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Naruto: The Ryu Kozaku Chronicles

This is the Story of Ryu Kozaku, a Boy who has A monster, Onaga the Dragon Emperor, inside of him.What is This Beast? And Why has it fallen to darkness? Read and Learn the Story that started it all...

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - “Before the Beginning…”
Submitted: October 15, 2008 • Updated: October 15, 2008
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Chapter 2 - "RYU APPEARS!"
Submitted: October 15, 2008 • Updated: October 16, 2008
Word count: 328 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 541

Chapter 3 - “The Chunnin Exams Await!"
Submitted: October 16, 2008 • Updated: October 17, 2008
Word count: 378 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 465

Chapter 4 - "I am a monster...and nothing else..."
Submitted: October 17, 2008 • Updated: October 17, 2008
Word count: 586 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 389

Chapter 5 - "Ryu Kozaku versus Snowie!"
Submitted: October 20, 2008 • Updated: October 21, 2008
Word count: 516 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 495

Chapter 6 - “Neo Kozaku Versus Elena!”
Submitted: October 21, 2008 • Updated: October 21, 2008
Word count: 400 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 479

Chapter 7 - “Gigi Versus Tora!”
Submitted: October 23, 2008 • Updated: October 24, 2008
Word count: 174 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 484

Chapter 8 - “Luna Versus Hexa!”
Submitted: October 24, 2008 • Updated: October 24, 2008
Word count: 188 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 480

Chapter 9 - “The Final Fight: Shizu versus Axle!”
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
Word count: 144 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 450

Chapter 10 - “NEW Friends of the Kozaku Clan!”
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
Word count: 402 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 801

Chapter 11 - “The Finals’ Line-ups!”
Submitted: October 28, 2008 • Updated: October 28, 2008
Word count: 250 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 455

Chapter 12 - “The Finals Begin, and the true Mitsusa!”
Submitted: October 28, 2008 • Updated: October 29, 2008
Word count: 425 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 488

Chapter 13 - “The Fight Between Two Allies!”
Submitted: October 29, 2008 • Updated: October 29, 2008
Word count: 516 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 452

Chapter 14 - "The Finals: Kurai versus Elena! (part 1)"
Submitted: October 30, 2008 • Updated: October 30, 2008
Word count: 176 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 484

Chapter 15 - “The Finals: Kurai Versus Elena (Part 2)!”
Submitted: October 30, 2008 • Updated: October 30, 2008
Word count: 433 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 801

Chapter 16 - “The Finals: Ryu Kozaku versus Axle! (PART 1)”
Submitted: October 31, 2008 • Updated: October 31, 2008
Word count: 432 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 711

Chapter 17 - “The Finals: Ryu Kozaku versus Axle (Part 2)!
Submitted: October 31, 2008 • Updated: October 31, 2008
Word count: 313 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 741

Chapter 18 - “Ryu’s First Mission, The Sacred Scroll!”
Submitted: November 3, 2008 • Updated: November 3, 2008
Word count: 245 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 728

Chapter 19 - “The search for Members! (Part 1)”
Submitted: November 5, 2008 • Updated: November 6, 2008
Word count: 93 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 477

Chapter 20 - “The search for Members! (Part 2)
Submitted: November 5, 2008 • Updated: November 6, 2008
Word count: 312 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 449

Chapter 21 - “The Search for The The third Member!”
Submitted: November 6, 2008 • Updated: November 6, 2008
Word count: 315 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 459

Chapter 22 - “The Quest for The Scroll: Kurai is found!”
Submitted: November 7, 2008 • Updated: November 7, 2008
Word count: 195 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 692

Chapter 23 - “The Golden Scroll is found!”
Submitted: November 10, 2008 • Updated: November 10, 2008
Word count: 331 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 466

Chapter 24 - “The End Is Near: Orochimaru Appears!”
Submitted: November 10, 2008 • Updated: November 12, 2008
Word count: 231 • Size: 1k • Comments: 7 • views: 483

Chapter 25 - “The Fight against Thyself!”
Submitted: November 12, 2008 • Updated: November 12, 2008
Word count: 141 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 706

Chapter 26 - "Kurai's Decision!"
Submitted: November 12, 2008 • Updated: November 12, 2008
Word count: 271 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 464

Chapter 27 - “The Beast is Unleashed…”
Submitted: November 13, 2008 • Updated: November 14, 2008
Word count: 378 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 725

Chapter 28 - “The Beast is Unleashed: Episode 2”
Submitted: November 14, 2008 • Updated: November 14, 2008
Word count: 136 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 752

Chapter 29 - “Orochimaru versus The Corrupted Ryu!”
Submitted: November 17, 2008 • Updated: November 17, 2008
Word count: 220 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 691

Chapter 30 - “Orochimaru Versus The Corrupted Ryu! (Episode 2)”
Submitted: November 17, 2008 • Updated: November 18, 2008
Word count: 265 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 464

Chapter 31 - “Ryu’s Nightmare…"
Submitted: November 18, 2008 • Updated: November 18, 2008
Word count: 431 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 722

Chapter 32 - “Ryu is missing!”
Submitted: November 18, 2008 • Updated: November 19, 2008
Word count: 241 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 436

Chapter 33 - “Ryu is Found…”
Submitted: November 19, 2008 • Updated: November 19, 2008
Word count: 335 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 430

Chapter 34 - “Ryu versus Naruto: The First Blood! (part 1)”
Submitted: November 19, 2008 • Updated: November 19, 2008
Word count: 85 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 459

