Derp Tank
Derp Tank
Derp Tank by TheGameArtCritic
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Category Games » - by Genre » - Shooter/FPS games
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Favorites... 5
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Category Games » - by Genre » - Shooter/FPS games
Date Submitted
Views 24240
Favorites... 5
Vote Score 2
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Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken 2 hours
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Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken 2 hours
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TheGameArtCritic on November 19, 2011, 4:58:45 AM
mechadragon13 on November 19, 2011, 5:00:37 AM
TheGameArtCritic on November 19, 2011, 5:07:15 AM
Harry: *quietly, not once looking away from Key* ... Yes it is...
Todd: *It's then that he realizes something, something that he should have realized a long time ago. WELL! Isn't HE an idiot then?* ... Harry... It wasn't a pole... was it?
Harry: What?
Todd: ... It wasn't a pole... it was Kevin and Gabe...
Harry: *was hoping he would never find out* ... ... I didn't want to upset you, Todd...
Todd: *It's then that he realizes something, something that he should have realized a long time ago. WELL! Isn't HE an idiot then?* ... Harry... It wasn't a pole... was it?
Harry: What?
Todd: ... It wasn't a pole... it was Kevin and Gabe...
Harry: *was hoping he would never find out* ... ... I didn't want to upset you, Todd...
mechadragon13 on November 19, 2011, 5:11:43 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on November 18, 2011, 1:51:41 PM
mechadragon13 on November 18, 2011, 1:57:58 PM
Key: *panic sets in when she hears their footsteps speed up, and she immediately breaks into a sprint, glancing around at the sides of buildings, trying to find an appropriate surface to climb up, and mentally cursing when she sees none. she may be fast, but she was small--she knew she would tire out and be caught eventually*
TheGameArtCritic on November 18, 2011, 2:18:41 PM
mechadragon13 on November 18, 2011, 2:24:12 PM
TheGameArtCritic on November 18, 2011, 2:28:07 PM
mechadragon13 on November 18, 2011, 2:32:02 PM
Key: !!! *briefly wonders exactly HOW MUCH they disliked Harry before the athlete's punch practically knocks the thought right out of her mind, replacing it with HOLY shoot THAT REALLY frackING HURT. she tries to free herself, to shield her face, but the guy was easily more than twice her size--she stood no chance*
TheGameArtCritic on November 18, 2011, 2:45:46 PM
Football Player: *he smacks Key around a bit, his toothy grin shimmering under the moonlight. Then he kicks her and hands her to the other guy*
Guy: *pushes her to the ground and is ready to attack again, when -*
Todd: *jumps down in from of the guy with a loud THUMP and attacks him, punching him repeatedly* What! The! frack!!
Guy: A-AHH! D8 T-TODD!
Football Player: Stop! Stop it! D8
Todd: *throws the guy into the football player, then stomps on the two of them, following up with punching the football player in the face until Todd' knuckles bleed and the football player is unconscious. He glares at the guy* frack you. I can't be friends with scum like you - and to think you two were decent people... get out of my face. >:(
Guy: D8> *takes the football player and drags him back*
Todd: *turns to Key, his facial features darkened by his hood* You okay?
Guy: *pushes her to the ground and is ready to attack again, when -*
Todd: *jumps down in from of the guy with a loud THUMP and attacks him, punching him repeatedly* What! The! frack!!
Guy: A-AHH! D8 T-TODD!
Football Player: Stop! Stop it! D8
Todd: *throws the guy into the football player, then stomps on the two of them, following up with punching the football player in the face until Todd' knuckles bleed and the football player is unconscious. He glares at the guy* frack you. I can't be friends with scum like you - and to think you two were decent people... get out of my face. >:(
Guy: D8> *takes the football player and drags him back*
Todd: *turns to Key, his facial features darkened by his hood* You okay?
mechadragon13 on November 18, 2011, 3:12:08 PM
Key: *tries to pick herself up off the ground, only managing to get up on her hands and knees. she was much too dizzy to stand up all the way. everything hurt, and it felt like maybe something was broken... she wasn't quite sure. wiping her mouth with the back of her hand, she isn't surprised to find blood--they had hit her pretty hard. looking up at Todd, she almost doesn't recognize him, as the lighting obscured almost all of his face, but she's so incredibly glad he showed up...*
TheGameArtCritic on November 18, 2011, 3:40:27 PM
mechadragon13 on November 19, 2011, 4:11:55 AM
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mechadragon13 on November 19, 2011, 4:29:44 AM
TheGameArtCritic on November 19, 2011, 4:35:19 AM
Todd: *he takes no notice to this as he carries her back to the apartment, managing to knock on the door, holding Key with one hand for a few seconds, then going back to holding her with two hands*
Harry: *he opens the door and is shocked at what he sees* K-Key...! D8
Todd: ... It was Kevin and Gabe... KEVIN AND GABE of all people...
Harry: D8> ...!
Todd: *he walks in and carefully puts Key down on the couch*
Harry: *he opens the door and is shocked at what he sees* K-Key...! D8
Todd: ... It was Kevin and Gabe... KEVIN AND GABE of all people...
