etc. But I think it'll work out okay. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I could tell you, but I should be posting chapter one tonight, so I'll let that speak for itself, I think. It'll be different than my usual bit, but I kind of like where it's headed so far.

Here we go:
http://www.fanart-central.net/chapter-102659.html

Serving has also been updated again. Enjoy!

Quick question- may I use Ryofu in a fic I'm hopefully going to write? It's sort of a vague idea right now. It's a Naruto fic, but should be quite a bit different from my usual offering. Let me know if it's cool by you.

On my way to read it now.

I've just updated 'Serving', btw. Yuji finally breaks out of his genjutsu world and back into the real world.

If that's the case, I'll just wait until we start up again. I

Sounds good to me :) I'll look forward to reading it.

Quick question for you- Would you mind if I posted a bit of extra stuff that was meant for our co-op fic? I think I finished the chunin exam arc and I'm dying to share it. 'Insane' Yuji was a ball to work with. Part of me is still dying to do that scene you talked about, where Ryofu and a topless Azami are standing together.

Just noticed your post.

I haven't played it extensively, but I'm familiar with the series in general. Skyrim, too. I'd love to see a fic on that. Lots of potential there.

That's understandable. I was sort of the same way. Writing is just therapuetic for me in general. Blows off stress when I'm too tired for physical activity, too.

I've been okay. Job hunting now. I took a break from it for a while. Now I'm back at it. Fun fun fun. lol. But I'm not bad, thank you.

Serving has been updated again. Enjoy!

So, how are you these days? Anything interesting going on?

Serving has been updated. Enjoy!

Serving has been updated again. Enjoy!

btw, have you seen the new Shakugan no Shana opening?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZopZw63mSqc&NR=1

Take a listen to the full song if you have time. It is excellent! Kotoko at her finest!

You know, it was. It was supposed to be a five chapter thing about a love triangle between Sakura, Naruto and Yuji. It stayed that way for quite some time I guess, lol. But yeah, wow.

No problem. I think your solution will work out just fine.

I've run into a similar dillema before. What I finally decided to do was to take a grain of the original world and make it the basis for my idea. As long as the world is in some way connected to the 'original' idea, I think you're fine. Let your imagination go wild, and then tie that idea to whatever is 'canon' with a simple sentence. For example:

Yuji is in a new world.
"This is just like the Leaf Village...there's blahblah blah! What is this place?"

I hope that's of some help. Personally, I trust that your imagination worlds would be very interesting, but I understand the desire to keep with cannon, too.

Also, serving has been updated. On it's two year anniversary 00' When did that happen? lol. Can't believe I've been working on this fic for two years.

Hi. Thought I'd ask how your fics are coming. Any more Kairi on the horizon?

Hey, thanks very much for your comment on my last chapter. I'm really glad you liked it. I had a hard time trying to go that direction so it's really good to hear my efforts weren't futile!

Serving has been updated again. Enjoy. Hopefully this arc will present a pleasant twist as well.

Serving has been updated again. Enjoy!

Thanks for the link! That was awesome! I do love fighting mikos, lol.

Serving has been updated again. Enjoy! And Happy New Year in advance!

Sounds like a good way to celebrate to me. Hope your Christmas was a merry one.

Hey man, don't know if you celebrate it, but Merry Christmas!

Serving has been updated again. Enjoy!

Thank you for the comments. I'm glad you're liking this new bit. I'm having a good time with it personally.

Serving has been updated again. Enjoy!

Sweet!

No problem. I mean, you made it clear she's a girl, with worrying about her wardrobe and whatnot. But at the same time she's thinking practically about how what she's got to do and how she'll have to fight. She isn't shrinking away from the action. So I think you're doing a stellar job with that.

I've updated 'Serving' again. Enjoy!

Excellent! On my way to take a look ASAP.

You're right. My series usually start as mini, but they never do seem to stay that way. I'm going to try to restrain myself this time, lol.

Shana's gotten damned difficult to get over here, too. VIZ media and Geneon entertainment are the absolute worst about keeping the fans informed.

Thanks for the comments, btw. I've got to admit that originally, Yuji didn't survive that fall.

That's great news! I'm looking forward to more of your work. I'm hoping to get more into writing some Shana once I wrap up 'Serving'. I can't believe I ever thought that was going to be a five chapter mini-series. lol. I don't know why I think that. I never stop at five XD

Serving has been updated again.

Hi. Just wanted to let you know I updated Serving. Enjoy!
So, any more progress on your Shakugan no Shana fic? Or Kingdom Hearts? I'm curious to read more about Kairi.

Your welcome I just enjoyed the story. Lol good writing!

Serving has been updated again. Enjoy!

Thanks for reading. I hear you. We could all use a setup like that. Sorry to hear that its similar to a real-life experience for you, though.

I've updated Serving again, btw.

I have heard! I'm delighted to hear that. Can't wait for the OVA, too! There's supposed to be a new boxset release before the end of the year, too. Can't wait for that!

Have a good time with it. We're getting into the interesting area of Serving now, when a lot of questions start getting answered. Thanks for reading so far, btw- including my original story, the monstrosity it is!

Just to let you know, I updated Serving again. Just so you don't skip a chapter and wonder what in the hell happened in between. lol.

I've just updated 'Serving'. Enjoy!

Yeah, it kind of took on a life of it's own. I had a good time with it, though. It was weird thinking of Azami as a 'normal' girl. But I think it came out fairly well, given that I've never tried this before before.

Maybe a sequel sometime for it, not to mention the Resident Evil fic I've been procrastinating on.

Thanks for the comment on 'Serving'.

I just submitted a new original fic. I think you'll like it. It's sort of like a Bruce Lee movie plot, with Azami and Yuji's more 'real' counterpart, Dan Holmes. It's set in modern day, and everyone has 'normal' abilities.

http://www.fanart-central.net/story-59295.html

'Serving' has been updated. Enjoy!

I commented on your KH fic. Loved it thus far!

I've just updated 'Serving'. Enjoy!

No rush. It gives me something to look forward to reading. Mythology has fascinated me for the longest time. Definitely looking forward to this one.

Yeah, I was in a really bad mood. I'd planned to ask out this girl at the Star Trek convention I went to in August (She was a very, VERY nice version of Seven of Nine, right down to the jumpsuit which leaves little to the imagination). I was kind of hemming and hawing about getting in a picture with her (Why would I want my ugly mug ruining a perfect shot of a babe?), but then she told me in a dead-on Seven impression that 'You will comply'.
Worked on my delivery, then never saw her again. If she hadn't been in a hurry the first time...
Think i've cursed myself by writing about Yuji so much? lol.

Well, I can follow anyway. I really have been meaning to play KH. And FF, too, for that matter.

Sounds like a perfectly sound idea to me. I could totally see it working when you describe it that way. I'm also a huge fan of any kind of mythology, so I'm doubly interested.

I think I needed to write that, because I was really being a miserable bastard until I did, lol. That, and some of it was honest observation of some parts of human nature. I think that was the most depressing part to me, actually.

Can't say I've ever played KH, but I read various fan fictions and whatnot, so I can find my way around those stories. More than happy to read, as always!

It sounds interesting to me so far. I love those kinds of scenarios personally. Mountains, isolated towns, cabins in the woods, etc. Sounds very interesting to me.

Thanks for commenting on my original fic, by the way. As you can tell, I was in a wonderful state of mind when I wrote that, lol. Part of me was wishing a girl would be that refreshingly direct. That, and I was really into Lenalee from D Gray Man at that point and desperately wanted a girl OC for the occasion. I loved your comment. It's so identifiable that it's almost eerie. Yuji's thinking things that occur to all of us, but we can usually sumarrily dismiss it.

No joke!
I knew you would! I couldn't resist doing it, for some reason. :D

Let's see...first thing I look at is either a very interesting scenario or a cool lead character.

Thanks for the comments! I'm impressed at how quickly you caught up on 'Serving'.

I've just updated Serving now. You're going to want to kill me after reading it, I think.

Hey, glad to hear that!
Let's see...'Serving' has 3 updates. Then there's an original story:

http://www.fanart-central.net/story-59158.html

And a DS9 one-shot:

http://www.fanart-central.net/story-59102.html

I can't think of anything beyond that. But I've been slow to update for some reason.

Hey, that's great! Here's hoping all does go well!
I'm going to write an original horror story when we get closer to Halloween. The last OS I did was a really melancholy love story. Kind of fun to write outside of my usual realms for a change.

I've updated 'serving' twice, for when your computer situation is resolved! Plus an original fic for a change! The female OC is based a bit off of D Gray Man's Lenalee.

Thanks for reading! And good luck with your computer situation. I've been there, so you've definitely got my sympathy!

