nextguardian

still sick but still doing art^^ i drew a chibi pic^^

Nothing wrong with developing only a few characters. Sometime that gives a story a quicker pace while still setting up the main characters. It all depends on the story and author. You pull it off very nicely. I on the other hand am to detailed minded to do it when i try it comes out dry and boring because my cut scenes are to long and slow moving. I for some reason cant get action to go fast enough to do only main character set ups. Lol. You on the other hand have a fast enough story to pull it off and make it look like a......Mona Lisa when you get done.

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Lol. Glad i could be of assistance. I'm honored that you are taking my opinions. By the way i'm glad your keeping Ekyt swimming. Now you've got of excited. I love twists the bigger the better. Oooo. I can't wait. (rubs hands together in anticipation and laughs manticly) Whats going to happen next. Wait don't tell me! (as if you would give it away. Pfft.) by the way i read your reviews. Thank you your too kind. I have to say though i have been having fun writing. I love the way the bicker with one another. Some of yuge dialog still makes of laugh. Like where she makes him change his mind and them plays the innocent. Lol. I love that line she says. I know it's corny copiedsing i wrote it. But it just reminds me of the post of couple they would be. Lol. I don't know. Anyway thanks for the review. I will have the next part done on Wednesday.

Hey i totally back you on your point about everyone being for the anti-hero now a day. I have noticed it too. As for the suggestions. Like i said they are only suggestions. Don't feel bad he your not up to them. I wont be offended. So. What ya got planned for it next? Are you going to continue it or let it end? I think it has the makings of a great story. Very mixing it up compared to your other ones. I think you can pull it off you got a great start.

Well. If your open to suggestions why not switch and change them up throughout the story make your own rules. Keep us guessing about who's with who. Surprise up with how it does up. It would be alot of fun trying to figure it out not to mention it would have your readers tearing their hair out over who gets who. Tell me that that isn't the least bit intriguing? To answer your question i don't mind sharing how much time i put into a chapter, issue, whatever. YOU'LL think i'm a lunatic when you hear, but i generally spen a day forming a general idea of what is going to happen and then. On wednesdays i go to the coffee house i told you and type it all out as is Wednesday is my publish day. I USUALLY get there around six in the morning and finish the chapter, issue, whatevery you want to call it around three thirty or four. I know thats alot of time. I just love to write and like i said i make it up as i go. Its a new story to me as well, so i'm just as excited to reexhat happens as everyone else.

Yeah. I guess she does get a bad rap. I just find it a strange match. It take getting used to. AS far as the character change goes. I was wondering whether this was before the other stories or after or in place of. It was a very interesting change. I did notice he was a little friendlier towards humans than normal. But thats what intrigued me.

I have to say i'm not partial to the princess myself. But i love unique plots and stories. AS far as the personality change. I LOVE character changes. It makes them more human. I have to say when a story is good people are usually willing to forgive dislikes.

Right on! Preach it brother. Lol. I just love fan fictions. It lets you do anything you want with the characters you love. Nothing beats that.

Lol. Nothing wrong with using your self wishful or real for a characters personality and demeanors. I write other fictions that you would think i was the main character. I FIGURE who do you know better to write about than you. You know how your personality works why not use it.