Iris

Chapter 1 - Gray
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Chapter 2 - Survive
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Chapter 3 - Darkness
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Chapter 4 - Sanctuary
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Chapter 5 - Silence
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Chapter 6 - Reason
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Chapter 7 - Antithesis
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Chapter 8 - Same
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Chapter 9 - Ruby
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Chapter 10 - Stone
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Chapter 11 - Bat
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Chapter 12 - Monster
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Chapter 13 - Dead
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Chapter 14 - Blood
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Chapter 15 - Lost
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Chapter 16 - Taint
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Chapter 17 - Half
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Chapter 18 - Found
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Chapter 19 - Purse
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Chapter 20 - Mutual
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Chapter 21 - Drop
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Chapter 22 - Wolf
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Chapter 23 - Trapped
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Chapter 24 - Journey
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Chapter 25 - Beautiful
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Chapter 26 - Paradox
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Chapter 27 - Disconnected
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Chapter 28 - Distraction
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Chapter 29 - Spider
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Chapter 30 - Bone
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Chapter 31 - Human
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Chapter 32 - Fall
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Chapter 33 - Earth
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Chapter 34 - Pity
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Chapter 35 - Continue
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Chapter 36 - Scar
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Chapter 37 - Ally
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Chapter 38 - Nothing
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Chapter 39 - Seal
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Chapter 40 - Purpose
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Chapter 41 - Labs
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Chapter 42 - Shatter
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Chapter 43 - Burning
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Chapter 44 - Separated
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Chapter 45 - Secret
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Chapter 46 - Side
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Chapter 47 - Opposite
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Chapter 48 - Camael
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Chapter 49 - Demon
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Chapter 50 - Remember
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Chapter 51 - Simple
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Chapter 52 - Longevity
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Chapter 53 - Deal
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Chapter 54 - Dual
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Chapter 55 - Goodbye
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Chapter 56 - Peace
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Chapter 57 - Fool
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Chapter 58 - Forest
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Chapter 59 - Bound
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Chapter 60 - Touch
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Chapter 61 - Ending
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Chapter 62 - Alive
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Chapter 63 - Sky
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Chapter 64 - Look
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Chapter 65 - Moment
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Chapter 66 - Mortal
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Chapter 67 - Rain
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Chapter 68 - Epilogue
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Dragon_Buster on April 4, 2007, 2:17:22 AM

Dragon_Buster on April 4, 2007, 2:17:22 AM (Chapter: 8)

I've read the story as a guest, and I've decided to revisit the story.

The rumors of your skill, as I see, are true. This story is simply amazing.

First of all, you managed to get off to a good start with the setting and opening story laid out well, without giving away too much. The ability to write the first scenes well is crucial, as it maintains the reader's interest.

Secondly, your characters are very believable. Okay, so you wouldn't see a black-winged angel and a boy who is "eveything and nothing" in real life (except in cosplay XD ), but the "people" behind them are very real. That's a trademark of good fiction.

Thirdly, the interactions between characters are good and fleshed out. This is also a good sign, as it means your characters aren't "cardboard" characters.

Finally, your descriptions. Normally, ornate descriptions are not too good, but yours transcends "overblown" description. It's actually a joy to read, not a tedious bunch of daed wood.

Overall, I think you've written a good piece of fiction. I have yet to see where this goes, but I think it will be marvelous. You really ought to publish your work: there are many who want to see a good tale right now. *favs and hands you another trophy with your name on it*

I shall continue to review as I read it. Until then, keep writing.

See you around.

Trinity_Fire on April 4, 2007, 10:31:13 AM

Trinity_Fire on April 4, 2007, 10:31:13 AM (Chapter: 8)

;A;

You make me wanna cry. Gyaaaaaaah, I know I just sound like a broken record by now, but I just can't thank you enough for your awesome comments and what they mean to me. ;o;

You're insanely nice, I swear, it's just... XC!!!

THANK YOU~ <3

Astri on March 30, 2007, 8:04:38 AM

Astri on March 30, 2007, 8:04:38 AM (Chapter: 47)

"Cherub."

^OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO^

That's HYSTERICAL for an entirely inexplicable reason.

But so...not opposites touching, but fellows. Which squeezes through another clue about Valkyre...or, more accurately, about what he might be...

Hmm. Yet still certain pieces remain missing. I'm so intrigued!!! What is going on?!?!

