RANDOM YGO STUFF THAT I WROTE! >_<
Submitted November 1, 2006 Updated July 4, 2007 Status Incomplete | meh...
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - blah...blah...blah...
Submitted: November 1, 2006 • Updated: November 1, 2006
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Chapter 2 - *yawn* -_-'
Submitted: November 2, 2006 • Updated: November 2, 2006
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Chapter 3 - BREAKING THE HABIT SONG FIC!
Submitted: November 2, 2006 • Updated: November 2, 2006
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Chapter 4 - LOOOOOOONG chapter?!
Submitted: November 30, 2006 • Updated: November 30, 2006
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Chapter 5 - HE SLEEPS NAKED?! O_O
Submitted: December 2, 2006 • Updated: December 2, 2006
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Chapter 6 - sleepy...
Submitted: December 2, 2006 • Updated: December 2, 2006
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Chapter 7 - um...
Submitted: December 3, 2006 • Updated: December 3, 2006
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Chapter 8 - HIC!
Submitted: December 3, 2006 • Updated: December 3, 2006
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Chapter 9 - *cough, shuffle*
Submitted: December 5, 2006 • Updated: December 5, 2006
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Chapter 10 - random chappie, set after the final ep of YGO
Submitted: December 9, 2006 • Updated: December 9, 2006
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Chapter 11 - getting away
Submitted: December 10, 2006 • Updated: December 10, 2006
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Chapter 12 - Too far away!
Submitted: December 10, 2006 • Updated: December 10, 2006
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Chapter 13 - Random X-Men-like stuff >_>
Submitted: December 16, 2006 • Updated: December 16, 2006
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Chapter 14 - ...o-o...!
Submitted: December 18, 2006 • Updated: December 18, 2006
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Chapter 15 - Every time we touch
Submitted: December 20, 2006 • Updated: December 20, 2006
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Chapter 16 - Bad luck, Pharaoh!
Submitted: December 22, 2006 • Updated: December 22, 2006
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Chapter 17 - KUNG FU PHARAOH! HI-YA!
Submitted: December 25, 2006 • Updated: December 25, 2006
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Chapter 18 - OW!
Submitted: December 29, 2006 • Updated: December 29, 2006
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Chapter 19 - randomness
Submitted: January 1, 2007 • Updated: January 1, 2007
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Chapter 20 - Tea's secret
Submitted: January 1, 2007 • Updated: January 1, 2007
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Chapter 21 - *shrugs* (lack of better title)
Submitted: January 4, 2007 • Updated: January 4, 2007
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Chapter 22 - Don'y give up
Submitted: January 16, 2007 • Updated: January 16, 2007
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Chapter 23 - EEK! VAMPIRES!
Submitted: January 16, 2007 • Updated: January 16, 2007
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Chapter 24 - blood!
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
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Chapter 25 - final chapter of vamps!
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
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Chapter 26 - umm...i dunno...
Submitted: February 15, 2007 • Updated: February 15, 2007
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Chapter 27 - Egyptian-y chapter
Submitted: March 12, 2007 • Updated: March 12, 2007
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Chapter 28 - Duality
Submitted: April 2, 2007 • Updated: April 2, 2007
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Chapter 29 - Haunted
Submitted: April 5, 2007 • Updated: April 5, 2007
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Chapter 30 - Bat Country
Submitted: April 9, 2007 • Updated: April 9, 2007
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Chapter 31 - Coming Undone
Submitted: April 14, 2007 • Updated: April 14, 2007
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Chapter 32 - Anubi
Submitted: April 28, 2007 • Updated: April 28, 2007
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Chapter 33 - Hybrid Theory
Submitted: May 20, 2007 • Updated: May 20, 2007
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Chapter 34 - Leave Out All The Rest
Submitted: May 20, 2007 • Updated: May 20, 2007
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Chapter 35 - Highschool Never Ends
Submitted: June 2, 2007 • Updated: June 2, 2007
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Chapter 36 - The Sharpest of Lives
Submitted: June 2, 2007 • Updated: June 2, 2007
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Chapter 37 - Nemo
Submitted: June 2, 2007 • Updated: June 2, 2007
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Chapter 38 - Intro to a new story!!!