They really do! Damn that lucky jerk, Yuuto! Cat allergy or not...Although I did wind up getting a good idea for Serving from reading this.

It's all good, then.

I wound up checking out Omamori Himari on your recommendation. You were right- Azami-ish! Good call!

Enjoy!

I'm not on Facebook, sorry to say. I can PM you my email address, though, if you're interested.

you like A7X!!! :0 that's amazing :D :D :D X3 you have awesome taste in music! and you also like naruto? that's cool :D don't you draw?

Well, that's something of a plus, then.
Let's see...two Serving updates, a Star Trek update, and a new original fic. Plenty to keep you entertained! lol.
Hope things clear up soon.

Hey man, just checking it. You doing okay?

Before I forget, I've also added a one-shot DS9 fic.

Oh, I see. That would horrify me even more. Unless I broke into 'Hishoku no Sora' or 'Joint', no one needs to be brutaltized by my singing voice! lol

My major issue just got fixed, mercifully. For once, my IP didn't give me any BS. I was in with my old modem, out with my new one, and happy as a clam that it worked on the first try. At least until I hook up my pain in the @$$ wireless router -_-' I think that's what did my modem in, somehow.

Well, thus far I've got one Serving update up, but that's about it.

Ng wanted me to tell you that his modem went "kablooey." He'll be back on whenever he gets it fixed, though.

I'm glad it was relaxing, then. I had one like that not long ago. I keep swearing I'll learn how to dance on the offchance I'm asked.

Good luck with that. I know how frustrating that can be.

On another note, I picked up my Ikki Tousen fic again. I finally decided how the plot should go, so I've been having fun with that.

It's all good. Had one of those myself recently. You haven't missed much on my end, save for an update to 'Serving'.
Did you have to travel very far for the wedding?

Updated 'Serving'. Enjoy!

Likewise, friend.

I suppose so. That was my line of thinking as well. And I really wanted to go back to the thing that made Yuji crack before. That's the only part of the story I didn't like. Oh well.

DA seems over engineered. FAC is point and click; simple. DA has too many options imho.

lol, true on all counts. Very true. In retrospect, the only thing that concerned me a bit was Yuji and Azami's last little section together, where she injects him with that aphrodesiac. It fit the dark theme, but I wonder if it was too over the top. Oh well. I had fun with it.

Oh my. :( Well, my friend gave me a base lineart she wanted me to turn into Miku.
And I know for a fact she's not on HF... dang.

Well, I'm gonna take it off just to be careful. I don't want people to think I stole their artwork... :(

The people seem to be a bit edgy on DA. Not everyone, of course, but moreso than FAC from what I can tell.

Thanks!

The only thing I had in my head was that I wanted there to be extreme violence followed by awesome sex, lol. Granted, the two kind of intermingled the entire fic, but that made it fun. A character like Azami is just so easy to work with. Kind of like Ada in Resident Evil, who kind of inspired her wardrobe and manner of speech this time around.

Have you ever seen Shaman_gurl38's work? (I think that's her username). She moved to DA, but not before submitting some hilarious Naruto pics.

Hopefully I'll find that happy medium.

Thanks for the comment! I hope the ending came off well. I could see it in my head, probably because I based it off Wesker vs Chris and Claire Redfield to some degree.

You'll pick it our right away.

I agree. His 'Faces of Kenshin' pic is hilarious.

I've avoided that so far, mercifully. I'm pretty good about not including the on the fence stuff. I'm trying to push it little by little while staying within the rules. I want those kinds of scenes to be tasteful but authentic.

'Mercenaries' has been updated with it's finale chapter. Enjoy!

True, but there's one specific point in the story in which Shana would fit perfectly.

Yeah, I've seen some of his work. Very impressive stuff.

Well, to be honest, the limit is what FAC policy and common decency will let me get away with. I can't have her act the part of a 'true' dominatrix without breaking site rules. So I try make sure what they're up to is strongly implied instead.

I just updated 'Serving'. Wow, I didn't realize it'd been so long since the last chapter!

Some crossovers truly don't make sense. You can't, for example, combine Sonic and Naruto. At least, I don't think so. Naruto and Shana is combatible to some degree, but Shana would fit really well in Tsubasa (You'll see why almost right away if you read it).

I freely admit that, being in a Resident Evil mood, Azami is coming off sort of similar to a dominatrix version of Ada Wong. lmao, it's really weird. I keep writing things that the two of them are doing, and I keep saying 'no way. I can't go farther'. And then, they do. lol.

That's a good way to do it. It really wound up relating well.

It's fun having him be the super-powered bad guy for a change. I think the sequel will be fun. This time, I'm doing something told mostly from Azami's perspective. But I'm still going to give her or another girl(s) their own fics.

Thanks!

It worked out great. The two worlds met seamlessly, which is always a worry when you do a crossover.

I was concerned that the drug use might be too far out of character for Yuji. This version of Yuji is loosely (okay, heavily) based on Wesker of Resident Evil fame. I wanted him to be 'justifiably evil'. But like I said, I don't know if having him use this drug was a good choice. Considering it's been mentioned before in Naruto, it sort of fit, but still...

I might beat the crap out of him, but I still keep an eye out for my poor OC! lol.

Thanks for the comment on the ST fic, btw. I'm glad you liked it.

I needed that. I had a really bad day, and that really helped, big time! I said more in my comment, but in a nutshell: great job!

I've updated 'Mercenaries'. Hope you enjoy it! I was a bit concerned about this chapter (You'll see why), but even moreso about the upcoming chapter.

They do pretty good. Good choice in VA's too. Colleen Clinkenbeard (sp) was the perfect choice for Yuuko.

Maybe so. I think I need to get away from focusing on character in particular. Do more of an X-men thing. I got my leading guys and girls, but gotta get the background characters into the spotlight, too.

It'll come to you. You'll probably just sit down one day, meaning to type up a one-sentence idea, and it'll just start flowing.

I always like Clamp's translated work. Their translators leave in Japanese sound effects and certain words that are important.

I think maybe I've also made Yuji too much of a loser recently. With him, negative imagery is easier to illustrate than positive imagery. There are more stories born from negativity than positivity.

Well, I hope that some inspiration strikes you soon, then.

If you liked XXXHolic, then you'll probably like Tsubasa. More combat, and less of the stand alone stories that XXXHolic.

I've been tossing the idea around, actually. I think I might actually do that. Honestly, she's far more interesting that Yuji to write about. lol. My poor miserable OC.

Oh, I meant to ask if you ever started that RP you talked about a month or two back.

It's a great story, but confusing as hell to follow because of all the freakin' characters. The first time through, it's a giant wtf deal. At least, it was for me, because I was reading it as it came out. With one release every six monthes, it was kind of hard to remember every little nuance. It might be different for you. But I recommend it, big time.

I freely admit, I live for creating a Yuji and Sakura pair on that. lol. I haven't been able to make a good Azami yet, though.

I've been preoccupied with 'Mercenaries'. So much so that I've got the end planned, along with a sequel that takes a radically different direction. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

you never done it before?

ultragamma: how's your day?

rini: *in her cheerleader outfit* =)

yo

I don't know if it was a spin-off, but it's related to Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicles.

Sounds like a good challenge. It's definitely high up on my list of things to do now.

I'm glad. The Ikki Tousen fic will get much better. The SHana one I'm going to continue. The focus will be more evenly split between Shana and Haruhi in the future.

They're unrelated, actually. MariahHolic is...incredibly odd, even for anime.I would suggest looking it up on wikipedia- AFTER watching the anime opening on YouTube. It's really out there, and kind of hard to explain. I've never watched it. I was just curious if you'd heard of it, because no one seems to have.

That sounds evil. Fun, but evil. If I didn't get the first hit on him in the old games, I was almost certainly screwed.

Enjoy!

Cool. I'll put it up soon. That, and an IkkiTousen fic I had started a while back. That should be up soon, too.

Nice! Say, have you ever seen/heard of MariaHolic?

Sounds like a good time. Hopefully the bosses are more difficult. It got annoying in DW6 that you were ridiculously helpless in the beginning, but by the end you could just whittle their life down until they got in a lucky shot.

Okay, both Ikki Tousen and Haruhi/Shana have been posted.

http://www.fanart-central.net/story-59080.html
http://www.fanart-central.net/story-59079.html

Oh, this was a while ago. Maybe even a couple years. It's more 'Haruhi' than 'Shana' in the first chapter or so, but I'll post it once I clean it up a little bit more. My grammar sucked back then.

I recommend it. The novel and manga don't match up timeline wise sometimes, but both are excellent. The novel moreso, since it's the original story.
The third season should be out soon. Rather, the boxset. Individual DVD's are out for a decent price on Amazon. Usually you find them as Shana II, at least stateside.