Chapter 35 - “Onaga, The Dragon Emperor Appears…”
Submitted: November 20, 2008 • Updated: November 20, 2008
Word count: 295 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 765

Chapter 36 - “Onaga: First Form…”
Submitted: November 20, 2008 • Updated: November 20, 2008
Word count: 230 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 716

Chapter 37 - “Onaga: Second Form…”
Submitted: November 21, 2008 • Updated: November 21, 2008
Word count: 210 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 489

Chapter 38 - “Onaga: Third Form…”
Submitted: November 24, 2008 • Updated: November 24, 2008
Word count: 194 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 429

Chapter 39 - “Onaga: Fourth Form…”
Submitted: November 24, 2008 • Updated: November 24, 2008
Word count: 178 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 747

Chapter 40 - "ONAGA: AWAKENED..."
Submitted: November 24, 2008 • Updated: November 24, 2008
Word count: 309 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 370

Chapter 41 - “It is a God’s War…”
Submitted: November 25, 2008 • Updated: November 25, 2008
Word count: 279 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 438

Chapter 42 - “Naruto Fights Back!”
Submitted: November 26, 2008 • Updated: November 26, 2008
Word count: 107 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 423

Chapter 43 - “A Trip Down Memory Lane…”
Submitted: November 26, 2008 • Updated: November 26, 2008
Word count: 169 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 441

Chapter 44 - “Axle Appears, and Ryu’s Feeling are heard!”
Submitted: December 1, 2008 • Updated: December 1, 2008
Word count: 308 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 427

Chapter 45 - "Neo is found: On top of the Volcano!”
Submitted: December 1, 2008 • Updated: December 2, 2008
Word count: 240 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 441

Chapter 46 - “Rolus versus Elena: The fight for Neo's Freedom!”
Submitted: December 3, 2008 • Updated: December 3, 2008
Word count: 345 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 403

Chapter 47 - “Kurai and Tora are found: Inside the Pyramids!”
Submitted: December 3, 2008 • Updated: December 4, 2008
Word count: 143 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 414

Chapter 48 - “The Trials Await: Neo’s Turn to shine!”
Submitted: December 4, 2008 • Updated: December 4, 2008
Word count: 249 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 414

Chapter 49 - “The King of the Desert Appears!”
Submitted: December 4, 2008 • Updated: December 4, 2008
Word count: 334 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 679

Chapter 50 - “Another trip in the darkness: Ryu is Close!”
Submitted: December 9, 2008 • Updated: December 9, 2008
Word count: 115 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 427

Chapter 51 - “The Terror Awaits: The Sea Serpent Appears!"
Submitted: December 10, 2008 • Updated: December 10, 2008
Word count: 156 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 426

Chapter 52 - “Inside the Belly of the Serpent!”
Submitted: December 10, 2008 • Updated: December 11, 2008
Word count: 201 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 415

Chapter 53 - “The Team Strikes Back!”
Submitted: December 17, 2008 • Updated: December 17, 2008
Word count: 188 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 408

Chapter 54 - “The Truth…”
Submitted: December 18, 2008 • Updated: December 18, 2008
Word count: 198 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 384

Chapter 55 - “Stairway to Heaven!”
Submitted: December 18, 2008 • Updated: December 18, 2008
Word count: 157 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 428

Chapter 56 - “The Dragon’s Tale…”
Submitted: December 22, 2008 • Updated: December 23, 2008
Word count: 357 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 698

Chapter 57 - “Ryu: Through the Eyes of Madness…”
Submitted: January 6, 2009 • Updated: January 6, 2009
Word count: 220 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 407

Chapter 58 - “Torashu comes out…”
Submitted: January 8, 2009 • Updated: January 8, 2009
Word count: 189 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 706

Chapter 59 - “Torashu: Reawakened!”
Submitted: January 12, 2009 • Updated: January 12, 2009
Word count: 248 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 406

Chapter 60 - “The Last Remaining Ninjas!”
Submitted: January 14, 2009 • Updated: January 14, 2009
Word count: 130 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 462

Chapter 61 - “The answers are Behind the Portal!"
Submitted: January 20, 2009 • Updated: January 20, 2009
Word count: 179 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 689

Chapter 62 - "The Truth is told..."
Submitted: January 21, 2009 • Updated: January 21, 2009
Word count: 434 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 326

Chapter 63 - “Along Came A Ninja!”
Submitted: January 29, 2009 • Updated: January 29, 2009
Word count: 146 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 407

Chapter 64 - “The Trap is sprung: A demon of great heights!”
Submitted: March 5, 2009 • Updated: March 5, 2009
Word count: 128 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 667

Chapter 65 - "Fist of Freedom."
Submitted: April 9, 2009 • Updated: April 10, 2009
Word count: 183 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 359

Chapter 66 - "An Easy Rescue: Dez Is Saved!"
Submitted: May 18, 2009 • Updated: May 18, 2009
Word count: 240 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 392

Chapter 67 - “The Show Down! Dez vs. Chihiro and Mitsusa!”
Submitted: June 9, 2009 • Updated: June 9, 2009
Word count: 373 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 349

Chapter 68 - "State of Pain: Sasuke with a Vengeance."
Submitted: October 23, 2009 • Updated: October 24, 2009
Word count: 61 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 375

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thingy on October 29, 2009, 9:00:55 AM

thingy on (Chapter: 8)
thingyo0o

thingy on October 29, 2009, 8:55:15 AM

thingy on (Chapter: 68)
thingylol nice part about the ill fiish later thingy

pinky123 on October 28, 2009, 11:07:42 AM

pinky123 on (Chapter: index)
pinky123nice can't wait till next chapter Love it Great

animespring on July 3, 2009, 3:37:42 AM

animespring on (Chapter: 26)
animespringOROCHIMARU GOT PWNED!!!
XD

dingocat on July 1, 2009, 11:49:43 PM

dingocat on (Chapter: 4)
Comment Deleted

taraforest on June 29, 2009, 5:37:11 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 67)
taraforestwOOt
can't wait for the next chapter
(^-^)

erandor3 on June 23, 2009, 11:31:47 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 67)
erandor3hurry up and make my oc appear o3o!!!!!