Submitted: July 4, 2007 • Updated: July 4, 2007
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Chapter 39 - *Insert wolf howl here*
Submitted: July 4, 2007 • Updated: July 4, 2007
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perfectpureblood on July 16, 2007, 5:40:55 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 39)
awesome!!! love it!! great descriptions and ideas!!IluvAtem on July 17, 2007, 4:35:13 AM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 39)
Thanks again! :)perfectpureblood on July 23, 2007, 8:29:49 PM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: index)
np! ^^perfectpureblood on July 16, 2007, 3:39:38 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 38)
^^ sounds good!IluvAtem on July 16, 2007, 4:51:02 AM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 38)
Thankies! *huggle*perfectpureblood on July 16, 2007, 4:57:41 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: index)
^^ your welcome! :)yafoolin on July 4, 2007, 6:01:43 AM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 39)
Poor AtemIluvAtem on July 5, 2007, 3:27:48 AM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 39)
Thanks for the comments!yafoolin on July 4, 2007, 5:58:59 AM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 38)
Poor Atemu he cant escape the girlsIluvAtem on July 5, 2007, 3:26:51 AM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 38)
I know. That inclues us! *chases Atem*fairywarrioress on July 4, 2007, 3:58:19 AM
fairywarrioress on (Chapter: 39)
Awww!! Poor Atem! Dont worry Tea will make him feel better! ^^
Neat chapters - i look forward to your next update ;D
IluvAtem on July 5, 2007, 3:25:52 AM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 39)
Thankies! *hug*perfectpureblood on June 5, 2007, 6:14:07 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 35)
haha! love this bit! "Atem, A, Ren, F". "HA!-" I slap a hand over my mouth. :D lol!! and "Atem's got girl's hair!" Kaylee announces. "No I haven't!" I snap. LOL! ^.^you have some fantastic lines in yours stories.
really effective last line, and just great chapter!! ^^
IluvAtem on June 6, 2007, 12:40:07 AM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 35)
lolThankies! *glomp* ^^
perfectpureblood on June 6, 2007, 1:15:39 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 35)
^^ your very welcome! :)perfectpureblood on June 5, 2007, 6:20:08 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 37)
wow. that chapter was awesome!!! I really loved it!! keep it up!! ^^IluvAtem on June 6, 2007, 12:38:47 AM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 37)
thank you! ^________^IluvAtem on June 6, 2007, 12:41:01 AM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: index)
Oh! I did a pic of it!perfectpureblood on June 6, 2007, 1:18:25 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: index)
oh! you did? i'll have a look at your gallery! ^^perfectpureblood on June 6, 2007, 1:17:41 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: index)
^^ your welcome! :Dperfectpureblood on June 5, 2007, 6:16:59 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 36)
Tea is a cat?? Atem is a wolf?? omg!! awesome chapter!! :D cliffie!!IluvAtem on June 6, 2007, 12:38:24 AM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 36)
lol yup! :)perfectpureblood on June 6, 2007, 1:16:21 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 36)
^^ :Dfairywarrioress on June 2, 2007, 7:47:25 PM
fairywarrioress on (Chapter: 37)
Wicked!!Sounds good so far ^^
IluvAtem on June 2, 2007, 7:48:02 PM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 37)
:)BrazillianPaula13 on June 2, 2007, 6:57:20 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 37)
This story(more like "stories" XP) is still very cool! ^^IluvAtem on June 2, 2007, 7:47:44 PM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 37)
^^yafoolin on June 2, 2007, 7:05:44 AM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 35)
Awesome chapterIluvAtem on June 2, 2007, 7:47:27 PM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 35)
thank you! ^^yafoolin on June 2, 2007, 7:09:47 AM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 37)
AwesomeIluvAtem on June 2, 2007, 7:47:04 PM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 37)
thanxfairywarrioress on June 2, 2007, 7:42:29 PM
fairywarrioress on (Chapter: 35)
Whoa!!That was a wiked chapter - That stupid kid Ren is gonna get the @$$ kicking of a life time!!
Me: KYAAAAAA!! *karate kick*
Ren: *screams like a girl* AGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
IluvAtem on June 2, 2007, 7:46:52 PM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 35)
lolNice move!
fairywarrioress on June 2, 2007, 7:45:51 PM
fairywarrioress on (Chapter: 36)
Noooo!! ^^They have to stay together!