They experimented with something like that in Samurai Warriors, I think. The blocks of musou I mean. Guan Yu has been disappointing up until now imho, so I'm looking forward to a challenge.

I've also updated 'Mercenaries'. Enjoy!

Yeah I took a bit of notice to some of that.I had posted a shana fic a while back, but no one took interest so I deleted it. It was an interesting mix of The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya and Shakugan no Shana. So I decided to add some Shana to Naruto. I didn't at first, thinking it didn't fit. Then I saw Konan and Pain, and at that point pretty much anything goes.

Good question. I know Geneon was the group that released the boxset that had seasons one and two in it, and I think they used Shout! factory for their VA's, but I'm not sure. Funimation is usually pretty decently quality, so that's a good sign.

It really does. That, and I always got a kick out of leading hordes of people in circles, spinning around and cutting them down for Musou fodder, then running again.

Sorry for the late reply, btw. I got dragged to a wedding in Canada this weekend -_-'. Blah. I hate weddings. Even though there were some legitimately hot girls there...non-family, too, for a change!

You'll see a lot of Shana-ish effects in 'Serving', if you know where to look. Like Yuji's fight against Pain. I was in a Shana mood when I wrote that a few months ago.
And yes, I'm a ShanaXYuji fan myself. And in case it was still a mystery, my Yuji was named (at least party) for Yuji Sakai.

Kagami, definitely! Or maybe Chisame Hasegawa from Negima's english VA's. Can't think of her name. If they did an english version of the title theme, I would say Caitlin Glass or maybe even Skye Sweetnam (though I usually hate the translated themes).

Did they at least keep the right stick camera configuration? The one-stick movement control drove me nuts in DW5.

I haven't talked to you in a while, so I thought I'd drop by to say hello, and ask how you've been?

Those are all good names (that have not appeared in Shana to date). Season 3 is due for a release in the US shortly. It's theme is 'Joint' by Mami Kawada. STELLAR opening. In fact, I picture that one scene we talked about for our co-op fic during it. at :55-1:05 mark, I always pictured Yuji in Shana's spot, walking in on Kazumi (Azami) and Yuji (Ryofu), with that sort of shocked look on his face. For when Azami is drenched by Ryofu's jutsu and whips her top off, I mean.

In the eng imho, Shana doesn't sound Tsundere. She just sounds like, well, a dog, lol. Yuji's VA did a fairly good job, though.

I'll have to give it a shot, then. I think they finally got the control system right for DW6:E. If they've improved on that, perfect!

I can help you there, if you'd like. If you mention what names you want, I can make sure they haven't been used up through Season 3. Damn Viz media, cancelling the light novels stateside!

Shana's Japanese VA, Rie Kugimiya, is one of my favorites. Her english VA just doesn't work for me.

btw, 'Serving' has also been updated.

How is DW7, btw? I haven't gotten a chance to play it yet.

Oh, crap! Sorry! I wasn't paying any attention to my own profile! Didn't expect to see anyone else on. REALLY sorry about that --'

How are you tonight?

I'm looking forward to your feebdack.

It's all good. Stuff happens.

"Mercenaries" has also been updated. Enjoy!

Just to let you know, the DS9 fic has been updated by both myself and YunieXTidus.

Sweet.
(:

Hello! :D
I'm not new but I love making new friends.

Ah, very nice. I don't think you'll be disappointed. The story flows well, has good music, and the animation is very good. I recommend watching subbed rather than dubbed, because the English VA's lose something in translation. Nominally, Shana sounds like a dog in english. You can never go wrong with Rie Kugimiya as a VA anyway.

'Serving' has just been updated. Enjoy!

It doesn't have to be Naruto to be effective; heck, I went the complete opposite direction by writing a Star Trek: Voyager fic a while back. And then there's that whole business with Sakura as a vampire and the like. I just go with whatever I'm into at the moment. I've got a nice Resident Evil fic in the works, too.

Actually, I do have one. Write a one-shot or two about just about anything. Like my romance one-shots. They break the monotony, and more often than not serve to give you new ideas or a fresh perspective.

I've just updated that new fic I'm doing. 'Mercenaries' chatper 3 is finally done. Sorry for the wait.

'Serving' has been updated. Enjoy!

I've done that, too. Usually when Yuji is doing a fight scene based on moves I know somewhat. But I'll usually pace around listening to J-rock and anime music, and that does the trick.

It was fun watching her learn and evolve as a human/borg. Her character development was stellar.

See, I can sit around sometimes. Other times, I have to pace, or just out and out excersize. Weightlifting, running, playing with my dog. So I totally get that.

Although I could totally break that line of thinking for Seven of Nine.

You haven't mentioned it, but I totally know the feeling. It's very similar to what I've got, which upon further study might be Asperberger's rather than a cronic free-floating panic disorder as originally thought.
It is the same thing, but breakdowns can be more catostrophic. I vent into my fics and exercising, personally

I've seen bits of TOS and Enterprise. Enterprise is better than I thought it would be. I haven't officially gotten to Ezri in the series, but I've seen pics and whatnot, and I prefer Jadzia. I'm a sucker for ponytails and dark hair.

I know I've mentioned my issues with anxiety before. The thing is, what you think of doesn't hurt you- but the fact that your brain doesn't want to shut down and just relax until everything is 'in order' is what gets you. It's irritating because it makes life difficult to some degree, but no one else can see it, and no two cases are alike.

It grows on you. I've only finished Voyager; currently working on DS9 and TNG. I'm actually going to an ST convention in August (the biggest one we've got on this side of the pond). I'm going in costume, as a Starfleet trill officer. Wonder if Dax being hot had anything to do with that decision? XD

Well, I'm no expert, but I'd guess that constant stress from work and school and no real leisure time (i've been running non-stop for six months), plus my usual stress level from that miserable anxiety issue I've got...yeah, just a cumulative thing. Thankfully, I caught on quick enough and got myself settled down to avoid anything catastrophic. I'm basically just finishing up work and school, then taking a break from both for a while.

I had no idea you were a fan!

Geez, that's a hell of a lot to have going on. I've got sort of the opposite thing going on: Work is wrapping up, but school and a near-miss on a nervous breakdown is taking it's toll on me.

Good to hear on the fics! This DS9 fic I'm doing with YunieXTidus is a huge help. I was totally blank for new Naruto ideas. I've got a course mapped out for all my current fics up to a certain point, but after taht...

Hey, good to see you! How have you been?

I hope life for you settles down soon! You're missed on here. Also, if you're into Star Trek, NG and I are doing a co-op (my first ever) and if that sort of thing interests you, by all means, please check it out! NG is absolutely fabulous with it. I haven't gotten my 'pilot episode' done yet, but it'll be up within the next couple days.

P.S.S., I know I mentioned this, but the Neji vs. Hisako fight has been updated and finished. Can't wait to hear what you think, when time allows!

It's all good. Take your time.

Oh, really? Dang, I'll have to pick that up for sure!

No rush; take your time. I know the feeling.

Updated the fight you were so eager to see the finale of! Hope you enjoy it.

Works for me. You can count on my participation.

'Serving' has been updated.

Hey, sure thing. What kind of RP are we talking?

Besides Naruto Couples being update, I've also added the start of a new fic. Enjoy!

http://www.fanart-central.net/story-58997.html

Updated IruHisa in Naruto Fanservice. Hope you enjoy! :)

I've just updated Naruto couples. YunieXTidus and I had a strange conversation, culminating in us daring each other to write a yuri fic. And, well, I totally manned up and did it, lol! I wouldn't normally, but a dare is a dare. I think Kannazuki no Miko is to blame somehow, as I think that's how the conversation started. But anyway, enjoy SakuAza!

Awesome, thank you!

I've just updated Naruto Fanservice. I'm trying out some new pairings, thanks to NG. We had a whole brainstorming session. xD Anyway, this one is IrukaxHisako. Hope you like it!

I've just updated 'Naruto Couples 2'. Enjoy!

Serving had been updated, too.

True, but our two OC's don't get along. It's a bit awkward when you're supposed to portray an actual relationship between two OC's; especially a romantic one. There are so many ways to screw that up. I did several times before the finished product -_-'

I see. That's okay. I'm working out the rest of the chunin exam battles out, up until the jonin vs. chunin fights.

Still thinking what I want to do when I get to my 4-year university.

I've just updated 'Serving'. Enjoy!

I will man. So how r u?

Thank you. It's weird with someone else's OC, though. Especially because there's certain boundaries I wouldn't cross with someone else's OC. What might that be, you ask, since she crushed his gonads? Good question.