Harry: D8> ...!
Todd: *he walks in and carefully puts Key down on the couch*
mechadragon13 on November 19, 2011, 4:37:55 AM
TheGameArtCritic on November 19, 2011, 4:43:08 AM
Todd: Key - Key, stop, stop, hang on... don't move. Don't move yet. We don't know how badly you're hurt... *he moves closer to her and takes off her hood, looking over her face - strange how this seems to be the first time he's actually looking at it*
Harry: *he's absolutely horrified - this all happened because of HIM - because Key STOOD UP for him...! If only she hadn't - if only he didn't EXIST!*
Harry: *he's absolutely horrified - this all happened because of HIM - because Key STOOD UP for him...! If only she hadn't - if only he didn't EXIST!*
mechadragon13 on November 19, 2011, 4:47:54 AM
Key: *already has a black eye, and more bruises are darkening around her face. she was bleeding out of her mouth a bit from being punched in the teeth, but that seemed to be the worst of it. at least, around her face. she looks up at Todd almost apologetically, as if she felt like she was being a nuisance*
TheGameArtCritic on November 19, 2011, 4:54:58 AM
TheGameArtCritic on November 17, 2011, 11:30:58 AM
Todd: *he goes through class as usual, but... he's incredibly bothered by Harry's injuries, and as convincing as Harry seemed to be... it couldn't have been a pole. He doesn't know what to do with Harry, really. He hates when he keeps secrets from him - can't Harry just TRUST HIM, or not be afraid he's get angry, or WHATEVER his deal was? Maybe it has to do with his father... his sketchy, vaguely-referred-to-on-rare-occasions father... perhaps it was something Harry simply had to do. Lie, because it has been hardwired into his brain* ...
mechadragon13 on November 17, 2011, 11:37:15 AM
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mechadragon13 on November 18, 2011, 1:47:25 PM
Key: *that feeling of being followed returns, and she glances over her shoulder, secretly hoping it was just her imagination. to her surprise, it wasn't--and seeing how it was those same three guys from earlier didn't help quell her fears. she walks a bit faster, hoping that they weren't REALLY following her*
TheGameArtCritic on November 18, 2011, 1:50:15 PM
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TheGameArtCritic on November 16, 2011, 8:08:58 AM
Todd: ... Harry...
Harry: I'm sorry, I was just... I was running, something from yesterday kinda upset me, and I wasn't looking where I was going... it's nothing to worry about... *he's obviously had experience lying to Todd - only someone who's been doing so for a long time could seem so convincing*
Todd: Alright... what was it that got you so upset? Like, what was this thing you mentioned? <:(
Harry: ... Y'know, Todd, now that I think about it, it doesn't seem so upsetting... really, I'm fine...
Harry: I'm sorry, I was just... I was running, something from yesterday kinda upset me, and I wasn't looking where I was going... it's nothing to worry about... *he's obviously had experience lying to Todd - only someone who's been doing so for a long time could seem so convincing*
Todd: Alright... what was it that got you so upset? Like, what was this thing you mentioned? <:(
Harry: ... Y'know, Todd, now that I think about it, it doesn't seem so upsetting... really, I'm fine...
mechadragon13 on November 16, 2011, 11:33:42 AM
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mechadragon13 on November 15, 2011, 9:21:51 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on November 15, 2011, 12:00:53 PM
Todd: I... I don't know... Maybe I should go talk to him... <:(
meanwhile
Harry: *breaks into a run when he gets outside, running until he reaches the field beside the track behind the college. He's out of breath, tears streaming down his face, frustrated with his situation, frustrated with HIMSELF, with TODD for being so oblivious, for SAM for being such a dog... why? Why must he like her...?*
meanwhile
Harry: *breaks into a run when he gets outside, running until he reaches the field beside the track behind the college. He's out of breath, tears streaming down his face, frustrated with his situation, frustrated with HIMSELF, with TODD for being so oblivious, for SAM for being such a dog... why? Why must he like her...?*
mechadragon13 on November 15, 2011, 12:08:26 PM
TheGameArtCritic on November 15, 2011, 12:51:33 PM
Todd: No, this was different... when he's moody, he talks to me, he doesn't just get up and leave like that... <:( *stands up, ready to go after Harry*
meanwhile
Harry: *waits around outside, looking at the sky and wiping his tears away from his face. It'll get better, right? Just one more year. They'll be out of college and he won't have to deal with this ever again*
Bobby: *is a short, fat young adult, 22, and a crooked grin on his face. Harry was alone, without Todd. Why is that, he wonders? No matter, the big ol' dog is now his to screw around with, which is always great fun for everyone* HEY GATZSKY!
Harry: ...
Other Guys: *join in. One is nearly as tall as Harry, and much more fit, being on the football team. They approach with Bobby*
Harry: ... Not in the mood for this...
Football Guy: Hey, shut up! >:/ *smacks Harry upside the head*
Harry: !! ... *he rubs where he's hit* ...