Forestdahedgehog on June 16, 2009, 4:12:32 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 67)
ForestdahedgehogRyu: You’re serious? Can you not kill them in the process please?

Dez: I’ll see what I can do you just go!

Torashu: Just be careful…
--------------------
Favorote part here XD That just made me laugh! Dont kil them XD lol Good job! Moar x3 Pweeze

arijo on June 3, 2009, 12:04:45 AM

arijo on (Chapter: 66)
arijoawesome!^^

CaremelKyoko on May 28, 2009, 11:14:16 PM

CaremelKyoko on (Chapter: index)
CaremelKyokoBest!Hey everyone here ! check out my first submition!n comments needed~!XD

animespring on May 27, 2009, 10:15:48 PM

animespring on (Chapter: 24)
animespringhaha everyone laughing about michael jackson
XD

animespring on May 27, 2009, 7:48:32 PM

animespring on (Chapter: 16)
animespring"awesome hothead"
haha!

animespring on May 27, 2009, 7:33:18 PM

animespring on (Chapter: 14)
animespringpoor Ryu

animespring on May 26, 2009, 1:07:15 AM

animespring on (Chapter: 13)
animespringMitsusa was scary!

animespring on May 26, 2009, 12:38:36 AM

animespring on (Chapter: 9)
animespringhaha!!
Cool!!^^

animespring on May 26, 2009, 12:36:15 AM

animespring on (Chapter: 8)
animespringYAY!!!!!
WOOHOOOO!!^^

animespring on May 26, 2009, 12:26:34 AM

animespring on (Chapter: 7)
animespringcool!!^^

animespring on May 26, 2009, 12:23:25 AM

animespring on (Chapter: 6)
animespringman, this is so good!!^^

animespring on May 26, 2009, 12:08:31 AM

animespring on (Chapter: 5)
animespringWOOHOOOOOO!!!!
hehe

animespring on May 25, 2009, 11:59:31 PM

animespring on (Chapter: 4)
animespringRyu vs Snowie!!
so cool!!!^^

animespring on May 25, 2009, 11:39:08 PM

animespring on (Chapter: 3)
animespringso excited!^^

animespring on May 25, 2009, 11:28:06 PM

animespring on (Chapter: 2)
animespring"I’ll Skin you alive, stitch your skin back, then skin you again!"

haha!!!
so funny!!^^

animespring on May 25, 2009, 11:23:20 PM

animespring on (Chapter: 1)
animespringme likey likey^^

Vhee on May 9, 2009, 3:59:34 AM

Vhee on (Chapter: 1)
VheeWell, I wanted to see what kind of writing skill you had, and I must say well done! Good structure, no grammar problems, and an easy read. I don't like Naruto, but I just wanted to check this out. ^^

Great job!

taraforest on May 5, 2009, 11:16:40 PM

taraforest on (Chapter: 65)
taraforestyay good job (^-^)

Forestdahedgehog on May 2, 2009, 2:18:28 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 65)
Forestdahedgehog-dances- Good job! Moar -noms your head-

Repaa on April 23, 2009, 2:47:29 AM

Repaa on (Chapter: 3)
RepaaAwsumness!

Repaa on April 23, 2009, 2:24:45 AM

Repaa on (Chapter: 2)
RepaaHa! Poor Rock Lee... XP

Repaa on April 23, 2009, 2:17:37 AM

Repaa on (Chapter: 1)
RepaaCool! This may take a while to read...

arijo on April 9, 2009, 4:04:16 AM

arijo on (Chapter: 68)
arijogood story but why is it all the same story in each chapter?

andr28a on March 5, 2009, 1:42:48 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 64)
andr28aI high ranker. This should be interesting

taraforest on February 2, 2009, 6:32:40 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 63)
taraforesthurrah
now for the rest of em

andr28a on January 29, 2009, 5:07:11 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 63)
andr28aFound one at least

taraforest on January 27, 2009, 10:25:26 PM

taraforest on (Chapter: 62)
taraforestwow
it's really good
(^-^)

andr28a on January 21, 2009, 12:47:48 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 62)
andr28aThe final battle approaches

taraforest on January 20, 2009, 10:28:06 PM

taraforest on (Chapter: 61)
taraforestso cool
can't wait to see what happens next
(^-^)

andr28a on January 20, 2009, 2:59:58 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 61)
andr28aTo Gandora

erandor3 on January 19, 2009, 7:17:27 PM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 60)
erandor3CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!!!! >:P i cant wait till my Oc ish put in o3o

Forestdahedgehog on January 17, 2009, 10:48:42 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 60)
Forestdahedgehogfind the others xD hurry!

andr28a on January 14, 2009, 8:17:25 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 60)
andr28aHurry find the others

lumbeelove on January 14, 2009, 4:23:24 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 60)
lumbeeloveLeave Sasuke there!!! He doesn't need to be found!

andr28a on January 12, 2009, 5:46:18 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 59)
andr28aRyu has finally been found....or has Naruto's group been found.....

andr28a on January 12, 2009, 5:44:19 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 58)
andr28aThe Dragon rises

Forestdahedgehog on January 12, 2009, 9:18:20 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 59)
Forestdahedgehogyay!they found us!WERE GONNA LIIIVE X3 lol

Forestdahedgehog on January 12, 2009, 9:17:04 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 58)
Forestdahedgehoggo torashu,go!

