Interesting Iscribble RP
Interesting Iscribble RP
Interesting Iscribble RP by TheGameArtCritic

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TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 9:27:54 AM
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 9:34:41 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 10:00:03 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 10:06:24 AM

Altodd: *doesn't wake up*
Todd: Jacob!
Jacob: *still asleep*
Todd: JACOB!!
Jacob: *is startled awake* AAHH!! AAHHGOD, WHAT THE frack TIME IS IT?? JEEBUS frackING - WHY ARE YOU THREE HERE?? WHY IS ONE OF THE THREE OF YOU UNCONSCIOUS??
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 10:08:55 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 10:55:22 AM

Key: ...?
Mikenno: *shakes his head* Never mind... Yeah, I'll help you. Is he in the med wing?
Key: Yeah, how did you--
Mikenno: You'll find out. *leaves his room, closing the door behind him*
Key: *looks at Todd and shrugs, then follows Mikenno back down the hall*
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 10:56:23 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 7:07:59 AM

*and so they go sleep*
Meanwhile, middle of the night
Altodd: *he has another nightmare, but this time it's not him remembering anything... he was in a purely black area... what is this place, he wondered, why was he here? Was this another memory, or...? Suddenly an umbra came at him - instead of tackling him down, trying to suck his happiness out, the thing grabbed his arm*
Altodd: Wha - ??
Another Umbra: *from behind, it takes Altodd's other arm, holding Altodd still*
Altodd: Hey - what's going on?? D8
*and then, he came - the other Altodd. His first personality... but much was wrong with his appearance. He looked like Altod, sure, on the upper half of his face, but the lower half seemed to have gone to hell. His cheeks were rotted out, leaving two torn holes, showing some of his skull. If one were to look inside one of the holes, they could see that his mouth is a dry, dead white. Another white thing is the other Altodd - the SHADOW'S - eyes. Like marbles, they are, and yet, they are still easily seen as staring - staring at Altodd, himself. He wore his old outfit, but it is torn, tattered, and is too big for him - The Shadow is far more skeletal than Altodd is. Like the Umbra, The Shadow's hands were sharp and black, and they gave off that same black smoke*
The Shadow: *walks over to Altodd as he struggles against the Umbra* ... this is why I wanted you to either kill YOURSELF, or Todd and Key... because they will only HURT YOU - can't you SEE that??
Altodd: We're only friends! What - who are you?? D8>
The Shadow: *gives him a nasty grin* I am you...
Altodd: *then realizes that this mutilated THING was... the voice in his head* Wait - wait this is -
The Shadow: ... since you won't help yourself, Todd Huntings, I'll have to do it myself...
Altodd: Y-you can't! You're not even real - you can't do ANYTHING to them, OR me! D:<
The Shadow: *his grin shrinks to a smug grin* We'll see. *he then steps forward, slowly, slowly... and grabs Altodd's face with both his hands, squeazing it painfully, holding it in place*
Altodd: !! AHH!! D8> *he struggles even more, but this doesn't stop The Shadow from - not sucking out his happiness, but... MERGING with him - he was walking INTO him... and soon Altodd fell - he went BLIND and felt himself fall, fall, falling... falling forever, into nothing*
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Altodd: *when he wakes up, he it no longer himself. The Shadow is the one in control this time. It is still far into the night. The only indication that he wasn't himself was Altodd's new blank white eyes. He gets out of bed sluggishly and takes his sword. Then he heads out of his room, and travels to Todd and Key's room. Altodd opened the door slowly, to ensure that no noise was made. Then he walks in, dragging his sword along the ground. Getting close enough to Todd and Key, who were still sleeping peacefully in their bed. Then... he raises his sword, ready to strike it into their flesh, spill their blood*
Todd: *at this point, Todd had actually sensed a sort of presence in the room with them, as the hairs on the back of his neck stood on end, and he woke up drowsily. The first thing he sees is Altodd, about to swing his sword down onto them. He cries out loudly in alarm and confusion* THE frack?? *then he quickly dives on Altodd, dives in the darkness, before he can do anything, knocking his counterpart to the floor*
Altodd: *struggles against him angrily, trying to use his sword to cut him, though Todd was holding the sword back with an equal amount of strength* Nrrhgh...!!
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 7:18:46 AM
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Altodd: *uses the opportunity to shove Todd off of him and back himself away from both him, and Key, his face twisted with rage, and his sword reflecting the tiniest glimmers of light in the room, the edge now slightly stained with Todd's blood*
Todd: *gripping his arm, wincing in pain* Key, look at his eyes! Look, they're all white! D:
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Neoshadow: *hissing, it forces its clawed hand forward, and into her chest*
Key: !! *suddenly feels extremely cold as the dark being reaches inside her. she can almost FEEL it clawing at her insides, hunting for the one thing it wanted--a sense of panic grips her when the demon closes its claws around something--something that must've been extremely important--she can FEEL herself dying as the creature pulls--but she wasn't going to die, not today. she raises her other pistol to the creature's head, and pulls the trigger*
Neoshadow: *explodes into black dust, releasing its grip on her heart*
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 10:30:17 AM
mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 10:34:54 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 10:58:38 AM

Zylif: *slithers past them rather quickly, carrying someone in his arms, loudly calling for a retreat*
Key: ?? th-that's convenient... *goes silent as he sees the witch from a few fights earlier lying limp in his arms, her eyes completely blank... her shivering intensifies as she realizes that could've been her*
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 11:00:08 AM
mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 11:03:55 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 11:07:51 AM

