Iris
Submitted November 24, 2005 Updated June 26, 2007 Status Complete | Shonen-ai/Slash! For DD_DM. A black-winged angel finds himself caught up in the fate of a young boy that defies existence itself, a boy with paradoxed wings, a boy named 'Iris'...
Category:
Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Gray
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 891 • Size: 5k • Comments: 13 • views: 351
Chapter 2 - Survive
Submitted: November 27, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1225 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 214
Chapter 3 - Darkness
Submitted: December 1, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1250 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 226
Chapter 4 - Sanctuary
Submitted: December 4, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1717 • Size: 9k • Comments: 6 • views: 197
Chapter 5 - Silence
Submitted: December 7, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 460 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 186
Chapter 6 - Reason
Submitted: December 8, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1707 • Size: 9k • Comments: 4 • views: 193
Chapter 7 - Antithesis
Submitted: December 11, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2322 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 221
Chapter 8 - Same
Submitted: December 18, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2662 • Size: 14k • Comments: 6 • views: 218
Chapter 9 - Ruby
Submitted: December 22, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 884 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 198
Chapter 10 - Stone
Submitted: December 28, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1435 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 188
Chapter 11 - Bat
Submitted: December 30, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 3745 • Size: 20k • Comments: 10 • views: 200
Chapter 12 - Monster
Submitted: January 3, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2068 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 255
Chapter 13 - Dead
Submitted: January 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1697 • Size: 9k • Comments: 7 • views: 200
Chapter 14 - Blood
Submitted: January 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1119 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 179
Chapter 15 - Lost
Submitted: January 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 932 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 174
Chapter 16 - Taint
Submitted: January 20, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2108 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 192
Chapter 17 - Half
Submitted: January 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 853 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 170
Chapter 18 - Found
Submitted: January 24, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2198 • Size: 12k • Comments: 6 • views: 191
Chapter 19 - Purse
Submitted: January 26, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 477 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 152
Chapter 20 - Mutual
Submitted: January 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 754 • Size: 4k • Comments: 8 • views: 178
Chapter 21 - Drop
Submitted: January 30, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2087 • Size: 11k • Comments: 10 • views: 200
Chapter 22 - Wolf
Submitted: February 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1444 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 182
Chapter 23 - Trapped
Submitted: February 13, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 605 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 163
Chapter 24 - Journey
Submitted: February 15, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1055 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 171
Chapter 25 - Beautiful
Submitted: February 18, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 788 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 176
Chapter 26 - Paradox
Submitted: February 20, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 951 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 183
Chapter 27 - Disconnected
Submitted: February 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1816 • Size: 10k • Comments: 7 • views: 197
Chapter 28 - Distraction
Submitted: February 24, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2234 • Size: 12k • Comments: 5 • views: 188
Chapter 29 - Spider
Submitted: February 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2120 • Size: 12k • Comments: 9 • views: 188
Chapter 30 - Bone
Submitted: March 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2842 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 200
Chapter 31 - Human
Submitted: March 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2100 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 190
Chapter 32 - Fall