Great chapter - i got a bit carried away at the end!! lol
IluvAtem on June 2, 2007, 7:46:34 PM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 36)
thanks!BrazillianPaula13 on June 2, 2007, 6:56:12 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 36)
Awesome!^^BrazillianPaula13 on June 2, 2007, 6:55:37 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 35)
Cool!perfectpureblood on May 30, 2007, 9:21:45 PM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 34)
love his uncle! he's a great character! :)but no! Tea won't die, she'll come back as a vampire, right? right?? :(
perfectpureblood on May 30, 2007, 9:17:51 PM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 33)
whoa! awesome start to the chapter!! great description, I could feel his pain and see the transformation in my mind! really cool!! great chapter!fairywarrioress on May 21, 2007, 3:36:07 AM
fairywarrioress on (Chapter: 34)
Oh my god You are so awesome at writing
I seriously nearly cried at the end - thats so sad, Tea cant die!
Atems gonna go crazy now!
You really paint a perfect picture, i pretty much saw it happening :)
yafoolin on May 20, 2007, 4:40:58 AM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 34)
Oh no Tea can't be deadyafoolin on May 20, 2007, 4:38:42 AM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 33)
Great chapterperfectpureblood on May 10, 2007, 1:18:42 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 32)
love all of it! ^^love the idea of the chip to make he learn English. awesome that he's in a band! fantastic that him and Tea are together cause they're my fav pairing! ^^ and I really want to know what happens with these scientists!
haha! ^^ love the whole turning into a puppy and Yugi ruffling his hair! lol. :D
yafoolin on April 27, 2007, 10:06:49 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 32)
Great chapter can't wait for the next onefairywarrioress on April 27, 2007, 8:29:29 PM
fairywarrioress on (Chapter: 32)
That was awesome!!I love Atem's new style :)
It suits him :P
Yeyness for goth/emo/vampire/werewolf/bat Atem!!
=^^=
perfectpureblood on April 17, 2007, 7:19:29 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 31)
Oooo! I love that last line! soooo cool! awesome chapter, as usual!! ^^ do not anger vampire Atem! ^^ keep it up!perfectpureblood on April 17, 2007, 7:12:44 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 30)
omg! wow, very intense at the end! so awesome! sooo much action and detail! great visuals! I love it so much! and yay! Tea, Yugi, Marik and Ishizu! ^^ he has friends!!!!!grr, evil clifie! ^^
seriously good.
fairywarrioress on April 14, 2007, 7:57:10 PM
fairywarrioress on (Chapter: 31)
WHoa!Slow down ther Atem! ^^
That was a really good chapter - neat job :)
I always enjoy reading ur new stuff =D
yafoolin on April 14, 2007, 3:33:03 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 31)
Great chapter please continue this storyyafoolin on April 12, 2007, 11:53:16 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 30)
Please let Atem be okyafoolin on April 12, 2007, 11:52:15 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 29)
I love your new writing style its greatyafoolin on April 12, 2007, 11:50:56 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 28)
That is amazingfairywarrioress on April 9, 2007, 8:03:41 PM
fairywarrioress on (Chapter: 30)
NO NO NO!! ATEM!! Oh god i hope he's ok! ^^
And yey you brought the gang back into it! WOOP WOOP!
Seriously, your writing is so good! I was hooked on that chapter and didnt want it to end
I'd love to learn egyption!
=^^=
perfectpureblood on April 5, 2007, 9:18:24 PM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 29)
wow! an amazing chapter!! I was hooked!!! I loved it!! the best chapter ever!! so descriptive! really chilling!! great detail in the dream!!! this was fantastic!!! great great great work!!!fairywarrioress on April 5, 2007, 6:53:39 PM
fairywarrioress on (Chapter: 29)
I loved it so much i read it again! Seriously, the detail in this is amazing!! And the way you delt with the dream was so good :)
Keep up the good work! =D
perfectpureblood on April 3, 2007, 3:58:30 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 28)
'Sucked them dry of that crimson lifeline'excellent line!! ^^
this chapter was fantastic!! your writing has so improved! you still need to make your sentences flow a little more instead of so many full stops, but I guess that can be quite a good effect! ^^
really awesome story line, great set up! I really really like it! love that its from Atem's point of view. I love it love it love it!!!! please keep it going!! and great cliffie! can't wait to see what happens next! in interest, is that girl Tea? ^^ great work!
fairywarrioress on April 2, 2007, 5:45:59 PM
fairywarrioress on (Chapter: 28)
O_O That was awesome - the language you used was soooo good! I really enjoyed that read, i was practically glued to the screen!!Whos the vampire? Whats gonna happent to the girl? AGHHH!! i wanna know XD!
