Interesting Iscribble RP
Interesting Iscribble RP
Interesting Iscribble RP by TheGameArtCritic
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TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 9:27:54 AM
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 9:34:41 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 9:39:27 AM
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 9:47:06 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 10:00:03 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 10:06:24 AM
Todd: *grabs Altodd, hoisting him up by his armpits with Key's help. Together, they traveled down the dark, soundless halls of the stronghold to the medical room. Todd wasn't surprised to find Jacob sleeping there, at his desk. The man... cartoon... animal worked hard, after all*
Altodd: *doesn't wake up*
Todd: Jacob!
Jacob: *still asleep*
Todd: JACOB!!
Jacob: *is startled awake* AAHH!! AAHHGOD, WHAT THE frack TIME IS IT?? JEEBUS frackING - WHY ARE YOU THREE HERE?? WHY IS ONE OF THE THREE OF YOU UNCONSCIOUS??
Altodd: *doesn't wake up*
Todd: Jacob!
Jacob: *still asleep*
Todd: JACOB!!
Jacob: *is startled awake* AAHH!! AAHHGOD, WHAT THE frack TIME IS IT?? JEEBUS frackING - WHY ARE YOU THREE HERE?? WHY IS ONE OF THE THREE OF YOU UNCONSCIOUS??
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 10:08:55 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 10:11:25 AM
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 10:17:58 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 10:21:04 AM
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 10:27:14 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 10:28:39 AM
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 10:31:14 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 10:43:49 AM
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 10:49:23 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 10:50:31 AM
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 10:55:22 AM
Mikenno: Oh. *groans* This AGAIN...?
Key: ...?
Mikenno: *shakes his head* Never mind... Yeah, I'll help you. Is he in the med wing?
Key: Yeah, how did you--
Mikenno: You'll find out. *leaves his room, closing the door behind him*
Key: *looks at Todd and shrugs, then follows Mikenno back down the hall*
Key: ...?
Mikenno: *shakes his head* Never mind... Yeah, I'll help you. Is he in the med wing?
Key: Yeah, how did you--
Mikenno: You'll find out. *leaves his room, closing the door behind him*
Key: *looks at Todd and shrugs, then follows Mikenno back down the hall*
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 10:56:23 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 10, 2011, 1:40:45 PM
mechadragon13 on May 10, 2011, 1:47:16 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 10, 2011, 1:49:27 PM
mechadragon13 on May 10, 2011, 1:54:28 PM
Key: <:( ... *she doesn't like seeing people doubt, especially when it comes to her, and she hates herself for giving him a reason to mistrust her. she steps forward, but she hears a crackling noise under her foot. when she looks down, she's surprised to see another post-it note. quietly, the picks it up and reads it* ...
TheGameArtCritic on May 10, 2011, 1:56:55 PM
mechadragon13 on May 10, 2011, 2:04:01 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 10, 2011, 2:05:44 PM
mechadragon13 on May 10, 2011, 2:11:13 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 10, 2011, 2:14:26 PM
Todd: *quietly* ... yeah... I just get... scared. I dunno. Like I'm not good enough for you, or anything... it scares me, because I love you, and if you... DID do anything like that... I don't think I'd be able to go on... you've kept me SANE, Key... throughout ALL of this, you've been my staple - my patch of duct tape. As weird as that sounds.
mechadragon13 on May 10, 2011, 2:18:39 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 10, 2011, 2:30:39 PM
mechadragon13 on May 10, 2011, 9:22:44 PM
Key: *wasn't expecting the hug, but... she appreciates the gesture. it showed she was needed. she rests her head on his shoulder, taking a deep breath. she loves him. she loves him so much, it'd break her to see him hurting and doubting again... the same way it'd break him if she left him again. they may not have a psychic bond like Harry and Claire, but they loved each other, and that was more than enough*
TheGameArtCritic on May 10, 2011, 11:25:06 PM
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 6:12:18 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 7:07:59 AM
Todd: Okay...
*and so they go sleep*
Meanwhile, middle of the night
Altodd: *he has another nightmare, but this time it's not him remembering anything... he was in a purely black area... what is this place, he wondered, why was he here? Was this another memory, or...? Suddenly an umbra came at him - instead of tackling him down, trying to suck his happiness out, the thing grabbed his arm*
Altodd: Wha - ??
