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Troublemakers

Bladebreakers atend a boording school. a group of 4 girls come new, and they promise to get into trouble, themselfs and others! Better be a friend then a enemy!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Of course we're new!
Submitted: March 20, 2005 • Updated: March 20, 2005
Word count: 1232 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 245

Chapter 2 - The beginning of the Mariah
Submitted: March 21, 2005 • Updated: March 21, 2005
Word count: 2347 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 271

Chapter 3 - Ocean breakfast
Submitted: March 22, 2005 • Updated: March 22, 2005
Word count: 1658 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 272

Chapter 4 - Colored Breakfast
Submitted: March 24, 2005 • Updated: March 24, 2005
Word count: 2068 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 266

Chapter 5 - Be careful...
Submitted: April 9, 2005 • Updated: April 9, 2005
Word count: 1654 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 181

Chapter 6 - Alibi's and Smiles :D
Submitted: April 25, 2005 • Updated: April 25, 2005
Word count: 1465 • Size: 8k • Comments: 5 • views: 293

Chapter 7 - S or A?
Submitted: May 15, 2005 • Updated: May 15, 2005
Word count: 1555 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 236

Chapter 8 - The chip thief
Submitted: July 7, 2005 • Updated: July 7, 2005
Word count: 1942 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 261

Chapter 9 - BeyParts
Submitted: July 24, 2005 • Updated: July 24, 2005
Word count: 2623 • Size: 13k • Comments: 1 • views: 245

Chapter 10 - Breaking an entry
Submitted: July 24, 2005 • Updated: July 24, 2005
Word count: 2180 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 252

Chapter 11 - Sweat Dreams
Submitted: October 20, 2005 • Updated: October 20, 2005
Word count: 1425 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 225

Chapter 12 - Chronicles from under the bed
Submitted: November 14, 2005 • Updated: November 14, 2005
Word count: 6232 • Size: 34k • Comments: 0 • views: 245

Chapter 13 - Bubblegum, random names and cleaning psychos
Submitted: December 4, 2005 • Updated: December 4, 2005
Word count: 2608 • Size: 13k • Comments: 1 • views: 267

Comments

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Green_Metalic_Devil on May 19, 2005, 6:01:09 PM

Green_Metalic_Devil on (Chapter: 7)
Green_Metalic_DevilIt getting better and better.

Sapphire_Angels_Devil on May 16, 2005, 2:25:21 AM

Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 7)
Sapphire_Angels_DevilSo then we meet again story, lol ^-^ Well you know what I think and it is good so well then I dont know what more to say actually ehhh... good luck studying and with the whole Many ways to kill B thingy I am so going to comment you on them and ¨snickers¨ if i get any more ideas I lt you know.
~Saph~

Kaira on April 30, 2005, 8:27:34 AM

Kaira on (Chapter: 6)
Kairaare u kidding leave it like this it's funny when he smiles cuze everyone goes all crazy over it ;)

Green_Metalic_Devil on April 30, 2005, 5:32:55 AM

Green_Metalic_Devil on (Chapter: 6)
Green_Metalic_DevilThis was a graet chapter.

Sapphire_Angels_Devil on April 25, 2005, 4:37:27 AM

Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 6)
Sapphire_Angels_DevilA bit OOC in the end but well it is hard to change but maybe you should do him more cold when he talks to them like he couldn't care less but wanted to see what was happening so he did it anyways. ^-^
Sorry again I'm still here and are going to be for a while.
~Saph~
Please don't be pissed, please don't be pissed... oh and my homepage is finally up ^-^

Sapphire_Angels_Devil on April 25, 2005, 4:27:44 AM

Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 6)
Sapphire_Angels_DevilGomen nasai, gomen nasai, förlåt, förlåt, sorry, sorry, jag är så ledsen, jag är så ledsen, ursäkta, ursäkta, please forgive me!!!!

I tried to get into the net but something was wrong with our broadband and I couldn't get out on it. I have spent the most time trying to get in and working on a sort of compensation for you. ^-^U
I am really sorry but there was some mayor problem over here and I couldn't reach you if you are in go to the MSN so we can chat, please! I didn't stand you up or anything.
~Saph~

Green_Metalic_Devil on April 13, 2005, 6:34:53 AM

Green_Metalic_Devil on (Chapter: 5)
Green_Metalic_DevilSo funny. cant wait to read next one.
Tarius: I have the solution on that.
Me: What do you mean?
Tarius: I have created a time machine. So now you can go to the future and read next chapter.
Me: Oki doki!! (steps inside the Machine). And now What?
Tarius: push the yellow button!
Me: If you say so....
Tarius: YEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! His gone. I sended him to the Crita period.
Now he can torture the dinosaurs instead of me. His gone so now it is party!
(Later on the party)
Ray: So you have this party becuz you haved defeated the biggest evil of all?
Tarius: Thats rigth.
Me: Who are defeated?
Tarius: My master your idiot. how many times i have to explain that to you all...
Me: I am back!
Tarius: B-but how? I sended yo back in time.
Me: You sended one of my robots back in time.
Tarius: It was a robot? But since when can you build robots?
Me: Since i taked Einsteins brain. And now you die!!!!
Tarius: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me: But this is such a cool party. You invited every great character from the anime Beyblade. I Kill you later. Now we party.
GREAT STORY!!!!!

heartless-sinner on April 9, 2005, 12:45:27 AM

heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 5)
heartless-sinneryou three like to argue alot huh. ^-^ hmph...blame it on Bob huh. that made me crack up! i love your ideas with all the pranks and the Secret Kai thing sounds awesome. yay more Kai!!!!!!!! keep up the awesome work. ^-^

Sapphire_Angels_Devil on April 8, 2005, 9:54:27 PM

Sapphire_Angels_Devil on (Chapter: 5)
Sapphire_Angels_DevilI have read that one and it is fun ^-^
Well done with the chapter and if you need more help just tell me. I have amiled it again but just a short message to see if you got it since I don't want someone ells to get the story and then wonder who the hell I am and start to mail bomb me and you could do that to Tyson, mail bomb him secret mail address and he can't catch anyone of your OC's and what is she supposed to do in a boring comp. class anyways ¨smirks¨
BYE!
HEJ DÅ!
AU REVOIR!
CIAO!
ADJÖ!
GOD BYE!
SAYONARA!
AUF FIDESENE!
and so on...
~Saph~

Green_Metalic_Devil on April 7, 2005, 8:22:16 PM

Green_Metalic_Devil on (Chapter: 4)
Green_Metalic_DevilI have some ideas.
1.Glue Tyson to his launcher.
2.Let Tyson wake up whith a snake or pig or something like that.
3.Let a strange boy pretend that he was Tysons old boyfriend.
4.Let Tyson think that he is dead and haved come to the beybladehell.
5.Let Tyson believe it is go-dressed-like-a-girl-day for the boys.
6.Send out an evil messege in Tysons name.

This is all the ideas i have now. But it comes more. Bye