If I'm estimating right, my next chapter will have:
-End of prelims; down to four people.
-Move to final arena (on a mountain)
-Chunin exam evening festival.

Yeah but doctors get a whole lot of money and stuff. However u r right, I'm to that age where I really need to think this through.

THanks for the comment on the HisaKoji (sort of) fic. Man, that one was hard to write. It's surprisingly difficult to get the right sort of atmosphere in a romance fic between two OC's. I'm really glad I went the mild route.

...... *thinks about that*

I'm thinking in the same village, but up on top of a mountain at this point. I can work in a festival at the end of next chapter.

I know but that's what I plan on who I want to be in the future.

i've just updated my end of the co-op fic. Enjoy.

To become a film director and doctor.

The only thing I'm thinking about streaming is Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni Kai. I don't think that'll hit the US anytime soon, unfortunately.

It'll be entertaining, in theory.

I also recommend Mami Kawada, and of course Kotoko.

For some reason, I can't stream anime. I just can't watch it on a computer screen. I'm a collector. I like to physically own the DVDs

I'm almost done with the my next update, hopefully by tomorrow. The word I'm hoping will describe it is 'heroic'.

She can do pretty much anything, yes. I loved 'Sakura Drops'.

What sucks is that there is no anime on TV around here, aside from the super popular stuff. And buying online can be a crapshoot.

That makes sense. It's a good fit for a character like Ryofu.

True. You can tell they're the ones who love what they do. Although, a big name is a favorite of mine. Utada Hikaru.

It is man. I have to get good grades to go a better colloege.

Just trying to recover from the bad grades I got from my midterms.

The kind I've got now is the kind that watch one or two anime and think they know it all. Bleach and Naruto are great, but that's where their knowledge ends. Without flattering myself, I know a fair bit, especially compared to them.

Ah, that makes sense. I can see it now that you've pointed it out. It should have been clear from the start, but I wasn't really looking for it.

True. AKFG has a pretty distinctive sound as do Mami Kawada and Kotoko. It's too bad Little Non doesn't have more of a presence. She mostly does obscure anime openings, but she's got this pure, powerful voice. I saw a video of her putting on a concert in a random spot on the street in the dead of winter. THat kind of dedication to the craft impresses me.

My buddies are pretenders. For some reason, I find it offensive. lol, go figure.

That's a good move. Not to mention he doesn't seem entirely comfortable with girls, either. I don't know if you meant to have it that way, but that's how it came across at some parts.

I didn't catch it right away, but even the music itself has a similar beat to it.

True, it really is. Wish I had a group of friends like that. My friends call themselves Otaku, but know almost nothing of what they watch and read. At least in that group, who is an Otaku and who is not is clear (thanks to Konata!)

A very interesting update. I liked it.

Btw, you know the opening for Kannazuki no Miko? The person who sings it, Kotoko, is also the one from the Shakugan no Shana opening I linked to you, with the song 'Blaze'. I thought they sounded familiar.

It's amazing that we can relate to Lucky Star like that, isn't it?

I look forward to that update, then. Sounds like a doozy. My next couple chapters will be fairly straightforward, and then all hell will break loose. At least, I think. It's like you said, it changes as I write it.

What's up?

In my little group of friends, I'm sort of the 'Kagami' of the group. I get exasperated with them easily, and I'm usually the target of their comments. Although personality wise, I'm also closer to Konata. I'm just a step down from it, I think.

I have to say, this is the first time I've described myself this way XD

Hey.

Thanks for the comment on my pic. I can too, actually! xD

I hope so! Kagami is probably my favorite of the bunch, although Konata is downright hilarious.

Don't worry; I'm not quite to that point yet. I'm still at an age where it's healthy, I think. Lucky Star is comedic genius at times.

It's an anime I've been meaning to check out. I admit to going all otaku for shrine maidens, as if Miko and Asuna weren't hint enough, lol.

Thanks for the commenting on 'Serving'. I'm glad that chapter had that effect. I wanted to have some downtime from the constant fighting an emotional struggle without haivng Yuji breaking character for another emotional breakdown. That, and see my above comment about shrine maidens.

"Serving" has been updated. Enjoy!

I've picked the character theme for Uzume (Miko or Asuna). The reason why is damned obvious, I think.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zhc3MppNOT0&feature=related

I suppose it is possible. I've never really done it effectively, so I tend to avoid it.

The best part is that Yuji is clueless that two girls who rejected him now like him, so he's going to be blindsided when they admit it to him.

Good chatting with you.

That would be damn near impossible to pull off right. Battle Royals work well in anime, but not so much in manga or fics. Plus, it's easier to explain the character through one on one combat.

I do the same thing. I still haven't decided which girl Yuji picks, for example. I've got his role in the battle locked down, but only because I wrote in a clue in a previous chapter that I can't take back.

I think it worked out fairly well. If I didn't organize it properly, I think it would have been a huge cluster of fights with people tripping all over each other. It was hard to pull off coherently.

Luck or not, it balanced out well. And yeah, Kisame's death might put a wrench in those plans. But I doubt you'll lack for enemies to fight. You could probably build up one prominent Rain shinobi now. Or maybe we involve the Mist, since Ryofu also has a bounty? Build up another swordsman for Ryofu to fight or something.

If everything is going well, then there's no story to tell, really. At least, the way I've written up until now.

I had some huge, complicated system for the chunin exams, but then I realized that the teams never really got to fight in an organized way together. So that made sense. I think.

Your update was actually a good balance chapter. Both of us have had constant fighting, so it was a well timed chapter imho.

If all is going well, there's no story. At least, for Yuji. In the sequel to our co-op fic, my writing style is going to change a bit to suit the new characters better.

Now it's all one on one battles, which will create a few interesting scenarios. The finals...huh. Haven't decided yet. It didn't even occur to me yet.

lol, that's what I do. I make up for it in the romance one shots, I think.

There are six total more matches in the exams, but they're all short and will be done within 1-2 chapters. Then would come your idea.

They just seem to suit such a miserable character.

I should be wrapping up these exams within the next chapter or two. At least, the practical part. After that, did you want to handle one or two of the chunin battles where they battle the jonin, ala your idea?

Something like that would be most devastating if things seemed to be squared away. Except for Yuji and Azami, of course. They're my creations; I can't very well let them be happy! lol

The thing I don't like is how I've set up that only Azami is around and not Sakura. I don't want the potential romance to cool off, given that Yuji could wind up with either one.

I was thinking that we have maybe a month or so pass. That seems like a realistic time for relationships to form and for people to completely heal from their injuries and whatnot. Plus, that's time for Azami's little mishap with Ryofu.

I hadn't really thought of how much burden she's got to carry. That's a good point. I don't think I did a job of setting up the dramatic scene I wanted, though.

That's good, too. That last part is really your barbeque. I'm going to have fun reacting to what you set up.

No, the talking was good. Important stuff, plus the foreshadowing at the end. Absolutely neccessary in my opinion.

If it's okay, then it'll probably happen next chapter. I've just got my update posted now.

Commented. That was a good update. I said more in my comment.

I'm just a couple minutes away from an update of my own.

If it does wind up being a problem, I can always change things.

I'm off to check out your update now.

Quick note: Probably in the next chapter of the co-op fic, or at the beginning of the following one, I plan to have the Leaf delegation show up to the chunin exams (at least part of the delegation, anyway). Ryofu doesn't need to be there at that point, but the Leaf should have a presence. Does that present any problems from your end? If so, I can change things around.

Good update. Again, nice battle.

I've also updated. Enjoy!

I've just updated 'Serving'. Enjoy!

Thanks for the comment on my one-shot. I'm glad you liked it. Also, was there anything in particular that you liked or disliked about it?

I think the conclusion will be surprising, at least somewhat. I have some idea of where I'm headed, but nothing concrete. Which is good, because then I can't give the ending away accidentaly.

Oh ok.

Cool. Who r u going to dress up as?

Nothing. What else is new?

We tend to have the same taste in anime, so I'm inclined to believe you.

Oh, good. I wasn't sure if his outburst just kind of came out of nowhere, especially because of how I had him treating Jiraiya. Thank you for the input.

And therein the problem! That's what makes 'Serving' so much fun to write. There are a bunch of different solutions to his situation, and any of them could work. But I'm killing them off one by one, until the only solutions that remain are the interesting ones.

Same thing what u said man. However I am not a quitter, so I'm not giving up.

Well, I'll certainly take a look at it when I get the chance.

A quick question for you regarding my last 'Serving' update. Did Jiraiya and Yuji's conversation make sense? And did Yuji crumble too quickly? I was trying to portray him as mentally fatigued, but I'm not sure I got the right feel. What did you think, if you don't mind my asking?