Another Umbra: *from behind, it takes Altodd's other arm, holding Altodd still*
Altodd: Hey - what's going on?? D8
*and then, he came - the other Altodd. His first personality... but much was wrong with his appearance. He looked like Altod, sure, on the upper half of his face, but the lower half seemed to have gone to hell. His cheeks were rotted out, leaving two torn holes, showing some of his skull. If one were to look inside one of the holes, they could see that his mouth is a dry, dead white. Another white thing is the other Altodd - the SHADOW'S - eyes. Like marbles, they are, and yet, they are still easily seen as staring - staring at Altodd, himself. He wore his old outfit, but it is torn, tattered, and is too big for him - The Shadow is far more skeletal than Altodd is. Like the Umbra, The Shadow's hands were sharp and black, and they gave off that same black smoke*
The Shadow: *walks over to Altodd as he struggles against the Umbra* ... this is why I wanted you to either kill YOURSELF, or Todd and Key... because they will only HURT YOU - can't you SEE that??
Altodd: We're only friends! What - who are you?? D8>
The Shadow: *gives him a nasty grin* I am you...
Altodd: *then realizes that this mutilated THING was... the voice in his head* Wait - wait this is -
The Shadow: ... since you won't help yourself, Todd Huntings, I'll have to do it myself...
Altodd: Y-you can't! You're not even real - you can't do ANYTHING to them, OR me! D:<
The Shadow: *his grin shrinks to a smug grin* We'll see. *he then steps forward, slowly, slowly... and grabs Altodd's face with both his hands, squeazing it painfully, holding it in place*
Altodd: !! AHH!! D8> *he struggles even more, but this doesn't stop The Shadow from - not sucking out his happiness, but... MERGING with him - he was walking INTO him... and soon Altodd fell - he went BLIND and felt himself fall, fall, falling... falling forever, into nothing*
---
Altodd: *when he wakes up, he it no longer himself. The Shadow is the one in control this time. It is still far into the night. The only indication that he wasn't himself was Altodd's new blank white eyes. He gets out of bed sluggishly and takes his sword. Then he heads out of his room, and travels to Todd and Key's room. Altodd opened the door slowly, to ensure that no noise was made. Then he walks in, dragging his sword along the ground. Getting close enough to Todd and Key, who were still sleeping peacefully in their bed. Then... he raises his sword, ready to strike it into their flesh, spill their blood*
Todd: *at this point, Todd had actually sensed a sort of presence in the room with them, as the hairs on the back of his neck stood on end, and he woke up drowsily. The first thing he sees is Altodd, about to swing his sword down onto them. He cries out loudly in alarm and confusion* THE frack?? *then he quickly dives on Altodd, dives in the darkness, before he can do anything, knocking his counterpart to the floor*
Altodd: *struggles against him angrily, trying to use his sword to cut him, though Todd was holding the sword back with an equal amount of strength* Nrrhgh...!!
*and so they go sleep*
Meanwhile, middle of the night
Altodd: *he has another nightmare, but this time it's not him remembering anything... he was in a purely black area... what is this place, he wondered, why was he here? Was this another memory, or...? Suddenly an umbra came at him - instead of tackling him down, trying to suck his happiness out, the thing grabbed his arm*
Altodd: Wha - ??
Another Umbra: *from behind, it takes Altodd's other arm, holding Altodd still*
Altodd: Hey - what's going on?? D8
*and then, he came - the other Altodd. His first personality... but much was wrong with his appearance. He looked like Altod, sure, on the upper half of his face, but the lower half seemed to have gone to hell. His cheeks were rotted out, leaving two torn holes, showing some of his skull. If one were to look inside one of the holes, they could see that his mouth is a dry, dead white. Another white thing is the other Altodd - the SHADOW'S - eyes. Like marbles, they are, and yet, they are still easily seen as staring - staring at Altodd, himself. He wore his old outfit, but it is torn, tattered, and is too big for him - The Shadow is far more skeletal than Altodd is. Like the Umbra, The Shadow's hands were sharp and black, and they gave off that same black smoke*
The Shadow: *walks over to Altodd as he struggles against the Umbra* ... this is why I wanted you to either kill YOURSELF, or Todd and Key... because they will only HURT YOU - can't you SEE that??
