Candycane9

That's not bad, though, you didn't really knock your work, you just said it wasn't your best. Nothing wrong there, if that's what you honestly think

Ikki:Hah. Thanks for the head up little girl *flicks your nose jokingly,laughing at you hysterically*
Ringo:Ikki for once you should pay attention. *looks away annoyed with his behavior* It's pretty obvious what Simca's true intentions are. How do you not see this? *sweatdrop*
Me:What was that? *confused* Fangs?

You've def improved! You're chars are really well developed, for starters

Ikki:What? How do you know of Simca? *confused* It seems as if you know too much about us two,we've only just met a couple minutes of go. *suspcious look at your long comment*
Ringo:*curious* Hm...
'She's quite interesting actually..everything she said made sense..maybe if I learned more about her..hmm..'
Me:Well at least I had a very good reason for my aggressive actions. Oh by the way,since you're my slave now. Go cook me up something for dinner,will ya? *blows a fake kiss*

Well, I changed direction with it, I guess that's all it needed^^ Wish I had known that BEFORE I nearly wrecked my keyboard, lol

Ringo:*bites lip nervously,looking away*
'Don't say it Ikki..you know that she doesn't really like you! Oh Ikki..if I only I could..if I..'
*sighs*
Ikki:Well she's nice..and..uh *drooling from the thought of Simca*
Me:I know. But that's what makes me so different. Though you're pretty insane yourself. *nods*

I think it's finally coming together^^

Ikki:Hey! I wasn't asking for a response like that! *hands waving about in an annoyed manner,angered by your comment*
Ringo:*rolls eyes* Ugh..
Me:Fine. *opens it,trying to maintain my giggles*

Nothing wrong with taking pride in your work^^

night my time on my aunt's computer is limited gonig to the texas state fair in the morning