Forestdahedgehog on January 12, 2009, 9:15:56 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 57)
Forestdahedgehogo-o woah..no skin

axle on January 8, 2009, 11:09:09 PM

axle on (Chapter: index)
axlekeep up the good work doom!!! woo0o0o0o0ooo0o u can do it !!

andr28a on January 6, 2009, 3:36:10 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 57)
andr28aWow thats some wake up call

snowieXchan on January 5, 2009, 2:26:35 AM

snowieXchan on (Chapter: 35)
snowieXchantis shall be a great battle!
snowie's probably just all like "holy s***...O_O'''"
xD

snowieXchan on January 5, 2009, 2:10:31 AM

snowieXchan on (Chapter: 34)
snowieXchanfighhht! xD

snowieXchan on January 5, 2009, 2:07:27 AM

snowieXchan on (Chapter: 33)
snowieXchannoooeeeess!
*gets tissue*

andr28a on December 24, 2008, 5:00:20 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 56)
andr28aYeah lets go all the way to Hell

axle on December 22, 2008, 10:58:06 PM

axle on (Chapter: 56)
axleomg *takes pictures * awsome XP

Forestdahedgehog on December 22, 2008, 7:26:55 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 56)
Forestdahedgehogohhhhhhhhhhhhh,cool,the underworld :O always wanted 2 go there :3 lol

Forestdahedgehog on December 22, 2008, 7:24:40 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 55)
Forestdahedgehogzomg,a white dragon :O i luffs dragons :O sachi,hug the dragon 4 me!!or sumone at least TT-TT lol XD

Forestdahedgehog on December 22, 2008, 7:23:21 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 54)
Forestdahedgehoggood boy Kragor,good boy :3 helping us out gets us 1 step closer 2 Ryu and Torashu

Forestdahedgehog on December 22, 2008, 7:21:36 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 53)
Forestdahedgehoglol,what andr28a said XD lol..who knew XD

andr28a on December 19, 2008, 8:09:08 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 55)
andr28aThe realm of the Gods. Wonder what things lie within it

andr28a on December 19, 2008, 8:05:43 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 54)
andr28aA sea God, cool

axle on December 18, 2008, 10:50:33 PM

axle on (Chapter: 55)
axlewow lol so many demons

andr28a on December 17, 2008, 2:29:08 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 53)
andr28aA simple small rice ball sorted this whole problem LOL

Forestdahedgehog on December 14, 2008, 2:27:20 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 52)
Forestdahedgehogzomg o-o regeneration...woahs...cant wait 4 more :D

Forestdahedgehog on December 14, 2008, 2:25:58 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 51)
Forestdahedgehogoh noes!not shizu and sachi!:O lol,woot!
im pretty sure sachi tho was enjoying herself by talking with the serpent XD

Forestdahedgehog on December 14, 2008, 2:24:07 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 50)
Forestdahedgehoglol,-dont die! xD funneh

erandor3 on December 14, 2008, 12:02:19 AM

erandor3 on (Chapter: 52)
erandor3ive read all the other chapters and i love this XD cant wait for the next one and tell me wen erandor comes in.

i also forgot that erandor has a wolf demon sealed inside him as well and yellow chakra surrounds him wenever he goes into his demon form like naruto

axle on December 12, 2008, 1:33:01 AM

axle on (Chapter: 52)
axleregeneration scary 0.0

andr28a on December 10, 2008, 4:58:25 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 52)
andr28aSea Serpant is angry

andr28a on December 10, 2008, 4:55:45 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 51)
andr28aSea serpant. Cool

taraforest on December 10, 2008, 4:11:08 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 52)
taraforestsea monster that heals itself
that doesn't sound too good
(-_-)

axle on December 9, 2008, 11:31:04 PM

axle on (Chapter: 51)
axleomg a serpent gahhhhh!!!! ( kool a serpent lol)

axle on December 9, 2008, 11:02:06 PM

axle on (Chapter: 50)
axlespooky lol

andr28a on December 9, 2008, 4:53:32 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 50)
andr28aWhats in store for these two now

lumbeelove on December 9, 2008, 10:00:38 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 50)
lumbeeloveCan't wait for another chapter!

andr28a on December 5, 2008, 3:43:12 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 49)
andr28aThats that challenge done. Whats next

Forestdahedgehog on December 4, 2008, 9:49:00 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 49)
Forestdahedgehogyay 4 shiny glowyness x3 lol moaaar x3

Forestdahedgehog on December 4, 2008, 9:47:17 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 48)
Forestdahedgehoglol,luffs the dumb luck thing XD

lumbeelove on December 4, 2008, 4:17:56 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 49)
lumbeeloveyay!!

