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Death Note: An Alternative

This is basically the same story (with a focus on the anime rather than the manga) as the real thing but with the focus on a character I added in.

Remember this focuses on my OC, you need to know the original story to fully understand this.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Introduction
Submitted: August 25, 2008 • Updated: June 3, 2010
Word count: 552 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 383

Chapter 2 - History
Submitted: August 25, 2008 • Updated: August 25, 2008
Word count: 893 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 360

Chapter 3 - Arrival
Submitted: August 26, 2008 • Updated: August 26, 2008
Word count: 717 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 303

Chapter 4 - Questions
Submitted: August 28, 2008 • Updated: August 28, 2008
Word count: 542 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 306

Chapter 5 - Discovery
Submitted: August 30, 2008 • Updated: August 30, 2008
Word count: 586 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 316

Chapter 6 - Meeting
Submitted: September 11, 2008 • Updated: September 11, 2008
Word count: 645 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 331

Chapter 7 - Conflict
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: October 26, 2008
Word count: 470 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 296

Chapter 8 - Partners
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: June 6, 2010
Word count: 769 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 311

Chapter 9 - Broadcast
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
Word count: 703 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 354

Chapter 10 - Information
Submitted: November 2, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
Word count: 459 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 267

Chapter 11 - Memories
Submitted: August 12, 2009 • Updated: August 12, 2009
Word count: 988 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 241

Chapter 12 - Answers
Submitted: August 12, 2009 • Updated: May 7, 2010
Word count: 1010 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 255

Chapter 13 - Preparation
Submitted: May 29, 2010 • Updated: May 29, 2010
Word count: 588 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 234

Chapter 14 - Unfolding
Submitted: June 1, 2010 • Updated: June 1, 2010
Word count: 944 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 253

Chapter 15 - Alone
Submitted: June 2, 2010 • Updated: June 2, 2010
Word count: 1241 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 280

Chapter 16 - Deceit
Submitted: June 2, 2010 • Updated: June 3, 2010
Word count: 751 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 256

Chapter 17 - Outcome
Submitted: June 4, 2010 • Updated: June 4, 2010
Word count: 963 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 252

Chapter 18 - Compromise
Submitted: June 6, 2010 • Updated: June 6, 2010
Word count: 1275 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 247

Comments

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Blackwolfmoon on October 27, 2008, 9:57:34 AM

Blackwolfmoon on (Chapter: index)
Blackwolfmoon=3 i really like where this story is going, your doing a great job on writeing it ^-^ ur writeing style is son unique that it is easy to hold peoples attention,

keep writeing! ^-^

YumeXItachi on October 18, 2008, 8:07:34 AM

YumeXItachi on (Chapter: 5)
YumeXItachiHm.....
HM.......
Sweet Man :]

YumeXItachi on October 18, 2008, 8:00:59 AM

YumeXItachi on (Chapter: 4)
YumeXItachi:D
Hehe This is Awesome :}
Truly Is!

YumeXItachi on October 18, 2008, 7:56:34 AM

YumeXItachi on (Chapter: 3)
YumeXItachiWoo!
Sweet Chapter Man!
It's Really Getting Good So Far!
=D

YumeXItachi on October 18, 2008, 7:52:22 AM

YumeXItachi on (Chapter: 2)
YumeXItachiHaha Rek Sounds Pretty Familiar....
Don't Know From where But I'll remember soon Enough...
Hehe This Story Really Is Getting Good though :D

YumeXItachi on October 18, 2008, 7:46:57 AM

YumeXItachi on (Chapter: 1)
YumeXItachiHm...
HM.....
I Do Have To Say That This Is Really Awesome Man :D
I Really Like It!
Sorry It Took So Long to Read :[
But It IS Awesome!! <3

YoriXYamiForever on September 11, 2008, 1:26:15 PM

YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 6)
YoriXYamiForeverHAHA! I love to see Light worried about the Death Note ^^

I love how you wrote Zach's emotions. That was awesome! And now I'm curious about the 3 day thing... hmmm.... Hehe, I can't wait to see Light's reaction to Zach! Update soon K? I LOVE THIS STORY!

DeathNoteSurvivor on September 11, 2008, 1:29:02 PM

DeathNoteSurvivor on (Chapter: 6)
DeathNoteSurvivorblast! XD you caught it. ill go ahead and admit that that will come back into play later

YoriXYamiForever on September 11, 2008, 2:19:07 PM

YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: index)
YoriXYamiForeverhehe, I knew it! :D

KelekiahGaladrian on September 11, 2008, 1:24:15 PM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 6)
KelekiahGaladrianOoh. I love the ending. IT MAKES ME WANT MORE!!!

Rek's indifferent attitude. Hehehe. I love it!

I want to ace my tests. But for some reason, I can't seem to. It's really retarded.

I'm glad Zach found the right house. Light will probably be really ticked off next chapter because Zach's in his room. Probably wouldn't surprise me one bit if he was. He didn't sound too happy at the end of this chapter, that's for sure.

I'M SO PSYCHED!!! I TOTALLY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!! ^^

YoriXYamiForever on September 1, 2008, 10:40:46 AM

YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 5)
YoriXYamiForeverNICE! Go Zach ^^ I can't wait to see them meet!

hehe Poor Rek, he doesn't seem to think about the Death Note too much