Death Note: An Alternative
Submitted August 25, 2008 Updated June 6, 2010 Status Incomplete | This is basically the same story (with a focus on the anime rather than the manga) as the real thing but with the focus on a character I added in. Remember this focuses on my OC, you need to know the original story to fully understand this.
Category:
Anime/Manga » Death Note |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Introduction
Submitted: August 25, 2008 • Updated: June 3, 2010
Word count: 552 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 427
Chapter 2 - History
Submitted: August 25, 2008 • Updated: August 25, 2008
Word count: 893 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 400
Chapter 3 - Arrival
Submitted: August 26, 2008 • Updated: August 26, 2008
Word count: 717 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 346
Chapter 4 - Questions
Submitted: August 28, 2008 • Updated: August 28, 2008
Word count: 542 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 344
Chapter 5 - Discovery
Submitted: August 30, 2008 • Updated: August 30, 2008
Word count: 586 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 359
Chapter 6 - Meeting
Submitted: September 11, 2008 • Updated: September 11, 2008
Word count: 645 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 369
Chapter 7 - Conflict
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: October 26, 2008
Word count: 470 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 338
Chapter 8 - Partners
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: June 6, 2010
Word count: 769 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 347
Chapter 9 - Broadcast
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
Word count: 703 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 399
Chapter 10 - Information
Submitted: November 2, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
Word count: 459 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 309
Chapter 11 - Memories
Submitted: August 12, 2009 • Updated: August 12, 2009
Word count: 988 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 282
Chapter 12 - Answers
Submitted: August 12, 2009 • Updated: May 7, 2010
Word count: 1010 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 297
Chapter 13 - Preparation
Submitted: May 29, 2010 • Updated: May 29, 2010
Word count: 588 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 259
Chapter 14 - Unfolding
Submitted: June 1, 2010 • Updated: June 1, 2010
Word count: 944 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 262
Chapter 15 - Alone
Submitted: June 2, 2010 • Updated: June 2, 2010
Word count: 1241 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 320
Chapter 16 - Deceit
Submitted: June 2, 2010 • Updated: June 3, 2010
Word count: 751 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 268
Chapter 17 - Outcome
Submitted: June 4, 2010 • Updated: June 4, 2010
Word count: 963 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 292
Chapter 18 - Compromise
Submitted: June 6, 2010 • Updated: June 6, 2010
Word count: 1275 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 289
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KelekiahGaladrian on November 2, 2008, 12:20:38 PM
Hehe, awesomeness. The entirety of this chapter was awesome. The way the characters were portrayed, their personalities, etc were great. I absolutely adore your writing, like I do for many other people, Yori-chan included. It's very unique and simply amazing at the same time. I salute you. It's hard to find good writer's these days. ^^YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 5:56:06 AM
lol, Yes Light is way too uptight and paranoid. "If you see someone behaving wierd, there's a good chance it's L." LOL!! FANTASTIC! ^_^
I love Zach ^^ His reactions to things are hilarious. I can't wait to read more!!
YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 1:31:40 AM
"Ah! The broadcast!" lol. Loved it as always ^^ The ending was my favorite part, that one word was perfect!I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
Oh... and.... *evil gleam in eyes* DIE MISA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeathNoteSurvivor on November 2, 2008, 5:08:26 AM
so i gather that you and Kel are not Misa fans lolYoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 5:11:27 AM
Not really, hehe ^^;YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 1:26:22 AM
Mr. Modesty ^_^ That was awesome lol And I laughed so hard at the "being sarcastic seems to result in intelligence once in a while" thing! Zach's going to kick back and let Light take the wheel for a while... hmm... this should be interesting!
ON TO READ MORE!!!
YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 1:20:00 AM
AHHH! I get to read more!! ^_^ YES!!Awesome chapter! I loved Light's reactions, it's not often I get to see him flounder hehehe And I can't help but like Zach even more the more I read. ^^
KelekiahGaladrian on October 28, 2008, 3:40:49 AM
MISA!!!!! *attempts to throttle her*Ravin: While my hikari is busy being her usual sadistic self, I will review this for her.... She loves the way you wrote it and how Light and Zach met at school and the ending. She says that's all she has to say and it's very depressing how little that is. She also says "Great job!" and she can't wait for more.
*still throttling Misa*
KelekiahGaladrian on October 28, 2008, 3:38:58 AM
Partners!! Alright! Zach is good at that it seems, even if he doesn't want any friends. I agree to an extent. People can certainly be boring at times. I know I can be XPDangit, I found myself without something to say again. Rawr....
Well... great job!! ^^
KelekiahGaladrian on October 28, 2008, 3:37:15 AM
Light and Zach's conversation was funny. ^^ I thought I was going to die laughing. Light is so funny to listen to and Zach is so smart :PUm... I have nothing else to say.... How depressing....
Great job! ^^