andr28a on December 4, 2008, 12:41:23 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 48)
andr28aWonder whats in the empty room

axle on December 3, 2008, 11:33:44 PM

axle on (Chapter: 48)
axlewow puzzles r eveil now lol i knew my sisters spongebob puzzle was bad lol^^

axle on December 3, 2008, 10:57:25 PM

axle on (Chapter: 47)
axlemust resist to not punch must resisdt burning bad X( lol

axle on December 3, 2008, 10:55:58 PM

axle on (Chapter: 46)
axleelectricity herts /)_^

Forestdahedgehog on December 3, 2008, 8:50:45 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 47)
Forestdahedgehoglol,sploading puzzles >w< lol..and i has a question-who ish this shizu? my oc or sum1 elses? ?-? x3

Forestdahedgehog on December 3, 2008, 8:48:58 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 46)
Forestdahedgehogwoot 4 mysterious hammers >w< lol

Forestdahedgehog on December 3, 2008, 8:31:29 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 45)
Forestdahedgehoglol,theres the chuck norris thing XD

Forestdahedgehog on December 3, 2008, 8:25:08 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 44)
Forestdahedgehoglol, who do u think u are?-Chuck Norris? tht made me laugh Cx

lumbeelove on December 3, 2008, 4:36:00 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 47)
lumbeelovepuzzles are fun

lumbeelove on December 3, 2008, 4:34:21 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 46)
lumbeelovegood job!

andr28a on December 3, 2008, 3:44:13 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 47)
andr28aPyramids and puzzles go hand in hand but if your not careful it could do the oposite effect you desired

andr28a on December 2, 2008, 11:34:19 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 46)
andr28aIs this a test. Once one person accomplishes a task another doorway opens

taraforest on December 2, 2008, 11:32:32 PM

taraforest on (Chapter: 46)
taraforestyay the magical hammer of magicalness
(^-^)

axle on December 2, 2008, 11:14:24 PM

axle on (Chapter: 45)
axlehopefully the eys easy to get lolXP

axle on December 2, 2008, 11:13:52 PM

axle on (Chapter: 45)
axleim not chuck norris lmao

taraforest on December 2, 2008, 11:05:37 PM

taraforest on (Chapter: 45)
taraforestwow this world is weird
rock monster dude is going down
(^-^)

andr28a on December 1, 2008, 4:55:13 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 45)
andr28aThis world gets wierder by the minute

lumbeelove on December 1, 2008, 4:32:48 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 45)
lumbeelovenice!
Elena needs to stop being brave
lol jk

lumbeelove on December 1, 2008, 4:25:53 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 44)
lumbeelovenice!

andr28a on December 1, 2008, 1:13:02 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 44)
andr28aThe longer they stay in this realm the more they learn about Ryu......interesting

taraforest on November 27, 2008, 2:10:28 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 43)
taraforesthmm mysterious portal
i wonder what they'll discover
(?_?)

andr28a on November 26, 2008, 4:35:31 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 43)
andr28aHmm a time protal or could it be another world that Onaga created using his demonic powers to warp time and space

Forestdahedgehog on November 26, 2008, 4:02:44 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 43)
Forestdahedgehogoh noes,tht ish so sad <:O

Forestdahedgehog on November 26, 2008, 4:00:58 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 42)
Forestdahedgehogo-o woah wats happening?

lumbeelove on November 26, 2008, 3:32:10 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 43)
lumbeelovecool!

andr28a on November 26, 2008, 2:16:22 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 42)
andr28aI have a bad feeling about this

lumbeelove on November 25, 2008, 11:55:26 PM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 42)
lumbeelovethe suspense is killing me!!

taraforest on November 25, 2008, 10:18:44 PM

taraforest on (Chapter: 40)
taraforestA combined force
Clever
(^-^)

Forestdahedgehog on November 25, 2008, 5:57:33 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 41)
ForestdahedgehogOWO TOTALLY KICK BUTT >D

Forestdahedgehog on November 24, 2008, 9:49:34 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 40)
ForestdahedgehogAWSUM COMBO MOVES XD i wonder how itll end owo

Forestdahedgehog on November 24, 2008, 9:47:41 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 39)
ForestdahedgehogO__________________O oh noes!!WERE ALL DOOMED!O3O

Forestdahedgehog on November 24, 2008, 9:46:21 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 38)
Forestdahedgehogo-o oh noes...1 more 2 go..tht does not sound good at all
o3o

lumbeelove on November 24, 2008, 5:07:01 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 40)
lumbeeloveawesome!!!!

andr28a on November 24, 2008, 4:04:39 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 40)
andr28aWho wins, who wins I can't wait

taraforest on November 24, 2008, 2:38:40 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 39)
taraforestFinal form
well he can't get any stronger
hopefuly
(O_o)

taraforest on November 24, 2008, 2:36:26 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 38)
taraforestFourth Form
(O_O)
It really can get worse can't it
how will they stop him
(-_-)

sonicfan1 on November 24, 2008, 1:28:21 AM

sonicfan1 on (Chapter: index)
sonicfan1awesomly done!

andr28a on November 24, 2008, 12:20:43 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 38)
andr28aThis is getting more problimatic by the second

Forestdahedgehog on November 23, 2008, 9:43:49 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 37)
ForestdahedgehogO-O GASPETH!!

taraforest on November 21, 2008, 7:12:36 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 37)
taraforeststage three (0_0) wow!

andr28a on November 21, 2008, 4:57:13 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 37)
andr28aHow many stages does this guy have

lumbeelove on November 21, 2008, 3:40:41 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 37)
lumbeelovecool

axle on November 21, 2008, 3:17:48 AM

axle on (Chapter: 24)
axlelol micheal jackson lol in my story hes a pedifile ninja lol

taraforest on November 21, 2008, 3:06:30 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 36)
taraforest(0_0) stage 2!!! could it get any worse ........ or maybe i shouldn't say that just in case

Forestdahedgehog on November 20, 2008, 7:38:31 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 36)
Forestdahedgehogo-o ih noes,stage 2

Forestdahedgehog on November 20, 2008, 7:36:48 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 35)
Forestdahedgehogwoahs!o-o awsumness!

