redtail

OMG! its just capitol letters!!!!! u get upset over the simplest things! what difference does it make? u know im not yelling. rockon295 talks in all capitols all the time, why cant I?

WHY DOES IT BOTHER U?

BUT IM NOT.

NO! I SHOULDNT HAVE TO STOP. U KNOW IM NOT YELLING WHATS THE BIG WHOOP?

HOW? TELL ME I WOULD LOVE TO KNOW.

WHY?

OH RIGHT

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UH......ALRIGHTY THEN

*LOOKS AWAY* ......*SPOTS THOMAS AND RUNS TO KISS HIM*

ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!! LETS TAK ABOUT SOMETHING MORE IMPORTANT. LIKE I PUT MY NEW ADOPTION UP. DO U WANT ONE? AND LATER IM HAVING A REALLY CUTE TIGER ADOPTION. P.S. WHERES CHRISTI?

OK

I AHVE TO GO EAT DINNER. HERES SOMETHING TO KEEP U BUSY:


tawny hopped beside amber and dustfur nibbling grass." wheres nightcloud"amber said. tawny squinted in the darkness. he could barely make out the hopping figure of nightcloud." over there" he said. all of a sudden something blocked what little light came from the moon. tawny looked his worst fears were confirmed. he thumped the floor with his foot."hawk!" he yelled. he ran as fast as he could toward the forest with the others on his tail."awwwwwwww!" screamed dustfur as he was lifted above the ground in sharp talons. tawny spun around and jumped as high as he could and kicked hard with his feet at the hawk as it was taking off. the hawk cawed but kept flying. tawny kept up the pace and with one giant leap unfurled his wings.tawny kept flying after the hawk. but he was a rabbit not a born flyer like the hawk and couldn't keep up after a 20 minute chase. he flew/crashed down from exhaustion and disbelief. the others caught up shortly but nightcloud didn’t give in and kept flying even though he was the youngest and weakest flyer. amber came and sat beside tawny.tawny looked away. why. why, dustfur he was right behind me and then gone. he thought. amber got up and started after nightcloud. tawny followed. an hour later they found nightcloud asleep in a tunnel. amber went in but as tawny went in a light began to shine. he looked up, the sun! already they’ve gotten no sleep at all. he wished nightcloud hadn't suggested the nighttime snack. then dustfur would still be here. amber awoke tired but happy but looked around and remembered the awful thing the night before. amber saw tawny his usually shiny coat now dull. and nightcloud his black coat dull and his bright white wings now speckled with dirt. tawny left the tunnel without a word and from the entrance she could she him flying high above. she wished dustfur was here. she hopped over to nightcloud and fell asleep.dustfur opened his eyes. suddenly a figure blocked the sun , the hawk! he jumped up. a familiar figure filled his sight "amber ?" he asked. " sorry I didn’t mean to wake you. hi my names cocoa. you know the hawk-" "hawk! where?" dustfur ducked. "from last night you passed out but I saved you." cocoa finished."oh thanks" he said. " well we better get a move on if we're going to find those friends of yours. they’re probably worried sick." she said . hopped out of the barn and unfurled her wings.tawny landed a few feet from the tunnel."I think we should go back to our original tunnel in case dustfur’s escaped and finds his way back"he said. "okay" amber said."come on nightcloud we're leaving."said amber. they said nothing as they flew back to they're original land. "im going gathering" tawny said. "whatever" said nightcloud. tawny flew all the way to the farmers garden and gathered some Lettice and carrots. strawberries! tawny had hit the jackpot! he toke as much as he could carry and flew back to the others." I got some strawberries" he said. he was attacked by nightcloud as nightcloud found the strawberries and quickly gobbled half of them up."hey, leave some for me " yelled amber. tawny was glad he had eaten some of the ones while he was in the garden now he doesn't have to fight over whats left after nightclouds rampage. at least this has cheered them up. for now. he thought.dustfur ran out of the barn. "what?" asked cocoa. "you can fly!" he said "well so can you." she said matter-of -factly. "yeah, but i thought me and my friends were the only ones." he said. " well are you going to sit there and complain or are we gonna find your friends?" she asked. "find my friends" he mumbled. "then lets go." she said. "well how are we going to find them." he asked. " we'll follow the the way we went."she said. and she toke off. followed close by dustfur.they flew for at least 45 mintues before dustfur saw a gray and yellow blur followed by a very large dog. " tawny!" he yelled." where ?" asked cocoa. "down there" dustfur said. he flew down. why doesn't he start flying? he thought. as he got closer he saw a net surronding tawny. all of a sudden tawny stumbled. dustfur burst through the trees. "dustfur!" tawny said. dustfur attacked the dog but was losing. cocoa burst through the trees and started nibbling through the net, she finally got it free and they both toke off followed