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Death Note: An Alternative

This is basically the same story (with a focus on the anime rather than the manga) as the real thing but with the focus on a character I added in.

Remember this focuses on my OC, you need to know the original story to fully understand this.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Introduction
Submitted: August 25, 2008 • Updated: June 3, 2010
Word count: 552 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 426

Chapter 2 - History
Submitted: August 25, 2008 • Updated: August 25, 2008
Word count: 893 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 399

Chapter 3 - Arrival
Submitted: August 26, 2008 • Updated: August 26, 2008
Word count: 717 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 345

Chapter 4 - Questions
Submitted: August 28, 2008 • Updated: August 28, 2008
Word count: 542 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 343

Chapter 5 - Discovery
Submitted: August 30, 2008 • Updated: August 30, 2008
Word count: 586 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 358

Chapter 6 - Meeting
Submitted: September 11, 2008 • Updated: September 11, 2008
Word count: 645 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 368

Chapter 7 - Conflict
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: October 26, 2008
Word count: 470 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 338

Chapter 8 - Partners
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: June 6, 2010
Word count: 769 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 347

Chapter 9 - Broadcast
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
Word count: 703 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 398

Chapter 10 - Information
Submitted: November 2, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
Word count: 459 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 308

Chapter 11 - Memories
Submitted: August 12, 2009 • Updated: August 12, 2009
Word count: 988 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 281

Chapter 12 - Answers
Submitted: August 12, 2009 • Updated: May 7, 2010
Word count: 1010 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 296

Chapter 13 - Preparation
Submitted: May 29, 2010 • Updated: May 29, 2010
Word count: 588 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 258

Chapter 14 - Unfolding
Submitted: June 1, 2010 • Updated: June 1, 2010
Word count: 944 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 261

Chapter 15 - Alone
Submitted: June 2, 2010 • Updated: June 2, 2010
Word count: 1241 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 319

Chapter 16 - Deceit
Submitted: June 2, 2010 • Updated: June 3, 2010
Word count: 751 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 267

Chapter 17 - Outcome
Submitted: June 4, 2010 • Updated: June 4, 2010
Word count: 963 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 291

Chapter 18 - Compromise
Submitted: June 6, 2010 • Updated: June 6, 2010
Word count: 1275 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 288

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KelekiahGaladrian on August 20, 2009, 12:12:04 PM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 12)
KelekiahGaladrianOoh, Zach discovered L. I like L. He's cute and he's one of my favorite characters. Ryuk comes in second and Mello's third. I love them all!

Anyway, I like the conversation between Rek and Zach. It makes me laugh even though I'd be irritated like Zach too if I were in his situation. People who skirt the subject annoy me.

OOH!! L KNOWS!!! *falls over*

Yay! That was awesome! :P Me LUVS!!

KelekiahGaladrian on August 20, 2009, 12:08:11 PM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 11)
KelekiahGaladrianGrr, I'm so angry with myself. This has taken me FOREVER to finally FIND. Gosh dangit. I need to keep better track of it ^^0

Okay, to start off, I love it. Especially the first friend comment from L. That was just adorable. I've always loved that line, yes yes, ALWAYS.

It's been ages since I last read this, so I don't remember EVERYTHING for sure, so I don't remember if you mentioned that Zach went to Wammy's beforehand, but that is AWESOME!!!!!!!! AND HE'S FRIENDS WITH MELLO!!! NYA!!!!!! I LOVE MELLO!!!!!!!!!! *squeezes Mello plushie* :3

I love it, I love it. I shall read the next chapter immediately, yes yes.