Forestdahedgehog on November 20, 2008, 7:35:15 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 34)
Forestdahedgehogwoot!awsum!but short!

Forestdahedgehog on November 20, 2008, 7:34:28 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 33)
Forestdahedgehogoh,yes i agree with wat andr28a said!owo

lumbeelove on November 20, 2008, 4:24:05 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 35)
lumbeelovewhoa...didn't see that coming!

lumbeelove on November 20, 2008, 4:23:18 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 36)
lumbeeloveawesome!

Knucklescrazy on November 20, 2008, 3:44:23 AM

Knucklescrazy on (Chapter: 36)
KnucklescrazyRAWR!! WATCH OUT ONAGA!

andr28a on November 20, 2008, 12:48:39 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 35)
andr28aInteresting. It's time for Ryu's friend to save him from himself.

andr28a on November 19, 2008, 4:24:40 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 34)
andr28aA battle where only the heavens know the outcome

andr28a on November 19, 2008, 1:55:08 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 33)
andr28aUh Oh Onaga is back. This could turn out good Onaga the Demon King versus Kyubi the king of the Bijuu

andr28a on November 18, 2008, 5:59:59 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 32)
andr28aIf Onaga still has a hold of Ryu this could be quite the problem very quickly

andr28a on November 18, 2008, 5:57:08 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 31)
andr28aPoor Ryu

Forestdahedgehog on November 18, 2008, 9:44:33 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 32)
Forestdahedgehognuu,ryu!comes baaack!
woot >w<

Forestdahedgehog on November 18, 2008, 9:43:03 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 31)
Forestdahedgehogzomahgawd!is tht how ryu's mom rly died o-o thts terrible!TT-TT

Forestdahedgehog on November 18, 2008, 9:40:38 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 30)
Forestdahedgehogaw,poor ryu >o< i shall gives him a hugs 2 make him better XD*hugs him*WOOT

Forestdahedgehog on November 18, 2008, 9:39:02 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 29)
Forestdahedgehogwoahs!poor snakie snake DX lol

andr28a on November 17, 2008, 8:38:19 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 30)
andr28aWonder what he'll be like when he wakes up?

andr28a on November 17, 2008, 1:12:57 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 29)
andr28aManda's been through this once before. Hope he managed to shed his skin in time and lives

Forestdahedgehog on November 15, 2008, 1:08:39 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 28)
Forestdahedgehogo-o woahz

andr28a on November 14, 2008, 4:52:15 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 28)
andr28aPurple Snake? Must be Manda? Not wise my friend

andr28a on November 14, 2008, 4:48:08 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 27)
andr28aOh Dear

lumbeelove on November 14, 2008, 4:23:57 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 28)
lumbeelovegood job

Forestdahedgehog on November 13, 2008, 9:56:01 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 27)
ForestdahedgehogZOMAGAWD!AWSUMNESS!!MOOOOOAAAAAAARR

Forestdahedgehog on November 13, 2008, 9:51:43 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 25)
Forestdahedgehoglol,so suspencful

lumbeelove on November 13, 2008, 4:23:46 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 27)
lumbeelovenice job! :D

andr28a on November 12, 2008, 4:15:03 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 26)
andr28aOrochimaru: That withered old buzzurd will pay for his trickery

Lol

andr28a on November 11, 2008, 11:45:38 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 25)
andr28aThis is hard for Kurai
Listen to her powerful father
Or listen to her friends

Forestdahedgehog on November 11, 2008, 9:36:13 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 24)
Forestdahedgehoglmao XD michael jackson XD lolz!cant wait 2 c the fight XD

Forestdahedgehog on November 11, 2008, 9:34:24 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 23)
Forestdahedgehogoh noes,orochimaru o-o

taraforest on November 11, 2008, 2:03:59 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 24)
taraforestMichael Jackson LOL
(^-^)

YumeXItachi on November 10, 2008, 6:23:46 AM

YumeXItachi on (Chapter: 24)
YumeXItachi*Falls OVer Laughing*
Micheal Jackson?? XD
Omg F=U-N-N-Y!!!

YumeXItachi on November 10, 2008, 3:49:45 AM

YumeXItachi on (Chapter: index)
YumeXItachiOh Can I Join? =]

YumeXItachi on November 10, 2008, 6:22:24 AM

YumeXItachi on (Chapter: index)
YumeXItachiName:Kairi Meidou [Uchiha]
Age:17
Race:Human
Hair:Pink With Black Tips Or Just Black Either One
Eyes:Blue Green But More Of A Green Color
Clothes: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-656914.html
Village:Leaf Village
Rank:Chunin
Sibling(s):Sasuke&Itachi
Jutsu:Normal Jutsu,Nothing Real Special.
Personality:Sweet,Funny,Caring,Very Mother Like at times & Loving
Love intrest:Deidara
Bloodline Trait:Don't Really Know What This Means But She's From The Uchiha Clan.Her Father Was An Uchiha And Her Mother Was A Meidou.