Astri on March 30, 2007, 7:53:50 AM

Astri on March 30, 2007, 7:53:50 AM (Chapter: 46)

O.o Corryn killed Eire??? That was kinda unexpected...

Glad that he's returned, though. He's creepy, but you gotta love him X3 Poor psycho spider-baby...

Valkyre's really stuck on options, isn't he? When your only alliance options are between Corryn and Raguel, one really has quite a problem...

Astri on March 30, 2007, 4:31:57 AM

Astri on March 30, 2007, 4:31:57 AM (Chapter: 44)

WAAAAAAAAAIT a sec. Zombie-thingie had two-colored eyes. Eire had two-colored eyes. Raguel has two-colored eyes.

Coincidence...? --.--

And so Eire GOT ENERGY BACK. Okay. I thought it was something along those lines...Eire so much stronger and Rheis so much weaker...

And finally--what is Iris for? What is Iris for...?

Why would a lab go through the trouble of splicing together so many different species into one being?

Why would it be so important to so many people to possess that being as their own?

Is it something that being can do? Something that being represents? Or something that being can cause something else to do?

Confoozles... @.@

Trinity_Fire on March 30, 2007, 6:23:46 AM

Trinity_Fire on March 30, 2007, 6:23:46 AM (Chapter: 44)

Ahhhhhh!!! You're confusing ME, and I'M the author!!! XD;
Um, um, did I write something wrong??? According to my little scratch sheets of Iris notes (XD) Eire shouldn't have... different colored eyes. ...No, I don't think so...
Um, um! Sorry, but, yeah, I think you're connecting more lines than I have/do! XD;
Um, Raguel merely has two differently-colored eyes because of his half-blood-ness. ...somehow. (this was poorly-put together, I don't really like that detail... >>;)

I think (from what I can remember, lol!) Eire and Rheis should both have black eyes.

And sorry about the no-Iris-giga-power thing. You readers all seemed to be expecting him to explode or something! XD;
Hm, note to self, make lots of notes to self. XC

Anyway, thanks!! I'm so glad you're still reading Iris, and the influx of komments is always quite appreciated. :3
Don't confuse yourself too much!!!!!! XC

Much <3

Astri on March 30, 2007, 4:42:52 AM

Astri on March 30, 2007, 4:42:52 AM (Chapter: 45)

Spider! Corryn is SO being foreshadowed ^.^

Hmm. It seems, though, that if zombification truly is what's going on, then only Eire has been zombified. Rheis still seems normal. How weird must that be, to be connected like that for so long, and then not only lose the connection but lose the mind of your sister entirely?

For that matter, why does Eire know what's going on with Iris...?

So many questions...SO...MANY...QUESTIONS...

Astri on March 30, 2007, 4:10:45 AM

Astri on March 30, 2007, 4:10:45 AM (Chapter: 43)

YAY FOR POW HAMMERS!!! XD

Astri on March 30, 2007, 4:10:21 AM

Astri on March 30, 2007, 4:10:21 AM (Chapter: 43)

O.o Eire and Rheis have become like THAT thing?! Did they die?! Is that why the cable broke?! Are they zombies now?!

Iris sensed that other thing too, before it was there...

And what on earth was that wing-thing she did to Iris?

(Off on a tangent, having mentioned Iris--we almost got to see his true powers! It ALMOST was Eire's fatal mistake! Dang!)

That wing-thing is perplexing the hell out of me...it's like she did something to the angel and demon parts of him...but what, and almost more importantly, how???

AHHH!!! How did I survive not being able to read this for so long?!?!

Astri on March 30, 2007, 3:52:43 AM

Astri on March 30, 2007, 3:52:43 AM (Chapter: 42)

Oh...CRAP.

THAT'S not good...

I knew those two would be back...but something so diabolical! --.-- And now with the cable gone...? It seems like Rheis has given a part of his power to Eire...I'm not sure Raguel would be able to hold his own against him otherwise, whereas Eire now seems WAY powerful...

But that evil tearstone-breaking might be her fatal mistake...

What a time to get back into Iris, huh?! Right into uber-action! ^.^

Dark_Alchemist on March 12, 2007, 10:17:19 AM

Dark_Alchemist on March 12, 2007, 10:17:19 AM (Chapter: 59)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaa Yay! You really made my day with this! ;D Good luck with the writing ... I hate writer's block. But yeah ... Gotta go do my homeworks now ...