Altodd: We're only friends! What - who are you?? D8>
The Shadow: *gives him a nasty grin* I am you...
Altodd: *then realizes that this mutilated THING was... the voice in his head* Wait - wait this is -
The Shadow: ... since you won't help yourself, Todd Huntings, I'll have to do it myself...
Altodd: Y-you can't! You're not even real - you can't do ANYTHING to them, OR me! D:<
The Shadow: *his grin shrinks to a smug grin* We'll see. *he then steps forward, slowly, slowly... and grabs Altodd's face with both his hands, squeazing it painfully, holding it in place*
Altodd: !! AHH!! D8> *he struggles even more, but this doesn't stop The Shadow from - not sucking out his happiness, but... MERGING with him - he was walking INTO him... and soon Altodd fell - he went BLIND and felt himself fall, fall, falling... falling forever, into nothing*
---
Altodd: *when he wakes up, he it no longer himself. The Shadow is the one in control this time. It is still far into the night. The only indication that he wasn't himself was Altodd's new blank white eyes. He gets out of bed sluggishly and takes his sword. Then he heads out of his room, and travels to Todd and Key's room. Altodd opened the door slowly, to ensure that no noise was made. Then he walks in, dragging his sword along the ground. Getting close enough to Todd and Key, who were still sleeping peacefully in their bed. Then... he raises his sword, ready to strike it into their flesh, spill their blood*
Todd: *at this point, Todd had actually sensed a sort of presence in the room with them, as the hairs on the back of his neck stood on end, and he woke up drowsily. The first thing he sees is Altodd, about to swing his sword down onto them. He cries out loudly in alarm and confusion* THE frack?? *then he quickly dives on Altodd, dives in the darkness, before he can do anything, knocking his counterpart to the floor*
Altodd: *struggles against him angrily, trying to use his sword to cut him, though Todd was holding the sword back with an equal amount of strength* Nrrhgh...!!
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 7:18:46 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 7:20:38 AM
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 7:25:03 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 7:30:30 AM
Todd: Good ide - AHH!! *Altodd had managed to push his sword forward, the blade sliding painfully past Todd's shoulder, blood soon dripping out of the cut, rolling down his arm like syrup*
Altodd: *uses the opportunity to shove Todd off of him and back himself away from both him, and Key, his face twisted with rage, and his sword reflecting the tiniest glimmers of light in the room, the edge now slightly stained with Todd's blood*
Todd: *gripping his arm, wincing in pain* Key, look at his eyes! Look, they're all white! D:
Altodd: *uses the opportunity to shove Todd off of him and back himself away from both him, and Key, his face twisted with rage, and his sword reflecting the tiniest glimmers of light in the room, the edge now slightly stained with Todd's blood*
Todd: *gripping his arm, wincing in pain* Key, look at his eyes! Look, they're all white! D:
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 7:34:23 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 7:37:25 AM
mechadragon13 on May 11, 2011, 7:41:29 AM
Key: *shudders at Altodd's words, his voice sending a shiver down her spine* h-h-he told me the old him had been talking to him, trying to convince him to avoid us... I gues he took matters into his own hands now...! *is terrified at this point--she knew Altodd could kill them without a problem, but they couldn't...* w-we can't kill him...
TheGameArtCritic on May 11, 2011, 7:43:48 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 11:42:20 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 12:41:24 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 12:47:01 PM
Altodd: *and then he closes his eyes as well, leaning in. He kisses Key (WHAT ARE YOU DOING) and for a single second (STOP NOW) he enjoys it (NO, NO, NO!) until suddenly, suddenly something terrible happens, and suddenly Altodd finds himself reeling back, screaming in pain, his hands over his ears as he could HEAR the umbra's shrieking INSIDE HIS SKULL - it must've been a HUNDRED of them, all screaming - ALL AT ONE - ALL AS LOUD AS A SIREN* AAAAAAAAAAUUUUHHHHH!!
mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 12:55:24 PM
Key: !! *knew something was wrong when he pulled away, and started to panic as soon as he started screaming* Oh god-- Altodd?? *grabs him by the shoulders, lightly shaking him, trying to get his attention, to snap him out of it* Altodd, what's wrong!?! D8> *as she tries to help, she comes to realize that this happened because... because she kissed Altodd--why would she kiss him, just--WHY? Now he's on the ground screaming and she's broken Todd's trust. AGAIN* nhhhhrr!! Come on, Altodd...!!