andr28a on November 10, 2008, 3:48:05 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 24)
andr28aMichael Jackson WTF?

andr28a on November 10, 2008, 12:14:00 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 23)
andr28aHeh heh heh, Orochimaru is here

axle on November 9, 2008, 11:29:03 PM

axle on (Chapter: 23)
axlelol its gonna rain^^

axle on November 8, 2008, 7:42:07 AM

axle on (Chapter: 22)
axleon to the mission!!! lol

Forestdahedgehog on November 7, 2008, 6:20:32 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 22)
Forestdahedgehogoh noes!!OROCHIMARU IS FOLLOWING THEM!!!A STALKING PEDAFILE!!!GAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!jk,lol XD well,i bets itll get interesting >w<

andr28a on November 7, 2008, 3:38:56 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 22)
andr28aOOOOOOO Sounds like a storm is coming

andr28a on November 6, 2008, 9:28:28 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 21)
andr28aRyu: 1
Saskue: 0

Forestdahedgehog on November 6, 2008, 6:12:05 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 21)
Forestdahedgehoglol,sasuke isnt the brightes bulb is he,4 messing with ryu?

taraforest on November 6, 2008, 5:07:14 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 21)
taraforestlol
sasuke's stupid messin with Ryu
(^-^)

axle on November 5, 2008, 10:52:58 PM

axle on (Chapter: 20)
axlelol y do u hate sasuke lol and hopefully they find them this is getting good..^^

axle on November 5, 2008, 10:50:11 PM

axle on (Chapter: 19)
axlekool u have 2 tell methem so i can use them in my story aswell XP

Sasukesgirlfriend on November 5, 2008, 8:36:33 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 20)
Sasukesgirlfriendyep something big is going to happen.lol
y do u hate sasuke?lol well why does ur character hate sasuke?

andr28a on November 5, 2008, 3:37:22 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 20)
andr28aHmmm I feel like something big is gonna happen

axle on November 4, 2008, 11:04:41 PM

axle on (Chapter: 18)
axlekool lol^^

taraforest on November 3, 2008, 3:48:23 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 18)
taraforestBuilding a squad huh cool (^-^)
just wonderin but where is my oc at this time
(?_?)

andr28a on November 3, 2008, 3:37:38 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 18)
andr28aHmm time to build a squad, wonder who will he pick Kurai or Elena

andr28a on November 3, 2008, 2:23:46 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 17)
andr28aThat was intense, cool fight

andr28a on November 3, 2008, 2:19:23 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 15)
andr28aNow that is how Kurai gets the job done

axle on October 31, 2008, 6:45:05 AM

axle on (Chapter: 17)
axlewow a draw lol kool but u never used my kekegenkae but i'll be sure to put this in my story XP this fight is gonna be longer XP lol u can count on that

axle on October 31, 2008, 6:42:00 AM

axle on (Chapter: 16)
axlejust waiting is killing me ^^

taraforest on October 31, 2008, 4:45:00 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 17)
taraforestthat was a great ending the fight
(^-^)

taraforest on October 31, 2008, 1:52:50 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 16)
taraforest(O_O)
Wow
cool fight
i wonder who will win

axle on October 30, 2008, 7:10:41 AM

axle on (Chapter: index)
axlethis story is going on great

axle on October 30, 2008, 7:09:48 AM

axle on (Chapter: 15)
axleomg im scared i cnt wait * starts bitting finger* lol ^^

DarkAngelofDoom13 on October 30, 2008, 4:25:12 AM

DarkAngelofDoom13 on (Chapter: index)
DarkAngelofDoom13you did a great job with each chapter

andr28a on October 29, 2008, 2:42:26 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 13)
andr28aThe exams are over already? thought orochi might have made an entrance but I guess not.

Let's see what chaos happens now, party time woo-hoo

axle on October 28, 2008, 6:08:20 AM

axle on (Chapter: 12)
axlewasnt ryu and mitsusa last?lol

axle on October 28, 2008, 6:02:02 AM

axle on (Chapter: 9)
axleheh kool i won lol

axle on October 28, 2008, 5:46:51 AM

axle on (Chapter: 1)
axlekool start

taraforest on October 28, 2008, 12:45:41 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 11)
taraforestooh the finals
(0_0)
can't wait to see what happens next

andr28a on October 27, 2008, 7:08:00 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 10)
andr28aHave to say I wasn't expecting to run into Kurai like that, interesting, wonder how things will turn out.

Forestdahedgehog on October 27, 2008, 10:34:35 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 10)
ForestdahedgehogAWSUMNESS,but kinda short tho DX XD but still good!wite mor k?

Forestdahedgehog on October 27, 2008, 10:19:33 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 9)
Forestdahedgehogawsumness >W<

taraforest on October 27, 2008, 5:08:32 AM

taraforest on (Chapter: 10)
taraforestha sounds just like my oc
great work
can't wait to read more
(^-^)

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 25, 2008, 4:08:06 PM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 8)
SasukesgirlfriendMORE

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 25, 2008, 4:07:38 PM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 7)
SasukesgirlfriendWHOA you gave gigi guts.lol Cool fight.

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 25, 2008, 4:06:31 PM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 6)
Sasukesgirlfriendawesome!

Forestdahedgehog on October 24, 2008, 11:14:13 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 8)
Forestdahedgehogwoot!!!awsumness!!