Bobby: You can ALWAYS be in the mood for US, Gatzsky - we're Todd's friends, so we're YOUR friends, right?
Harry: ... Vicious animals closing in... they never learn that a porcupine has quills...
Guy 1: Can you believe this shoot he's spouting? fracking POETRY!
Football Player: You a fracking poet Gatzsky? You a fracking gay-@$$ poet? *this time he punches Harry*
Harry: !!! *falls down*
Football Player: frack you, fag.
Harry: *hissing through his teeth* ... Not in the fracking MOOD...
Bobby: Haha! What the frack! This guy's attitude, y'know?
Football Player: FAG! *kicks Harry*
Harry: *grunts when he's hit, but then quickly gets to his feet, his cheek bruised and bleeding, the wind knocked out of him from the kick, leaving him gasping for breath*
meanwhile
Harry: *waits around outside, looking at the sky and wiping his tears away from his face. It'll get better, right? Just one more year. They'll be out of college and he won't have to deal with this ever again*
Bobby: *is a short, fat young adult, 22, and a crooked grin on his face. Harry was alone, without Todd. Why is that, he wonders? No matter, the big ol' dog is now his to screw around with, which is always great fun for everyone* HEY GATZSKY!
Harry: ...
Other Guys: *join in. One is nearly as tall as Harry, and much more fit, being on the football team. They approach with Bobby*
Harry: ... Not in the mood for this...
Football Guy: Hey, shut up! >:/ *smacks Harry upside the head*
Harry: !! ... *he rubs where he's hit* ...
Bobby: You can ALWAYS be in the mood for US, Gatzsky - we're Todd's friends, so we're YOUR friends, right?
Harry: ... Vicious animals closing in... they never learn that a porcupine has quills...
Guy 1: Can you believe this shoot he's spouting? fracking POETRY!
Football Player: You a fracking poet Gatzsky? You a fracking gay-@$$ poet? *this time he punches Harry*
Harry: !!! *falls down*
Football Player: frack you, fag.
Harry: *hissing through his teeth* ... Not in the fracking MOOD...
Bobby: Haha! What the frack! This guy's attitude, y'know?
Football Player: FAG! *kicks Harry*
Harry: *grunts when he's hit, but then quickly gets to his feet, his cheek bruised and bleeding, the wind knocked out of him from the kick, leaving him gasping for breath*
mechadragon13 on November 15, 2011, 1:02:37 PM
Sam: I'm sure he's fine, Todd, this isn't the first time this... hey, where did Key go? o__o
meanwhile
Key: *had decided to get up and go after Harry while Todd was talking--she knew something was up and she wanted to make sure he was okay. being a bit of an athlete herself, she manages to run and find him rather quickly--and she's shocked by what she sees. it's just too familiar. TOO familiar. she never had anyone stand up for her--and no one was standing up for Harry now. she swallows her fear, and approaches them, her voice quiet, shy at first, but she gets louder, more confident* hey... hey! S-Stop hurting him! D:<
meanwhile
Key: *had decided to get up and go after Harry while Todd was talking--she knew something was up and she wanted to make sure he was okay. being a bit of an athlete herself, she manages to run and find him rather quickly--and she's shocked by what she sees. it's just too familiar. TOO familiar. she never had anyone stand up for her--and no one was standing up for Harry now. she swallows her fear, and approaches them, her voice quiet, shy at first, but she gets louder, more confident* hey... hey! S-Stop hurting him! D:<
TheGameArtCritic on November 15, 2011, 1:17:29 PM
mechadragon13 on November 15, 2011, 1:26:57 PM
Key: *stands there for a moment, shocked--that's all it took? is that all it takes to get someone to stop hurting someone else? ...why did no one ever do that for her until Alex came along...? she shakes off the thought, and runs over to Harry, looking him over, making sure he wasn't TOO hurt* H-Hey, are you okay? D:>
TheGameArtCritic on November 15, 2011, 1:28:58 PM
mechadragon13 on November 15, 2011, 1:30:16 PM
TheGameArtCritic on November 15, 2011, 2:33:03 PM
mechadragon13 on November 15, 2011, 2:36:43 PM
Key: .... *nods. she is somewhat astounded by how SIMILAR this was to how things were for her before... though... she was lucky enough to only get the harsh words... usually, at least... and she never told anyone. anyone except Alex, but...Well, they were different than Harry is with Todd, obviously...* ...will you ever tell him?
TheGameArtCritic on November 15, 2011, 3:02:16 PM
mechadragon13 on November 15, 2011, 3:03:34 PM
TheGameArtCritic on November 15, 2011, 3:11:01 PM
Harry: *he doesn't dare look at Key. There's shame in his eyes, though for him, this isn't so bad. This was actually a rather easy beating compared to... back home. Back with his drunk of a father (if Harry can call him that) who shouted at him, through things, even sharp objects, throwing fists, threatening to kill Harry* ...
Harry: *he stares at them, at Key, feeling absolutely horrible*