by dustfur.tawny was nibbling on some strawberries after nightcloud begged him to go get some more. "I don't see why he doesn't just come down here himself." tawny said angrily. tawny heard a faint noise like grass crunching. he stood on his back legs loosening his wing muscles just a tad. there! he twisted his ear so he could hear without alarming whatever it was. "awwwwwwww!" tawny was attacked by some sort of net then tawny heard barking a dog! tawny ran with all his might barely escaping its jaws. he ran and ran all the way back to the forest but it kept following him. tawny heard his name but then stumbled. dustfur burst through the trees." dustfur!" tawny yelled. he attacked the dog but was losing badly. all of a sudden amber burst through the trees but wait ambers wings are black not yellow.as soon as they were away from the dogs tawny asked" who are you?" . "this is cocoa she can fly too." dustfur said."oh wellyour welcome too join our group." he said "well, i appreciate the offer " she said as they landed next to the tunnel. "but i really need to get back to the barn." she said.tawny turned the corner to his nest next to amber; who was taking up more then half of his shedded fur pile.he could still here cocoa and dustfur." no you can't leave at lesat stay tonight." he begged." okay i'll stay tonight but were am i going to sleep ?" she asked. " i'll dig my den bigger." dustfur said " okay but im only staying for tonight." she confirmed. then tawny entered his den and sat squished against the wall.amber woke up and yawned. tawny woke next. "what’s that new smell, intruder!" amber ran out of the nest. " no wait its just cocoa." said tawny "who's cocoa?" asked amber. "the rabbit that rescued dustfur. she has wings too."he said." oh." said amber. cocoa and dustfur passed by the entrance to the den. "oh hey amber this is cocoa." "hi" said cocoa. "she decided to stay" said dustfur looking happier then he had in years." well why don't we all go out to sunning bark and relax." suggested amber "okay." said cocoa. they all headed out to sunning bark except for nightcloud who wasn't speaking to tawny for not getting strawberries. amber started grooming tawny while dustfur was grooming cocoa."so how-" al of a sudden there was a loud noise like stomping and in the distance a dog barking loudly "nofurs!" tawny whispered.. "to the tunnel.".cocoa screamed.dustfur bit whatever it was."everybody, to the back of the tunnel!" tawny yelled.they all ran back.after a couple of hours they cautisiouly crept back out."they're gone." said cocoa." no, they're not." dustfur said sadly.dustfur was right. a few yards away there was a bunch of nofurs and a tunnel above ground." oh no a fire!" yelled amber. "it looks like they're keeping it in that little area.i think it 'll be ok. we should get some rest nightclouds out like a light." said tawny softly. they all went to sleep but after a couple hours cocoa woke up."what’s that awfull smell?" she asked. "guys, guys ?" wake up!" she kicked dustfur softly but firm enough to wake him. " huh wha- what do you want?" dustfur said sleepily.
"the fire!" she yelled. soon the others woke. "oh no the fire we forgot to take turns on watch!" tawny said. "come on guys lets see if we can't stop it." they all ran out of the tunnel and toke to the air. "wow look how huge it is." nightcloud said. amber , tawny , cocoa and dustfur flew to the lake." what about me ?" nightcloud said. " you have to try and wake the nofurs but don't show them your wings and don't let them touch you" tawny said strictly. " yes sir." nightcloud said jokingly. tawny just sighed and amber rolled her eyes. nightcloud flew down to the nofurs while the others went to the lake. nightcloud landed on the biggest one and started licking its face. "uhhh." nightcloud mimicked a puking face. the nofur sturred and started to get up.
nightcloud ran off it and jumped hardly on the other it sturred as well then stood. "kjh ndf dfhbh dfhah!" one said while pointing at the fire. nightcoud had no idea what it was saying but it got some long green thing- snake! nightcloud ran like never before but was lifted off the ground he kept moving his legs like he was running." ehehh why aren't I moving?" he asked confused. the nofur had picked him up and was carrrying him, nightcloud struggling the whole way. the big one put out the fire as nightcloud could barely make out the outline of tawny and the others high above. tawny was gonna be maaddddd. nightcloud squeezed through the hands of the nofur and jumped up in the air. he didn't care if they saw his wings but he had to escape. it turned out tawny wasn't mad he was just glad he was ok. tawny had a dream he was a trampoline."ow"he said. he heard fast scurring. he sat up and looked around. there sat amber and three tiny balls of fluff."wha- wai- me- kits- huh?" he said very confused. amber nodded."awwwww!" "they're adorable." he said. "who’s adorable ?" said dustfur as he came in to the den."wooooooh what’s that?" said dustfur already knowing the answer just completely shocked. "they're kits." said amber."mine."."what should we name them?
