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"The villany you teach me, I will execute; and it shall go hard but I will better the instruction."
--The Merchant of Venice, Shakespeare
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Welcome.

Name's Megan. And, I must confess...I am a writeaholic.

*gasp*

Well...let me rephrase that: I USED to be. Now I rarely get around to writing anything that, more than anything else, I am a workaholic. Surprisingly, that's not a large difference between the two.

So, here's the deal, gallery lookers: I love that people read my work, and love when they appreciate it. That being said, if you don't appreciate it, tell me why. Critiques are good and (like pain), if it doesn't kill me it will make me stronger. So go on. Check out the work. Click here and there in boredom. And if you find something that needs to be fixed, go on and send me a comment--or a bucketful if it is bad. I'll try my best (when I have the time) to fix it.

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School, school, it's so cool...
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Well, then...Thanks for reading the profile. Maybe you'll be so bored you'll actually read some of my stuff. :O

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The_White_Dragon on August 27, 2006, 3:35:44 AM

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The_White_DragonYay u are a staff member that cool.

The_White_Dragon on July 21, 2006, 2:48:15 PM

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The_White_DragonThanks for the comments on my art work

Dante_Fydoe on July 21, 2006, 1:08:37 PM

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Dante_FydoeYeah, I know what you mean when you were talking about Trapped, but Trapped was after all my first story. My style of writing has changed a little bit since then and I didn't really go over the grammatical errors like I did with my other stories..it was just there to see what people thought of my writing and I guess they thought well of it..meh..

Dante_Fydoe on July 21, 2006, 1:04:58 PM

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Dante_FydoeNo..I didnt..but that is pretty clever..my name is Dante and Fydoe (Fido) is the name I've been called since I sometimes get treated like a dog..but..yeah, still clever none the less..

The_White_Dragon on July 21, 2006, 8:51:12 AM

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The_White_DragonPlease critique my fox again. I made improvements with your thoughts in mind.

JessieEnduro on July 21, 2006, 7:27:05 AM

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JessieEnduroSorry to keep bothering you. But I just totally rewrote the prologue! ^_^ I added alot of detail, and it turned out to be twice as long! Yay! If ya could, my beta, please check and comment how much it's improved. I gotta get started with chap one! ^_^

Thanks!

Jessie Enduro

JessieEnduro on July 19, 2006, 11:58:47 AM

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JessieEnduroI agree. The publishing is a long laborous process...or so I've heard. My godmother personally knows a publisher, and I have all you people to help me edit my work. ^_^ Thanks.

And I took your advice for extending my sentences. You're right. The writing has become longer, but ten times better and in depth. I love how it's become longer in length. It makes the pages fuller. And as for the detail, I'm looking in dictionarys, thesauruses, anything I can find to define certain words and phrases. Thank you so much! I couldn't see what was wrong with my story, I sensed something but I couldn't discover it. You totally pointed it out! Extend your detail and sentences! Put in every drop of describence.

Anyhoo, thank you for the point out, and for being there to check on me. ^_^

Thanks again Megan.

Yours truly,

Jessie Enduro

JessieEnduro on July 18, 2006, 10:38:59 AM

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JessieEnduroThank you for the info. It's truly appriciated. I'll take the advice and try and make my story stronger. You're an excellent writer if I may add. It's just... This is my first story I ever wrote. And I'm only twelve myself (Pretty strange, eh?). And I'm gonna get it published. I want it to be the best it can be. And your name is Megan is it? Thanks. It is truly appricitated. And if you could, could you perhaps rate my story as it grows? Thank you.

Your's truly, Jessie Enduro.

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