Submitted: March 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2850 • Size: 15k • Comments: 6 • views: 216
Chapter 33 - Earth
Submitted: April 11, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2034 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 175
Chapter 34 - Pity
Submitted: April 18, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2411 • Size: 13k • Comments: 8 • views: 183
Chapter 35 - Continue
Submitted: April 23, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1108 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 215
Chapter 36 - Scar
Submitted: May 1, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1611 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 175
Chapter 37 - Ally
Submitted: May 7, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1472 • Size: 8k • Comments: 5 • views: 185
Chapter 38 - Nothing
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: November 21, 2006
Word count: 2982 • Size: 16k • Comments: 8 • views: 189
Chapter 39 - Seal
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2527 • Size: 14k • Comments: 4 • views: 203
Chapter 40 - Purpose
Submitted: August 19, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2163 • Size: 12k • Comments: 5 • views: 187
Chapter 41 - Labs
Submitted: August 25, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1809 • Size: 10k • Comments: 6 • views: 209
Chapter 42 - Shatter
Submitted: August 29, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 3221 • Size: 18k • Comments: 4 • views: 213
Chapter 43 - Burning
Submitted: September 4, 2006 • Updated: September 4, 2006
Word count: 2868 • Size: 16k • Comments: 4 • views: 179
Chapter 44 - Separated
Submitted: November 3, 2006 • Updated: November 3, 2006
Word count: 2236 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 162
Chapter 45 - Secret
Submitted: November 12, 2006 • Updated: November 12, 2006
Word count: 870 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 192
Chapter 46 - Side
Submitted: November 19, 2006 • Updated: November 19, 2006
Word count: 1704 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 163
Chapter 47 - Opposite
Submitted: November 21, 2006 • Updated: November 21, 2006
Word count: 1157 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 159
Chapter 48 - Camael
Submitted: November 23, 2006 • Updated: November 23, 2006
Word count: 2865 • Size: 16k • Comments: 3 • views: 174
Chapter 49 - Demon
Submitted: November 24, 2006 • Updated: November 24, 2006
Word count: 2271 • Size: 13k • Comments: 4 • views: 206
Chapter 50 - Remember
Submitted: December 5, 2006 • Updated: December 5, 2006
Word count: 2599 • Size: 15k • Comments: 7 • views: 177
Chapter 51 - Simple
Submitted: December 14, 2006 • Updated: December 14, 2006
Word count: 2821 • Size: 16k • Comments: 3 • views: 179
Chapter 52 - Longevity
Submitted: December 21, 2006 • Updated: December 21, 2006
Word count: 1399 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 169
Chapter 53 - Deal
Submitted: December 27, 2006 • Updated: December 27, 2006
Word count: 1324 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 154
Chapter 54 - Dual
Submitted: December 30, 2006 • Updated: December 30, 2006
Word count: 1525 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 159
Chapter 55 - Goodbye
Submitted: January 11, 2007 • Updated: January 11, 2007
Word count: 1579 • Size: 8k • Comments: 1 • views: 177
Chapter 56 - Peace
Submitted: January 15, 2007 • Updated: January 15, 2007
Word count: 569 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 153
Chapter 57 - Fool
Submitted: January 21, 2007 • Updated: January 21, 2007
Word count: 906 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 152
Chapter 58 - Forest
Submitted: February 3, 2007 • Updated: February 3, 2007
Word count: 1276 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 159
Chapter 59 - Bound
Submitted: March 11, 2007 • Updated: March 11, 2007
Word count: 3176 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 140
Chapter 60 - Touch
Submitted: April 9, 2007 • Updated: April 9, 2007
Word count: 920 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 129
Chapter 61 - Ending
Submitted: April 22, 2007 • Updated: April 22, 2007
Word count: 1002 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 140
Chapter 62 - Alive
Submitted: May 3, 2007 • Updated: May 3, 2007
Word count: 2631 • Size: 14k • Comments: 5 • views: 138
Chapter 63 - Sky
Submitted: June 12, 2007 • Updated: June 12, 2007
Word count: 1911 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 130
Chapter 64 - Look
Submitted: June 19, 2007 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 1913 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 135
Chapter 65 - Moment
Submitted: June 22, 2007 • Updated: June 22, 2007
Word count: 1202 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 136
Chapter 66 - Mortal
Submitted: June 23, 2007 • Updated: June 23, 2007
