Iris
Submitted November 24, 2005 Updated June 26, 2007 Status Complete | Shonen-ai/Slash! For DD_DM. A black-winged angel finds himself caught up in the fate of a young boy that defies existence itself, a boy with paradoxed wings, a boy named 'Iris'...
Category:
Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Gray
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 891 • Size: 5k • Comments: 13 • views: 353
Chapter 2 - Survive
Submitted: November 27, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1225 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 214
Chapter 3 - Darkness
Submitted: December 1, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 4 - Sanctuary
Submitted: December 4, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1717 • Size: 9k • Comments: 6 • views: 197
Chapter 5 - Silence
Submitted: December 7, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 460 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 186
Chapter 6 - Reason
Submitted: December 8, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1707 • Size: 9k • Comments: 4 • views: 193
Chapter 7 - Antithesis
Submitted: December 11, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 8 - Same
Submitted: December 18, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2662 • Size: 14k • Comments: 6 • views: 218
Chapter 9 - Ruby
Submitted: December 22, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 884 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 198
Chapter 10 - Stone
Submitted: December 28, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1435 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 188
Chapter 11 - Bat
Submitted: December 30, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 3745 • Size: 20k • Comments: 10 • views: 200
Chapter 12 - Monster
Submitted: January 3, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2068 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 255
Chapter 13 - Dead
Submitted: January 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1697 • Size: 9k • Comments: 7 • views: 200
Chapter 14 - Blood
Submitted: January 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1119 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 179
Chapter 15 - Lost
Submitted: January 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 932 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 174
Chapter 16 - Taint
Submitted: January 20, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2108 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 192
Chapter 17 - Half
Submitted: January 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 853 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 170
Chapter 18 - Found
Submitted: January 24, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2198 • Size: 12k • Comments: 6 • views: 191
Chapter 19 - Purse
Submitted: January 26, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 477 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 152
Chapter 20 - Mutual
Submitted: January 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 754 • Size: 4k • Comments: 8 • views: 178
Chapter 21 - Drop
Submitted: January 30, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2087 • Size: 11k • Comments: 10 • views: 200
Chapter 22 - Wolf
Submitted: February 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1444 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 182
Chapter 23 - Trapped
Submitted: February 13, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 605 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 163
Chapter 24 - Journey
Submitted: February 15, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1055 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 171
Chapter 25 - Beautiful
Submitted: February 18, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 788 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 176
Chapter 26 - Paradox
Submitted: February 20, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 951 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 183
Chapter 27 - Disconnected
Submitted: February 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1816 • Size: 10k • Comments: 7 • views: 197
Chapter 28 - Distraction
Submitted: February 24, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2234 • Size: 12k • Comments: 5 • views: 188
Chapter 29 - Spider
Submitted: February 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2120 • Size: 12k • Comments: 9 • views: 188
Chapter 30 - Bone
Submitted: March 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2842 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 200
Chapter 31 - Human
Submitted: March 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2100 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 190
Chapter 32 - Fall
Submitted: March 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2850 • Size: 15k • Comments: 6 • views: 216
Chapter 33 - Earth
Submitted: April 11, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2034 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 175
Chapter 34 - Pity
Submitted: April 18, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2411 • Size: 13k • Comments: 8 • views: 183
Chapter 35 - Continue
Submitted: April 23, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1108 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 215