Altodd: *he looks over at Key and wonders if he might be able to help her out with her hair problem* Hey, Key? Maybe we can figure out how to keep your hair out of your face in my room - hell, I bet I might have something that'll fix your bangs getting in your face. :/
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Umbra: *trying to get at Altodd, for getting him out of the way first is their focus - they worked as a single mass, like hornets buzzing through a hive, sharing one mind*
One Umbra: *runs at Key, screeching*
mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 8:44:06 AM

TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 9:19:51 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 9:34:39 AM

Todd: KEY!! D8> *is about to run to her when -*
Altodd: Hold on, I got this! Watch my back, alright?? D: *runs over to Key and the Umbra*
Todd: D: ... *just nods slightly, and stays close to Altodd, making sure nothing gets him from where he couldn't see*
Altodd: *sprinting at it now, he takes his sword with two hands and swings it as hard as he can at the thing*
Umbra: *is cut in half, through its middle. It falls apart, smoke escaping in every direction*
Altodd: *coughs roughly from accidentally inhaling the smoke*
mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 9:39:30 AM
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Altodd: *he has a dream where Key visits him, and once she does... ... ... they were kissing. They were making out. They were... oh... and then, Altodd figured, that was what led to the sex before, perhaps another night. But no. They almost did that night, they almost did - but then there is a pause. A new name is uttered - no, not new - he said it before, right before he died, and he remembered her face - Sam - and then it stops, and Key utters "th-this isn't a gane, Altodd..." - and no, he doesn't think it's a game - he was making her CHEAT on TODD - wh-why? Why?? And she tells him that she was Altodd - that he was the one everyone hated, and outside the dream (and inside), Altodd's heart breaks when those words are spoken. Everyone id hate him before. But... but Key said that he wasn't that person anymore... (yes you are) ...liar. And in the dream, they part their seperate ways, but not before Key kisses him a final time - I hate you too. - and leaves. And then Altodd wakes up, and it is morning. Morning - morning already? It appeared so...*
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meanwhile
Altodd: *he goes to his room and takes off his armor and things, putting them away. He still wears a small smile on his face (why are you smiling?)* ... I think we might be friends now... *(she'll only hurt you in the end. They will both hurt you.)* ... she said you were lying to me... *(why would I lie? What would the point be?)* ... I don't know... to kill me? *(death is the only way)*
mechadragon13 on May 8, 2011, 1:18:35 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 7:40:14 AM

Another Umbra: *leaps onto him as well. While Harry wwas distracted, it took hold of the beast's face, forcing Harry to look at the umbra so that it could suck out his happiness, which came out of Harry in large amounts*
Harry: Hh... hhnngh...!
Altodd: *slashes at the charging umbra*
Umbra: *dives out of the way* Eeeeee!!
Todd: *tackles it to the ground and starts ripping it apart before ANOTHER umbra seems to fade in from nowhere and tackle Todd off of the other umbra, immediately sucking out his happiness*
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 7:44:28 AM

Key: AAH! *shoves her fear aside as much as she can, and shoots the thing--back in the room, though this time it was different. a flash of when she willingly--no, no, this isn't real. it's fake, it's those stupid--she shoots the thing again, trying to fight against the images in her head--none of them were real!*
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 7:56:35 AM

Harry: *falls to his knees*
Other Umbra: *is riddled with holes, which leak out black smoke* ssss...
Altodd: *chops off its "head" with his sword*
Other Umbra: *smoke fully leaks out, and it dies* hhhh...
Other Other Umbra: *the one Todd had attacked before, suddenly took Altodd from behind, spinning him around and sucking out his happiness*
Todd: *quickly gets up* !!
Altodd: !! *the voice soon clouds his mind - and his judgement (let it kill you, let it, let it) - but it wasn't just the voice (you don't deserve your life) that was whispering in his head (just die, just die). The umbra itself seemed to be whispering to him as well, begging him for more and more of his happiness - his LIFE FORCE - hungering, always hungering for more - yes, yes, he wanted to help it, and he wanted to die... (yes, yes, yes) two birds, one stone, he figured... two... birds... (we hurt her... I hurt her...) ... (the umbra are hungry. They are your friends) ... (they are you)*
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 8:22:05 AM

Claire: *feels herself weaken and finds that she can barely stay on her feet--she takes another shot, hitting it near where the first bolt was embedded*
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 8:29:56 AM

Altodd: *when it dies, Altodd just lays on the ground, wanting it to just suck up him*
Todd: *to himself* shoot, those things really damage him - Are you okay, Key?? D:
Umbra: *dies, falling off of Harry*
Other Umbra: *on Harry's back, it looks over at Claire, screeching at her* EEEEEEEEEEEE!!
Harry: *trying to regain his breath*
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 8:31:55 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 8:38:18 AM

Harry: *shaking himself off, he looks back at the umbra charging towards Claire* D8> !!
Todd: *hugs her a little with arm* ... come on - Altodd might be all suicidal again, we need to help him out.
Altodd: *lays there (next time they try to stop an umbra, you kill them) no... (they will always stop it, and you will never die) no...*
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 8:45:44 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 2:19:22 PM

Key: *stands up with Altodd, frowning, now wondering exactly how much he remembers about his... previous actions. she WAS worried about him, that much she knew, and it slightly bothered her. how could she show concern for someone who hurt her so much?* ...because he's not the same anymore...
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 2:25:08 PM

Todd: This isn't actually how YOU feel, Altodd - this is the aftereffects off having nearly all your happiness ripped out of you...
Altodd: ... but he's right... he showed me what I was before - what HE was... and he told me that I shouldn't be around - and he's RIGHT... he's RIGHT...!
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 2:36:01 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 2:40:52 PM
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 3:00:56 PM

Todd: Holy shoot... how the hell did the first Altodd DO that to him??