I know right. How u been?

Sup.

I hear you. I usually get that feeling when Yuji goes at it with Itachi.

I can't say I've seen that one. Was that one of Miyazaki's?

Also, just updated 'Serving'. Enjoy!

I really did like that part of it. It's a clever use of a nasty jutsu. The fight with Kisame fights nicely with the story, and it's got a really good 'Naruto' feel to it.

As for Yuji...well, I hope I'll likewise shock you over the course of the next two chapters.

I updated my 'Naruto Fanservice' last night. Here's the link to the update:
http://www.fanart-central.net/chapter-101141.html

Feel free to read it whenever you're not busy. I'm pretty proud of it, myself. Hope you're doing well!

Thanks for your comment on the co-op fic. Lol, it was fun having Yuji and Azami's positions be reversed for a change.

Thanks for commenting on my picture! I appreciate it.

My update is up as well.

lol, will do.

I admit; I'm having a lot of fun with 'insane' Yuji for the time being.

Just updated! Sorry it took so long- my friend kept distracting me. As always, I can't wait to hear your thoughts!

I'm talking almost YuYu Hakusho levels of brutality, lol.

Yuji is going to be like the Third Hokage, I think. Quietly powerful without usually displaying it. Certainly each of Team 7 took on their mentor's traits, so it made sense for Yuji, I think.

If need be, I can give Ryofu a reason to come to the chunin matches early.

Well, I've got to go. I've got to get to work. Stupid late Friday night crap shift. Oh well. It was good talking with you.

It'll be interesting to see how that goes. I purposely made everyone older and/or medically enhanced somehow so that there can be more brutality. It'll be Naruto-styled brutality, and necessary to the story.

Yuji's got kind of a dull ache toward Ryofu. He's not, like, super pissed at him anymore, but he definitely resents Ryofu's apparent skill.

Let's see...the team prelims will wrap up next chapter. The individual matches (there aren't many of those) will be right after that, probably taking a chapter and a half.

No, not really. It's usually cold and windy, even with snow sometimes where I am. The break itself is worthwhile, but that's it.

I think they will, too. It's already personal for them, so they've got every reason to gel as a team and do damage. As long as I handle the situation right, it should work out.

Yuji will definitely take that into consideration when he and Ryofu brawl, lol. It's just one more reason for him to hate Ryofu.

Oh, that reminds me- I plan to have some of the Leaf group show up soon to watch the exams. It shouldn't affect your storyline, as Chousen and Ryofu will probably show up on their own, but I thought it best to let you know.

Oh, nice! I'm just waiting spring. I'm tired of the miserable cold here.

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Hideki, Sousuke, and Takeshi were fun. I really wanted to get a team that could work together like that, since Naruto, Yuji, and Azami aren't really team fighters.

I'm fine, thank you. How are you?

Blah, submitted too quickly. I really liked Tsunade's solution in your update. I didn't see that coming, but it makes a ton of sense.

That was a cool chapter. Hopefully my update to the co-op fic is just as good. Enjoy!

Our fic is definitely in for some interesting updates, then.

Sorry I missed you earlier. I was just checking comments briefly and didn't take a second look at my profile.

I wanted to let you know that I haven't forgotten about your idea for the chunin exams. I'll be working it in. I don't want to give away any more than that, though, since it would be a spoiler.

I'm not sure why that chapter was so small. Rather, why 7/8 of my text didn't show up. I was having connection problems to FAC earlier, opr I might just have copy/pasted wrong. either way, I've just uploaded the CORRECT version of that chapter.

Serving Naruto and Sakura has also been updated.

That is a really awesome theme song! Damned catchy.

I've updated on my end of the co-op fic. Enjoy.

I'm really glad you liked it. I toyed with that idea for weeks before it worked out the way I wanted. I had to tone down my wording a bit to stay within FAC policy, but not all that much, since I wanted to keep an undertone of innocence to it. Thanks for commenting.

Can't wait for your update. Take all the time you need. It's giving me a chance to really flash out the chunin exams, so I'm thankful for that.

Chapter 27 is up, finally!

I've updated 'Naruto Couples 2'. This one has some mention of Ryofu in it, due to the setting. If that's not cool with you, I'll take the fic down, no problem. The fic is related to our co-op fic in a way.

I thought about this for 'insane' Yuji's theme:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GeoSLbkJO2k&feature=related

or possibly this one:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=khcKWNMx58E&feature=BF&list=PLF6C8838856EC858F&index=8

I almost like the second one better, even though it makes less sense for Yuji. The video for it is pretty cool, too. The girl in the vid actually inspired a new character you'll meet later in 'Serving'.

No, I didn't see it. As it turned out, I've been offline for a day or so.

I just updated 'Serving'. Hope you enjoy it!

Also updated 'Naruto Couples 2'. Enjoy!

I saw your comment on stratadrake's profile... I saw the Who's Online problem, too!

True. It'll be epic, though. Which is just about perfect, considering the history these two have.

We'll just have to make the battle so kick-@$$ that even Yamato is too amazed to care that his handywork was just obliterated, lol.

I'm going to give it some real thought. There's a storyline in there, for sure.

I've been playing around with Yuji and Ryofu's final battle in our co-op fic. I was thinking of having at least some of the Leaf rebuilt by that point, so there's something for them to destroy for effect.

Ah, thank you. I'm going to toss that idea around a bit.

Thanks for the comments on my story! And actually, your comments about 'i get the feeling this guy's gonna be a lot more trouble later on' is what gave me the idea for that chapter.

Chapters 25 and 26 are up! Enjoy.

Sure, I wouldn't mind hearing your idea. What've you got?

Chapter 24 is up now! Hope you enjoy!

Thank you very much for the comment and favorite^^

ha yeah jack is my boyfriend lol.

do you do with coke or just strait up?

i'm amanda btw, nice to meet another jack lover :))

Just updated my fic! Hope you enjoy.

It's no problem. Take your time. It's well worth the wait. Quality over quantity, and the like.

Thanks very much. It means a lot to hear that. People like you influence my decision to stay, so you've got my gratitude.

I've just updated 'Serving'. Enjoy!

Can you give me a description of Ryofu? Characteristics, as well as physical features. I've been entertaining the idea of drawing a picture of him, but I'm not really sure what he looks like, apart from his white hair.

Chapter 22 is up! Finally. I got stuck in a rut for a while, not sure where to go from where I left it. But I'm back on track now! Hope you like it ^^

It happens. I shudder when I re-read my old fics. I swear, I must not have even known how to type back then.

I'll have to give Yuji's reaction some real thought. When the time comes, I'll make it good.

We should have the bystanders commenting. Stuff like 'My God! They're human?!', etc. And maybe even have Chousen and Yuji's girl worrying about them, before brawling a bit themselves.

That does work out nicely in that respect. Yuji's role will work out sort of that way, too. But in a very different way than Ryofu's.

I think they should meet the next morning, in the center of the village, before the clean-up effort begins. They'll be rested by that point and still have lots of room to work.

That's a good idea. For Yuji's part, skipping over the main, 'odd' part I mentioned before, Yuji will probably go around rescuing various people wherever he can, fighting who he can. He'll be injured badly, healed by Katsuyu, and then the 'odd' part I don't want to give away yet will happen.

That works. I can see Yuji standing there, fists balled, head down, and then his chakra' erupts', furthing damaging the landscape as he verbally lambastes Ryofu.
"You selfish son of a -----! I've had it! You have destroyed my life since you came here. Then you see fit to criticize me with that ridiculousness?! Of COURSE I'm thankful Naruto ended! But don't you see?! The rest of us were powerless! That little bit of resistance was the best we, suppossedly the most powerful village, could do?!"

Then Yuji and Ryofu are broken up. As they're being pulled apart, Ryofu makes the challenge and picks a location. THe point behind this is to make sure they rest and get their chakra back. We shouldn't neglect the fact that they'll be exhausted at that point.

There's one other thing that could touch off the fight between them. I could see Yuji being annoyed that everyone is celebrating Naruto's victory. In his words:
"What are we celebrating for?! Do you mean to tell me you're all satisfied with this? It took ONE OF US to beat them after how many of us were killed? Doesn't anyone think that maybe we need to train harder; be more vigilant; anything?!"
Ryofu could take exception (for some reason; not sure why) and that touches off their feud.

Sounds like a fun group you've got there. The mischief thing; that's a nice touch; especially since my one character is so dark. Our respective chars tend to compliment each other nicely imho.

Good point. One or both of us should mention that.

It's very worth it. Second season is coming out on DVD soon. The first 2 seasons are out. If you get the right boxset, it comes with the OVA.

Enjoy!

Sure, please do!