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 12:59:28 PM
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Key: *struggles against the Heartless, which was almost as big as she was--and much stronger* G-Guys...!! D8>
Neoshadow: *hissing, it forces its clawed hand forward, and into her chest*
Key: !! *suddenly feels extremely cold as the dark being reaches inside her. she can almost FEEL it clawing at her insides, hunting for the one thing it wanted--a sense of panic grips her when the demon closes its claws around something--something that must've been extremely important--she can FEEL herself dying as the creature pulls--but she wasn't going to die, not today. she raises her other pistol to the creature's head, and pulls the trigger*
Neoshadow: *explodes into black dust, releasing its grip on her heart*
Neoshadow: *hissing, it forces its clawed hand forward, and into her chest*
Key: !! *suddenly feels extremely cold as the dark being reaches inside her. she can almost FEEL it clawing at her insides, hunting for the one thing it wanted--a sense of panic grips her when the demon closes its claws around something--something that must've been extremely important--she can FEEL herself dying as the creature pulls--but she wasn't going to die, not today. she raises her other pistol to the creature's head, and pulls the trigger*
Neoshadow: *explodes into black dust, releasing its grip on her heart*
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 10:30:17 AM
mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 10:34:54 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 10:58:38 AM
Key: Long story, w-we'll tell you later--
Zylif: *slithers past them rather quickly, carrying someone in his arms, loudly calling for a retreat*
Key: ?? th-that's convenient... *goes silent as he sees the witch from a few fights earlier lying limp in his arms, her eyes completely blank... her shivering intensifies as she realizes that could've been her*
Zylif: *slithers past them rather quickly, carrying someone in his arms, loudly calling for a retreat*
Key: ?? th-that's convenient... *goes silent as he sees the witch from a few fights earlier lying limp in his arms, her eyes completely blank... her shivering intensifies as she realizes that could've been her*
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 11:00:08 AM
mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 11:03:55 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 11:07:51 AM
Todd: *goes to his and Key's room*
Altodd: *he looks over at Key and wonders if he might be able to help her out with her hair problem* Hey, Key? Maybe we can figure out how to keep your hair out of your face in my room - hell, I bet I might have something that'll fix your bangs getting in your face. :/
Altodd: *he looks over at Key and wonders if he might be able to help her out with her hair problem* Hey, Key? Maybe we can figure out how to keep your hair out of your face in my room - hell, I bet I might have something that'll fix your bangs getting in your face. :/
mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 11:13:06 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 11:18:03 AM
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Key: *was about to reply with a "you're welcome" when his hand brushes her wing--she manages to put a hand out to the side before she loses her balance, and catches herself on the wall before the falls down completely* mmrrhh, crap... *leans sideways against the wall, resting her head against it with a thump--the effect was already wearing off due to how brief the contact was, but it still threw her off* >_____________<
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 11:35:59 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 6:32:22 AM
Altodd: *he works together with Todd, defending him while Todd defended Altodd. Their ability to destroy enemies, as well as protect their teammate were equal - as it should be, since they were the same person. This worked well, and not one of them were yet hurt by an Umbra*
Umbra: *trying to get at Altodd, for getting him out of the way first is their focus - they worked as a single mass, like hornets buzzing through a hive, sharing one mind*
One Umbra: *runs at Key, screeching*
Umbra: *trying to get at Altodd, for getting him out of the way first is their focus - they worked as a single mass, like hornets buzzing through a hive, sharing one mind*
One Umbra: *runs at Key, screeching*
mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 8:44:06 AM
Key: Oh, come on--!! *having no other options, she shoots at it and braces herself for a flash--to her surprise, she doesn't get the same racy images as before. all she saw was a brief instance of what looked like an argument--and then she was back in the blank space. shaking it off, she turns her attention back to the Umbra*
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 9:19:51 AM
mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 9:28:50 AM
Key: *still a bit disoriented, she's caught completely off-guard by the Umbra, and is easily knocked down. blinded by the images that flashed through her mind again--stronger now due to the fact that the Umbra was holding her down, she's completely unable to fight, and is instead forced to watch as she tells Altodd off, expressing her hate for him*
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 9:34:39 AM
Umbra: *sucks out her happiness* Eeeee...!
