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ha yeah jack is my boyfriend lol.

do you do with coke or just strait up?

i'm amanda btw, nice to meet another jack lover :))

Just updated my fic! Hope you enjoy.

It's no problem. Take your time. It's well worth the wait. Quality over quantity, and the like.

Thanks very much. It means a lot to hear that. People like you influence my decision to stay, so you've got my gratitude.

I've just updated 'Serving'. Enjoy!

Can you give me a description of Ryofu? Characteristics, as well as physical features. I've been entertaining the idea of drawing a picture of him, but I'm not really sure what he looks like, apart from his white hair.

Chapter 22 is up! Finally. I got stuck in a rut for a while, not sure where to go from where I left it. But I'm back on track now! Hope you like it ^^

It happens. I shudder when I re-read my old fics. I swear, I must not have even known how to type back then.

I'll have to give Yuji's reaction some real thought. When the time comes, I'll make it good.

We should have the bystanders commenting. Stuff like 'My God! They're human?!', etc. And maybe even have Chousen and Yuji's girl worrying about them, before brawling a bit themselves.

That does work out nicely in that respect. Yuji's role will work out sort of that way, too. But in a very different way than Ryofu's.

I think they should meet the next morning, in the center of the village, before the clean-up effort begins. They'll be rested by that point and still have lots of room to work.

That's a good idea. For Yuji's part, skipping over the main, 'odd' part I mentioned before, Yuji will probably go around rescuing various people wherever he can, fighting who he can. He'll be injured badly, healed by Katsuyu, and then the 'odd' part I don't want to give away yet will happen.

That works. I can see Yuji standing there, fists balled, head down, and then his chakra' erupts', furthing damaging the landscape as he verbally lambastes Ryofu.
"You selfish son of a -----! I've had it! You have destroyed my life since you came here. Then you see fit to criticize me with that ridiculousness?! Of COURSE I'm thankful Naruto ended! But don't you see?! The rest of us were powerless! That little bit of resistance was the best we, suppossedly the most powerful village, could do?!"

Then Yuji and Ryofu are broken up. As they're being pulled apart, Ryofu makes the challenge and picks a location. THe point behind this is to make sure they rest and get their chakra back. We shouldn't neglect the fact that they'll be exhausted at that point.

There's one other thing that could touch off the fight between them. I could see Yuji being annoyed that everyone is celebrating Naruto's victory. In his words:
"What are we celebrating for?! Do you mean to tell me you're all satisfied with this? It took ONE OF US to beat them after how many of us were killed? Doesn't anyone think that maybe we need to train harder; be more vigilant; anything?!"
Ryofu could take exception (for some reason; not sure why) and that touches off their feud.

Sounds like a fun group you've got there. The mischief thing; that's a nice touch; especially since my one character is so dark. Our respective chars tend to compliment each other nicely imho.

Good point. One or both of us should mention that.

It's very worth it. Second season is coming out on DVD soon. The first 2 seasons are out. If you get the right boxset, it comes with the OVA.

Enjoy!

Sure, please do!