tawny asked. "well I was going to name this one-" she said pointing to a kit that could have been tawnys’ twin with her nose."goldkit." this one-" she said pointing to one that looked like her."hazel and this one-" she finished sniffing a mixed yellow and brown one."is smudge." she said. "aw. I love their names" said dustfur.all of a sudden cocoa burst into the den."FIRE."she said. tawny, amber, and dustfur each picked up a kit while cocoa led a path to a different exit opposite the fire. they reached the top and looked around. the campers there were 6 more sets of tenets near the tunnel only yards away."lets fly to a new area away from all these nofurs." she suggested."we cant fly with kits and they're eyes aren’t even open yet." amber said. "well we can last at least ,the maximum of 4 days before anyone sees us. but when they start getting closer we may have to walk to a new area." said tawny."wait where’s nightcloud."asked cocoa. "he went for more strawberries you know how he is with strawberries." tawny said."oh" she said. 4 days later tawny stood pacing in the den." wait, wait, wait they're eyes are opening" she said "really" tawny asked. "yeah they're all open".one of the kits hoppped over-stumbled got back up and started to hop all around the tunnel walk way except for were they had blocked they exits.
soon the others followed. 4 hours later nightcloud hadn’t returned. they’d been out looking in shifts but couldn’t find him. an hour passed. the kits grew tiny chicken wings. smudge actually got of the ground. tawny led the kits to the entrance to practice flying. earlier they had dug a other entrance and exit away from the nofurs. everybody was outside encouraging the kits when nightcloud appeared."nightcloud!" cocoa yelled. nightcloud explained that he was captured and meet another flying rabbit named coted. coted stepped out of the bushes."hi" she said shyly."well since our tunnel is to crowded and the nofurs coming closer we should get a move on." tawny said.they toke off. flying low for the kits ears. the wind blew tawnys fur and made a whistling noise."where exactly are we going" asked amber." "its a surprise" tawny said since he had no idea.wait what about the tunnel we found when dustfur was missing.thats a great idea we could dig it bigger and its far away from nofurs."what about that one tunnel?"tawny suggested."what tunnel" amber asked. "the one we found when dustfur was missing."oh" thats a good idea nightcloud said.45min. later they found it.they dug it bigger and made another den for cotton. tawny awoke warm, happy and away from the nofurs. amber , the kits, nightcloud,
cotton, dustfur, cocoa and tawny started renovating the new tunnel. when they were finished it was huge! when you walked in and toke a right there was amber and tawnys’ den. then there was a passage from there den to the kits no farther then 5 inches apart. then on the left was dustfur and cocoas den. then further on the left was cotton and nightclouds’ den. they were exhausted so they toke a nap. an hour later they decided to try and help the kits fly a little higher. goldkit awoke nice cozy and so warm. he hopped around to see who was asleep and who was awake. "pssssst!" he whispered to smudge and hazel. smudge moved and stood up. hazel woke after a couple of kicks."hey!" "don’t kick me!"she said angrily. "sorry I had to wake you." goldkit explained. awake at last they all sneaked out the entrance and toke to the skies. they flew for a couple minutes before smudge suggested going to the farmers garden. little did they know they had flown to the farmer that had strawberries and the one that also hated rabbits that’s were tawny was chased by the dog. they landed clumsily still unsure of how to land. hazel jumped 5ft in the air and grabbed a banana from a tree. "banana!" she yelled excitedly. she started to nibble off the skin. "mmmmmm" they all said as they nibbled the delicious banana." asjkd fhkajbjk asjkdhgljk asdljbn jmncvk ajksdghouiang !!!!" the two leg yelled waving a sharp stick toward the kits. "run!!!" goldkit yelled. they escaped just as the dog got out. it jumped and grabbed hazels’ left wing. "ahhhh!!!" she yelled in horror and pain."ahhh!!!" she screamed. the dog, with hazels wing still in his mouth, shook his head violently back and forth."no one messes with my sister!" yelled goldkit. he swooped down and landed on the back of the dog and bit it. it yelped dropping hazel to the ground. she landed with a silent thud. smudge swooped down and picked her up by the scruff and flew off. goldkit saw them leave and followed. back in the forest they landed. hazels wing was bitten and twisted."go get me some spiderwebs and that leaf right over they're." smudge said calmly but firmly. "how do you know which one it is?" goldkit asked. "cocoa showed me now hurry!!!" he yelled at the end. goldkit ran and found some spiderwebs and grabbed the leaf smudge told him to. smudge chewed the leaf into a pulp and laid it over the biggest wound. "owwwwwwwwwwww" hazel said weakly. all of a sudden smudge stopped and stood on his back legs. "nofur!" he screamed. goldkit started to run but turned back "what about hazel?" smudge asked. by then the nofur had spotted them. it came closer and picked up hazel. "get back here!" goldkit said. it kept walking. goldkit and smudge followed. it led them to a aboveground tunnel. another one came out. it picked up smudge and goldkit at the same time.
