Iris
Submitted November 24, 2005 Updated June 26, 2007 Status Complete | Shonen-ai/Slash! For DD_DM. A black-winged angel finds himself caught up in the fate of a young boy that defies existence itself, a boy with paradoxed wings, a boy named 'Iris'...
Category:
Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Gray
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 891 • Size: 5k • Comments: 13 • views: 351
Chapter 2 - Survive
Submitted: November 27, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1225 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 213
Chapter 3 - Darkness
Submitted: December 1, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1250 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 226
Chapter 4 - Sanctuary
Submitted: December 4, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1717 • Size: 9k • Comments: 6 • views: 196
Chapter 5 - Silence
Submitted: December 7, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 460 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 186
Chapter 6 - Reason
Submitted: December 8, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1707 • Size: 9k • Comments: 4 • views: 193
Chapter 7 - Antithesis
Submitted: December 11, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
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Chapter 8 - Same
Submitted: December 18, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2662 • Size: 14k • Comments: 6 • views: 217
Chapter 9 - Ruby
Submitted: December 22, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 884 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 197
Chapter 10 - Stone
Submitted: December 28, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1435 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 188
Chapter 11 - Bat
Submitted: December 30, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 3745 • Size: 20k • Comments: 10 • views: 200
Chapter 12 - Monster
Submitted: January 3, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2068 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 254
Chapter 13 - Dead
Submitted: January 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1697 • Size: 9k • Comments: 7 • views: 200
Chapter 14 - Blood
Submitted: January 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1119 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 179
Chapter 15 - Lost
Submitted: January 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 932 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 173
Chapter 16 - Taint
Submitted: January 20, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2108 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 191
Chapter 17 - Half
Submitted: January 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 853 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 170
Chapter 18 - Found
Submitted: January 24, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2198 • Size: 12k • Comments: 6 • views: 191
Chapter 19 - Purse
Submitted: January 26, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 477 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 152
Chapter 20 - Mutual
Submitted: January 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 754 • Size: 4k • Comments: 8 • views: 178
Chapter 21 - Drop
Submitted: January 30, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2087 • Size: 11k • Comments: 10 • views: 200
Chapter 22 - Wolf
Submitted: February 8, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1444 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 182
Chapter 23 - Trapped
Submitted: February 13, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 605 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 163
Chapter 24 - Journey
Submitted: February 15, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1055 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 170
Chapter 25 - Beautiful
Submitted: February 18, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 788 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 176
Chapter 26 - Paradox
Submitted: February 20, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 951 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 183
Chapter 27 - Disconnected
Submitted: February 22, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1816 • Size: 10k • Comments: 7 • views: 197
Chapter 28 - Distraction
Submitted: February 24, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2234 • Size: 12k • Comments: 5 • views: 187
Chapter 29 - Spider
Submitted: February 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2120 • Size: 12k • Comments: 9 • views: 188
Chapter 30 - Bone
Submitted: March 12, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2842 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 200
Chapter 31 - Human
Submitted: March 17, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2100 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 190
Chapter 32 - Fall
Submitted: March 27, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2850 • Size: 15k • Comments: 6 • views: 216
Chapter 33 - Earth
Submitted: April 11, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2034 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 174
Chapter 34 - Pity
Submitted: April 18, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2411 • Size: 13k • Comments: 8 • views: 183
Chapter 35 - Continue
Submitted: April 23, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1108 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 215
