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Submitted June 4, 2010 Updated June 4, 2010 Status Incomplete Chapters: 1 Size: 3k Words: 575 Comments: 1 Views: 1,463 Faves: 0 Rating: 0 | After the death of Organisation 13, a new dark power emerges. The Order of Darkness have appeared from the depths and are now bringing chaos to the worlds. Will Sora and the others overcome this new threat?
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That would be damn near impossible to pull off right. Battle Royals work well in anime, but not so much in manga or fics. Plus, it's easier to explain the character through one on one combat.I think it worked out fairly well. If I didn't organize it properly, I think it would have been a huge cluster of fights with people tripping all over each other. It was hard to pull off coherently.I had some huge, complicated system for the chunin exams, but then I realized that the teams never really got to fight in an organized way together. So that made sense. I think.Now it's all one on one battles, which will create a few interesting scenarios. The finals...huh. Haven't decided yet. It didn't even occur to me yet.There are six total more matches in the exams, but they're all short and will be done within 1-2 chapters. Then would come your idea.I should be wrapping up these exams within the next chapter or two. At least, the practical part. After that, did you want to handle one or two of the chunin battles where they battle the jonin, ala your idea?The thing I don't like is how I've set up that only Azami is around and not Sakura. I don't want the potential romance to cool off, given that Yuji could wind up with either one.I hadn't really thought of how much burden she's got to carry. That's a good point. I don't think I did a job of setting up the dramatic scene I wanted, though.No, the talking was good. Important stuff, plus the foreshadowing at the end. Absolutely neccessary in my opinion.| Scotanime | April 24, 2010 |
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The best part is that Yuji is clueless that two girls who rejected him now like him, so he's going to be blindsided when they admit it to him.
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