IluvAtem on April 2, 2007, 6:49:25 AM
IluvAtem on (Chapter: 28)
* relieve* finish
* take
* children's
* She (not 'The')
^ Spelling mistakes in the order that you'll find them! If you see anymore, let me know!
I suppose that's what you get when you only use notepad to write them...
perfectpureblood on March 12, 2007, 11:35:01 PM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 27)
lol! loved the ending! :Dgreat chapter! Everyone loved Atem! ^^
HikariYugiYamiAtemu on March 12, 2007, 5:54:19 PM
HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 27)
lol...great and funny story..XDyafoolin on March 12, 2007, 2:04:51 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 27)
Great chapterBut one question... where's Tea?
fairywarrior on March 12, 2007, 7:20:07 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 27)
I loved this new chapter!! ^^But whos Ixi and wheres Tea!!!
Great chapter anyways! You live up to your word of being very random! Lol XD
perfectpureblood on February 18, 2007, 11:32:19 PM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 26)
cool! ^^ I can tell very much that you are a huge Atem fanatic! ^^ it shows through all your work, which is great!! :)perfectpureblood on February 18, 2007, 11:05:10 PM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 25)
awesome! bit gruesome though. love the romance and chemistry between Atem and Tea! ^^ love the black rose! Ooo, I want one! :Dyafoolin on February 16, 2007, 3:52:58 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 24)
This is a great chapterHikariYugiYamiAtemu on February 15, 2007, 6:11:55 PM
HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: index)
all the chapters are very funny , and cool too! XDHikariYugiYamiAtemu on February 15, 2007, 6:11:13 PM
HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 26)
lol..XDfairywarrior on February 14, 2007, 2:45:23 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 25)
Lol Wahooo you used Fall Out Boys new song!!! Its so good ^^!
Anyways that was a great chapter!! =^^=
fairywarrior on February 14, 2007, 2:42:14 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 24)
YEY !! i love that song!! Cool chapter i like that both Tea and Atem are wolves and not just Atem! =] Nice touch!
BrazillianPaula13 on January 20, 2007, 3:08:43 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 23)
Don't vampires need blood because their body can't produce any? Whatever.Awesome chappie!^^
BrazillianPaula13 on January 20, 2007, 3:03:58 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 22)
So cute! ^-^Great chappie!
perfectpureblood on January 16, 2007, 9:55:16 PM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 23)
oh wow. Tea would do anything for Atem wouldn't she? even giving blood!loved this qoute "Sheesh, why does Yugi have to have a brother that's Dracula's cousin?" she mumbled, turning on her heals.
"I'm not related to Dracula! He was a fictional character from a novel. I'm real!" he snapped.
"Whatever, smart @$$".
lol!!! :D
Avatar on January 16, 2007, 5:10:21 PM
Avatar on (Chapter: 5)
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!I wish I have a camera!*dies of laughter*Â
Atem:*vein on head*I'll kill you for this!!!
Avatar on January 16, 2007, 4:25:10 PM
Avatar on (Chapter: 4)
how sweet!^^fairywarrior on January 16, 2007, 3:18:14 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 23)
Noooooo atem!! i cant belive that happened !!
brilliant chapter!
fairywarrior on January 16, 2007, 3:15:29 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 22)
Awwwww thats s sweet ^^!!I love it!
yafoolin on January 15, 2007, 10:40:02 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 23)
I love this chapter can't wait for moreyafoolin on January 15, 2007, 10:38:15 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 22)
Great chapterBrazillianPaula13 on January 9, 2007, 2:46:27 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 21)
^-^ Awwww! So sweet. He's just so adorable! Great chappie!BrazillianPaula13 on January 9, 2007, 2:39:54 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 19)
You know. you never live a story title down...Way beyond random...perfectpureblood on January 7, 2007, 5:07:09 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 21)
aww! he's so charming! ^^ and extremely forgiving! she tries to kill him twice and he's cool with it! ^^ lol. you come up with great ideas, and your writing is improving so much! :D love the way you wrote the end. ^^yay! I looove Evanescence. ^^
yafoolin on January 4, 2007, 1:28:25 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 21)
Can't wait for the next chapterfairywarrior on January 4, 2007, 3:47:49 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 21)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I LOVE IT!!!i always thought that Tea could sing!
i wanna hear her ^^! And i cant believe she tried to kill Yami again!! lol he's good at forgiving!
nice chapter ^_~!