Todd: KEY!! D8> *is about to run to her when -*
Altodd: Hold on, I got this! Watch my back, alright?? D: *runs over to Key and the Umbra*
Todd: D: ... *just nods slightly, and stays close to Altodd, making sure nothing gets him from where he couldn't see*
Altodd: *sprinting at it now, he takes his sword with two hands and swings it as hard as he can at the thing*
Umbra: *is cut in half, through its middle. It falls apart, smoke escaping in every direction*
Altodd: *coughs roughly from accidentally inhaling the smoke*
Todd: KEY!! D8> *is about to run to her when -*
Altodd: Hold on, I got this! Watch my back, alright?? D: *runs over to Key and the Umbra*
Todd: D: ... *just nods slightly, and stays close to Altodd, making sure nothing gets him from where he couldn't see*
Altodd: *sprinting at it now, he takes his sword with two hands and swings it as hard as he can at the thing*
Umbra: *is cut in half, through its middle. It falls apart, smoke escaping in every direction*
Altodd: *coughs roughly from accidentally inhaling the smoke*
mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 9:39:30 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 9, 2011, 10:09:09 AM
Key: *manages to shoot and kill three of them before one of them comes out of the ground next to her and pounces her, knocking her sideways into the ground with a surprised yelp--a pistol is knocked out of her hand when she falls, and she struggles to hold the thing back as it forces its claws towards her chest--towards her heart* AAHH!! D8
TheGameArtCritic on May 9, 2011, 10:13:11 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 8, 2011, 1:01:44 PM
mechadragon13 on May 8, 2011, 1:11:00 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 8, 2011, 1:44:39 PM
In the middle of the night, meanwhile
Altodd: *he has a dream where Key visits him, and once she does... ... ... they were kissing. They were making out. They were... oh... and then, Altodd figured, that was what led to the sex before, perhaps another night. But no. They almost did that night, they almost did - but then there is a pause. A new name is uttered - no, not new - he said it before, right before he died, and he remembered her face - Sam - and then it stops, and Key utters "th-this isn't a gane, Altodd..." - and no, he doesn't think it's a game - he was making her CHEAT on TODD - wh-why? Why?? And she tells him that she was Altodd - that he was the one everyone hated, and outside the dream (and inside), Altodd's heart breaks when those words are spoken. Everyone id hate him before. But... but Key said that he wasn't that person anymore... (yes you are) ...liar. And in the dream, they part their seperate ways, but not before Key kisses him a final time - I hate you too. - and leaves. And then Altodd wakes up, and it is morning. Morning - morning already? It appeared so...*
Altodd: *he has a dream where Key visits him, and once she does... ... ... they were kissing. They were making out. They were... oh... and then, Altodd figured, that was what led to the sex before, perhaps another night. But no. They almost did that night, they almost did - but then there is a pause. A new name is uttered - no, not new - he said it before, right before he died, and he remembered her face - Sam - and then it stops, and Key utters "th-this isn't a gane, Altodd..." - and no, he doesn't think it's a game - he was making her CHEAT on TODD - wh-why? Why?? And she tells him that she was Altodd - that he was the one everyone hated, and outside the dream (and inside), Altodd's heart breaks when those words are spoken. Everyone id hate him before. But... but Key said that he wasn't that person anymore... (yes you are) ...liar. And in the dream, they part their seperate ways, but not before Key kisses him a final time - I hate you too. - and leaves. And then Altodd wakes up, and it is morning. Morning - morning already? It appeared so...*
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Todd: I guess, yeah.
meanwhile
Altodd: *he goes to his room and takes off his armor and things, putting them away. He still wears a small smile on his face (why are you smiling?)* ... I think we might be friends now... *(she'll only hurt you in the end. They will both hurt you.)* ... she said you were lying to me... *(why would I lie? What would the point be?)* ... I don't know... to kill me? *(death is the only way)*
meanwhile
Altodd: *he goes to his room and takes off his armor and things, putting them away. He still wears a small smile on his face (why are you smiling?)* ... I think we might be friends now... *(she'll only hurt you in the end. They will both hurt you.)* ... she said you were lying to me... *(why would I lie? What would the point be?)* ... I don't know... to kill me? *(death is the only way)*
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Harry: *suddenly, an umbra rockets itself forward at Harry, diving into him like a man-sized bullet. Harry nearly fell over, then tried to get the umbra off of him - though every time he tried, it would move to another spot on his body, easily crawling all over him like a spider* SSNRRAARGGH!!
