fire
Submitted November 13, 2005 Updated November 13, 2005 Status Incomplete | these are my element poems. It took me almost a year to come up with them all. Tell me what you think and if my time was well spent, your comments will be appreciated.
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Fantasy » Elementals |
Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Fire
Submitted: November 13, 2005 • Updated: November 13, 2005
Word count: 137 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 193
Chapter 2 - Water
Submitted: November 13, 2005 • Updated: November 13, 2005
Word count: 113 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 170
Chapter 3 - Wind
Submitted: November 13, 2005 • Updated: November 13, 2005
Word count: 162 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 177
Chapter 4 - Earth
Submitted: November 13, 2005 • Updated: November 13, 2005
Word count: 143 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 191
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Animanic on November 17, 2005, 10:16:18 AM
Animanic on (Chapter: 2)
Very good. you got the good and bad of water, the calm stream that gives live to thouse who need it and the rapids that crush thouse who ride it.Animanic on November 17, 2005, 10:13:56 AM
Animanic on (Chapter: 1)
Good job you got the BAD side of fire. but fire has a good side, by destroying it gives room for more to grow from the ashes of the old. Anyway, Very good, you can acually feel the warning it gives. NegaDarkStarX on November 16, 2005, 7:47:57 AM
NegaDarkStarX on (Chapter: 4)
Im thankful Ive never had to see Earth angry ^_^NegaDarkStarX on November 16, 2005, 7:42:23 AM
NegaDarkStarX on (Chapter: 3)
Manga, your silly, lol. I like this one too ^_^!!NegaDarkStarX on November 16, 2005, 7:39:51 AM
NegaDarkStarX on (Chapter: 2)
Another good one ^_^NegaDarkStarX on November 16, 2005, 7:27:28 AM
NegaDarkStarX on (Chapter: 1)
5 out of 5. Very nice ^_^manga_cat_girl on November 14, 2005, 10:46:28 AM
manga_cat_girl on (Chapter: 1)
Fire is mean >:-)! Take him water! you have not wasted your time on this poem! They arevery good!manga_cat_girl on November 14, 2005, 10:44:31 AM
manga_cat_girl on (Chapter: 2)
I think the water is to nice XDmanga_cat_girl on November 14, 2005, 10:43:45 AM
manga_cat_girl on (Chapter: 3)
Wind: Oh no! I cant stop! "sees tree in front of her" Aaaah! Oh, I forgot that I cant die by hitting something!manga_cat_girl on November 14, 2005, 10:41:30 AM
manga_cat_girl on (Chapter: 4)
Earth is kinda scary! We really dont want to make him mad! No, no!That's important!