Word count: 3044 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 141
Chapter 67 - Rain
Submitted: June 25, 2007 • Updated: June 25, 2007
Word count: 5074 • Size: 28k • Comments: 3 • views: 162
Chapter 68 - Epilogue
Submitted: June 26, 2007 • Updated: June 26, 2007
Word count: 811 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 146
Comments
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Phoenex360Gorillaz on September 5, 2007, 2:25:21 PM
*sigh* Even though he's *shudders* spidery, I still like Corryn. I feel really bad for him. And Iris.... he can't die. This is gonna be one of the stories that ends bitter-sweetly, right? *I'm gonna have to find another word that means sigh* If he really loved Iris, he'd let him do what he wante without intervening, unless he was intervening with something in his heart other that sealfishnes. *grumble* I just noticed that throughout this entire chpter, I've been drinking my own blood. My god... I'm completely dilusional. But it does taste good....Phoenex360Gorillaz on September 5, 2007, 1:58:37 PM
Oh gosh.... now it's getting deep and twisting around the corners of your very imagination! The plot is getting so much more complicated with every word; every sentance spoken in the mind or outloud. This truly should be published and sold in stores. ^.^ I'm practicing writing my thoughts out. What do you think? Tehe. This is what I think, though. Just more poetic than the modern sound of slang. This, this is my faveorite chapter so far.Phoenex360Gorillaz on September 5, 2007, 1:45:45 PM
I really hate bugs. With a passion. Especially dead bugs as they crunch beneath your fingers or toes.... *hyperventolates* I like Corryn! ^.^ Hehe. Yaoi rape! Lolz. Brilliand chappie, by the way. Loved the details. You know you're good when you make me wrap myself tight in a blanket and cringe, cringe, cringe! *Attacks like a rabid animal* Dran you and your smexy (lol) spiders of doom!Phoenex360Gorillaz on September 5, 2007, 1:26:15 PM
NO! He...... now my hands hurt...... When something like this happens.... I feel some of the pain in imagining it as something happening to me. *shivers* meanie. Now I have a headache. But I still love this chapter.... and still bow down to your greatness.Phoenex360Gorillaz on September 5, 2007, 12:49:13 PM
Llama. Omg.... it just... pops into my head whenerve I hear lamia.sheesh... me and my stupid imagination working again.....Phoenex360Gorillaz on September 5, 2007, 12:42:51 PM
Yay! A kissie! And it was romantic too! Not whorrific! lolz. It was pretty... *daydreams* Onto the next one. I must see how their relationship changes after this....Phoenex360Gorillaz on September 5, 2007, 12:30:44 PM
GAH! I luff dis chappeh da mostest! Flufff is so awesome.... especially dis kind! It makes me wish I had a bf... but I can get by for now! Still not old enough for one.... -_-' <3 Yayness for fluff ans Iris and J00!Phoenex360Gorillaz on September 5, 2007, 9:02:02 AM
Heh... Golem never popped into my head. I was thinking more likw balverine from the vidgame Fable. Heh... i bet I was waaaaaaay off. Crunchy! ^.^ That's funneh! Not really cheesey... i like it much! Uh... how old is Iris? Or... how old was he modled after. XD Oddness... but I'll take your word in saying that it'll explain itself. ^.^ YAYZ!Trinity_Fire on September 5, 2007, 9:04:52 AM
Urrrrrr... ollllllld...aaagggggeeeeeeeee... haha, I seriously have no idea. XD; I'd figure anywhere between 13-16, haha. XD; But that's only what he was 'modeled' after, then again. ;)Phoenex360Gorillaz on September 4, 2007, 1:22:25 PM
Wha? I mean, It's cool and all.... but...... GAH MEH HEAD! What ARE you talking about, you crazy monkey?Trinity_Fire on September 5, 2007, 6:37:58 AM
Ahahaha, thanks. XD; Finally, you've hit the half-jewel in this pile of slush. XD; Iris was my most recent work (actually, it's pretty darn old itself, but then again, I've worked on it for over a year, haha.)And I'm sorry, but it's just a dream. Don't worry about it too much. ;) (It'll all explain itself later, haha.)
Anyway; sorry to make you slog through a million chapters, but if you do stick through with Iris, I will be ever-so happy~ (there are parts I don't like to this story either, haha, but overall... It's not one I cringe at, haha.)
Thanks a lot for your comments! My gosh, you're so unbelievably nice. :3 *glompsquishhug*
THANK YOU!! :D
InternalDemons on July 22, 2007, 11:30:42 AM
i love this story!!! love love love! i will probably reread it eventually. tis so good. and you have made me contemplate doing a modern fantasy story... thought it will never be as good as this. just in case i didn't make myself clear: This. Story. Rocks. Yay!Trinity_Fire on July 23, 2007, 1:42:45 AM
...Oh, goodness. *O* You read the whole darn thing in one sitting! Jeez. XD;Well, thanks a lot!! You're such of a nice commenter, and I'm glad you liked the story. I'm also glad you've been inspired. ;D
Thanks a lot for everything!! :]