Since they'll have that much room to fight, I figured 'why not?'
At the beginning, I was thinking that we should have the ground crack and the air change, like it did for 3rd Hokage vs. Orochimaru, to show the two have a really intense chakra.

The kid with the brown hair at 20 secs in is one character where Yuji got his namesake from, for the record.

I'm just about to update 'Serving Naruto and Sakura'

True. I'm also excited at the prospect of having a female main OC for a change. In fact, before 'next-gen', if we did a sequel, I was going to have Azami take the lead.

btw: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RwF2KSAao4U
I think it's at 54 seconds into the video. It gave me an idea of Ryofu's water vs. Yuji's fire. Think we could use something like that in the final battle between Ryofu and Yuji? I'm referring to the lines of red and blue energy in the vid, for the record.

Even though the next-gen thing is on the back-burner, I changed my story to make sure they it's not too similar to yours.

One older girl, definitely like Yuji in mannerisms- 'Shana'. She is a lot like a female Yuji. Seperate from that, she's attractive but doesn't know it (or especially care at first), usually wears her hair in a ponytail, and tends to have a slightly dark demeanor. Tsundere to a degree.

Younger girl- 'Kasumi'- Kind of average girl. She has a lot of energy, very concerned about her appearance, and makes friends easily. She is not overly strong, but is stubborn. Once she puts her mind to something, she's going to get it done.

Boy (age TBD)- 'Koutarou'- Top of the middle type. Strong for his age, average in just about every way. Very courteous and giving. He speaks like he's older than his age, and has a variety of people he is influenced by. He notices girls, but doesn't really react to them, and he has some strange vibe that cause them not to react to him.

Again, I haven't really decided which one(s) will be Yuji's kids, if any. But they'll all be involved with him in some way.

Ch 21 is up! Hope you like it.

I've just slightly revised my plan, actually. Your vision works fine, except Kiba will have the youngest of two sisters, codenamed 'Kasumi' for the moment. The older sister will be like Yuji, and DEFINITELY his child biologically. Call her 'Shana' for now. 'Shana' will be moody, powerful, and dark, similar to Yuji. Except she'll be the gorgeous, ethereal beauty.

Kasumi will be more interested in boys than power, at least at first.

There might be a brother involved, too, but I'm not sure how yet.

Your vision is fine with me. I like it. Cool concept.

Yuji will have kids. At least one. She may be his or she may be adopted; not sure yet. But I plan for Yuji to be involved at the start, in kind of a villag elder role.

His child will definitely be a girl, though. There will be plenty of male chars involved, and i may even switch who the 'main OC' is.

I'm also not sure of Yuji's marital status at this point. I'll really be going by feel once we get going.

Sounds good. I didn't want you to be shocked that it was going to come up at the chunin exams.

Oh, good idea. That brings me to a question: What kind of character(s) do you have planned for 'next-gen'?

Actually, I do have an idea for you. I'm planning to play up the Mist at the chunin exams, since they have a bounty of Yuji's head. They have a bigger one on Ryofu. Maybe there's an informant in the Leaf who says he's still down and out from a fight, and someone tries to pick him off on a mission Tsunade gives Ryofu (and Chousen?) while he recovers. some routinue, easy thing.

lmao, that's no stretch of the imagination, I guess.

I like that. Yuji walks in, sees the scene, his mouth drops, he stares, and then walks away. The next time you see him, he's back to his miserable mood, possibly doing something stupid, dangerous, or violent, or all three.

This would come just as he's ready to forgive Ryofu. And as he's friends with Azami, he'd feel extra betrayed, leading to self-destructive behavior, and adding fuel to the fire for his fight with Ryofu.

Mami Kawada and Kotoko do a lot of good music. Also, Utada Hikaru's 'Sakura Drops' is another one that pops into my head. Glad you liked the selection.

Yuji's future might be a little surprising. Hopefully.
I'm expecting the chunin exams to take four-five chapters. After that, we could fit in the Ryofu and Azami deal. Ideally, from my perspective, it would be best if you outlined the circumstances that Azami and Ryofu meet under, while I dictate Yuji's response.

That is Shakugan no Shana, and it's called 'Blaze' by Kotoko. Here's the opening attached to it:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RwF2KSAao4U

Shinobi does have good music. I also like the Resident Evil and Castlevania soundtracks. Yuji's theme in my mind for the longest time was 'Belmont the Legend' from Castlevania: Curse of Darkness.

Ah, the irony of Ryofu's theme. That's a good one.

Good choices! I like them all, but I've got to say, Ryofu's really, really suits him! That's just about dead-on perfect in my mind, for some reason. They all are, but Ryofu's is my favorite of that group.

While I'm watching those, here's what I've found:

'Serving' Theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RwF2KSAao4U

'Co-op' theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V23WgIXvH54

Not my only choices, but these two have been stuck in my head lately.

This does tie things up nicely. There is one other thing I want to work in, but the two can both work. It's really a small storyline, and actually makes sense to help Yuji and Ryofu avoid each other. And no, Yuji doesn't die or drop out, like you might expect XD

Cool! I might have a couple more myself, if I can find the links.

Yeah, that's a good idea. We can do that. I'll have to think about some of the lineup, because I know there's a grudge or two I'd like to settle. But I love the idea, absolutely.

I'd like Yuji to show some signs of forgiving Ryofu at this point. That will make finding him with Azami that much more devastating.

Ryofu and Yuji...maybe the remnants of the Leaf village after Pain's attack could contain them...maybe not. lol

Say, that's a good idea. I might twist it just a little further, but I love the concept.
I changed the format of the chunin exams slightly, which you'll see more next chapter. I wanted to add a different team format, with more emphasis on combat tactics and less on stealth.

Without giving too much away, you won't see your idea right off the bat. But that doesn't mean I left it out.

Ah, good question. I've got the prelims at the town of Goshou, near Mt. Tenchu. Finals I haven't decided yet. Anything can change, though. What's your idea?

That was a good chapter. It tied up some loose ends very nicely. Congrats on fifty chapters!

I've updated myself. I've been going at a good pace just because this is a Yuji solo thing and I've had some down time due to a combination of hurt ribs and a cold.

Just updated my fic!

It's all good. Take your time.

I always kind of pictured the victim's end (if Ryofu wanted it to be showy) as kind of a reverse Sand Coffin. Same splatter of blood, but the destruction coming from the inside out.

Yes indeed. It's my big answer to Ryofu's Blood Manipulation. Except it's not a counter, it's completely different. But whatever. It works.

That makes sense. It would suck to dry up your own bloodstream or something. The chakra use makes sense, too. THe bigger the jutsu, the bigger the chakra expenditure, etc.

If it wasn't a grievious spoiler at this point, I'd tell you about Yuji's new ability. I can't wait to get to that part. No to mention the roll he'll play in this final battle.

Ah, I get it. The process makes sense, broken down that way. That actually helped me determine the setting where they'll first meet.

Oh, before I forget, I've updated Naruto Couples II. It's partly a gift for YunieXTidus, but I think you'll get a kick out of Yuji's end.

Isn't Kaku Toutaku's assistant-thing? With the glasses? And again, that lucky little bastard! Kanu is my favorite so far, although Ryofu is probably the most amusing. And what the hell- Yuji's already been done in this thing! He's almost Ryoumo! Except masochistic rather than sadistic. And he's a dude (duh). lol.

That's actually a huge help. I wouldn't mind more on the blood manipulation thing, though. Thanks for taking the time to do this.

I like that. The hot girl who doesn't know she's hot. No ego about it, and that way she's not slutty for showing off. Koukin is just a lucky bastard, lol. He really is.

Sure, any kind of detail helps. I've got his personality based on what I've read, not what you've thought. so insight definitely doesn't hurt.

I don't know; her stupidity is part of her charm in some strange way. I pity our Koukin, trying to keep up with her, though. Poor guy. Then again, he has one hell of a view, with an unguarded girl like that.

Lol, no, you're doing good with him. Disturbed isn't quite the right word. I'm not going to do the 'mad genius' thing. It's hard to describe what I'm really getting at. Maybe Orochimaru-ish, without the evil. Clearly talented, but decidedly different.

Thanks. I hope so. Hakufu's personality is especially fun to write about. That 'Hey, you called me dumb!' thing, for example.

As an opponent. I was toying with the idea of making him a disturbed but prized genin of the Mist (possibly; Mist isn't set yet). Sort of a Neji Hyuuga with a dark twist. Will probably face off against Yuji (What else? Lol).

I can see why. It's actually hard to write about at times, unless you can describe the mechanics of a fight. Which, thanks to years of writing Naruto, I can kind of do.

