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"sure I do Marlin! thanks!" "no problem..." Marlin said again smiling he's new at thank you's so bear with him. Meghan then after she was done talking with Marlin, went in the water. Just then a giant wave crashed over Meghan, and only the three bachelors noticed. "ohmygosh! we have to save her!" rock screemed at Marlin and Gustafa, "I can save her that fastest." Marlin told rock. "says who?" "me, I was once the champ at my high school at swimming." "so, maybe I like to swim, so I swim more." "guys, don't do this, fighting just clouds your inner soul..," Gustafa said. "Gustafa, sorry but we don't need your wisdom right now..." Marlin said. "I thought the older you get, the wiser you get." Rock said looking at Marlin. "Rock, are you calling me old?" Marlin asked, as Meghan was still drownding. "Maybe, maybe Meghan likes YOUNG BLOOD!" Rock yelled at Marlin. "Or, she likes, people who do the same job as her, oh right I do, and you don't have a job!" Marlin sceamed at Rock. "guys, i still suggest that you stop this conflict, so you can save Meghan, who is still drownding." Gustafa told the other two bachelors. "AHHH!!!!" both Marlin and Rock screamed. "I'm scared... you go save her!" Rock said as he chickened out. "Ok, fine," Marlin said as he jumped into the ice-cold ocean water to save one of his true loves.

SOME MORE!!! that's the end of the chapter... the rest of the beach party, Meghan sorta just sat there on her towel and sorta just sat there, while Marlin looked cold... I"M DOING A SIDE CHAPTER!!! ABOUT THAT! BECAUSE I guess that is the end of the chapter... but I want to comtinue it.

some more of my story, I'm NOT STUCK!!! just taking a break between so I can show you it:

<h3>Chapter 6</h3>
<h3>~~~The Beach Party</h3>

<br>"Ok, got my towel, my bathing suit, I think that's it!" Meghan said. "woof!" Rover wanted to come too. "Ok, you can come, just don't bite anybody, or bark at them." "woof!" Now at Vesta's house, they are getting ready for the beach party too. "You coming Marlin?" Celia asked. "No." Marlin answered. "why not?" celia asked, "because I HATE water..." "why?" "egh... childhood... Vesta used to ALWAYS dunk my head under the water at pool parties..." Marlin answered. "well, I'll teel her not to." "thanks." Marlin answered to CELIA'S praise... " "You 'love birds' coming?" Vesta asked, just having the coincidedance when she said 'love birds'...</br><p>
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<br>"hey, Meghan! you came!" a blond man said running up in light blue swimming shorts. "I know we've met, but, names Rock! if you forgot..." Rock mentioned. "I remember your name, Rock." Meghan answered. "WOOF!" Rover barked at Rock, madly. "Cute dog. what's his name?" Rock asked. "Rover, his name is rover." "I'm a fan of dogs." Rock said. "oh, and I heard the waves are really small, so they aren't a problem!" Rock exclaimed. "k, I'm glad, wanted to go swimming today!" Meghan said running off to get a spot near the water. "uh... agh... *sigh*" Rock then ran to his spot, next to his mom and dad. "Ok, this seems like a good spot... how do you think rover?" "WOOF!" "well, you could have just said it nicely..." "i don't think he's barking at you man." "oh, hi Gustafa! how is your gutiar work coming along?" "fine, sister. Have a good song, want to listen to it later?" "sure gustafa!" "see yeah soon Meghan!" "bye Gustafa!, now Rover, how about the spot?" "woof!" "I thought so too." "woof!" "i know" "woof!" "ok, really rover, what?" "he might be barking at me..." Marlin said. "Marlin. didn't know you were coming." "i normally don't come to these kind of things... but I did for you, because I heard you were coming." "thanks" "no problem." Marlin said smiling. "I got you some Veggie Juice... If you want it." Marlin said. (cute, yes? I thought so, after I finish talking to Marlin, *who is wearing blue plaid swimming shorts that have tomato's on the back butt cheeks sexy, no?* Meghan goes for a dip, and a wave crashes over her head, and she starts to dowrnd, and then the bachlors start fighting... how sad... now who should save her? all three? of just like Marlin or something? I think Marlin, because, Rock chickens out, afraid he might get the same treatment as Meghan... and I dunno about Gustafa just yet... maybe he doesn't like you in that kind of way... *coughcoughmaybe...coughcough* or not... great... now I can't get the image of Marlin with those sexy shorts on.... ewww.... GAR!!! GET OUTTA MY HEAD!!! I might go to bed after typing my story a little more... Gustafa is actully wearing green shorts and a rash guard... so he's probably the least sexiest... rock is the middle and Marlin the most... like here's a scale:

(1-10, 1 being your UG.LY., 10 being, IS IT HOT IN HERE? OR IS IT YOU?)

Rock: 5 (cute, and might wanta kiss level, sorta sexy...)
Marlin: 100 (ok, 10... DEATH >.< once you see, gotta kiss, unless you wanta die... TOTAL SEXYNESS!!!)
Gustafa: 2 (or 1... depends... hi your my friend level... NOT AT ALL SEXY... poor him...)
Meghan: hmmm... 8 (since they ALL LOVE YOU, they would fight over you if your in your farming out fit or in a cute little , lightblue, blue and green bikini... so yeah... I SO want to kiss you level... but since they have NO idea if you like em' enough, so they won't scoop to that level, and if they do, *which a certain blond happy-go-lucky 22-year old happen to kiss you at a bad time... *next CHAPTER!!! you can't wait can you?** you get pissed off *and a little upset too* and a certain black haired anti-social 32-year old has seen it, and gets upset at you... can't wait till the chapter can you?*

that's enough chating form me... I talk WAY to much, throw me and my brother in a room and we won't grow bored for a LONG time...