Chapter 36 - Scar
Submitted: May 1, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1611 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 176
Chapter 37 - Ally
Submitted: May 7, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1472 • Size: 8k • Comments: 5 • views: 185
Chapter 38 - Nothing
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: November 21, 2006
Word count: 2982 • Size: 16k • Comments: 8 • views: 189
Chapter 39 - Seal
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2527 • Size: 14k • Comments: 4 • views: 203
Chapter 40 - Purpose
Submitted: August 19, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2163 • Size: 12k • Comments: 5 • views: 188
Chapter 41 - Labs
Submitted: August 25, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1809 • Size: 10k • Comments: 6 • views: 209
Chapter 42 - Shatter
Submitted: August 29, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 3221 • Size: 18k • Comments: 4 • views: 214
Chapter 43 - Burning
Submitted: September 4, 2006 • Updated: September 4, 2006
Word count: 2868 • Size: 16k • Comments: 4 • views: 179
Chapter 44 - Separated
Submitted: November 3, 2006 • Updated: November 3, 2006
Word count: 2236 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 162
Chapter 45 - Secret
Submitted: November 12, 2006 • Updated: November 12, 2006
Word count: 870 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 192
Chapter 46 - Side
Submitted: November 19, 2006 • Updated: November 19, 2006
Word count: 1704 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 163
Chapter 47 - Opposite
Submitted: November 21, 2006 • Updated: November 21, 2006
Word count: 1157 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 159
Chapter 48 - Camael
Submitted: November 23, 2006 • Updated: November 23, 2006
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Chapter 49 - Demon
Submitted: November 24, 2006 • Updated: November 24, 2006
Word count: 2271 • Size: 13k • Comments: 4 • views: 206
Chapter 50 - Remember
Submitted: December 5, 2006 • Updated: December 5, 2006
Word count: 2599 • Size: 15k • Comments: 7 • views: 177
Chapter 51 - Simple
Submitted: December 14, 2006 • Updated: December 14, 2006
Word count: 2821 • Size: 16k • Comments: 3 • views: 179
Chapter 52 - Longevity
Submitted: December 21, 2006 • Updated: December 21, 2006
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Chapter 53 - Deal
Submitted: December 27, 2006 • Updated: December 27, 2006
Word count: 1324 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 154
Chapter 54 - Dual
Submitted: December 30, 2006 • Updated: December 30, 2006
Word count: 1525 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 159
Chapter 55 - Goodbye
Submitted: January 11, 2007 • Updated: January 11, 2007
Word count: 1579 • Size: 8k • Comments: 1 • views: 177
Chapter 56 - Peace
Submitted: January 15, 2007 • Updated: January 15, 2007
Word count: 569 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 154
Chapter 57 - Fool
Submitted: January 21, 2007 • Updated: January 21, 2007
Word count: 906 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 152
Chapter 58 - Forest
Submitted: February 3, 2007 • Updated: February 3, 2007
Word count: 1276 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 159
Chapter 59 - Bound
Submitted: March 11, 2007 • Updated: March 11, 2007
Word count: 3176 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 140
Chapter 60 - Touch
Submitted: April 9, 2007 • Updated: April 9, 2007
Word count: 920 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 129
Chapter 61 - Ending
Submitted: April 22, 2007 • Updated: April 22, 2007
Word count: 1002 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 140
Chapter 62 - Alive
Submitted: May 3, 2007 • Updated: May 3, 2007
Word count: 2631 • Size: 14k • Comments: 5 • views: 138
Chapter 63 - Sky
Submitted: June 12, 2007 • Updated: June 12, 2007
Word count: 1911 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 131
Chapter 64 - Look
Submitted: June 19, 2007 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 1913 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 135
Chapter 65 - Moment
Submitted: June 22, 2007 • Updated: June 22, 2007
Word count: 1202 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 136
Chapter 66 - Mortal
Submitted: June 23, 2007 • Updated: June 23, 2007
Word count: 3044 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 142
Chapter 67 - Rain
Submitted: June 25, 2007 • Updated: June 25, 2007
Word count: 5074 • Size: 28k • Comments: 3 • views: 162
Chapter 68 - Epilogue
Submitted: June 26, 2007 • Updated: June 26, 2007
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Comments
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Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:33:18 PM
Trinity_Fire on August 25, 2006, 11:41:04 AM
Ah, about the wings weapons thing...Have you ever been hit by the wing of a goose? A big ol' white goose?? 8D
It hurts like hell. I had a bruise on my shin for a week.
And if you get hit by a goose or, say, a swan's [swans are quite ferocious really] wing in the head, good chance is, you'll get knocked unconscious.
Now, a certain being gets a wingspan about 5x that of a goose's... you think he won't use those to his advantage?? ^_~
I learn a lot through experience. :D Painful experience.