Chapter 36 - Scar
Submitted: May 1, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1611 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 175
Chapter 37 - Ally
Submitted: May 7, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1472 • Size: 8k • Comments: 5 • views: 185
Chapter 38 - Nothing
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: November 21, 2006
Word count: 2982 • Size: 16k • Comments: 8 • views: 188
Chapter 39 - Seal
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2527 • Size: 14k • Comments: 4 • views: 203
Chapter 40 - Purpose
Submitted: August 19, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 2163 • Size: 12k • Comments: 5 • views: 187
Chapter 41 - Labs
Submitted: August 25, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 1809 • Size: 10k • Comments: 6 • views: 208
Chapter 42 - Shatter
Submitted: August 29, 2006 • Updated: August 29, 2006
Word count: 3221 • Size: 18k • Comments: 4 • views: 213
Chapter 43 - Burning
Submitted: September 4, 2006 • Updated: September 4, 2006
Word count: 2868 • Size: 16k • Comments: 4 • views: 179
Chapter 44 - Separated
Submitted: November 3, 2006 • Updated: November 3, 2006
Word count: 2236 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 161
Chapter 45 - Secret
Submitted: November 12, 2006 • Updated: November 12, 2006
Word count: 870 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 192
Chapter 46 - Side
Submitted: November 19, 2006 • Updated: November 19, 2006
Word count: 1704 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 163
Chapter 47 - Opposite
Submitted: November 21, 2006 • Updated: November 21, 2006
Word count: 1157 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 159
Chapter 48 - Camael
Submitted: November 23, 2006 • Updated: November 23, 2006
Word count: 2865 • Size: 16k • Comments: 3 • views: 174
Chapter 49 - Demon
Submitted: November 24, 2006 • Updated: November 24, 2006
Word count: 2271 • Size: 13k • Comments: 4 • views: 206
Chapter 50 - Remember
Submitted: December 5, 2006 • Updated: December 5, 2006
Word count: 2599 • Size: 15k • Comments: 7 • views: 177
Chapter 51 - Simple
Submitted: December 14, 2006 • Updated: December 14, 2006
Word count: 2821 • Size: 16k • Comments: 3 • views: 179
Chapter 52 - Longevity
Submitted: December 21, 2006 • Updated: December 21, 2006
Word count: 1399 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 169
Chapter 53 - Deal
Submitted: December 27, 2006 • Updated: December 27, 2006
Word count: 1324 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 154
Chapter 54 - Dual
Submitted: December 30, 2006 • Updated: December 30, 2006
Word count: 1525 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 159
Chapter 55 - Goodbye
Submitted: January 11, 2007 • Updated: January 11, 2007
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Chapter 56 - Peace
Submitted: January 15, 2007 • Updated: January 15, 2007
Word count: 569 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 153
Chapter 57 - Fool
Submitted: January 21, 2007 • Updated: January 21, 2007
Word count: 906 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 152
Chapter 58 - Forest
Submitted: February 3, 2007 • Updated: February 3, 2007
Word count: 1276 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 159
Chapter 59 - Bound
Submitted: March 11, 2007 • Updated: March 11, 2007
Word count: 3176 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 139
Chapter 60 - Touch
Submitted: April 9, 2007 • Updated: April 9, 2007
Word count: 920 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 128
Chapter 61 - Ending
Submitted: April 22, 2007 • Updated: April 22, 2007
Word count: 1002 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 140
Chapter 62 - Alive
Submitted: May 3, 2007 • Updated: May 3, 2007
Word count: 2631 • Size: 14k • Comments: 5 • views: 138
Chapter 63 - Sky
Submitted: June 12, 2007 • Updated: June 12, 2007
Word count: 1911 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 130
Chapter 64 - Look
Submitted: June 19, 2007 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 1913 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 135
Chapter 65 - Moment
Submitted: June 22, 2007 • Updated: June 22, 2007
Word count: 1202 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 135
Chapter 66 - Mortal
Submitted: June 23, 2007 • Updated: June 23, 2007
Word count: 3044 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 141
Chapter 67 - Rain
Submitted: June 25, 2007 • Updated: June 25, 2007
Word count: 5074 • Size: 28k • Comments: 3 • views: 162
Chapter 68 - Epilogue
Submitted: June 26, 2007 • Updated: June 26, 2007
Word count: 811 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 146
Comments
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Dark_Alchemist on June 15, 2007, 10:04:03 AM
Trinity_Fire on June 16, 2007, 12:22:26 AM
...I'm a moron. I've got a reply right above your comment.... :smacks head: XPTrinity_Fire on June 16, 2007, 12:16:00 AM
Ah, I don't mind so much. Rambling is all right. (<--rambles too much herself XD )Um, about Valkyre's eyes.... :tilts head: It was kinda only a... urr, it's a demon thing. XD;
But since he's not a full-blooded demon, his eyes don't stay red. Just like with Iris; it just makes their eyes turn red for a little while. :> Meepits! Sorry. It's a terrible detail, huh? I'd never actually thought about it too much myself, just let it play out that way... Oh well.
