Sohma, Kuroumo
Submitted September 21, 2005 Updated November 6, 2005 Status Incomplete | THIS IS MY FURBIE STORY. unfortunately, i dont own Furuba, and if anyone has any problems with this story i will delete it AGAIN, it is only back by popular demand. My character, Kuroumo, replaces Rin.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: September 21, 2005 • Updated: September 21, 2005
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Chapter 2 - Chapter 2
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 3 - Chapter 3
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 4 - Chapter 4
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 5 - Chapter 5
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 6 - Sidetracked 1
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 7 - Chapter 6
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 8 - Chapter 7
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 9 - Chapter 8
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 10 - Chapter 9
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 11 - Chapter 10
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 12 - Sidetracked 2
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 13 - Chapter 11
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 14 - Chapter 12
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 15 - Chapter 12
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 16 - Chapter 13
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 17 - Chapter 14
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 18 - Sidetracked 3
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 19 - Chapter 15
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 20 - Chapter 16
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 21 - Chapter 17
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 22 - Chapter 18
Submitted: September 22, 2005 • Updated: September 22, 2005
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Chapter 23 - Chapter 19
Submitted: September 23, 2005 • Updated: September 23, 2005
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Chapter 24 - Chapter 20
Submitted: September 24, 2005 • Updated: September 24, 2005
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Chapter 25 - Chapter 21
Submitted: September 27, 2005 • Updated: September 27, 2005
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Chapter 26 - Chapter 22
Submitted: September 29, 2005 • Updated: September 29, 2005
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Chapter 27 - Chapter 23
Submitted: October 7, 2005 • Updated: October 7, 2005
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Chapter 28 - Chapter 24
Submitted: October 31, 2005 • Updated: October 31, 2005
Word count: 948 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 203
Chapter 29 - Chapter 26
Submitted: November 6, 2005 • Updated: November 6, 2005
Word count: 1242 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 205
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Lanathae on November 8, 2005, 3:47:52 AM
Lanathae on November 8, 2005, 3:44:03 AM
hmm, oh dear....but i least i was there ^^
Lanathae on November 8, 2005, 3:41:53 AM
hmmm, i keep rereading things, this sucks... i mean your story as well, am i gonna be in it again soon?Lanathae on November 8, 2005, 3:37:19 AM
oh well, you just blew the chance of any little gooeys... oh wait, there are six more chapters... damnit >Lanathae on November 8, 2005, 2:17:55 AM
hihihihi ><dog food actually does tast quite nice... just the biscuits though... hmm.... *goes down to eat dogfood*
author's note: yes this did happen ^^
Lanathae on November 8, 2005, 2:14:50 AM
hmm 26-12 is.... 14 more chapters to read >< damnit >< >< >< arg >Lanathae on November 8, 2005, 2:12:02 AM
hmm, from total boredom of having no one to talk to on msn cos your all at pearent teacher interviews and shoot, i have actually resurted to reading your story... god damnit >angel_of_beauty_and_light on November 6, 2005, 6:49:12 AM
NOOO! IT HAS ENDED! WAAAAAA! I AM GOING TO GO INSANE!!! *eats own arm* It is so sad ;___; YOU SAID YOU WEREN'T GOING TO MAKE HER DIE!!!! YOU ARE SO EVIL *points at you* I AM GOING TO KILL YOU TOMORROW!!!!!Ack, I am actually shivering now! Waa, I hate this feeling *pouts*
Nemya on November 6, 2005, 12:15:09 AM
Awwww D:Wonderful chapter, she died....
So sweet. NOOO another story has ended... So awesome... I mean the story...
Nemya on November 1, 2005, 3:06:21 AM
Oh wow. Such a lovely chapter. You did tell me not to comment on this, but I couldn't resist, could I? "Disgusting man" How true. Made me laugh so much xD
But it's such an amazing and wonderful chapter, and at the end it's so sad.. All beautiful, and then Akito comes and ruins it all. Typical x.X
And then Nari screaming at the end, oh dear such typical her. The peace was ruined by Akito.
Such awesome description of things, and it's great and very effective how it goes to the 3rd person at the end...
Hmmm. I don't know about her dying. Seems too sudden... But I don't think it'd do very well continuing for much longer, as this kind of seems the final death. What would appear a good idea (to me, I know it's a crummy idea) is if you had one more chapter, Kuroumo half-waking up in hospital, only she doesn't remember much at all and... I suck at decribing. But then she dies. Because you can't have something like this and not kill her off (awful choice of words) as this is kind of final. But I think you should have one more chapter as a kind of reflecting-on-things chapter, and you could be half-awake to see Gooey or whoever around your hospital bed. But that is it. And the chapter should be centered on your thoughts and yourself, as you are half-concious and not able to properly see around you. But then you should die. Sorry.
Marik: I /told/ you it was a stupid idea.
Mel: Yeah, actually, it is. But I'm not deleting it s it took me ages to write down!! Sorry for my pathetic ideas D:
But such an amazing chapter!!
angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 31, 2005, 9:50:51 PM
AHHH! IT WOULDN'T LET ME FINISH MY COMMENT!!!!!!Anyways, I was gonna say about her getting fatally wounded, although her body would give up, my random insecure sucidal character gets stabbed, shot, caught in a bomb blast, almost eaten by lions (o.O) and many other things. Perhaps not by lions though.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND (you must have known this was coming) WRITE MORE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!! *begs* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE, MY ENTIRE LIFE DEPENDS ON IT!!!
angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 31, 2005, 9:48:00 PM
I was not avoiding reading this!! Why would I? I have been waiting for ages for it to be put up, why would I not read????It is *unable to controll hyperness* SO GOOD! AND SO SAD!!! WHY WOULD AKITO DO SOMETHING THAT MEAN?? HE IS SUCH A BASTARD, I HATE HIM! I HATE HIM!!!!!!!!!