Well, it'll be about Yuji somewhat, starting with the academy years of Lee, Tenten, Neji, and Yuji, since that's where I've placed him age-wise. Basically, it'll be my standard fare, except hopefully written with a better emphasis on detail and Naruto-style. So, lots of violence, unrequited love, etc. I'm not sure beyond that, as to heroes and villains and the like.

Well, I think you'll find it amusing when I get it up, at any rate. My 'inner perv' as you put it, isn't quite done with it yet. lol.

Awesome, thank you. Is it okay if I alter his history a bit? I'd tell you how specifically, but I'm not sure yet. I'm not even sure if it'll be a cameo thing or a recurring deal.

Good point. Hopefully, I'll manage to mix in some 'makeout' as well as the 'violence' this time.

It's a Naruto fic I haven't named yet. It's little more than a concept at this point.

Oh, quick question- may I borrow Ryofu for a cameo role in a new fic I'm doing?

Lmao, that's sound advice, I think! Hopefully I can meet Makeout Paradise standards with this one! XD

Here's hoping it won't suck. I haven't written something like it before, actually, for all the semi-ecchi I inject into Naruto, lol. Meh. Later down the line, when I know more about IT, I'll probably smack myself for the concept. But, whatever, I'm having fun with it for now.

Chapter 18 is also up, hope you enjoy!

Oh, pefect scenario! Very nice! I might ammend that a bit, and have Yuji be looking for Azami instead, since I can't think up why he'd look for Ryofu. Unless he planned to bury the hatchet with Ryofu right then and there, and bam- worst possible scnario.

Oh, I started an IkkiTousen fic. Lol, I'm having a ball with it so far. I doubt it fits Ikki Tousen's world, but the limited knowledge I have now says it works.

Good talking to you.

Do you have any idea how we could work out Azami and Ryofu's akward spot, then? Azami could show Yuji how to block the jutsu as an apology, maybe.
Take your time. No rush.

Blah, I misworded. I meant to say "Chakra nature advantage". She uses wind.

At any rate, I apologize that the chunin exam chapters are taking so long.

Ah, I see what you're getting at. That makes good sense. And will carry over into the next fic, at least on Yuji's (or whoever's in his place) end.
I'm thinking that whichever girl Yuji winds up with will be the one to teach him a countermeasure to Blood Manipulation. Actually, it should be Azami regardless, because she has the chakra advantage to Ryofu, if I'm thinking correctly.

That works nicely, actually. Yuji's part in this big, final battle is going to be...strange, to say the least. Not his usual fare. So him getting the chance for a last showdown is good.
For added motivation, we can throw in Yuji catching Ryofu and Azami in an akward, accidental position.
For the 'how', I was thinking it comes down to taijutsu. Yuji lands the one crucial punch. THat would illustrate the differences between our OC's best, I think. What about you?

Sure, we're still on. I'm looking forward to it.

That left me with a question, too: How do we end Yuji vs. Ryofu?

Serving Naruto and Sakura has been updated. Enjoy!

Next chapter up, and 'nother one coming up later tonight, hopefully!

Next chapter's up! Hope you like.

Hey, just wanted to thank you for the comment on my latest update.

'Tough cookie.' That made me lol.

You have a point...XDDD I wonder if Asura will even be the main conflict in that manga o3o

Just updated my fic. Enjoy!

I've just updated "Naruto Couples 2". Enjoy!

I read it! It's pretty nice so far =D

Soul Eater Not? What's it about? e.o

About sakura- I know, but I didn't want kakashi to be that much of a pedo, you know?

She would do that...man I miss her X'DDD

Oh really? I need to go read it now >3<

Chapter 14 is up, with a character description of hisako. :P

I hope she comes back someday too...I loved her work. Really? No one talked to you before? D=>

The newest chapter I saw was them defeating Noah and sealing him in the book of Eibon

Oh Kasi? She decided to leave Fanart due to personal issues...

Just added chapter 13! It's 'girl talk' time. Thanks for reading! :)

Oh, okay. Thanks. I don't usually make slips like that. I'll fix that right away.

And about Hisako- I'm looking forward to further introducing her!

Fic updated. Enjoy! ^^

Same with us on the army deal. You can join up before you can smoke, drink, vote, gamble, or own a pistol (that's 21 here; any other gun is officially age 12).

Have a good night.

Oh, and "Serving Naruto and Sakura" has been updated.

Let's see. For us, it's:

16: Drive/Work
18: Cigs/tabaco/certain types of gambling
21: Alcohol/card gambling

I like your system much better. I think you can made a decent decision when it comes to sex at 16. Rather, legal or not, try to stop kids from getting it on (crude, but honest). Learning to drive comes too early. At least in my area, where there's something like three deaths a year at my old high school due to driving. And 21 is too old for card gambling.

That sounds like a good choice for him. I thought about the Sound of Madness for Yuji, too, or even Slow Chemical by Finger Eleven.

It's sixteen for you (unless I misread)? Damn, 18 is legal for us.

Oh yeah, definitely. I'm going to pay better attention to spelling and grammar from now on, though.

Maybe to some degree, yeah, lol. Although it's more that I like Sakura's type than it's any kind of a living out of a fantasy. Tsundere girls, strong girls, and...well, ponytails. 00' I'm a sucker for girls with ponytails, for some reason.

Oh,a question for you- Do you have a song that pops up when you think about Ryofu? See, for Yuji, I hear a lot of songs. Joint by Mami Kawada, for example, but I think the one that sutis him best is 'The Outsider', the end theme from Resident Evil: Afterlife.

And, hell, five years isn't much. Although I guess that depends how south of 18 she is. After 18, it kind of all blurs imho.

Oh, please, I'm guilty of the same thing when it comes to typos. I'm not about to prosecute you to the fullest extent of the law ;)

I know the feeling. It happened to me, too. It does suck, on a great many levels.

Fic updated! Hope you enjoy. ^^

Also, don't know if I told you, I have a new pic up. It's a scene from my fic.

Here's the link:

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-800976.html

I updated my fic last night! Hope you enjoy. ^^

I've updated my fic! Hope you enjoy!

Co-op fic updated! Enjoy.

Okay xD Yeah if i get the time to i have school in stuff

actually im not a soul eater fan... actually i dont even know what its about xD

I just updated my fic! Two new chapters. Enjoy, and let me know what you think!

Awesome.
Yeah, I swear. I've found sites that deal in Euros, Deutschmarks (go figure), and yen. Finding US dollars is a pain.
I'll get it up soon. Good update on your end.
Okay man. Talk to you later.

Well then, maybe we could pull off a co-op fic on it. If there's anything two manga fans in their twenties can handle it's fighting and generous girls. If you're up for it, I am.
Ah, I see. Hmm. Those are the sites I usually find, ironically enough -_-'

The chunin exams should be interesting.
Very true there. Damn, that Ryofu is one sensual creature...not your Ryofu, I mean the IT Ryofu...definitely don't want you to misunderstand me on that one, lol. I love Hakufu, but Kanu is still tops with me. Ryoumo's personality is up there, too. Battle Club...I could swear I've read that before. It sounds familiar...
If I knew more about IT, I would suggest we do a co-op fic for that.

Awesome. That'll work nice.
I'm looking forward to seeing how Chousen and Ryofu work out. btw, I just watched a little more Ikki Tousen. Damn, I've got to admit, that whole deal with Ryoumo and Ryofu at the beginning...this anime is cutting edge!
More or less. There might be one chapter in which Yuji and the girl he picks/picks him do the relationship thing. But then, bam, big fight.

Yep, we can tweek after that update. Hell of a good chapter, too.
I figure maybe after Yuji's chunin exams, if Ryofu's recovered, we can do that. If not, then I can have Yuji snap or something a different way. Either way, for sure for Yuji I've got:
-Chunin exams
-Love confessions

Alright. Let me take a read-through...

Sure, no problem.
I was thinking a little more about Yuji's deteriorating condition- do you mind if I slip in Azami and Ryofu talking a little later down the line, before we time skip?

I'm looking forward to it, as always.

I'm normaly on the road when I'm on this site haha

Random hi
O its kool I'm on a trip so I mite be delayed too haha

Hey what's up

Okay. If you change your mind, let me know.

Awesome; thank you!
Hey, what manga numbers did you need for Ikki Tousen? Turns out I may be able to order them pretty easily around here. I can (hopefully) help you find what you need. The only hitch: The series is called "Battle Vixens" in the US. Same content to the best of my knowledge; I don't know if they also changed the name for you and if it'll mess up your collection to have some with a different title (it drives me nuts personally), but I thought I'd put it out there. No guarantees, but it's a pretty good bet I can find some of the stuff.

I've also updated the co-op fic.