BYE! (I'm going to maybe sleep in the living room, so I can go to bed when I'm done with the next chapter, or I get bored...)

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I'm almost done with day 7! then i can sell things tomorrow! and then it's day 9! and then THAE LAST DAY OF YEAR 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

screw that last comment about the year 2 thing... my math is messed up and the TV goes off auto like at 1:00, and It's 12:19 ish... didn't even finish day 6, and i was on day 5 at like 9:00... so I just went to bed... I'm going to bed... night!

yo, probably by the time you read this, I'll be on year 2 of Chapter 2!!! YEAH!!! not there yet though... I'm on day 6 I think... close! here's my Harvest Moon story:

Chapter 1

~~~The New Farm Girl


"Where do I get my veggi seeds?" Meghan asked. "At Vesta's farm." Tak replied. Meghan was a young city girl, she found out her dad had a farm, and she decided to see it, and live in the valley. The owner of the farm, his name is Tak, he was Meghan's dad's best friend, and wanted to see how Meghan taking over the farm would turn out to be like. "And, I don't mean to be pushy, but, you should get a husband, so he can help you on the farm." Tak was telling Meghan. "OK." Meghan answered in repliy. They did meet three intresting bachlors, Rock, a blond 22 year old, Marlin, a anti-social 32 year old, and Gustufa, a young hippe. Meghan seemed to have her eye more on Marlin, the 32 year old anti-social guy, he also worked on a farm, with his older sister, Vesta, and a young girl, Celia. Meghan was new, but she knew a few things. She knew that having her own farm would be tough, and she knew what Tak meant, "And, I don't mean to be pushy, but, you should get a husband, so he can help you on the farm." those were his words, and she knew she did need some help. Lets go check out what their doing at Vesta's place...

Chapter 2

~~~Meeting Marlin


"Everything is done all ready, so you can go talk to people for the rest of the day." Tak was telling Meghan. "ok!" Meghan shouted and ran out of the farm. "Kids these days, can't keep them from talking to each other..." Tak commented to himself. Meghan ran all the way to Vesta's place. She met up with a lady, with pick boots. "Hey! Your Meghan! The new farm girl, names Vesta! Marlin's older sis!" Vesta exclaimed to Meghan. "Hi. Nice to meet you Vesta... where's Marlin?" Meghan then asked wanting to get away from her. "Oh, he's not here right now, he's at the town to pick up some fruit." Vesta then told Meghan. Well, tomorrow is another day...

Chapter 3

~~~Now, Time to Meet Marlin!


Meghan, after she was done with all her farm work, was running towards Vesta's farm again, when she got there, once again, they weren't there... why aren't they there anymore? Meghan walked home, and she gave up hope...
(told you it was short...)

Chapter 4

~~~Finally!!!


One day, Meghan was just walking around her giant field, when she bumped into someone. "Hey, heard you were looking for me." a familar voice said. "uhh.. yeah..." Meghan said sorta stutering relizing that Marlin was more handsome close up. "So, what's up?" Marlin asked. "Nothing... much... just wondering which veggi's are in season right now..." Meghan replied. "Apples, Corn, and Tomatoes." Marlin told Meghan. Marlin, seems to be sorta "putting the moves" on Meghan, she's taking the bait. "So what have you been doing?" Marlin asked Meghan. "Nothing much..." Meghan answered. "I'm not doing anything tomorrow, around 8:00, wanta' meet here, on a date?" sexy Marlin asked. "uh... s-s-sure.... Mar-Mar-Marlin..." Meghan repiled stutering a lot. "Sounds good." Marlin answered. "See you tomorrow." Marlin then walked away without another word.

Chapter 5

~~~A Date Gone Wrong


Meghan went outside to wait for Marlin. He showed up a few minutes later. "You can ask me about anything about veggi's anytime." Marlin said walking up to you. "That's very kind of you." Meghan complimented Marlin. "Don't say things like that..." Marlin said unexpectently... "Why?" Meghan asked out of confusion. "I don't know how to respond to it." Marlin replied. "So... what do... you like?" Marlin asked moving in, for a kiss. "HEY THERE YOU ARE MARLIN!!!" a woman's voice screamed up Meghan's Farm. It was Vesta, looking for Marlin. "Where have you been?" Vesta asked. "Vesta, my love life - er, what I do with my extra time, is not of your buisness anymore, I'm 32!" Marlin started to argue with his older sister. "Hey, Meghan, were having a beach party tomorrow, annual. 1:00." Vesta was telling Meghan, Marlin and Vesta walked back to their farm.

Chapter 6

~~~The Beach Party


"Ok, got my towel, my bathing suit, I think that's it!" Meghan said. "woof!" Rover wanted to come too. "Ok, you can come, just don't bite anybody, or bark at them." "woof!" (that's so far of Chapter 6)

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