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0.0 oh, boy...

heh, sounds good anyway. I'm making another chapter.

sweetness! I cant wait now!

I'm gonna have to look up his oc. He sounds awesome!

hmmm... sure, i'll bite...tell me a bit, not the entire thing...

Do you want my other Oc's Bio (Neo Kozaku and Torashu)?

I made 2 more moves for him if you want to copy them.

1) Pyro Clone Jutsu: He creates Clones Exactly like him...only if struck, they explode.

2) Dragon Drill Claw: A special move wher he will start to actually spin his claws in a drill motion. He does not use hand signs for this, but a weapon that helps him use it...After taken off, he cannot use it...until put back on. He finds the weapon later.

i will when i have the time. And do you need Ryu's Bio again?

it was amazing! so serious, emotional, and deep! I say i cant wait for more!

Ready for a loooong comment? Here goes with my team (note, since your fic is set in the future compared to my fic, ages and stuff will be moved on to fit your timescale. If I got the ages wrong, they're the same as the rookie nine, except for Kinmaru, who's a year older):

Name: Ame Karoski

Highest rank:

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Affiliation: Konoha/Suna

Team: Team Kotetsu

Previous team(s): None

Family: None, all are dead.

Nature Type: Water

Kekkai Genkai: None

Jutsu: Water Prison Technique - as used by Zabuza and Kisame, False (and Double False) Surroundings Technique, Hell Viewing Technique, and a modified version of the Temple of Nirvana Technique that works on a shorter range but a lot faster, Mystical Palm Technique (Chakra Scalpel/Healing), and all common taijutsu/ninjutsu

Personality: Bubbly and outgoing, uses nicknames for friends (a habit picked up from Chikami), loyal, determined, and positive. Has occasional depressive spells, slightly low self esteem, and a dislike of killing. Tries to stop arguments, unless she finds them funny. Likes hugging people.

History: Oh just go read Blood Ties. I can't write it all out here. She's an orphan, close friends with the Sand Siblings, and Gaara's partner. Good friends with her team, and Hinata.

Looks: Shortish and compact build, short black hair, purple eyes, wears a purple shirt, and dark red 3/4 lengths.

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Name: Chikami Hoshisi

Highest rank: Jonin

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Affiliation: Konoha/Suna

Team: Team Kotetsu

Previous team(s): None

Family: Civillian parents.

Nature Type: All Mixed

Kekkai Genkai: Ability to talk to anything - people, trees, water, animals, etc

Jutsu: All basic jutsu without making handsigns, no genjutsu, specializes in replacement/teleportation techniques

Personality: Excitable, talkative, friendly. Interesting mix of mature and immature, intelligent but with poor concentration. Likes teasing her teammates, and gives people nicknames.

History: Again, read Blood Ties (specifically, chapter 19). In a relationship with Kankuro.

Looks: Tall, with long ginger-blond curly hair and pale blue eyes. Wears a mesh t-shirt with a light blue crop-top over it, and khaki trousers.

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Name: Kinmaru Ginaki

Highest rank: Chunin

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Affiliation: Konoha

Team: Team Kotetsu

Previous team(s): None

Family: Merchant mother, unknown father. Civilian wife Inomi (a relative of Ino's)

Nature Type: Wind/Earth

Kekkai Genkai: None

Jutsu: Sealing techniques, Transformation techniques. Can summon/communicate with birds, and can partially transform into one. Able to create jutsu, and good at tracking due to eagle's eyes.

Personality: Quiet and serious, but kind and patient too. Committed to his work, wife and teammates, and to studying.

History: Again, go look at chapter 19 fr a full history. Married to Inomi, who is pregnant, and supporting her financially.

Looks: Medium hight, compact build. Long silvery-white hair with a fringe over his face. Amber eagle eyes, slightly delicate facial features. Wears a blue-grey jacket over a black tank-top, with grey shorts.

i also forgot...he learns the pheonix flower and the Dragon Flame Bomb much later on...

I will also give you Neo and Torashu (my other ocs) bio soon!