Avatar on January 4, 2007, 2:03:36 AM
Avatar on (Chapter: 1)
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perfectpureblood on January 4, 2007, 1:07:46 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 20)
I loved every single chapter!! :DI have to admit, very random, but very awesome! ^^ keep it up! :D
yafoolin on January 1, 2007, 1:07:58 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 19)
Great chapter I love this storyyafoolin on January 1, 2007, 1:04:33 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 20)
Wow great chapterI hope he can forgive her
fairywarrior on January 1, 2007, 2:02:27 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 19)
OK i read 20 before 19!! lol but they are still both very good chappies ^^! everybody likes a bit of yamixtea!
fairywarrior on January 1, 2007, 1:59:19 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 20)
OMG TEA!!! aghhhh where did that come from i hope he's ok will he forgive tea?? what do we do?? so many questions need to be answered!
good chappie ^_^!
xfairywarriorx
fairywarrior on December 29, 2006, 2:53:56 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 18)
ow poor atem! >.<! good chappie! XD! cant wait till the next update
LOL on December 29, 2006, 1:34:10 AM
LOL on (Chapter: 5)
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA......!!!(dies)
..........(respawns)...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Woo... great stuff.*gasp*...heh.
yafoolin on December 28, 2006, 10:05:43 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 18)
Poor Atem that must hurtBrazillianPaula13 on December 28, 2006, 9:06:52 PM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 18)
-_-* How come you always get him kicked there? Poor guy. Doesn't he ever get mad at you for doing that to him?XP Hehe. Awesome story.
fairywarrior on December 25, 2006, 6:16:44 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 17)
0_0...he does kung fu and plays guitar and ...and hes a fit wolf!! XD wow hes like gods gift to women!! lol!! good chapter hope to see more soon!BrazillianPaula13 on December 25, 2006, 3:29:12 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 17)
He plays guitar, he's a wolf AND he does kung-fu?! What's next?!yafoolin on December 25, 2006, 2:09:03 AM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 17)
Great chapter I can just Imagine Atem in his wolfish formjackie4ever on December 25, 2006, 12:58:19 AM
jackie4ever on (Chapter: 17)
he a wolf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!perfectpureblood on December 23, 2006, 7:03:47 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 16)
whoa! that thing that went down his throat freaked me out! lol! you have great ideas, I just think you need to spend a little more time developing them. still, awesome chapter!!BrazillianPaula13 on December 22, 2006, 9:32:09 PM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 16)
O.o Oh, s**t....What happened? Holy Jesus!Awesome story, as always...
HikariYugiYamiAtemu on December 22, 2006, 4:35:17 PM
HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 16)
-after reading all the other chapters- cool story as usual...XDfairywarrior on December 22, 2006, 5:36:25 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 16)
omg whats wrong?? aghhh!! good chappie keep it up!!fairywarrior on December 21, 2006, 12:54:06 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 15)
yey thats so sweet!! ^^!!BrazillianPaula13 on December 20, 2006, 4:59:13 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 15)
^-^Love is SO sweet! Great story! As always.perfectpureblood on December 20, 2006, 2:13:13 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 15)
aww! kiss! ^^ lovely chapter. loved the levitation. ^^ but, how can Tea do that?yafoolin on December 20, 2006, 12:50:42 AM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 15)
Cool Update soonperfectpureblood on December 18, 2006, 3:26:42 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 14)
haha! ^^ awesome.what happened to the other story you were doing? the one with the band?
