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I just remembered I forgot to comment, like a complete moron.lol. I got so caught up in getting my ideas down...well, anyway, I'll comment soon. But mostly, I liked it. It ourlined Ryofu a bit, and made good use of the Sound Four and Shizune.

I'd imagine he'd try to kill Tsunade, and would wind up dead or something. lol. Altough he DOES have an interesting tete a tete with Tsunade this chapter. And a surprise guest. I'm not going to say who; I want to see if you catch it.

In my mind, I was ALMOST tempted to have Tsunade say 'Okay, Kimi, you can test. But you'll be on Ryofu's team'. lol
Either way, I'm about half-done with my chapter. I had a few ideas bouncing around to begin with, and they're working out nicely so far.

I don't know; it seemed like I threw him in randomly with the chunin exams; even if I DO have an idea for that. If I left you something to work with, then that's perfect.

I'll read that chapter right now.

Ahh...

doin good. you?

Nicely done. I've got my reply up. I got the ball rolling a bit on Sasuke's departure. I was having a hard time working Ryofu in, while keeping the date intimate, so I improvised and kind of bluffed a mission for him. There might actually be a story arc in it. Either way, hope you enjoy it.
By the way, even though I jumped the gun a bit, if you want to jump back in time and go over Ryofu and Sakura's thoughts after the date, that would be cool (possibly necessary). Or whatever kind of reaction Ryofu would give Ryouko, too. It just feels like I didn't give you a good starting point, and I'm sorry about that. It turned out to be a difficult chapter in regards to giving you an opening.

*Smiles and Laughs*