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sonicbabe5 on July 27, 2006, 12:02:56 AM

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sonicbabe5Yes...I want her in the next story....thanks.....Please read this...U don't have 2 but....



One 16year old boy Michael and a 16 year old girl Sarah fell deeply in love since the very first day they met. They both lived in California but the girl had just moved there a year ago but fell for him so fast. Michael played on her dads football team he was the best player on the team and her dad saw him as a son of his own. Sarah was a cheerleader on the team and had everything she ever wanted. Until one day......her life crashes.

Mom: Wake up honey.. Michaels downstairs waiting for you.
Sarah: Oh my gosh.. I woke up to late I still need a shower and everything.
Right when she said that Michael walked into her room smiling from ear to ear.

Michael: No baby.. you're beautiful just like that now come on Im starven.
Sarah: Okay.
Sarah got out of bed put on some clothes and took his hand and walked out the door to his car and got in.

Sarah: Where are we going.. remember I have to be home by 1 .. i got cheerleaden practice and you have football.
Michael: I know..
Then Sarah noticed that Michael was really pale like he was sick or something.

Sarah: Michael are you feeling okay.. you look like you're sick?
Michael: yeah it's just my allergies.
Sarah: are you sure.. did you go to the doctors the other day?
Michael: yeah.. they just said take some allergie pills and I'll be okay.
Sarah turned to look away from Michael.. she knew there was something more than just allergies. She has allergies and she doesn't look like that. Then he reached out and held her hand.

Sarah: Ohh.. Michael your hands are cold. I dont think you're okay tell me whats really wrong..do you need to go back?
Michael: i promise you baby everything is okay..they told me to come back tomorrow but I aint going because theres nothing wrong with me.
Sarah: Michael you need to go...if they told you to then there is something wrong.
Michael let go of her hand and turned back to the road and didnt talk to her the rest of the way. Sarah just looked at him. They finally pullled up to the resturaunt and ate breakfast.

Michael: did you bring your cheerleading stuff or do we have to go back to your house to get it?
Sarah: No I have it....do you really think you should go to football like that ?
Michael: yes Sarah I'm fine.
Sarah: if you say so...
Michael:Sarah baby would I lie to you?
Sarah: no...
They got back in the car and went to the feild they got out and started practicen. Sarah was cheerleading and then out of no where they hear a boy yell..."HE'S NOT MOVING SOMEONE CALL 911..HELP COACH". Right when she heard that she turned around and saw Michael on the ground just laying there not moving. She ran to him and her dad pushed her back.
Dad: no honey you shouldnt be right here..
Sarah started to cry...
Sarah: daddy what happened is he ok?
Dad: honey just please go back with your coach
Sarah walked back and sat on the bench while the ambulance came and took him away. She got in the car with her dad and they went to the hospital. When they got there his mom was already there and talking to the Doctor. They walked over and listened.....

Doctor:You may want to sit down for this....
Michaels Mom: Is he okay?
Doctor: Mam..your son has lukiemia.....we can put him on treatments..but he might not make it because was caught it to late.
Sarah was shocked and began to cry on here dads shoulder.

Michaels Mom: what kind of treatments?
Doctor: well the treatments will cause loss of hair... but it will help slow the cancer down
Michaels Mom: but he's certain to die?
Doctor: well yeah.. but we have had this surgery to clear out the clogs.. but its possible he will not make it.
Michaels Mom: I understand... I will have to talk to him about this...can we see him now?
Doctor: one at a time though

Michaels mom looked over at Sarah and hugged her tight she knew that Sarah loved him with all her heart.

Michael's Mom: you go first sweetheart
Sarah: are you sure?
Michael's Mom: yes honey...

Sarah walks slowly to his room and turned the knob. She just stood looking at him laying there weak. He was so pale and he had cords hooked up to him and everything it was painful for her to look at him. Michael looked at her and weakly smiled at her. She went over and kneeled down beside of him.
Michael: did they already tell you?
Sarah: yes...
Michael: im sorry Sarah... i didnt want you to find out like this..
Sarah: it's ok I understand Michael....
Michael: baby I love you...(he ran his fingers through her hair)
Sarah: i love you to Michael.. with all my heart.. and I will be here for you till the end.
Michael: Im going to be okay Sarah...
The nurse walked in with Michaels mom.
Nurse: Its her turn now..

Michael looked at Sarah.....
Michael: bye baby....
Sarah: bye (she softly kissed him)

Months went by and Michael lost his hair but they was still deeply in love and Sarah was by him everyday. Michael was getting worse and he couldnt even play football and the championship game was coming up. Michael was sitting at Sarahs house with her dad and mom and her.

Michael: coach.. I wanna play tomorrow
Dad: Michael i know.. you're the best player..but I cant do that.. you'll get hurt.
Michael: No coach please this might be the last time on the field for me.. please I wanna be able to play one more time.
Dad looked at Michael and then at Sarah.

Dad: you're a strong boy Michael and very brave....i think we can do this.
Michael: thank you so much coach.
Dad: no problem.. so what are you two doing tonight?
Michael: i wanna show Sarah something if thats ok
Dad: of course you two be careful.
Michael took Sarahs hand and lead her outside to his car. It was completely dark outside when he pulled up the football field.