fairywarrior on December 18, 2006, 3:14:56 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 14)
awesome i love the awesomeness of this awesome story!! lol ^^!! it was a really good chappie cant wait for the the next one!BrazillianPaula13 on December 18, 2006, 3:03:18 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 14)
^-^Can't wait for the next cgap. You just keep getting better, don't you?^^yafoolin on December 18, 2006, 12:54:43 AM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 14)
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next oneBrazillianPaula13 on December 16, 2006, 5:34:25 PM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 13)
You just don't like makeing the story fit together. It's a bunch of mixed-up stories. But cool, though.^^fairywarrior on December 16, 2006, 1:28:56 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 13)
whoa that is random!! i love it!! =^_^= cant wait for the next chappie!perfectpureblood on December 16, 2006, 12:36:03 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 13)
cool! ^^yafoolin on December 15, 2006, 11:28:21 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 13)
Interesting update soonHikariYugiYamiAtemu on December 12, 2006, 3:13:48 PM
HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 12)
*after finish reading your chapters* wow! your stories are pretty cool!fairywarrior on December 11, 2006, 5:32:53 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 12)
oh no poor atem!! hope he's ok good chappie i always look forward to seeing what you write next!! keep it up ! ^^
yafoolin on December 10, 2006, 12:38:38 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 12)
That man was horribleGreat chapter can't wait for the next one
BrazillianPaula13 on December 10, 2006, 7:00:37 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 12)
I don't know if I should call tha guy who hit him evil or if I should YOU evil... (Jus' kiddin', 'k?)If you keep updating like this, I get addicted, I'm warning you! ^-^Hehe.
Keep it up! ^-^
perfectpureblood on December 10, 2006, 5:12:57 AM
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wow! you update quick! ^^yes! you did the flashback! ^^ amazing work! the whole tank thing made me shudder, and the man beating Atem, it was horrbile! but very well written. keep it up! :)
fairywarrior on December 10, 2006, 2:21:28 AM
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yey anotehr goos chappie keep goin with it cos its really good!!xfairywarriorx
fairywarrior on December 10, 2006, 2:19:26 AM
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whoa what happened hes back!! yey and no cos he got hurt!! good chapie!
xfairywarriorx
yafoolin on December 10, 2006, 1:01:54 AM
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This is a great story you should continue with itBrazillianPaula13 on December 10, 2006, 12:55:05 AM
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I only get like that after P.E. ...Poor guy. Well, I just hope they get out without anyone finding them! You're not THAT evil, are you?
perfectpureblood on December 9, 2006, 9:48:05 PM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 11)
woot! you have to carry this story on, its awesome! I feel awful for Atem, he was once a great pharoh, and now he's been subjected to this. I think you should do a flashback thing telling us how he got there. *nod*your writing is fantastic, it has a certain... atmosphere about it, if you know what I mean. the only tip i'd give is to lengthen your sentences, not have so many short stops, cause it breaks the flow and the pace of the story. can't wait till the next one! ^^
BrazillianPaula13 on December 8, 2006, 11:45:11 PM
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........I don't know what to say, seriously.......What's that word you always use? Oh, right. Wow. That's all I can say....Wow.perfectpureblood on December 8, 2006, 11:12:15 PM
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wow. that was really good! this is the best peice of writing you've ever done! it was really awesome! I loved it! GREAT idea! the whole forcing the band to perform thing. great description, you really set the scene. it was so dark and exciting. I felt so much for Atem. amazing job! keep it up! ^^perfectpureblood on December 6, 2006, 2:07:06 AM
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cool! loved the ending! *pokey pokey* ^^jackie4ever on December 5, 2006, 9:56:00 AM
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/,M,...............................................jackie4ever on December 5, 2006, 9:50:21 AM
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GGGGGGGjackie4ever on December 5, 2006, 9:43:45 AM
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HAHHHHHHHAAAAAA I DONT GET THE ENDjackie4ever on December 5, 2006, 9:42:01 AM
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MOOOOOOOOOOONNNNjackie4ever on December 5, 2006, 9:18:06 AM
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I LIKE THE LAST SENTANCEjackie4ever on December 5, 2006, 9:17:14 AM
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WOW RANDOM STUFFFFFFFFFFFjackie4ever on December 5, 2006, 9:16:47 AM
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WOWjackie4ever on December 5, 2006, 9:16:06 AM
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SCHOOL SUCKSjackie4ever on December 5, 2006, 9:14:34 AM
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HHHAAAAAAAACristyMasashi52764 on December 5, 2006, 6:45:55 AM
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woah!! anzu and yami makinout.....^_^ KEEP GOING!!!LOLyafoolin on December 5, 2006, 3:32:52 AM
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I love this chapterfairywarrior on December 5, 2006, 3:14:15 AM
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YEY LOL! i cant belive you used my idea!! thankyou!! ^^!! do more do more its so good!!BrazillianPaula13 on December 5, 2006, 1:53:31 AM
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Hehe...Mess with who's quiet! ^^yafoolin on December 3, 2006, 3:35:17 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 8)
I love this poor Atem he's probably very hungoveryafoolin on December 3, 2006, 3:32:08 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 7)
Kind of sad poor Atemfairywarrior on December 3, 2006, 3:16:07 AM
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wow i absoloutely love the randomness of this it rocks!! please do loads more!! lol!! and i hope atem gets better!! yeh buggar of scotty cant believe he got poor yami that drunk!! ^^BrazillianPaula13 on December 3, 2006, 1:37:53 AM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 8)
I agree with perfectpureblood, it is COMPLETELY random!Bur very cool!^^
P.S.: I won't hurt Riri this time^^
Riri: Finally!