*calms down* But of course she doesn't die. Because it is called Sohma, Kuroumo, and that ending wasn't stretched out enough after she died, like a funeral, and everybody crying, paying last respects. So that means she survived, again. This is like the tenth time she has been fatally wounded, surely her body would just give up.
Nemya on October 10, 2005, 5:52:16 AM
*glomps you*AWAAAA I'M SO SORRY I DIDN'T COMMENT ;___; WAAAAA ;__;
Anyways, Gooey is SCARY! All pinkified with PLAITS! No wonder Nari turned out all weird... o.O
I discovered something SCARY. YOUR STORY IS NOT ON MY FAVES LISTS. ARAGRAG it must have been when you deleted it!!!! RAGRAGA!!!!
*hits fave button 3568365290619562380965 times*
angel_of_beauty_and_light on October 8, 2005, 9:47:16 PM
Heeheehee, yay! Sooo good! Finally! Tis amazing! Me and HARU ^^!!!!! Yayness *glomps* Thankiesangel_of_beauty_and_light on September 29, 2005, 8:09:31 AM
WOW! THANK YOU SO MUCH! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! DAMNIT! I AM ADDICTED TO THIS STORY NOW AS WELL. It is 23.08 and I have been reading all the chpaters for like an hour and a half, to get to me and HARU! YAY! HARU'S SUPPOSED GIRFRIEND? THERE IS NOT SUPPOSED ABOUT IT!angel_of_beauty_and_light on September 29, 2005, 8:05:30 AM
Is that how you usually greet your friends? How rude!angel_of_beauty_and_light on September 29, 2005, 7:54:12 AM
Okay, two REALLY sick things:"I felt my hand brush against something hard. I groped for what it was, and pulled out a box, containing…cake mixture. I was nearly in the right frame of mind to kill Gure at that point in time. "
The other:
"taking a quick shower, and ridding my body of the clingy green algae I found in some annoying places."
Other than that, it iks delightful so far.
Lanathae on September 29, 2005, 6:57:30 AM
WHAT!!!!! I'M WEARING BRIGHT PURPLE!!!!! ... but i do have green hair ^^ok write more now ...
Nemya on September 29, 2005, 6:11:57 AM
*glomps you*ARGAR Its so good and I can finally comment yay I'm so happy!
Nyay, you meet Smeagol and Manning here in this chapter and you call him Gooey Yar hee hee, Nari who started it, although I think in real life it was actually Ani who started in nay oh well wow this is a long sentence no breathers, neh?
So, awesome chapter, yar, the Gooey is eeevil!
Nemya on September 27, 2005, 10:37:13 PM
*glomps you*Nyee hee... Updated^^
Yarrr tis awesome and also tis Smeagol!!! Yarrr!!!!^^
Lanathae on September 27, 2005, 4:32:10 PM
yay it's meeeee... well my voice anyway....Lanathae on September 27, 2005, 5:25:18 AM
hey! when am i gonna be in your story???... *sniff*Nemya on September 26, 2005, 10:22:29 PM
*glomps you*Awww, you and Gooey don't end up with a kid. Actually, that would be pretty scary... But awesomeness, as usual!
Nemya on September 24, 2005, 7:12:42 PM
Heh heh, no kid I guess xD Urk, come to think about it, Gooey having a kid would be kind of creepy....
Awesomeness!
Nemya on September 23, 2005, 7:23:12 AM
NYAAAAAAA Oh Ak you are pregnant!!! With GOOEY'S child! ARGARAG That's soo scary Ak ak the child would be HALF GOOEY!!!!!!Ahawaaa and Ritchan is coming to see Nari!! He is soo adorable!!! Nyaaahaaa!
Ak, and Sorry I didn't comment on last chapter, sorry ;__;
But that cake mixture thing was evil!!!
Eoara on September 22, 2005, 8:50:45 PM
awwww....i reread my own chapter...and that one is sooo sad **is proud**Lanathae on September 22, 2005, 4:46:53 PM
ahahahahaha, that's greatLanathae on September 22, 2005, 4:45:25 PM
hmm, someone giving kara a horse, how originalLanathae on September 22, 2005, 4:39:27 PM
damn it ku, why wont you DIE!!!Lanathae on September 22, 2005, 4:33:31 PM
awww ku is alive... damnitLanathae on September 22, 2005, 4:29:04 PM
hahahaha Akito is acting really spoilt, it's so funny!!!Lanathae on September 22, 2005, 4:24:08 PM
yeah, wat's up with mel... freakLanathae on September 22, 2005, 4:19:49 PM
YAYYY!!!!! hahahahahaaaaaaaLanathae on September 22, 2005, 4:19:10 PM
ok... akito is being a bastardLanathae on September 22, 2005, 7:02:51 AM
'lack of love'!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAah, that was good
Lanathae on September 22, 2005, 6:20:05 AM
aww Akito was nice!Lanathae on September 22, 2005, 6:14:57 AM
BUT THERE IS FRENCH!!!!!!luckily you have already told me what happens so i'm not missing much
Lanathae on September 22, 2005, 6:14:07 AM
"Kuro-kun" hihihihianyways cool story
Lanathae on September 21, 2005, 4:12:28 PM
ARG there just had to be fench didn't there?
but you don't die in my story... you just nearly die.... hihihihi
muahahahahaaaa
anyways.... noooooooooooo... etc.