More work to be improved on. XD
Well, I hope you have fun on your internet-stranded journey, wherever it may be. (I'm going to Canada in a week or so, so I can't quite keep up with updates either. XD )
DefyDeath_DefyMe on June 15, 2007, 5:16:00 AM
Trinity_Fire on June 15, 2007, 8:05:22 AM
XD; R-really?? I never figured it to be so...Would you recall, way back when I started Iris... Oooh, I could WORK then! I had such inspirations~ *_*
With Nocte, too. Oooh. :shudder:
Nocte went down the drain. Y'know what sucks, though? I had a whole Nocte continuum plotted out in my head. It woulda been full o' shoot and hawtness and OMFG drama. :D
...But it doesn't look like it'll be happening. Because I look back on Nocte and I don't see how I could ever figure that out properly, but I NEED things to generally happen that way for the Nocte II or whatever shoot to work out right, buuuut~ :ramble cut off:
Anyway. Yeah. I'll be givin' you as big doses of Iris as I can!! :D To be honest, I don't think it'll take more than, like, 10 chapters tops tops to finish it off. It'll pro'ly only take like 3-7 more, to be honest. Most likely MUCH, MUCH LESS.
YES FINAL BATTLE LET'S GO KILL YGGDRASIL YES
XD
I-I mean, urr, yah, um... >_< Stuff like that.
Ahhh much smex is planned.
...No not really I'm sorreh. D: No time for pron.
If you wanted a pron with Valkie-baby and Iris-kun, it'd have to be right before this interlude with Corryn and all. :3
BWAH LONG RANT/KOMMENT DONE K THX BAI OFF TO WORK NOOOOOW~!!! DX :scuttles off:
RandomGuy on May 30, 2007, 9:08:39 AM
Nicely done thier really isn't much bad even about this especially since i loved the first chapter. I see u have like 60 chapters and it would kinda help if u like kinda shrinked them into like 20 instead of 60...its alot of loading for me -.- anyway the story good. Idc what its about but u sure know how to work into a nice prologue I have to say ur detial is impressive and ur chr's are one of kind truly. This i'd say would have to be one of the only stories on FanArt other then the writing i set aside time for that i will actually read throughTrinity_Fire on May 30, 2007, 10:26:58 AM
Oh, thanks a lot!! And I'm sorry for all the chapters; I do promise that many of them are really short, though!! XD; Couldn't help it; I've been working on this story (whittling at it, more like) for over a year now, and I wanted to please my readers with more updates and all so~Anyway, thanks a lot for your comment! It really means a lot to me. :)
And hope you'll go on reading! Thanks!
RandomGuy on May 30, 2007, 10:32:41 AM
could take me awhile to read since i pracratnate....alot....but i'll get thier...btw what got u into writing the story to begin with? Figured i'd actually ask someone i thought who was equal or better where they get thier inspiration to write from. you know names all that. But then again you haven't read any of my stories now have u xDTrinity_Fire on May 30, 2007, 10:45:29 AM
It was for DefyDeath_DefyMe. She's been an amazing friend to me, and for her birthday, as I'm not too good an artist, I decided to write her a story. :> She used a penname 'Iris,' so I partially named the story after her, and also after the one song 'Iris' by GooGooDolls, which is where the original inspiration for the characters and loose plotline came from. :3I'd like to check out your stuff too sometime, since you're so nice!! But it might take me a while to get around to it~ I'm sorry, but I'm juggling a busy high school life at the same time, and I've got finals soon, and SAT tests!
So, I'll try to drop by when I can, okay?