Forestdahedgehog on October 24, 2008, 12:13:02 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 7)
Forestdahedgehogwow!awsum!but quick DX cants wait 4 mor >D

Forestdahedgehog on October 24, 2008, 12:10:31 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 6)
Forestdahedgehoglol XD i lik their justus >W<

Forestdahedgehog on October 24, 2008, 12:06:22 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 5)
Forestdahedgehogwoot >W< tht was awsumnesssfuullll >W<

Knucklescrazy on October 23, 2008, 2:35:15 AM

Knucklescrazy on (Chapter: 7)
KnucklescrazyGood fight! WOO!

lumbeelove on October 21, 2008, 5:26:22 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 6)
lumbeeloveyay!!! i won!!!

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 20, 2008, 9:52:00 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 5)
SasukesgirlfriendGO RYU! X3

arijo on October 20, 2008, 9:28:25 AM

arijo on (Chapter: index)
arijoi'll join


Name:Dez
age:14
race:Jinchuuriki(has Gobi No Houkou)5-tails
Hair:black
eye color:brown
gender:female
personality:shy,quiet,friendly
Village:Akatsuki
Jutsu:has no jutsu.just aura
Love interest:Deidara
Favorite weapon:???

lumbeelove on October 20, 2008, 4:42:28 AM

lumbeelove on (Chapter: 5)
lumbeelovecool!

Forestdahedgehog on October 17, 2008, 10:31:39 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 4)
Forestdahedgehogohh i wunder who snowie is?XD

Forestdahedgehog on October 17, 2008, 10:27:33 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 3)
Forestdahedgehogawwwwwzuuuumneessss XD

Forestdahedgehog on October 17, 2008, 10:24:53 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 2)
ForestdahedgehogO___O woah.......lee better not get on ryu's bad side...

Forestdahedgehog on October 17, 2008, 10:20:45 AM

Forestdahedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
ForestdahedgehogAWSUMNESSS XDDD

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 17, 2008, 9:15:28 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 4)
SasukesgirlfriendOMG WHO IS SNOWIE?! >83 WE WILL NEVER KNOW! >8O
lol

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 17, 2008, 9:11:54 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: index)
SasukesgirlfriendOh ok then. 83

Gigi's crush is Jeke. He gave her a yin-yang necklace and never takes it off. Doesn't let anyone touch it. Jeke does like her back but he is too hot headed and macho to confess so he her teases. Zane is like her brother. Jeke feels like Zane is going to take her so he hates him.

Gigi mostly trains and raises wolf pups when there are no missions or anything. In her team she is very good at taijustsu, Zane genjustsu, and Jeke ninjustu.

She has shoulder length hair that's blue but when she turns into full demon wolf form she has pure white hair with red eyes. And she can get very touchy and easliy angered when she's in that form.

I think that's it.lol

Knucklescrazy on October 17, 2008, 2:38:07 AM

Knucklescrazy on (Chapter: index)
KnucklescrazyOOH Joinage!

Knucklescrazy on October 17, 2008, 3:25:18 AM

Knucklescrazy on (Chapter: index)
KnucklescrazyHas no squad, but hopefully wants to help the new Chunin of the hidden leaf.

Name:Tora Zensoku
Age:20
Race: Tiger demon/human(not biju but stronger than Kyuubi)
Hair: Sky blue
Eyes:Gray/Silver Cat like
Clothes: A light blue jumpsuit that is cut off just below the knees and above the elbow, snow camo cut-off shorts just above the jumpsuit, an old Katana straped to her back.
Village:Waterfall orignally, Zensoku clan.
Rank: Chunin
Sibling(s):(way older half sister)Rock Lee
Jutsu:Taijutsu only, Tiger chakra infused Tai-jutsu...
SECRET JUTSU: Reverse Lotus, eighth/final gate...Taught herself both lotuses, and a full take over Tiger demon.
Personality: Hyper, happy and optimistic
Love intrest: Maito Gai
Bloodline Trait: extreame speed, can beat Lee with the weights off easily.
Weapon: The 300 year old Katana.

(Prefered She JUST got there...)
Has no squad, but hopefully wants to help the new Chunin of the hidden leaf.
Original squad was killed.
Reverse Lotus is used ONLY as a LAST RESORT!

Knucklescrazy on October 17, 2008, 3:12:36 AM

Knucklescrazy on (Chapter: index)
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Knucklescrazy on October 17, 2008, 2:59:24 AM

Knucklescrazy on (Chapter: index)
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Sasukesgirlfriend on October 16, 2008, 10:44:25 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: index)
SasukesgirlfriendOh so is this is what u r talking about! Can I join?! 83

Profile
Name: Gigi
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Race: Half demon wolf half human
Related to: Naruto (half blood brother) (poor gigi.lol)
Squad(I don't know if ya want this info): Jeke Hyuga(age 11, male) and Zane (age 12, male)
Personality: Smart and quite
Favorite Jutsu: Wolf Summoning Jutsu
Favorite Weapon: Sais

Anything else to add?

Sasukesgirlfriend on October 16, 2008, 10:37:08 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 3)
Sasukesgirlfriend83 awesome.

supervanman64 on October 16, 2008, 1:56:08 AM

supervanman64 on (Chapter: index)
supervanman64This is a good original story in the Naruto universe! I hope that it stays as good as it is now. Good Job!

hflp on October 15, 2008, 1:17:41 PM

hflp on (Chapter: 2)
hflpo_o. Whoa. Over protective brother with demon enhancements. Not-a-good-mix.