Another Umbra: *leaps onto him as well. While Harry wwas distracted, it took hold of the beast's face, forcing Harry to look at the umbra so that it could suck out his happiness, which came out of Harry in large amounts*
Harry: Hh... hhnngh...!
Altodd: *slashes at the charging umbra*
Umbra: *dives out of the way* Eeeeee!!
Todd: *tackles it to the ground and starts ripping it apart before ANOTHER umbra seems to fade in from nowhere and tackle Todd off of the other umbra, immediately sucking out his happiness*
Another Umbra: *leaps onto him as well. While Harry wwas distracted, it took hold of the beast's face, forcing Harry to look at the umbra so that it could suck out his happiness, which came out of Harry in large amounts*
Harry: Hh... hhnngh...!
Altodd: *slashes at the charging umbra*
Umbra: *dives out of the way* Eeeeee!!
Todd: *tackles it to the ground and starts ripping it apart before ANOTHER umbra seems to fade in from nowhere and tackle Todd off of the other umbra, immediately sucking out his happiness*
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 7:44:28 AM
Claire: !! *aims for the Umbra on Harry's head, and shoots it, hitting it in the ribs, and quickly reloading to fire again*
Key: AAH! *shoves her fear aside as much as she can, and shoots the thing--back in the room, though this time it was different. a flash of when she willingly--no, no, this isn't real. it's fake, it's those stupid--she shoots the thing again, trying to fight against the images in her head--none of them were real!*
Key: AAH! *shoves her fear aside as much as she can, and shoots the thing--back in the room, though this time it was different. a flash of when she willingly--no, no, this isn't real. it's fake, it's those stupid--she shoots the thing again, trying to fight against the images in her head--none of them were real!*
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 7:56:35 AM
Umbra: *when shot at by Claire, it screeches, but otherwise doesn't let go, continuing it's devouring of Harry's - and Claire's - happiness*
Harry: *falls to his knees*
Other Umbra: *is riddled with holes, which leak out black smoke* ssss...
Altodd: *chops off its "head" with his sword*
Other Umbra: *smoke fully leaks out, and it dies* hhhh...
Other Other Umbra: *the one Todd had attacked before, suddenly took Altodd from behind, spinning him around and sucking out his happiness*
Todd: *quickly gets up* !!
Altodd: !! *the voice soon clouds his mind - and his judgement (let it kill you, let it, let it) - but it wasn't just the voice (you don't deserve your life) that was whispering in his head (just die, just die). The umbra itself seemed to be whispering to him as well, begging him for more and more of his happiness - his LIFE FORCE - hungering, always hungering for more - yes, yes, he wanted to help it, and he wanted to die... (yes, yes, yes) two birds, one stone, he figured... two... birds... (we hurt her... I hurt her...) ... (the umbra are hungry. They are your friends) ... (they are you)*
Harry: *falls to his knees*
Other Umbra: *is riddled with holes, which leak out black smoke* ssss...
Altodd: *chops off its "head" with his sword*
Other Umbra: *smoke fully leaks out, and it dies* hhhh...
Other Other Umbra: *the one Todd had attacked before, suddenly took Altodd from behind, spinning him around and sucking out his happiness*
Todd: *quickly gets up* !!