it walked them inside and set them on something soft and fluffy. they laid down on it."wow this is so soft." goldkit said. from where they were sitting they could see hazel. they hopped over and jumped on the ledge. they were sewing her wing back together with some shiny thing. hazels wing was all fixed but it had some thick cobweb around it. she woke up."wow, my wing feels better, stiff, but better.7 hours later after a nap they cut off the stuff. they moved her wing up and down. she didn’t even flinch. a couple min. later they let them go."are you ok?" smudge asked. "yeah im fine." she said. they flew back to the tunnel where tawny and amber where pacing back and forth outside the den."kits!" amber screamed. the kits landed and amber bombarded them with hugs and licks. "uhh" smudge said wiping his face. tawny, cocoa, dustfur, cotton, and nightcloud hopped over. "what happened to your wing, hazel?" cocoa asked. amber examined her wing. "the dog attacked it." hazel said. "what?!?!?!?!?!" tawny said."you went to the garden with the guard dog didn’t you, what have we told you about going there?" amber said. "there’s dogs over there" the kits mumbled together."lets get inside" cocoa said, already hopping out of the rain. they all hopped inside and went to their nests. A couple of hours later Tawny woke. he looked up and started towards the den entrance. Outside a bunch of rabbits were there. They turned towards Tawny just as he was sneaking up on them. Tawny guessed there was about 6 or 7 adults and 3 kits."Who are you?" tawny asked. The biggest one turned around and started walking towards tawny.
"I'm flame."he said. "im tawny" tawny said."we came to find a place to live and be safe from nofurs." he said. "ok well, its safe here but this is our land."
tawny said."may we stay here we could become one and be a very strong clan."
he said."I don’t know I have to ask the others." tawny said slowly."there are others?" he asked curiously. tawny hesitated. he didn’t want to tell these weird rabbits about the others in cause they were planning an attack."well have you thought about our offer?" flame asked. that was all tawny and the others could think about for the past day."yes. we’ve decided to join and become one." tawny said. he hoped he made the right decision."thank you. so shall we start work on our new dens?"flame suggested."uh, ok." amber said."very well then." they followed flame and came into a giant hole big enough to hold 2 or 3 nofurs. "wow!" smudge said. and now the were in a giant tunnel, the kits were staying and they had met a whole other group of flying rabbits. all in one day.he lay down beside amber in their huge den inside the huge tunnel.he hoped he would get sleep but couldnt promise anything.Tawny still felt kinda weird around these other rabbits, he thought as he lay down to sleep. Awhile later tawny awoke. He went outside but didn’t see the weird rabbits or their leader flame. “Where are the other rabbits and flame?” tawny asked. “Who?” cocoa said confused.”The other rabbits you know the ones that like wanted to join us and like, have a huge clan or something like that?” tawny said hoping she was just kidding. “I don’t know what your talking about.” Amber said. Either they were lying or it was all a dream.”but . . . they. and ..urgghh.”Tawny stuttered.”what are you talking about pa?”smudge asked. “Nothing.” tawny said. How could it have been a dream? Tawny didn’t understand, but he didn’t want to cause trouble. Instead he decided to go get some strawberries as a treat for the kits. He flew all the way to the farm and gathered as much strawberries as he could hold. Then he flew a couple yards from the kits dug a small hole and hid the strawberries. Then he went back and got even more strawberries. He flew back to the hiding spot and hid those too. He strolled into the opening and asked the kits if he wanted to play a hid and seek game. Of course they were excited. Tawny told them the rules and the kits set out for the scavenge for the strawberries. “I found them!!!!!!” screamed hazel. Tawny, Smudge and goldkit all ran over. “She gets first pick.” tawny said. “Awwwww.” smudge and goldkit said at the same time hazel yelled, “yesss!!!” . After hazel was done goldkit and smudge devoured what was left. Tawny smiled. Amber came up behind him. “ whats all over your faces?!?” amber asked thinking the juice was blood. “Its strawberry juice.” tawny said jokingly. “Oh.” amber said embarrassed. The kits giggled quietly. All of a sudden tawny heard a noise. A noise he had heard distinctly before.