Paula: But I can change my mind....
perfectpureblood on December 3, 2006, 1:09:23 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 8)
no! don't hit Seto! wait, why would Seto want Tea anyway? very very random! ^^ cool though! ^^zeldafan92 on December 2, 2006, 9:59:03 PM
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love the random! ^^zeldafan92 on December 2, 2006, 9:56:57 PM
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heh funny!perfectpureblood on December 2, 2006, 9:11:30 PM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 6)
"Hey, Pharaoh, did you hear about the dog that went to the moon"? that was pretty random! ^^
anyway, great chapter!
BrazillianPaula13 on December 2, 2006, 8:55:54 PM
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Really cool story! Keep it up, seriously! Don't you think, Ricardo?Riri:...
Paula: Riri?
Riri: My head still hurts...
Paula: From what? *TRIES to look innocent*
Riri: You played golf with it yesterday!!!
Paula: *evil smile* Hehe. Hole-in-One... Tell IluvAtem what a great story this is.
Riri: It's SOOOO cool! I love randomness. And, between you and me, I'm not saying that just 'cause Paula has a basebell bat behind her back.
Paula: ...Run...
fairywarrior on December 2, 2006, 7:51:03 PM
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kl loving these chapters kep up the good work!! lol =^_^=yafoolin on December 2, 2006, 1:54:13 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 5)
Very coolBrazillianPaula13 on December 2, 2006, 6:16:51 AM
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I don't get randomness. Just classroom randomness. ^^Very cool!
perfectpureblood on December 2, 2006, 6:06:46 AM
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certainly random, but very very cool. ^^perfectpureblood on December 1, 2006, 2:12:25 AM
perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 4)
cool! ^^BrazillianPaula13 on November 30, 2006, 10:45:55 PM
BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 4)
It IS kinda random. I mean, different things poppin' up everywhere. XP But it is really cool!^-^yafoolin on November 30, 2006, 1:04:47 PM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 4)
Very good chappie update soon.fairywarrior on November 30, 2006, 4:48:18 AM
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhh yey finally !!! lol good chappie!fairywarrior on November 3, 2006, 3:00:14 AM
fairywarrior on (Chapter: 3)
nooooooooooooo..........come on tea where are you in his time of need!?very powerful picture i saw every bit of it in my head (that sounded kinda weird =^_^=)
fairywarrior on November 3, 2006, 2:58:27 AM
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wicked man keep it up man!HikariYugiYamiAtemu on November 2, 2006, 5:06:55 PM
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aww..poor AtemuHikariYugiYamiAtemu on November 2, 2006, 5:05:07 PM
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cool story...HikariYugiYamiAtemu on November 2, 2006, 5:02:03 PM
HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 1)
cool...XDyafoolin on November 2, 2006, 11:38:37 AM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 3)
Poor Atem Very well written
CristyMasashi52764 on November 2, 2006, 11:24:01 AM
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this is very astonishing!!CristyMasashi52764 on November 2, 2006, 11:22:54 AM
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cool!!perfectpureblood on November 2, 2006, 7:00:28 AM
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oh wow, that was pretty powerful! poor Atem! good descriptions. keep it up!fairywarrior on November 2, 2006, 12:52:42 AM
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lol i loves it!! its really funny write more write more!!yafoolin on November 1, 2006, 11:24:40 AM
yafoolin on (Chapter: 1)
i'M GONNA LOVE THIS STORIECristyMasashi52764 on November 1, 2006, 7:53:37 AM
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awww cute! i m gonna love this one!!!!!!!!!