Thanks a lot!! :D
RandomGuy on May 30, 2007, 8:13:21 PM
i know the feeling i got a big final today -.- and i really need to pass it. anyway its ok if u take ur time not like i blame ya. Nice u did a story after her. U notice u will get inspiration off some of the most random things lol. anyway gl with finals and is the story almost done or still going?Trinity_Fire on May 31, 2007, 2:20:11 AM
Almost done! Almost done!! I SWEAR! XD; I've just got to finish the whole thing up. ...I'm unfortunately currently stuck in a writer's block (semi) AND still real busy. Ahhh, Summer, you're only a week away~ ;A;
:rushes towards distant horizons:
...I promise I'll finish it soon. Promise. XD;
RandomGuy on May 31, 2007, 6:04:54 AM
its okie if u don't finish. I just didn't know to expect more or to read at w.e pace is better suited. I passed my final with a C btw lol. Not the best but i thought i was going to fail XD. anyway my summer starts after the half day tommrow so i'll defintly have more time. Gl on ur finals cause i only had 1 that was actually hard. and i know how the writers block is for this site. you try and hurry when someone really wants to read but u try and write but nothing comes out right. feelings mutual right now dont' worry =PDragon_Buster on May 8, 2007, 8:46:22 PM
Hmm.....I wonder why Iris is crying? Why?So many unanswered questions....
But on the plus side, I've finally found out the truth behind Camael, Valkyre.....all those missing links.
And another kiss.....that's a good bonus.
But to be honest, the few chapters weren't as nice as the first ones. However, I don't blame you. You are a very busy person, and I know how that can affect creativity. ^.^
You have all the time to improve. I'm in no hurry: I have quite a lot to do as well. Besides, those chapters were still good: they just need improvement. And you've given me some ideas for my own story-in-the-making, tentatively titled Aion Teleos/Aeon Prophecy[/i] (which title I want is still a mystery.) But alas, I digress. ^^;
I will be waiting for the next chapters, whenever they come. Good luck on your exams, TF!
Trinity_Fire on May 9, 2007, 4:28:12 AM
Huh, so they haven't been as good, ne? I-I'm not mad or anything- but why are they worse?? I really want to find where I've begun to get weaker, and see if I can't fix it and make my writing better again. Do you have any particular things you wanna point out to me? I'm open to crits and suggestions, any time!! You're so nice, and very honest. Thanks a ton for that, it really means a lot to me. :)
You're free to tell me what you think might not be too good about Iris, and I'll try to do my best to fix it! (Although, I won't be revising the whole story 'till I'm done, which should hopefully be soon XD; )
Thank you very much!!
Oooh, and a story from you is an interesting prospect. I hope to see it up sometime!! :)
Dragon_Buster on May 10, 2007, 9:12:49 PM
Heh....maybe I need to run over the story again. I was tired when I read it last. I musta lost interest and got bored 'cos I read 'em in a marathon session. I'll have to go over it again. I'll comment after reading them, only it'll be on a few lower chapters. Maybe 7 chapters per day. Or 10...Sorry 'bout that. I'm a lazy idiot, yes I am. ^^;;
Oh, and about that story...I'm still trying to get a decent start, but let me tell you this.
It's got shounen-ai. (Or yaoi: whichever term you use.) And angels. I put the 2 together... hehhehheh...Can anyone say "evil lovechild"? XD
Oh, I am such a blasphemous heretic...heh heh heh...
Dark_Alchemist on May 5, 2007, 9:08:48 AM
Beautiful. As always, the beautiful descriptions, the metaphors ... imagery ... AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHDCFYULIKJHVHaha, I know how you feel. I want to do so much arts, but I have to read a whole book for History and I need to have loads of stuff done and I only have a week left ... ;_; So I don't blame you at all. Cursed inspiration just has to strike when you have no time whatsoever ... but this chapitre was wonderful.
Thanks for telling me. I was just thinking last night that I should check here .... but I was reading manga obsessively online ... at one in the morning and really tired ... because I'm mad. ;DDD
Dark_Alchemist on April 28, 2007, 4:44:40 PM
Aaaahhhhhhh nevermind. You already found it. Ignore that last comment. Because ... I didn't think to CHECK THE PICTURE BEFORE LEAVING IT. Dx;;; I feel stupid now. Don't worry, it happens a lot. xD;Trinity_Fire on April 29, 2007, 4:18:28 AM
;D It's okay. Much <3's for you. :D
Didn't Valkie's eyes turn red? Am I just being stupid? Well, I think we've already confirmed that, but anyway ... I don't think I could write that much per week. But then .. I haven't been inspired to write recently. Wow, I'm so glad I checked. I have a knack for checking right when they come out. I must be a psychic.
But you shouldn't rush yourself. The only problem is, sometimes if you don't you never finish. So ... I dunno, I'm rambling, and I need to shut up.