DefyDeath_DefyMe on August 24, 2006, 2:30:40 PM
Trinity_Fire on August 25, 2006, 11:18:13 AM
....O_o What kind of thoughts, perchance??I don't mind whatever you have. Go ahead.
But it does make me a bit worried. ^_^;
::sweatsweat::
Just for ya babe, ch. 41. :3
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:29:38 PM
Siren and, of course, were. That makes at least ten species so far, not counting humans and the weird thing-that-was-not-Iris. Oh, and dragons! So eleven. Wait, was serpent a separate species? Is that twelve? And lamia and centaur, thirteen and fourteen! The mystery thickens ever moreâ¦By the way, I really like the names Eire and Rheis. Very cool names. And you do action sequences quite well. Some peopleâ¦how can I put this politelyâ¦donât. Like Mercedes Lackey and Kelley Armstrong (my favorite authoress ^.^) I love them dearly, but action sequences? Not their thing. You, on the other hand, seem at home in nearly any sequence. Very nice! Continuation! Continuation!!
Trinity_Fire on August 23, 2006, 5:44:30 AM
Oh, yeah, and a note on that, Astri. I guess no one ever picked it up, but there was something special about Eire and Rheis's names. 8D
Canyaguessit?
InternalDemons on July 22, 2007, 4:20:03 AM
their names have mostly the same letters? *feels stupid* that's prolly not it... oo i know, eire plus rheis equals iris! aha! marvel at my brilliance!Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:36:58 PM
DETAIL IS GOOD!!! Hmph. Detail is always good! You can never have too much detail.(still has too much detail in his stuff)
Yeahâ¦well⦠--.-- Nyeah! Anyways! If the tattoos are seals, then I guess itâs more like the opposite of the angel transformation. Which I think is a good thingâ¦right? Probably. So bat and wolf, snake and hawk, horse and fish (Iâm assuming)â¦And now the new tattoo question arises. What was it REALLY that Camael did? And why? Is he perhaps responsible for Valkyreâs wings being black? Hmm. So many questionsâ¦
AND NO MORE CHAPTERS TO ANSWER THEM YET!!!!! AAAAAAAAHHHH!!!
Well, maybe thatâs a good thingâ¦I should really probably go to bed nowâ¦but only knowing that youâll be writing more of this! Itâs like having to put a book down before Iâm finished with it; I canât stand not knowing!
Please write more; you are an excellent writer ^.^
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:36:22 PM
Useless, perhaps. Yummy, most certainly. Asher and Phelan? THAT I was not expecting. Confusions in the mind of Valkyreâ¦more questions about him, now that Iâve realized how little is known. Iris; what is changing? The balance in his blood? Something to do with his demonic side?Iâm sorry, my comments are turning into an endless list of the questions I have. But you have to understand, I love asking questions about stuff I read. I love speculating about the answers and trying to predict whatâs going to happen (even though Iâm often wrong ^.^; ) So the fact that Iâm doing this means I really like it.
I do really like it. And because I havenât done it for a while and you deserve itâ¦
SHOWER OF LOVE AND ADORATION!!!!!!!! ^.^ ^.^ ^.^ :luvluvluv:
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:35:43 PM
So, was that what was bothering Iris at the end of the last one? Hmm. Raguel is shaping up to be more villainous by the momentâ¦itâs a real shame. I kind of liked Ayra. I have this soft spot for harpies and nagas/ medusas/ lamias/ snake-women...what can I say?Well, now I have no idea where this is going. What will happen next, only the gods and Trinity_Fire knowâ¦so, Iâd better read on and find out, yes? ~.^
Astri on August 5, 2006, 7:35:12 PM
Hmm. Asher, huh? That was unexpected, I must say. I was expecting more of the failure-Irises or somethingâ¦and then it was Asher, and I was like, âOops. Hmm, maybe itâs gotten too late for my sensors to work properlyâ¦âTheyâre definitely down here, because I have no idea what almost kind of sort of bothered Iris right at the endâ¦
You just keep me guessing, donât you? (Which is a good thing, by the way ~.^)
And I must admit, I find your use of Valkyreâs wings as weapons massively interesting. I donât think Iâve ever seen anybody do that beforeâ¦