nextguardian

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Hey Nextguardian, how's it going? You're welcome for the comments :) Sorry it took me longer than expected to have a look at them. If there's anything you need me to explain in detail, I will. So Ekyt gets on well with all three? Lol, it's a tricky decision then. Not sure what you should do O.o Maybe you could draw their names outta a hat :D That'd probably be a last resort kinda thing though. Good luck with the drawing too. Don't ever give up! That's the key, just keep practicing and don't quit. Someone once said that to be able to draw what you see in your mind, it's just a matter of training your hand and arm to see what your brain sees. Also, do you "warm up" before drawing? I don't usually (coz I forget -_-' Probably why some of my pics don't look right). If you don't warm up, try getting a scrap piece of paper, and just scribble on it. Fast and smooth lines and strokes to get your wrist, hand, arm and brain moving. It does help :) You'll find your pics should be more relaxed. If you're tense while drawing too, often your pic comes out tense (eg: if you worry about drawing someone, usually their body will turn out stiff looking). Just a couple of tips that you may wanna try out too. I don't wanna overload you though with all this information!! Oh, and if you need anymore vidcaps, I'll give you some more. Or if there's anyone in particular that you'd like more pics of, I'll see if I have the DVDs for it. Anyhow, hope ya doing ok!! See ya later ^_^

Alot of times if I eat I'll eat rice. That and lately Ramen. Lol. It is very addictive. Lol. Don't feel bad my rice balls need work too. Anyway. I CAN'T wait to see my character (you know what I mean. Lol) i'll have to read to catch up though. Anyway. You more than live up to your writing.

Lol. An interesting analogy to be sure. Lol. You have to eat mate. You need it. Speaking of eating. i ate ramen about three days ago. Lol. Anyway. You have a fairly balanced story going. You do just fine practicing what you say. Anyway.

Your species is truly strange. Lol. You like things for strange reason. Although I guess you would say the same thing about us. Lol. Anyway. Yeah. Romance is another attention getties. Although it usually draws more female readers. I say a healthy blend of action, strong characters, plot and intention is the best way to go. Anyway.

Yeah. Injuries are good but for some reason dark and troubled pasts do better. Lol. You humans are attracted to darkness and deceit. Well most are anyway. Anyway. Yeah.

You'll do it justice. You always do. Your a great writer. Anyway. Yeah. A dark pasted hero does get alot more notice than a straight up good hero. Trust me. I Know. I've somehow sort of become one. My past is pretty dark but now I got more attention than I know what to do with. Lol. Anyway. Look at todays superheroes. People like Batman, Spiderman and Punishes are in popularity while ones like superman, and the goody goody heroes are pretty much in the craper. Lol. Anyway. Yeah.

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Sure thing. If I talk to them I'll tell them. Anyway. I agree that it would be cool to have him be the one to train his son who thinks he is dead. I have some scenes running in my head. Anyway. With his slightly darker revenge seeking attitude he def will gain more notice by the Kunoichi and the readers. Lol. Anyway. I'll read that PM and decide what's next.

Hey I'll send you a new lesson here in a bit, but could you send me a message telling me how you have used your chakra. I HAVE the feeling I will be able to skip a few lessons and take you to something a bit more difficult. Anyway. I like the way the story is going to turn out. Oh and as a twist. Well if Naruto is still Kage during his death then you should have him have Ekyt brought back like Gaara was. Just don't mention Ekyt for like ten chapters and then have him appear unnamed at Naruto's side as a completely mysterious ninja. That would be cool. Anyway. I believe his characters were from the Leaf village. Anyway. This is going to get interesting. Oh and before I forget again. I WAS SUPPOSED to say hello to you from Hinata and Tenten. Hinata said they just haven't had time to get on and she hopes to be back on soon. So yeah. Now I don't have to remember. Lol.