Sarah: what are we doing here?
Michael: come on
Michael grabbed a blanket and laid it down onto the field and they both laid there looking at the stars.

Sarah: this is beautiful
Michael: I do this often.. i wanted to show you the place I love ...
Sarah: i understand Michael .. do you remember the flowers you gave me when you first asked me out?
Michael: sure do i gave you lillies your favorite.
Sarah: yeah...best day of my life...
Michael: i want you to always remember something Sarah
Sarah: what?
Michael: I will always be with you.. and I love you.. you're my baby...
Sarah: i love you to
Michael: and I want you to be happy.. I want you to marry someone have kids make a family live a happy life for me.
Sarah: no i will never marry anyone.. im marrien you Michael
Michael: i love you so much
Michael raised up and kissed her. She pushed him off and jumped up

Sarah: you still think you can catch me??
Michael: oh yeah.. im stronger than what I look
Sarah: then come on
Michael stood up and chaised her around the football field and finally caught her. He laid on top of her and put her hands behind her head and held her there so she couldnt move. Then it started to rain and they were getting soaked but they didnt care Michael looked deep into her eyes.

Michael: whos the weak one now huh?
Sarah: Me (she giggled)
Michael: Remember what you told me that night when we was at dinner?
Sarah: no what?
Michael: you have always wanted to kiss in the rain with someone you love.
Sarah: yeah?
Michael: well your wish is my comand.
Michael leaned down and kissed her passionalty with all he had. He pulled away.

Michael: you're so beautiful
Sarah: you're such a good kisser (she laughed..so did he)
Michael: I better get you home
They got into the car and went home. It was hard for them to sleep that night but they did. It was finally the big day and they were all at the football field. Michael had on everything and Sarah was out there cheerin him on. The game begin.. the crowd was going wild for Michael and Sarah was cheerin her lil heart out for him. The score was 36 to 36. All they had to do was make one more point and they would win. Michael had the ball he ran with all he had he made it to the touchdown line and threw the ball down he had made a touch down everyone was cheering. They had won the game.. but for Michael he may have lost his life. He fell to the ground trien to catch his breath. Sarah ran to him and kneeled down over him. He looked up at her gasping for breath everyone was headen to field.. Then her dad stood up
Dad: Back away.. give them a moment please...thats my daughters love

Michael gently raised his hand touched her whiped her tears away.

Sarah: dont die Michael.. i need you.. I love you..
Michael: i told you this was my dream to win the championship.. to be in the big game.. to die on this field... i made history
Sarah leaned down and kissed him knowing this was the last she will ever kiss him last time she would ever talk to him she had so much to say but didnt have time.

Michael: I love you baby...........tell mom i love her to..and tell coach thanks
Sarah: I love you Michael so much..
Michael: ill wait for you..
Michaels hand dropped and he let go.. he died that night on the football field. Sarah cried for 2months straight... Sarah was lien in her bed when her dad walked in.

Dad: honey its been 2months... please get up.. he would want you to have fun and be happy..
Sarah: i know
Dad: guess what
Sarah: what
Dad: they are buildin a new stadium aint that great honey come on I want you to come with me... before they tear the old one down..
Sarah got up and went with her dad they climbed to the top of the bleachers and looked down.

Sarah: its like it was just yesterday he was out there throwin the football maken the touchdown.
Her dad wrapped his arms around when she began to cry.

Dad: i know baby.. I know
Then Sarah noticed something on the field.

Sarah: whats that daddy look?
Dad: look like flowers blooming.
Sarah: oh my gosh daddy stop them dont let them tear this down please.. Michael planted me something.
Her dad ran down there and stopped them.
Weeks later the flowers had bloomed and her dad and her went and looked at it... They were lillies that left a message saying "I Love You".

If you have any heart at all and love someone this much repost this...............dude its sad just think if this happend to someone u loved.....I reposted this 4 My babe

Mattkur on July 26, 2006, 10:35:58 PM

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MattkurBowser's Castle.

Mattkur on July 26, 2006, 12:46:52 AM

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MattkurYeah. I just beat it about a week ago. Mario and Luigi Superstar Saga was a great game.

Gamer_girl on July 24, 2006, 7:07:33 AM

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Gamer_girlid luv 2 read yer story =3

Mattkur on July 22, 2006, 10:36:38 PM

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Mattkurone of the better ones!

Mattkur on July 22, 2006, 11:16:17 AM

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MattkurI just beat Mario & Luigi: Superstar Saga! That's where the pic up there is from!

sonicknuxfans on July 22, 2006, 5:01:19 AM

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sonicknuxfansthankies so whats u up 2? i'm drawing Cloud from final fantasy ^^ he is so cool and fun 2 draw

sonicknuxfans on July 22, 2006, 4:41:43 AM

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sonicknuxfanshiya wanna be friends^^?

gamergirl2 on July 21, 2006, 1:38:28 AM

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gamergirl2like i said my friend did most of the work its hard to explain..*sighs* well if my friend is online i will tell her to come talk to you...i feel dumb i cant explain very well.

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