WildcatGirl

Well, there's no big writer out there, who makes a text that hasn't been through the grammar grinder. Not even big writers do the grammar right, don't beat yourself down by it.

alex:does not answer are anything

lora:smiles*

Callum: *finishes eating*

alex:does not answer are anything

lora:smiles*

I am so sorry i didn't reply before ,i din't realise you commented :/

SO yeah, I took a look at it. Well, it's going well so far, may need to recheck some Grammar in it, and seriously, get used to spam text with commas, it makes it much easier to read in a long-shot. Also remember the differences of endings in adjectives, if it used to describe an action or a feeling, there's a difference. But either way, I'm sure it will go nicely.

But yeah, I take a lot of pride in my story making, though I am not good at writing it down like blogs of text. It goes much better explaining it to somebody, like this, so I can always change a little here and there.

Fine... *she stands amd she hacks and coughs til her human prey is spit up*

*sighs* fine... I let him go u leave peacefully... Never to wander into my web or den again... Deal?

*her eyes open* u kill me ur friend dies too...

*by the time she gets up to the spider den, she has already swallowed him whole and alive, her abdomen is swelled up, she is in a food induced sleep*