Happy New Year to you, too, man. Hope it's been a good one so far!

I really like it. That's a definite good start. I'll put my brain on thinking about the scenario, and hopefully have some better feedback, besides "I like it", which I've said probably twenty times tonight, lol.

I've got to go for now. Talk to you later.

That's a good question. That might be something that gets answered when we're partway done. I can't imagine we'll wrap this up in one or two chapters.

Sure, I'd like to know what kind of idea you've got for that.

Agreed there, too. I can actually see Chousen and Azami being friends in the same way too.

That all sounds good from my end. I think that it'll work out really well, actually. Sounds like an epic battle that should someday be made into an anime.

Yeah, I like that. I think it fits our storyline pretty well.

Have you got something in mind that will trigger this cataclysmic event? If we're going to take our time, then I've just got the chunin exams to cover (that happens within a couple weeks), and the girls confessing to Yuji.

Ah, I see. I don't want to give too much away about Yuji at this point, but his big surprise may or may not lend itself well to Danzou.

That sounds good. I think I can do Itachi vs. Sasuke justice.

Konan...hmm...how about with her, we throw in a couple other girls, too? Like have Ino, Hinata, and Tenten try to get her out of the sky, while Sakura pulls injured out of buildings and tries to heal them, plus KO that giant dog-
thing. I feel like we should give the originals some screen time, lol.

Maybe Azami vs. Suigetsu? Or is he covered already?

Speaking of which, will Karin and Sakura be clashing?

I think Tsunade should face Danzo, actually. I think Yuji would be better suited to fighting people en masse at this point, although I do want him to fight Jugo, too. With his new 'split personality' phase, that might be an interesting fight. Azami would be good to fight Zetsu. I've got her in a support role in the back of my mind, but she could fight Zetsu regardless. Yuji's going to have a special surprise this time around.

How do we divy up the assignments? Obviously you handle Ryofu's battles and Chousen's battles, if she's involved, and I'll have Yuji and Azami. Beyond that, who should control who?

I like the rest of it. Those sound like good assignments.

We should probably take our time. I was thinking about that today, actually. I could rush my stuff, but if we're going to do an invasion arc, we should have a decent build-up.

That's all good. Take your time.

Oh, one thing I've changed since last night: I'm going to hold off on Yuji's love life. I'd rather tell it in a flashback when I can take my time, instead of trying to squeeze it in now. It'll be the same deal with the chunin exams and whatnot, since the timeframe would be all wrong. So, I'll get to them, and probably tell them in flashbacks at the beginning of the first two or three chapters.

If we get the chance, I'd love to do this again, while our OC's are young, so to speak. Maybe do an original co-op fic or something. Same characters, different world. Or even another Naruto fic, with a different storyline.

I've also updated "Naruto Couples II".

That sounds good. I say we really throw the timeline away at this point and just go with what's out there. Let's not even attempt to align everything. It will be one hell of a battle, especially with my new Ryoumo/Kokin influenced Yuji. I'm still working on his new personality. I really liked the split personality idea, for some reason^^

The age thing sounds fine, too. I can't wait to see what this villain plot is.

I've got to be going for now. Talk to you later.

How about an invasion arc? All of the Akatsuki attack the Leaf, along with a bunch of followers. We get a huge battle out of it, and we can include everyone and everything. Then Yuji and Ryofu (and Azami and Chousen) have it out. The only other storylines I've got going are Yuji's lovelife (someone will confess to him soon) and...one other arc that I can actually carry over to our next fic.

How far ahead do you want to jump time-wise?

I've just updated by the way. I'm anxious to see what you'll think of this one.

Here's where I found what I've got: http://www.rightstuf.com/cgi-bin/catalogmgr/Iu-2NOTYFRuXUVBk4d/browse/item/86829/4/0/0

Yeah, we can do that. We're almost to chapter 100, so that's a good idea. Let's finish up our current storylines and then we can move on.

It's a good thing she's so damn endearing, lol. Otherwise that airhead act would bug the hell out of me! I'm definitely going to search for the manga. I got a sweet deal on the anime at a local place going out of business, then found Dragon Destiny at a good price online.

Oh yeah, nothing like runny noses and stuffed-up heads to make the holiday season memorable!

I borrowed a couple different personalities, mixed them together, and came out with something somewhat new. But the one part is so glaringly obvious. I think you'll get a kick out of it. I've only just started watching, but my God. I don't know whether or not I'd kiss Hakufu or kill her (or get killed by her, more likely) with that airhead act of hers!

I had a cold, too. But it was nice otherwise, thanks.

That was a good update on your part. I'm almost done with mine. And I'll be honest, there'll be some parts that will scream Ikki Tousen at you, lol. But in a good way that makes sense. I hope.

How was your Christmas

Updated "Naruto Couples 2" with a fic RQ from my other reader.

Merry Christmas to you, too. No worries about the update. It gives me something to look forward to.

I just updated "Serving Naruto and Sakura", btw. Enjoy!

Updated on my end, too.

Alright then. I can wing the rest. I'm interested to see what the village's reaction to Ryofu will be. There won't be anything profound with Yuji.
The only thing I'd like to recommend (I just thought of it myself, actually, but it's probably already occured to you) is that someone tell Ryofu what really went down with Yuji and Itachi. Hell, in Yuji's absence, Ryofu and Itachi could probably clash, if you're stuck for material.

Okay, that makes sense.

I wasn't sure if using rape itself was a bad idea (which it was, in retrospect. Definitely won't do that again, even though it's mention was mild in this case). I went over in my head what it would take for him to kill someone, and that's one of the only situations that covered it -_-' It was in poor taste, though, and a bad fit for the Naruto world.

I really appreciate your honesty on this. Thanks for telling the truth on that one.

So, is there anything I need to do on my end to react to Ryofu coming back? Anything in particular you're looking for?

Hmm...you make a good point. I'm going to wait until after Yuij's mission in the Rain for that. I want to get one more chapter focused on the girls getting ready to confess to him. So he should be walking back into a storyline when he returns. I do plan to have him change, though much less drastically.

I like that, too. That was the part of the story that was going to develop further down the line. Basically a whole conspiracy. The next step after this last chapter was going to be Yuji finding a connection to ROOT, and basically calling Danzou on it. Just literally walking up to him and declaring war on him. Challenging him to have Yuji killed and so on.
It was a good idea executed poorly -_-'

One last question, then I'll let this drop (I appreciate your feedback on this big time): If I had toned down the chapter a bit content-wise, would it have been acceptable. Same scenario, but Yuji instead breaks knees and legs. OR was the scenario itself bad?

The only problem there is that getting a girl for him is an end in and of itself.
Actually, I'm just going to hop back to my original plan. Originally, I had a big, elaborate battle planned between him and one of the Pains, with the thought of the girls pushing him through. But that's just more of the same. It doesn't do anything for him, except illustrate a measure of strength. SO I'll just tweak one more element, which should open up some more storyline possibilties.
Leaving that chapter out really doesn't damage my perceived storyline. I had half an idea it might not work, but I wanted your reaction on it. I should atually apologize for the content. I tried to make the situation itself non-offensive, you know? Barring the stupid situation, did you see any elements you think I could recycle?

When I was writing it, I was trying to squeeze it into a small time frame, which was part of the problem. I decided I needed Yuji to show intensity somehow, but it takes a lot to get him riled up. He's more likely to sink into the shadows and brood about it. Unfortunately, that's the downside to his character- he doesn't lend himself (Or I don't lend him well, but you get what I mean) well to extreme action unless pushed there in a rash way. His love life can only do so much for his character. I think he's getting stale, actually. But at the same time, I can't altar him too severely, because then I look like an amateur who's trying to change things on a whim.
OF course, the storyline itself, now that my initial "This is awesome!" reaction from an odd late-night adrenaline surge is gone, is an irresponsible one, and not just because it doesn't fit within the fic.
Ah well. It was one of those ideas that just didn't work. Bound to hit a snag like that once in a while.

It really doesn't fit Naruto well. That was one of my concerns. I wanted to hit Yuji at primal moments, where he's not thinking. It's all adrenaline.
It would make a better standalone story where he gets the girl at the end. That's the only part that wound up half-assed, I think.
I appreciate your honesty. I'm going to delete the chapter, and hope you don't think I'm a completely disturbed madman. lol.

Well, I was hoping it would have shock value. It was supposed to clearly outline that Yuji CAN be vicious, since you don't see that side of him often. And I wanted him, just once, to completely lose it. He's so calculating and unreadable usually. I had been chain-listening to the Higurashi openings, and I had this image of Yuji walking through blood in my head. I don't know- it just kind of made sense.
Do you think I went too far? Or maybe it's in bad taste?