Altodd: !! *the voice soon clouds his mind - and his judgement (let it kill you, let it, let it) - but it wasn't just the voice (you don't deserve your life) that was whispering in his head (just die, just die). The umbra itself seemed to be whispering to him as well, begging him for more and more of his happiness - his LIFE FORCE - hungering, always hungering for more - yes, yes, he wanted to help it, and he wanted to die... (yes, yes, yes) two birds, one stone, he figured... two... birds... (we hurt her... I hurt her...) ... (the umbra are hungry. They are your friends) ... (they are you)*
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 8:22:05 AM
Key: D:!! *isn't about to let Altodd die at the hands of an Umbra--not when she owed him her life. she shoots at the Umbra--again trying to push the images out of her head, but they seemed to be fighting back. refusing to be blinded by them, she screams at the Umbra as she shoots it* JUST STOP IT ALREADY!!!
Claire: *feels herself weaken and finds that she can barely stay on her feet--she takes another shot, hitting it near where the first bolt was embedded*
Claire: *feels herself weaken and finds that she can barely stay on her feet--she takes another shot, hitting it near where the first bolt was embedded*
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 8:29:56 AM
Umbra: *it is shot at enough to allow it to die - not a whole lot of bullets were required, since Todd had already done a whole deal of damage to it*
Altodd: *when it dies, Altodd just lays on the ground, wanting it to just suck up him*
Todd: *to himself* shoot, those things really damage him - Are you okay, Key?? D:
Umbra: *dies, falling off of Harry*
Other Umbra: *on Harry's back, it looks over at Claire, screeching at her* EEEEEEEEEEEE!!
Harry: *trying to regain his breath*
Altodd: *when it dies, Altodd just lays on the ground, wanting it to just suck up him*
Todd: *to himself* shoot, those things really damage him - Are you okay, Key?? D:
Umbra: *dies, falling off of Harry*
Other Umbra: *on Harry's back, it looks over at Claire, screeching at her* EEEEEEEEEEEE!!
Harry: *trying to regain his breath*
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 8:31:55 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 8:38:18 AM
Umbra: *hit, angered, it leaps off of Harry, and goes after Claire* REEEEEEEEEEEE!!
Harry: *shaking himself off, he looks back at the umbra charging towards Claire* D8> !!
Todd: *hugs her a little with arm* ... come on - Altodd might be all suicidal again, we need to help him out.
Altodd: *lays there (next time they try to stop an umbra, you kill them) no... (they will always stop it, and you will never die) no...*
Harry: *shaking himself off, he looks back at the umbra charging towards Claire* D8> !!
Todd: *hugs her a little with arm* ... come on - Altodd might be all suicidal again, we need to help him out.
Altodd: *lays there (next time they try to stop an umbra, you kill them) no... (they will always stop it, and you will never die) no...*
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 8:45:44 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 2:19:22 PM
Claire: I'm okay. Are you okay, Harry? D:
Key: *stands up with Altodd, frowning, now wondering exactly how much he remembers about his... previous actions. she WAS worried about him, that much she knew, and it slightly bothered her. how could she show concern for someone who hurt her so much?* ...because he's not the same anymore...
Key: *stands up with Altodd, frowning, now wondering exactly how much he remembers about his... previous actions. she WAS worried about him, that much she knew, and it slightly bothered her. how could she show concern for someone who hurt her so much?* ...because he's not the same anymore...
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 2:25:08 PM
Harry: *nods* D:
Todd: This isn't actually how YOU feel, Altodd - this is the aftereffects off having nearly all your happiness ripped out of you...
Altodd: ... but he's right... he showed me what I was before - what HE was... and he told me that I shouldn't be around - and he's RIGHT... he's RIGHT...!
Todd: This isn't actually how YOU feel, Altodd - this is the aftereffects off having nearly all your happiness ripped out of you...
Altodd: ... but he's right... he showed me what I was before - what HE was... and he told me that I shouldn't be around - and he's RIGHT... he's RIGHT...!
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 2:36:01 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 2:40:52 PM
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 3:00:56 PM
Key: ...He's... *takes a deep breath* he's lying to you. *glances at Todd, then looks right at Altodd, staring right into his eyes* I don't know how much of your old life you remember, but... I need you to hear me out. *pauses for a moment to collect her thoughts, then continues* A very, very good friend of mine convinced me that people are shaped by their actions. You, Altodd, you have never done ANY of those things--you started with a clean slate when you were brought back. If you were the same as him... you would've taken the opportunity to do something horrible last night, while you had me at your mercy.
Todd: Holy shoot... how the hell did the first Altodd DO that to him??